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2025-2026学年六年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版
（五四学制）（2024）Unit 3 Food
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．食物与我们的生活息息相关，它影响着我们的健康、文化和情感。请参考图文信息，写一写你最喜欢的食物。请用完整的句子写作。
要求：
1. 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 不低于60词。
My Favourite Food
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2．假如你是李华，你的网友Mary给你留言说她暑假要来烟台旅游，所以她想提前了解一下烟台。请你根据以下提示用英文回复她的留言。
写作要点：
1. 介绍烟台夏季的气候与所需衣物；
2. 推荐可游玩的地点以及可进行的活动；
3. 谈谈本地美食与特色物品；
4. 表达欢迎之情。
要求：
1. 文章必须包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名、地名等)；
3. 词数80左右。
Hi, Mary. I’m happy to learn that you will come to Yantai this summer vacation.
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3．假设你是李华，学校食堂准备做下学期的采购计划并拟定三餐食谱，提前向全体学生征集意见。请根据以下要点提示，结合自己的实际情况，写一篇70词左右的意见征集稿交给班级生活委员，供学校统计和采购。
写作要点：
1. 说明你最喜欢的食物和水果（一种或多种），并简要说明原因；
2. 介绍三餐最喜欢的食物和水果及理由；
3. 介绍你不喜欢的食物和水果。
Dear Class Committee Member,
I’d like to share my thoughts of the upcoming semester’s cafeteria procurement plan. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展关于不同国家饮食的线上讨论活动。请你根据以下导图内容，用英语写一篇短文，比较中英饮食的差异。
Differences in diet (饮食差异) In the UK fish and chips
afternoon tea
…
In China noodles
dumplings
…
写作要求：（1）短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）词数：70词左右；
（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
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5．中国历史源远流长，中华文化灿若星河。作为21世纪的青少年，用英语讲好中国故事是我们的责任和义务。那么，中国有许多传统的节日和传统又美味的食品，你最喜欢什么呢？请写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的传统的食品。
1.要点提示
（1）简单说明你最喜欢的传统节日和食品。
（2）详细从形状、原材料、种类、口感和寓意等方面介绍这个食品。
（3）简单介绍一下你和你们家对它的感受。
2.注意事项
（1）90词左右。
（2）行文应连贯流畅。
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
提示词：flour 面粉
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6．假如你是 Mike，请你根据表格内容写一封电子邮件向你新认识的网友 Peter 介绍一下你的生活方式。
要求：词数80左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Diet Why Exercise
Breakfast an egg, an apple, bread, milk 自由发挥 play volleyball for half an hour after school
Lunch rice, meat, vegetables, bananas
Supper noodles, fish, vegetables
Dear Peter,
I’m a student from China. My name is Mike. I’m glad to know you. Now let me tell you something about my lifestyle.
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I think I have a healthy lifestyle. How about yours Can you tell me
Yours,
Mike
7．请根据汉语提示， 向你的外国朋友David介绍一下中国的传统节日端午节及相应的习俗，字数80-100字左右。
提示：
端午节Dragon Boat Festival
节日介绍 端午节起源于中国，是为了纪念屈原。人们吃粽子，赛龙舟(Dragon Boat race)。
粽子的制作过程 1. 原料：粽叶(bamboo leaves)、稻米、红枣(date) 2. 步骤：1）将稻米、红枣、粽叶洗干净； 2）将稻米、三颗红枣放在两片粽叶上； 3）用线将粽子绑好(Tie it up with a small and thin rope（细绳）)； 4）放在锅里高温煮50分钟 5）和家人一起享用
Dear David,
I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival.
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Li Hua
8．著名医生张文宏认为科学的饮食对疫情防控也很重要。不好的饮食习惯也会影响我们的身体健康，所以我们应该养成健康的饮食习惯。假如你是Tom，请根下面表格内容，以“Healthy food and drink”为题目，写一篇英语作文。
牛奶、鱼肉、奶酪 对牙齿好 记住这些很重要： 1 每天早上吃一顿好的早饭 2 喝果汁、水和牛奶，不喝可乐 3 多吃一些水果和蔬菜 4 吃得好，保持健康，不发胖
胡萝卜、鸡蛋和 红薯 对你的眼睛有好处
肉 肉是健康的，但是 太多的肉对我们不好
备注： cheese奶酪 be good for对……有好处 teeth牙齿 carrots胡萝卜 juice果汁 sweet potatoes红薯 don’t get fat不发胖 stay healthy保持健康 remember记住 important重要的
要求：
1. 包含所有提示信息，也可适当发挥。
2. 条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整。
3. 不少于 60 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Healthy food and drink
Is your food and drink healthy
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9．民以食为天，中国的饮食文化极为丰富，各地都有自己独特的食物。请以“My Favourite Food”为题，介绍你最喜欢的食物。
内容包括：
1. 食物的名字；
2. 喜欢的原因；
3. 制作过程。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Food
There are different kinds of food in China. Most of them are very delicious. My favourite food is
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You can have a try!
10．每个人有各自的饮食习惯，你的一日三餐都吃些什么食物呢？你最爱哪些生日食物？请你根据写作内容及写作要求，以“My favourite food”为题，写一篇短文。
内容包括：1. 介绍自己的一日三餐情况；
2. 介绍你最爱的生日食物。
写作要求：1. 语言流畅，层次清晰、内容可以适当发挥；
2. 词数70左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 书写规范，卷面整洁；
4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
My favourite food
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11．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jim发邮件想了解你的生活习惯，请根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍自己的生活习惯。
提示：（1）When do you get up
（2）What do you eat for breakfast, lunch and dinner
（3）What sport do you often do to keep fit
注意：（1）邮件中须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数60个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to hear from you! Now let me tell you about my living habits.
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．假如你是李平，前几天你的外国笔友Eric给你发了一封邮件，想了解你和你的父母一日三餐的饮食情况。请你根据以下表格提示，用英语给他回一封邮件。
Breakfast Lunch Dinner
Father baozi and porridge all kinds of noodles some vegetable salad, beef and chicken
Mother
Li Ping a glass of milk, an egg or some beef
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于50词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Eric,
How’s it going
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Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
13．良好的饮食习惯是身体健康的保证。你的饮食习惯是怎样的？请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的日常饮食习惯，并说明哪些食物对身体有好处，哪些对身体有害处。
breakfast bread, an egg, soft drinks
lunch usually fish, tomatoes and rice; sometimes fast food
dinner …
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于50词（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone. I eat three meals a day on time.
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All in all, you are what you eat. It is important to have good eating habits.
14．良好的饮食习惯是身体健康的保证。你的饮食习惯是怎样的？请你根据以下提示，以“My Eating Habits”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的饮食习惯。
提示：
（1）What are your eating habits
（2）Are your eating habits healthy
（3）Why do we need to eat healthy food
注意：
（1）短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
（3）词数60个左右。
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15．饺子是中国的传统美食，深受人们的喜爱。假设你是李明，为了帮助张家饺子屋 (Zhang’s Dumpling House) 吸引更多客人，请你根据下列提示内容写一篇英语短文向大家介绍它。
提示:
1. 介绍张家饺子屋的地址；2. 介绍饺子的种类和价格；3. 介绍特价品。
要求:
1. 内容包括以上提示信息, 可以适当发挥:
2. 词数 60左右, 短文标题和开头已给出, 不计入总词数.
Zhang’s Dumpling House
Hello, everyone. Delicious dumplings are many people’s favourite food. Where can you have them
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16．中国地大物博，美食众多，有不少美食甚至拥有百年以上的历史。它们是中国传统文化的一部分。米线是中华传统风味美食之一。Rice Noodles House是一家经营了十年的米线老店，本月该餐馆十周年 (10th anniversary) 店庆，店里推出两款特价米线。假如你是该餐馆的店主，请你根据下列提示内容，在餐厅广告板上写一则英文版的宣传广告。
Rice Noodles House
Two main types (主要种类) in the restaurant①with vegetables ②with meat (chicken, fish, beef, mutton)
Two kinds of half-price rice noodlesVegetable rice noodles: 6 yuan Fish rice noodles: 10 yuan
要求：1. 包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 70词左右。
Rice Noodles House
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17．假如你是李华，一家饺子店的老板，为了招揽更多的顾客，请你根据表格中的信息为自己的饭店写一则广告。
碗的大小 特价饺子种类和一碗的价格 菜类 饮料
中等的(一碗15 个水饺) 西红柿鸡蛋— 4元 牛肉白菜— 8元 羊肉胡萝卜—10元 宫保鸡丁麻婆豆腐 土豆沙拉 橙汁免费
参考句式：
Would you like...
We have.. . for...
... is very good / delicious.
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数70词左右。(题目已给出，不计入总词数)
Li Hua Dumpling House
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18．上周五是你父亲的生日，为了表达对父亲的爱，你为他做了他最爱吃的一种食物，比如水果沙拉、西红柿鸡蛋汤、鸡蛋面条、洋葱炒肉丝等。请用简单步骤描述制作的过程，并说明你爸爸对食物的评价以及你自己的感受。
要点包括：
1. What did you cook Why
2. How did you cook the food (simple steps)
3. What was your father’s comment on the food
4. Your feelings.
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 可适当发挥。
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名。
参考词汇：boil煮沸 yogurt酸奶
It was my father’s birthday last Friday.
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19．七年级的生活已过大半，在这期间你的学校生活是什么样的呢？假如你是李华，你报名参加了学校的英语演讲比赛，演讲主题为“My wonderful School Life”请根据以下写作要点，准备一篇演讲稿。
写作要点：1. Do you have rules at school What are they
2.What are your eating habits
3. What are your activities at school
要求：
1.词数80左右，短文开头已经写好，不计入总词数:
2.文章必须包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥，语句连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得提及真实的人名信息。
My Wonderful School Life
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to tell you my wonderful school life.
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20．假如你是Sally，进入初中将近一年的你，在学校的生活还好吧？请你根据下面的提示内容，写信向你的朋友Jane介绍你和你的初中生活。大约80词左右。
提示内容：
1. 你的年龄，班级，喜欢和不喜欢的课程及原因；
2. 你三餐饭吃什么；
3. 你喜欢的动物及原因；
4. 你喜欢的运动及原因；
5. 介绍至少两条校规及对校规的看法。
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 开头结尾已给，不计入总词数。
Dear Jane，
How are you these days Well, I want to tell you something about me and my school life.
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What about you Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Sally
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
My Favourite Food
My favourite food is dumplings. They look like small moons with a white skin. They smell delicious, and when I bite into them, they taste soft and juicy with different fillings like pork and cabbage.
I like dumplings because they are a traditional food in my family. Every Spring Festival, we make them together, which makes me feel warm.
Dumplings are healthy too. They have meat and vegetables, giving me energy. I always feel happy when eating them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的食物；
第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，详细介绍这种食物的益处，喜欢的原因等；
第三步，介绍这种食物的好处，并分享自己的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①look like看起来像
②traditional food传统食物
[高分句型]
①I like dumplings because they are a traditional food in my family.（原因状语从句）
②Every Spring Festival, we make them together, which makes me feel warm.（定语从句）
2．范文
Hi, Mary. I’m happy to learn that you will come to Yantai this summer vacation.
Summers here are mild (25-28°C) with cool sea breezes. Pack light cotton clothes, sunscreen, and a light jacket for evenings.
As a native of Yantai, let me share some highlights you can’t miss! Yangma Island offers golden beaches where we can swim, sunbathe or build sandcastles. Moreover, Chaoyang Street’s century-old architecture will take you through Qing Dynasty history with its cultural exhibits.
As for delicious food, at Yantai Hailang Fisherman’s Wharf, you’ll taste fresh seafood and enjoy boat rides while trying fishing. In addition, you can buy pear vinegar or seashell crafts as gifts.
I’m excited to show you around! Let me know if you need more tips.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，对朋友即将来烟台表示欢迎；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细介绍烟台的气候、名胜古迹及当地美食；
第三步，书写结语，总结并对朋友即将来烟台表示期待。
[亮点词汇]
①let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事
②In addition 除此以外
[高分句型]
①As a native of Yantai, let me share some highlights you can’t miss! (祈使句；省略that的定语从句)
②Yangma Island offers golden beaches where we can swim, sunbathe or build sandcastles. (含有where的定语从句)
③I’m excited to show you around! (不定式作原因状语)
3．范文:
Dear Class Committee Member,
I’d like to share my thoughts of the upcoming semester’s cafeteria procurement plan. My favorite food is pasta, which is not only delicious but also gives me energy for my studies. As for fruits, I love apples for their taste and nutritional value.
For breakfast, I suggest oatmeal and yogurt, which are healthy. For lunch and dinner, pasta dishes with a side of apple slices would be fantastic. These meals are appealing. However, I’m not a fan of spicy food, such as chili peppers. I don’t like oranges, either.
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。说明你最喜欢的食物和水果并简要说明原因；介绍三餐最喜欢的食物和水果及理由；介绍你不喜欢的食物和水果。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于、关于
②such as例如……
③consider my suggestions考虑我的建议
④nutritional value营养价值
[高分句型]
①My favorite food is pasta, which is not only delicious but also gives me energy for my studies. (not only ... but also结构)
②For breakfast, I suggest oatmeal and yogurt, which are healthy. (定语从句)
4．例文
Here are some differences in diet between China and the UK. In China, people like to eat dumplings, rice and all kinds of noodles, such as chicken noodles and beef noodles. They are really delicious! As for people in the UK, they enjoy eating fish and chips. People can buy and eat them in shops. Also, English people usually have afternoon tea with their friends.
In short, there are many differences in diet between these two countries. We can learn more about them in discussions.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明意图；
第二步，介绍具体中国和英国在饮食方面存在的差异；
第三步，书写结果。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②such as例如
[高分句型]
In short, there are many differences in diet between these two countries.(there be句型)
5．例文
As China continues to develop, even foreigners are becoming fascinated with Chinese culture and traditional festivals. As for me, one festival in particular that I enjoy is the Mid-Autumn Festival. Mooncakes are the traditional food on this festival.
Mooncakes are in the shape of a full moon on the Mid-Autumn night. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love and miss. Mooncakes in different parts have different styles and tastes. Some have soft layers of dough and lots of sugar and lard, making them available in sweet or salty tastes. Some are with common fillings of red bean paste and potato paste.
My family love this festival because all the family members return home to get together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍你最喜欢的传统的食品，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单说明你最喜欢的传统节日和食品；
第二步，从不同方面方面介绍这个食品；
第三步，简单介绍一下你和你们家对它的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in particular尤其
②in the shape of以……的形状
[高分句型]
①As for me, one festival in particular that I enjoy is the Mid-Autumn Festival.(定语从句)
②My family love this festival because all the family members return home to get together. (原因状语从句)
6．范文：
Dear Peter,
I’m a student from China. My name is Mike. I’m glad to know you. Now let me tell you something about my lifestyle.
For breakfast, I usually have an egg, an apple, bread and a glass of milk. I usually have some rice, meat, vegetables, bananas for lunch. It’s not good to eat too much for supper. So I have a bowl of noodles, fish, vegetables. We must pay atterntion to what we eat because it is closely related to our health. Besides, I often spend half an hour playing volleyball from Monday to Thursday after school. On Friday afternoon, I always go swimming. At the weekend, I often go to the park with my parents. We have a good time there.
I think I have a healthy lifestyle. How about yours Can you tell me
Yours,
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于电子邮件；
②时态：采用“一般现在时”
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出写电子邮件的目的；
第二步，阐述生活方式并说明理由；
第三步，询问对方的生活方式。
[亮点词汇]
①a bowl of一碗
②from...to...从……到……
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It’s not good to eat too much for supper.（it作形式主语）
②We must pay atterntion to what we eat because it is closely related to our health.（原因状语从句）
7．例文：
Dear David,
I am glad to hear from you. Today I want to tell you some information about the Dragon Boat Festival.
There is a special holiday in China—Dragon Boat Festival. It is very famous because people want to remember the famous man called Qu Yuan. In our hometown, people usually eat zongzi and have Dragon Boat races on that day. Let me tell you how to make zongzi.
We need some bamboo leaves, red dates and some rice. First, wash the rice, dates, bamboo leaves. Put some rice and three dates on two pieces of bamboo leaves. Next, tie it up with a small and thin rope. Then, put zongzi into a pot. And cook it at a very high temperature for about fifty minutes. When it is ready, serve it to your family members.
I think if you come here on that day, you will like it.
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍端午节的起源和习俗，并讲述粽子的制作原料和具体过程。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述端午节的习俗，粽子的原料和具体制作过程，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
8．例文
Healthy food and drink
Is your food and drink healthy Eat the right food and be healthy. Carrots, eggs and sweet potatoes are good for your eyes. Milk, cheese and fish are good for your teeth. Meat is healthy but too much meat is not good for us.
It is important to remember:
Have a good breakfast every morning.
Drink juice, water and milk, not cola.
Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.
Eat well, stay healthy, and don’t get fat!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格内容写一篇作文关于健康的饮食习惯。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作时力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误，可适当发挥使行文连贯，逻辑清晰。
9．范文：
My Favourite Food
There are different kinds of food in China. Most of them are very delicious. My favourite food is dumplings. They are one of the most traditional Chinese foods and very popular in the north of China. I like dumplings because they are not only tasty but also meaningful. Eating dumplings during Spring Festival means good luck and family reunion.
The process of making dumplings is interesting. First, we prepare the wrappers and fillings. The fillings can be pork, beef, vegetables or even seafood. Then we put some fillings in the middle of each wrapper and fold it into the shape of a half moon. After that, we boil them in hot water until they are ready. Hot dumplings taste soft and delicious.
You can have a try!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇介绍类短文，主题是“我最喜欢的食物”。
② 时态：以一般现在时为主，说明食物特点、原因和制作方法。
③ 提示：内容需包含食物名称、喜欢原因和制作过程，条理清楚，语言连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头点明中国食物丰富，引出自己最喜欢的食物；
第二步：说明喜欢的原因（味道、意义、文化价值等）；
第三步：介绍制作过程（原料—包—煮—品尝）；
第四步：结尾呼应主题，发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
① different kinds of 各种各样的
② not only...but also... 不但……而且……
③ in the middle of 在……中间
④ have a try 尝试一下
[高分句型]
① I like dumplings because they are not only tasty but also meaningful.（not only…but also…句型）
② Eating dumplings during Spring Festival means good luck and family reunion.（动名词作主语）
10．范文：
My favourite food
I like Chinese food. I think Chinese food is very good.
For breakfast, I’d like porridge and vegetables. For lunch, I have many kinds of food. Sometimes I would like rice, meat, beef, fish, onions and other vegetables. For dinner, I’d like chicken, fish, dumplings or beef noodles. I usually have soup before a meal. After a meal, I’d like to eat some fruit. Oranges are my favourite. I like strawberries, too. My favourite birthday food is chocolate cake and ice-cream. I eat a lot on my birthday every year.
Sometimes I like to eat in a restaurant because there are specials and they are nice and cheap.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，直接表明自己喜欢中国食物，并认为中国食物很棒，引出下文对具体食物的介绍；
第二步：分别从早餐、午餐、晚餐的食物选择，餐前餐后的饮食，生日时喜爱的食物以及偶尔去餐馆用餐的原因等方面，具体阐述自己喜爱的食物；
第三步：通过对各类喜爱食物的描述，自然收尾，让读者清晰了解作者的饮食偏好。
[亮点词汇]
①would like想要
②favourite最喜爱的
③in a restaurant在餐馆
[高分句型]
①I think Chinese food is very good.（宾语从句）
②Sometimes I like to eat in a restaurant because there are specials and they are nice and cheap.（because 引导原因状语从句）
11．范文：
Dear Jim,
I’m happy to hear from you! Now let me tell you about my living habits.
I usually get up at 6:30 a. m. every day. For breakfast, I often have bread, an egg and a glass of milk. At noon, I have rice with different kinds of vegetables and some meat. Dinner is usually light, like noodles or porridge.
To keep fit, I often play basketball with my friends after school. It makes me stronger and helps me relax.
What about your living habits Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中自己的生活习惯的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍自己的生活习惯”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“何时起床、三餐吃什么、做什么运动等”几个方面重点介绍自己的生活习惯的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“期待收到你的回复”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床；
②keep fit保持健康；
③after school放学后；
④look forward to期待。
[高分句型]
①Now let me tell you about my living habits. (祈使句)
②To keep fit, I often play basketball with my friends after school. (动词不定式作目的状语)
12．例文
Dear Eric,
How’s it going Let me tell you something about our family members’ eating habits. For breakfast, my mother and father have baozi and porridge. To keep strong, my mother asks me to drink a glass of milk and have an egg or some beef. All the members of my family like to eat noodles, so my mother often makes all kinds of noodles for lunch. We seldom have rice. For dinner, we usually have a great meal, such as some vegetable salad, beef and chicken and so on. I also drink some delicious fish soup.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇书信写作。
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，注意字数要求和语法拼写正确。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图，直接说明要分享家人的饮食习惯，为下文的具体介绍做铺垫。
第二步，按三餐顺序详细介绍家人饮食。
第三步，书写结语，期待Eric的回复。
［亮点词汇］
①family members 家庭成员
②eating habits 饮食习惯
③breakfast 早餐
④seldom 很少
⑤porridge 粥
⑥keep strong 保持强壮
⑦a glass of milk 一杯牛奶
⑧all kinds of 各种各样的
［高分句型］
①All the members of my family like to eat noodles, so my mother often makes all kinds of noodles for lunch.（so引导结果状语从句）
②Let me tell you something about our family members’ eating habits.（祈使句）
13．例文
Hello, everyone. I eat three meals a day on time.
For breakfast, I usually have bread, an egg and some milk. This simple combination gives me enough energy to start the day. Eggs are rich in protein, which is good for my growth, and milk provides calcium for strong bones.
When it comes to lunch, I often choose fish, tomatoes and rice. Fish is a great source of healthy protein, which are beneficial for my brain. Tomatoes are full of vitamins and antioxidants. Sometimes I might have fast food like hamburgers, but I know it’s not very healthy, so I don’t eat it too often.
For dinner, I usually have vegetables, such as broccoli and carrots, along with a little bit of lean meat. Vegetables are low in calories and high in fiber, which helps with digestion.
All in all, you are what you eat. It is important to have good eating habits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，介绍自己的一日三餐并介绍哪些食物对身体有好处，哪些对身体有害处；
第三步，最后书写结尾，介绍认为健康饮食很重要。
[亮点词汇]
①on time按时
②simple combination简单的搭配
③be rich in富含
④be beneficial for对……有益
⑤be full of充满
⑥low in calories低热量
⑦high in fiber高纤维
[高分句型]
①Eggs are rich in protein, which is good for my growth, and milk provides calcium for strong bones.(which 引导的非限制性定语从句+并列句)
14．例文
My Eating Habits
I have some good eating habits. I usually eat three meals a day and seldom skip breakfast. I like eating fruits and vegetables, and I drink milk every morning. However, I sometimes eat junk food like chips, but not too often.
I think my eating habits are mostly healthy because I eat balanced meals. But I should eat less fried food and more whole grains.
Healthy food is important because it gives us energy and keeps us strong. It also helps us grow and stay away from illnesses. So, we should choose good food for our health!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：以一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：主题已给出，需包含三个要点，可适当发挥，增添细节，使文章更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，简要介绍自己的饮食习惯；
第二步：评价这些习惯是否健康，并说明理由；
第三步：阐述健康饮食的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
① three meals a day 一日三餐
② junk food 垃圾食品
③ stay away from远离
[高分句型]
① I think my eating habits are mostly healthy because I eat balanced meals.（宾语从句+原因状语从句）
② Healthy food is important because it gives us energy and keeps us strong.（原因状语从句）
15．例文
Zhang’s Dumpling House
Hello, everyone. Delicious dumplings are many people’s favourite food. Where can you have them Please go to Zhang’s Dumpling House. It is on Center Street. It is across from a post office.
You can eat different kinds of dumplings there and they all taste delicious. Chicken dumplings are 15 yuan for a bowl and beef dumplings are 18 yuan for a bowl. Pork dumplings are 16 yuan for a bowl. Vegetable dumplings are only 12 yuan for a large bowl.
On the weekend, tofu dumplings are the special. They are only 9 yuan. You can also have a cup of juice for free. So, why not have a nice meal there
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当补充，注意要点齐全，表述清晰，无单词拼写及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍张家饺子屋的地址；
第二步，介绍饺子的种类和价格；
第三步，介绍特价品。
[亮点词汇]
①across from在……的对面
②different kinds of 不同种类
③why not do sth“为什么不……”
[高分句型]
You can eat different kinds of dumplings there and they all taste delicious. (and连接两个并列句)
16．例文：
Rice Noodles House
If you like to have delicious rice noodles, please come to the Rice Noodles House! We have vegetable rice noodles. We also have rice noodles with meat, like chicken, fish, beef and mutton.
To celebrate the 10th anniversary of the restaurant, we have two great specials this month. You can have a bowl of vegetable rice noodles for only 6 yuan. That is to say, you can buy them at half price. Do you like meat Then you can pay only 10 yuan for a bowl of fish rice noodles.
Don’t miss these specials at good e and eat with your family or friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：根据提示写作。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明米线店有两种特色米线；
第二步：介绍每种特色米线的价格和用料等；
第三步：欢迎大家来吃米线。
[亮点词汇]
①rice noodles with meat肉米线
②a bowl of一碗……
③That is to say换言之
[高分句型]
①If you like to have delicious rice noodles, please come to the Rice Noodles House! (If引导的条件状语从句)
②Come and eat with your family or friends. (祈使句)
17．例文：
Li Hua Dumpling House
House of Dumplings will open this Sunday. Would you like to eat dumplings We have different kinds of dumplings and three types of dishes, along with potato salad for customers. Our potato salad is very delicious. We also have Kung Pao and Mapo Tofu in our restaurant. The bowl is of medium size. There are 15 dumplings in a bowl. Our special dumplings include beef and cabbage dumplings for 8 yuan, carrot and mutton dumplings for 10 yuan, tomato dumplings with eggs for 4 yuan. Besides, you can enjoy free orange juice on Sunday! We will open from 10:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. Come and enjoy our delicious dumplings!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据表格提示内容进行写作，可适当补充，注意要点齐全，表述清晰，无单词拼写及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍餐馆的经营种类；
第二步，介绍餐馆的特色菜、水饺价格及免费饮料；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①along with以及
②different kinds of 不同种类
③besides此外
[高分句型]
There are 15 dumplings in a bowl. (there be句型)
18．例文
It was my father’s birthday last Friday. I made a fruit salad for him because he loves healthy food. First, I washed apples, bananas and grapes. Next, I cut them into small pieces and put them in a bowl. Then I added some yogurt and mixed them well. Finally, I put it in the fridge for 10 minutes. When my father tasted it, he smiled and said, “This is the best birthday gift! It’s fresh and tasty!” I felt so happy that I could make something special for him. Love can be shown in simple ways.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，描述自己为父亲准备美食的过程；
第三步，发表感悟，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①healthy food健康食物
②cut…into把……切成
[高分句型]
①I made a fruit salad for him because he loves healthy food.（原因状语从句）
②Next, I cut them into small pieces and put them in a bowl.（and连接并列句）
19．例文
My Wonderful School Life Hello, I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to tell you my wonderful school life.
First, our school has some rules to help us grow better. For example, we must arrive on time, wear uniforms, and keep classrooms clean. These rules make our school life organized. Second, I have healthy eating habits. I always have breakfast at home and eat lunch in the school dining hall. I try to eat more vegetables and drink milk every day. Third, school activities are colorful. We have sports meetings, art festivals, and English clubs. I joined the soccer team and made many friends. I love my school life because it is both meaningful and happy!
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴告诉你我精彩的学校生活。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——学校校规、你的饮食习惯和学校活动等均要一一阐述；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on time按时
②healthy eating habits健康的饮食习惯
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①I love my school life because it is both meaningful and happy! (because引导的原因状语从句）
20．例文
Dear Jane,
How are you these days Well, I want to tell you something about me and my school life.
I am 13 years old. I am in Class 2, Grade 7. I have a good time at school. My house is not far from school. I usually ride a bike to go to school. It takes me about ten minutes. So I usually have lunch at school. I have milk and eggs for breakfast. As for dinner, I have rice and some dishes. I have a pet dog. It’s cute. And I like running because it can keep me fit. My favorite subject is English. I think it is interesting. But I don’t like math, because it is difficult for me. There are many rules in our school. We have to wear school uniforms on school days. I think it is not good, because the uniforms are not beautiful and we don’t like them. And we can’t run in the hallway. It can keep us from danger.
What about you Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Sally
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，可适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，要介绍自己的初中生活；
第二步，介绍初中生活的相关信息；
第三步，书写结语，询问对方的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time过得愉快
②on school days在上学日
③keep sb from danger让某人远离危险
[高分句型]
①But I don’t like math, because it is difficult for me. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②There are many rules in our school. (there be句型)
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