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Continuation Writing
读后续写
重生之我是编剧
上一世，你只是一个酷爱追剧的小孩；
看得正高兴的时候，
什么！编剧居然把你最爱的角色写死了！
什么！编剧居然把你最磕的cp拆散了！
一气之下，一口气没过来，
还好重生一世，你变成了一个编剧；
这一次你要夺回你的一切......
假如你是一个编剧，
那么，读后续写对你来说，
等同于丢给你一个没写完的剧本，让你创作
初识读后续写-----是什么
读后续写：提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生根据所提供的 和 进行续写；词数要求： ，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
通过阅读原文、思考剧本，利用语言描写、动作描写、心理描写、环境描写等等，推动故事情节发展，完成续写
方法：十句五定法（续写10句，有5句可固定）
材料内容
两段开头语
150 词左右
Henry was a kind, good boy. His father died of a terrible disease, which cost much and left them badly off. His mother was very poor. Although she worked hard, she could only manage both ends meet. He had a little sister about two years old.
He wanted to help his mother, for she could not always earn enough to buy food for her little family. And as the only man of the family, he had been preparing himself to take his responsibility. He once wanted to quit school to find some kind of job to lessen his mother’s burden, but was seriously refused.
One day, on the way home after school, Henry spotted a wallet lying under a pile of leaves. He opened it carefully, finding it was full of money! But it was dark now, and the empty street in the cold winter saw on one around.
Henry might have kept all the money, for no one saw him when he found it. But his mother had taught him to be honest, and never to keep what did not belong to him.
So he decided to wait in the freezing wind. After what seemed a century later, there finally came back the worried and hurrying owner . The man was more than delighted to get back the lost wallet. “It was such a surprise!” the man said, “ I held no hope for it at all. Well, boy, that’s what you deserve for your good deed.”
The man gave him a dollar as thanks and a praise for his honesty. How to deal with the money The candy A new pair of pants Or other things he was longing for so much Wait, next month was mother’s birthday…Yes, Henry got the idea and knew what he should do and he would do it secretly.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With the dollar he bought a box, three brushes, and some blacking(鞋油). ___________________________________________________________________________________________ He smiled and handed the money to his mother.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
350词左右的语言材料
未完成的剧本
两段开头语
6大要素: who; when; where; what; why; how
主旨大意 the main idea
vocabulary ， sentence 词汇 ， 句型
structure 结构
linking words 连接词
the plot and feeling 情节和感受
the tense时态
the main character主要人物
the style写作风格
语言生动，高级
完成一篇“剧本”的基本步骤
写剧本---整洁书写
be full and attractive 情节完整 有吸引力
读剧本---审题
思剧本---构思情节
合理的情节
1.原文
2.读两段提示语
读后续写-----如何应对
找出主角人物、主要情节和冲突、情感变化
“剧本”写作指南
三大原则
01原文一致原则
　内容要前后衔接，上下连贯
语言表达风格一致。
03曲折性原则
　凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。
02正能量原则
　故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。
主题
人与社会
人与自我
人与自然
（温情或化险为夷的故事，表达人间有真情、大爱）
（主角的自我发展、变化或成长）
（人与动物或自然和谐相处）
Part One
读剧本
Step1.
读剧本之找人
主角+配角
Who are in the story
Henry was a kind, good boy. His father died of a terrible disease, which cost much and left them badly off. His mother was very poor. Although she worked hard, she could only manage both ends meet. He had a little sister about two years old.
He wanted to help his mother, for she could not always earn enough to buy food for her little family. And as the only man of the family, he had been preparing himself to take his responsibility. He once wanted to quit school to find some kind of job to lessen his mother’s burden, but was seriously refused.
One day, on the way home after school, Henry spotted a wallet lying under a pile of leaves. He opened it carefully, finding it was full of money! But it was dark now, and the empty street in the cold winter saw on one around.
Henry might have kept all the money, for no one saw him when he found it. But his mother had taught him to be honest, and never to keep what did not belong to him.
So he decided to wait in the freezing wind. After what seemed a century later, there finally came back the worried and hurrying owner . The man was more than delighted to get back the lost wallet. “It was such a surprise!” the man said, “ I held no hope for it at all. Well, boy, that’s what you deserve for your good deed.”
The man gave him a dollar as thanks and a praise for his honesty. How to deal with the money The candy A new pair of pants Or other things he was longing for so much Wait, next month was mother’s birthday…Yes, Henry got the idea and knew what he should do and he would do it secretly.
With the dollar he bought a box, three brushes, and some blacking(鞋油). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
He smiled and handed the money to his mother.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step2.
读剧本之找时间
When did/does the story happen
决定续写需要用的主要时态
Henry was a kind, good boy. His father died of a terrible disease, which cost much and left them badly off. His mother was very poor. Although she worked hard, she could only manage both ends meet. He had a little sister about two years old.
He wanted to help his mother, for she could not always earn enough to buy food for her little family. And as the only man of the family, he had been preparing himself to take his responsibility. He once wanted to quit school to find some kind of job to lessen his mother’s burden, but was seriously refused.
One day, on the way home after school, Henry spotted a wallet lying under a pile of leaves. He opened it carefully, finding it was full of money! But it was dark now, and the empty street in the cold winter saw on one around.
Henry might have kept all the money, for no one saw him when he found it. But his mother had taught him to be honest, and never to keep what did not belong to him.
So he decided to wait in the freezing wind. After what seemed a century later, there finally came back the worried and hurrying owner . The man was more than delighted to get back the lost wallet. “It was such a surprise!” the man said, “ I held no hope for it at all. Well, boy, that’s what you deserve for your good deed.”
The man gave him a dollar as thanks and a praise for his honesty. How to deal with the money The candy A new pair of pants Or other things he was longing for so much Wait, next month was mother’s birthday…Yes, Henry got the idea and knew what he should do and he would do it secretly.
Tense:_____________
simple past tense(一般过去时)
Step3.
读剧本之找事
情节 主题
What happened
Events (What happened)
Henry’s father died of a terrible disease. His mother was very poor. Although she worked hard, she could only manage both ends meet.
One day, on the way home after school, Henry spotted a wallet lying under a pile of leaves.
He decided to wait in the freezing wind.
He once wanted to quit school to find some kind of job to lessen his mother’s burden, but was seriously refused.
Next month was mother’s birthday…Yes, Henry got the idea and knew what he should do and he would do it secretly.
The man gave him a dollar as thanks and a praise for his honesty.
Which is the theme
A. An interesting story
B. A family tragedy (悲剧)
C. An honest boy’s love for mom
He wanted to help his mother. He once wanted to quit school to find some kind of job to lessen his mother’s burden, but was seriously refused.
Henry might have kept all the money, for no one saw him when he found it. But his mother had taught him to be honest……So he decided to wait in the freezing wind.
clue
线索
when
where
One day,
on the way home
Tense:_____________
simple past tense
street
who
Henry
The man
Henry’s mom
third person perspective
第三人称视角
开端beginning
高峰
climax
结尾
ending
story mountain
上升情节
下降情节
Henry’s father died. They were very poor.
He wanted to find some job to lessen mother’s burden.
One day, on the way home, Henry spotted a wallet full of money on an empty street.
He waited in the freezing wind.
the owner finally got back and gave him a dollar as thanks.
Next month was mother’s birthday…Yes, Henry got the idea and knew what he should do and he would do it secretly.
故事线
Henry: anxious
情感线
worried, desired
surprised
delighted, hopeful
Part two
创作剧本
十句五定法
Para1
①承接第一句所给内容
②调配演员，描写情绪（可有对话）
③动作/环境/语言
④关键情节
⑤接第二段的第一句（从第二段第一句倒推）
With the dollar he bought a box, three brushes, and some blacking(鞋油).
He smiled and handed the money to his mother.
about the main character, Henry
十句五定法
Para2
①接第二段第一句所给内容
②关键情节（各个角色做什么）
③动作/环境/心理/语言(可有对话)
④交代结局：问题解决（积极向上，符合价值观）
⑤点睛升华：价值观/感叹/谚语
He smiled and handed the money
to his mother.
between Henry and his mom
With the dollar he bought a box, three brushes, and some blacking(鞋油).
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.然后他带着这些东西去到大街上（第一段首句）
Para.1
2.他礼貌地询问过路的人们是否需要刷鞋
3.慢慢地，大家注意到他并让他帮忙刷鞋
4.他把赚到的钱一点点存起来, 期待着妈妈收到这个大大的惊喜
5.这一天终于到来（从下一段倒推）
Tip 1: 由已知信息推理未知信息
语言描写
环境/ 动作描写
动作/ 心理描写
Tip 2. Thinking for the ending
Para.2
He smiled and handed the money to his mother.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1.妈妈看到后，生气地质问钱从哪里来的（结合第二段首句）
2.Henry解释他如何靠自己赚到的钱
3.妈妈听后非常感动，流下了开心的泪水
4.妹妹也祝妈妈生日快乐，一家人幸福地拥抱在一起（故事结局）
5.整个家里再次充满了欢笑，多么温馨画面啊 !（升华主旨）
语言描写
心理，情绪，动作描写
Theme
Time
Place
Characters
relationships
Plot (情节)
An honest boy’s love for mom
One day，next month, mom’s birthday
On the street, home
Henry, father, mother, sister, the man
Henry blacked
others’ shoes to earn money
wondering a surprise
Mom was angry
fount out the truth
The family hugged and bursted into laughter
范文赏析
With the dollar he bought a box, three brushes and some blacking(鞋油). He then went to the corner of the street, and said to every one whose boots did not look nice “Black your boots, sir, please ” He was so polite that people soon began to notice him, and to let him black their boots. He brought all the money home little by little, hiding it in a pocket under the bed. Day after day, the pocket became heavier and heavier and Henry can’t help wondering what a surprise his mother would get. One month later, the big day finally arrived.
情绪感受、心理活动描写
动作描写
范文赏析
He smiled and handed the money to his mother. Too shocked, she could hardly spoke a word. “Where did you get the money ” She was so angry, “I told you to be honest.” “Mom, I earned it myself.”Then Henry told his mother what he did after school the whole month. On hearing this, she was deeply touched and hugged Henry tightly, dropping a tear of joy. “Happy birthday!” the little girl came ,waving hands towards them happily. All of them burst into a laughter, which was such a warm scene!
情绪感受、心理活动描写
动作描写
语言、对话描写
情感升华
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