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B3 U1 Festivals and Celebrations
Reading for Writing
Write about your festival experience
By the end of this class, I will be able to...
Learning Objectives
apply sentences or words related to feelings and emotions.
write an festival experience.
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describe activities vividly.
Writing
假定你是李华，你校英文报现征稿,请你以“我奇妙的节日经历”为题写一篇投稿，内容包括：
1.回忆活动经历
2.你的感受
My amaing _______ experience
第一节（满分15分）
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Opening paragraph
Closing paragraph
state the topic
festival and its activities
summary of the experience
Body
Revise
Which of the following shows the structure of the passage
A B C D
Get the certain structure to make your article well-organized.
Writing tip
My amazing Naadam experience
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P2-4
P5
Opening paragraph
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. The festival falls on the fourth day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
Revise Simplify the passage into a practical writing
Para 1: I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
Revise Simplify the passage into a practical writing
Para 2:
Para 3:
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favorite part.
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. I can’t wait!
My amazing Naadam experience
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favorite part.
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. I can’t wait!
Revise Simplify the passage into a practical writing
Try to polish this article
Revise Rewrite the passage
My amazing Naadam experience
Paragraph 1:(topic and feelings)
___________________________________ the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because __________________________________________________
我永远不会忘记中国内蒙古自治区的那达慕大会，因为对我来说那是一次愉快又令人兴奋的经历。
I’ll never forget/I will always remember
it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
Revise Rewrite the passage
My amazing Naadam experience
Paragraph 2:(festival activities and feelings.)
During the Naadam Festival, people enjoy a variety of activities, ___________ horse racing ______ wrestling (range from...to...) and to archery , which __________________________(观看这些项目都非常令人兴奋). __________(follow) the opening ceremony and some________________________________________(精彩的表演), the wrestling competition began. What_____________________was_______
__________that___________最令我感动的是他们所表现出来的力量与优雅. I __________________________ the archery, too, but the horse races were my favourite part.我也非常喜欢射箭，但赛马是我最喜欢的部分.
ranging from
to
are all so exciting to watch.
Following
spectacular/remarkable/splendid performances
impressed/moved me most
strength
and grace
they showed
absolutely/extremely enjoyed
Revise Rewrite the passage
My amazing Naadam experience
Para 3 (summary and feelings)
I’m finally back home now, __________________________ 感到非常疲惫,but celebrating Naadam with my friend ____________________________这完全是值得的. I am _______________________________________________.(我期盼着下一个节日 look forward to/be eager for/be dying for)
feeling really tired/exhausted
was totally/completely worth it
looking forward to/eager to/dying for the next festival
My amazing Naadam experience
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year. Naadam means “games” in Mongolian, and it is represented by three events: horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch!
After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. I was quite moved by their show of strength and grace.I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favorite part.
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. I can’t wait!
Revise Rewrite the passage
My amazing Naadam experience
I’ll never forget/I will always remember the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
During the Naadam Festival, people enjoy a variety of activities, ranging from horse racing to wrestling and to archery, which are all so exciting to watch. Following the opening ceremony and some amazing performances, the wrestling competition began. What impressed me most was strength and grace that they showed. I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favorite part.
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. I am looking forward to the next festival/I can’t wait!
Writing
假定你是李华，你校英文报现征稿,请你以“我奇妙的节日经历”为题写一篇投稿，内容包括：
1.回忆活动经历
2.你的感受
My amaing _______ experience
第一节（满分15分）
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
y
The opening part
1. This was my first time spending...and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience.
2. I’ll never forget/always...because...
3...
Write about a festival or a celebration you have experienced
The activities
The ending part
1. During..., people enjoy a variety of activities, ranging from...to...
2. People celebrate...in many ways, such as..., and...
3...
1. ...was totally/absolutely worth it.
2. I can’t wait./I am looking forward to the next festival.
3...
The feelings
happy: delighted/excited/pleased
surprised: to one’s surprise/
in amazement
can’t wait=be eager/dying to do sth./for sth.
...
Writing tip : Use words and sentences to convey your feelings or emotions.
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Assessment Sheet for Festival Experience Writing Dimensions Criteria Self-assessment Peer-assessment Teacher -assessment
Structure Is the writing well-organised
Content 1. Does each paragraph include the necessary details
2.Does the writer describe his/her feelings and emotions
Language 1. Does the writer use the -ing form or clauses correctly in the writing
2. Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors
评分说明（Scoring Guide）
Excellent: 表现优异，或稍有提升空间
Acceptable: 基本达标，需部分改进
Needs Improvement: 明显不足，需着重修改
Revise and polish your composition
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