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高考英语作文高分鉴赏：
高分作文的必要点：
写作技巧：
1.字迹工整：使用工整清晰的字体，如衡水体，确保字母大小均匀，单词间距适中。整洁的书写能给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。
2.高级词汇和句型：替换普通词汇为高级词汇，如用“beneficial”代替“good”，用“argue”代替“say”。运用高级句型，如非限制性定语从句、倒装句和强调句，提升文章的复杂性和逻辑性。
3.内容充实：应用文需涵盖所有提示信息，议论文需观点明确、论据充分，记叙文需有起承转合和情感升华。适当添加细节，使内容更真实、生动。
4.结构清晰应用：文采用三段式结构：开头点明身份与目的，主体分点阐述，结尾礼貌收尾。议论文采用“总-分－总”结构：引言引出话题，主体多角度论证，结论重申观点。 记叙文按照事件发展顺序，结尾升华主题。
高分范文欣赏：给朋友的建议信——高效学习
Dear Xiaohua,
How time files!(时间飞逝!)It has been two weeks since I received your letter. You asked for my suggestions on how to study efficiently in your last letter. After careful consideration , I will give you some useful advice.
First of all, you should have your own study goals. I recommend that you follow the SMART rule when setting goals. SMART stands for specific, measurable, attainable ,relevant , and time-based. For example , memorizing 20 English words of CET-4 level every day is a SMART goal. Secondly , you should have an efficient monitoring system. Your classmates and your friends can be the supervisors. Last but not least , you should allocate your time in a reasonable way . Draw up a detailed plan of how you should spend every day of a week and stick to it.
I believe these suggestions can help you study more efficiently. If you have any questions , don’t hesitate to write to me. Look forward to your early reply.
(到底文章好在何处？——请耐心往下看！）
Yours，
Xiaohua
Dear Xiaohua,
How time files!(时间飞逝!)It has been two weeks since I received your letter. You asked for my suggestions on how to study efficiently in your last letter. After careful consideration , I will give you some useful advice.（首段点明了信的主题，并且成功引出下文）
精准分析：
精准分析：
First of all, you should have your own study goals. I recommend（推荐) that you follow the SMART rule when setting goals. SMART stands for specific, measurable, attainable(可达成的） ,relevant , and time-based. For example , memorizing 20 English words of CET-4 level every day is a SMART goal. Secondly , you should have an efficient monitoring system. Your classmates and your friends can be the supervisors.（监督者） Last but not least , you should allocate （分配）your time in a reasonable way . Draw up a detailed plan of how you should spend every day of a week and stick to it.
解析：
提出了三条建议：1.订立学习目标 2.建立监督体系 3.合理分配时间
精准分析：
I believe these suggestions can help you study more efficiently. If you have any questions , don’t hesitate（犹豫） to write to me. Look forward to（期待） your early reply.
总结全文，期待对方早日回复
高分范文欣赏：对减少屏幕时间的必要性阐述你的看法---观点类型的题目：
The Necessity of Reducing Screen Time
It is true that nowadays we are surrounded by a variety of electronic devices, such as TVs , computers , smartphones , and tablets . Many of us are so addicted to them that we spend every possible walking hour on them , unable to escape from their control.
It seems to me that it’s high time we realized the harm of excessive long screen time . For one thing, due to the increasing number of screen hours , our eyesight is going from bad to worse . There is no denying the fact that the myopia rate among young students has been on the increase these years . For another, lots of studies have shown that long screen time is also linked to poor mental health among young people . Some of college students are suffering from anxiety, sadness, or even depression for the sake of long screen time.
To sum up, it is time to reduce screen time. After all, under no circumstances should we enjoy the convenience of technology at the expense of our health.
精准分析：
开头：
It is true that nowadays （描述现状） we are surrounded by a variety of （各种各样的）electronic devices, such as TVs , computers , smartphones , and tablets . Many of us are so addicted to （对……上瘾）them that we spend every possible walking hour on them , unable to escape from their control.
亮点：阐述现象，指出屏幕控制我们的生活
中间部分：
It seems to me that it’s high time（引入个人观点） we realized the harm of excessive（过多的） long screen time . For one thing, due to the increasing number of screen hours , our eyesight is going from bad to worse（越来越糟糕） . There is no denying （毫无疑问的是）the fact that the myopia rate among young students has been on the increase（不断增加） these years .
For another, lots of studies have shown that（引入专业研究，更加具有科学性） long screen time is also linked to（与……有联系） poor mental health among young people . Some of college students are suffering from anxiety, sadness, or even depression for the sake of（由于） long screen time.
亮点：
1.阐述了个人观点及理由
2.指出屏幕时间的危害
结尾：
To sum up（总之）, it is time to reduce screen time. After all, under no circumstances should （无论如何决不）we enjoy the convenience of technology at the expense of（以……为代价） our health.
亮点：总结了全文，再次强调了自己的观点
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