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Unit 3 Family Ties
Writing: My happy family
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写作步骤
Step 1: 审好题 审人称，审时态
Step 2: 列题纲 三段式：总-分-总
Step 3: 写好句 连词成句
Step 4: 成篇章 连句成篇
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写作任务
家是温暖的港湾，家人给了我们最真挚的关怀和爱。假如你是李华，请你根据下列提示，以“My Family”为题写一篇文章，向大家介绍一下你的家人，并表达你对家人的深厚感情。
How many people are there in your family
What jobs do your family members do
What do you usually do with them
What do you think of your family
Step 1: 审好题
1.审人称：人称以第 人称为主
2.审时态：时态以 ___________ 为主
一
一般现在时
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结尾：讲述家庭日常活动并表达自己的感受
开头：开篇点题，介绍家庭成员数量。
正文：分别描述父母的职业特点和对家庭的付出
Beginning
Body
Ending
Step 2: 列提纲（三段式）
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Step 3: 写好句→词句积累
1. 来自: __________ 2. 家庭时光: ____________
3. 相互支持: ________________ 4. 在 ... 之间: ____________
5. 担任: _______ 6. 缺席: _______________
7. 在 ... 方面帮助某人: _____________ 8. 关心: _________
9. 给某人某物: ____________ 10. 第一次: _______________
11. 面临/ 解决问题: _______________ 12. 和 ... 很亲密: __________
13. 共同分享时光: ___________________ 14. 想要做某事: ___________ 15. 比 ... 更重要: _________________
give sth. to sb.
face/ solve problems
enjoy the time together
for the first time
be close to ...
want to do sth.
come from ...
serve as
family moment
between ... and ...
be absent from ...
support each other
help sb. with sth.
care for ...
more important than
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课文好句：
1. His love may be silent. But like a mountain, it is always there.
父爱沉默无声。但它就像一座山一样，始终坚定地在那里。
2. We are a family, together or far away.
无论远近，我们始终是一家人
3. Love always wins.
爱总会赢。
4. Love binds family together.
爱将家人紧密相连。
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Write a passage about your family and express your love for them!
WRITING
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开头不用复杂句子，直接说明写作主题和家庭核心信息，让读者一目了然。
三句：I have a family + 家庭成员总数 + 一句简单描述他们是谁
在此基础上还可以添加一些形容词侧面表达出对家的情感：happy, warm等
Beginning
介绍自己家庭特点和成员
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1. 我有一个小却很幸福的家。
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关键词：
注意此处的形容词用but连接
I have a small but happy family.
2. 在我家里一共有三口人，分别是爸爸、妈妈和我。
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关键词：
There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me.
in my family
There be 句型
→表示地点的短语，常常放在句末
Beginning
small but happy
Tip 1: 将不会写的长句拆分成两个短句，降低写作难度。
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示例：My father is a doctor. He is very kind. He helps me with my homework.
中间段：按 “人物顺序” 介绍
写 “职业 + 1 个特点(爱好/性格/外貌)+相处细节”
Body
分别描述父母的特点和对家庭的付出
描述性格/外貌：
He/She is + adj 形容词
handsome 帅气的 beautiful 美丽的
kind 善良的 outgoing 外向的
helpful 乐于助人的
描述爱好：
He/She likes doing sth
/loves doing sth
/enjoy doing sth
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5. 虽然他经常不在家，我也很少能见到他，
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3. 爸爸是一名医生。
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Body
关键词：
My father serves as a doctor.
表达职业：
Although he is often absent from home and I seldom see him，
be / serve as+职业
关键词：
be absent from
seldom
4. 他长得帅气。
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He is handsome.
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6.他总会通过视频电话问我的校园生活。
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关键词：
he always asks me about my school life through video calls.
7.他的爱就像一座山，始终在那里。
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关键词：
His love is like a mountain and it is always there.
be like
be there
through video calls
ask sb about sth.
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8. 妈妈在一所学校工作。
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关键词：
work in+地点 在..工作
My mother works in a school.
10. 下班后常常帮我辅导作业。
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关键词：
She often helps me with homework after work.
help sb. with sth.
after class / after school
after work
→拓: 放学后
11. 每天早上，她会为我做美味的早餐。
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关键词：
Every morning, she makes delicious breakfast for me.
delicious breakfast
make sth. for sb.
9. 妈妈享受烹饪。
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关键词：
enjoy doing sth 享受做某事
My mother enjoys cooking.
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结尾：用 “互动 + 感受 + 总结”，情感更真实
分点列出家人的日常互动，用 “简单连接词” 串联，让句子之间更连贯
结尾用一句话表达对家庭的感情，简单又能点明主旨
Ending
结尾公式：I love my family + 一句抒发对家的情感
示例：I love my family very much. It is the warmest place in the world for me.
讲述家庭日常活动并表达自己的感受
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12. 我们一家人一直很亲近
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关键词：
be close to
We are always close to each other.
13. 周末的时候，我们常常会去公园散步，享受在一起的时光。
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关键词：
On weekends, we often go for a walk in the park and enjoy the time together.
on weekends
go for a walk
Ending
each other
Tip :结尾段先点出家人关系亲密，再描述日常互动以证，承上启下，让文章更有连贯性。
enjoy the time together
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14. 除此之外，每年我们都会拍一张全家福。
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关键词：
Besides
Besides, every year, we take a family photo together.
15. 而且当我遇到困难时，他们总会在我身边帮助和支持我。
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What’s more, when I face problems, they are always here to help and support me.
take a family photo
关键词：
16. 我很爱我的家。对我来说，这是世上最温暖的地方
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关键词：
the warmest place
I love my family very much. It is the warmest place in the world for me.
help support
what’s more
face new problems
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Step 4: 成篇章→连句成篇
I have a small but happy family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me.
My father serves as a doctor. He is handsome.Although he is often absent from home and I seldom see him, he always asks me about school through video calls. His love is like a mountain, and it is always there. My mother works in a school. My mother enjoys cooking.Every morning, she makes delicious breakfast for me.She often helps me with homework after work.
We are always close to each other. On weekends, we often go for a walk in the park and enjoy the time together. Besides, every year, we take a family photo together. What’s more, when I face problems, they are always here to help and support me. I love my family very much. It is the warmest place in the world for me.
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I have a small but happy family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me.
My father is a doctor. He is handsome.He often helps me with homework after work. My mother works in a school. My mother enjoys cooking.Every morning, she makes delicious breakfast for me.
We are always close to each other. I love my family very much. It is the warmest place in the world for me.
基础版本
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评价标准 Yes No
1. 格式、时态是否正确
2. 主谓是否一致
3. 要点是否齐全
4. 人称是否正确
5. 语序是否有问题
6. 语言是否符合习惯　
7. 句子结构是否完整
8. 固定短语是否恰当
9. 拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等
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誊
1. 斜度
2. 字母形态
3. 字母比例
4. 间距
5. 标点
6. 贴线
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