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What kind of jobs need people to work during festivals
firefighter
doctor
policeman
cleaner
engineer
waiter
Write a short paragraph about a person on duty during festivals.
Useful expressions
(1) For Chinese people, festivals usually means... But for..., festivals only mean...
(2) Festivals are a challenge because...
(3)...'s duty means....
(4) But...never regrets...
(5)...is only one of the millions of... They... to answer the call of duty.
(6) In the heart of..., their hard work shines brighter than festive works.
Read the information about a policeman, or choose another job and research it.
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While-writing
Zhang Hua, a policeman, usually needs to go around the whole city to make sure that everything is safe.
Lu Ting, a doctor, needs to stand by every minute in the hospital and takes care of her patients.
Li Lei, a street cleaner, needs to clean the streets everyday whatever it is in festival.
Choose a person to write about. Organize the information with table.
While-writing
Zhang Hua, a policeman, usually needs to go around the whole city to make sure that everything is safe.
Li Lei, a street cleaner, needs to clean the streets everyday whatever it is in festival.
Lu Ting, a doctor, needs to stand by every minute in the hospital and takes care of her patients.
Choose a person to write about. Organize the information with table.
While-writing
Beginning
Body
Ending
Structure （结构）:
Beginning: name
Body: job, duties, festival experiences
Ending: comments
Narrative: the third person 第三人称
Tense: 一般现在时、一般过去时
Writing Tips:
Genre（体裁）: Narrative 记叙文
Theme: a person on duty during festivals
Write a passage about a person on duty during festivals according to the table.
Beginning
Introduce the topic
① What do festivals mean to common people
② What do people do during festivals
③ But for XXX, festivals mean more work.
As for most people, festivals mean a break/restfrom work and family reunion. But for Xiao Hua, festivals mean more work.
Body
Job
Duty
Festival experiences
Xiao Hua is a policeman.
It's his duty to keep the society safe and protect the people and their things.
So/As a result, he misses many family meals with his loved ones. He is much busier during festivals. He must go around the city by motorbike to make sure everything is safe. He needs to stand by every minute.
Ending
Comments
As far as I am concerned,/In my opinion, Zhang Hua is only one of millions of policemen in China. He gives up his family time to answer the call of duty. His hard work shines brighter than festival fireworks.
Possible version:
As for most people, festivals mean a break/rest from work and family reunion. But for Zhang Hua (name), festivals mean more work.
Zhang Hua is a policeman(job). It's his duty to keep the society safe and protect the people and their things(duty). So/As a result, he misses many family meals with his loved ones. He is much busier during festivals. He must go around the city by motorbike to make sure everything is safe. He needs to stand by every minute （festival experiences).
As far as I am concerned,/In my opinion, Zhang Hua is only one of millions of policemen in China. He gives up his family time to answer the call of duty. His hard work shines brighter than festival fireworks(comment).
假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他向你询问中国传统节日。请以“My favourite festival”向他介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日，并说明理由。
内容包括:
介绍节日的名称以及节日时间；
介绍该节日的相关习俗或传统；
表明自己对这个节日的感受或喜欢它的原因。
审题: 文体+主题+要点
step 1 审题：人称： 以第一人称、第三人称为主
时态：一般现在时
Beginning
Body
Ending
开头：引出话题，介绍节日
正文：具体介绍节日相关内容（习俗/传统）
结尾：对节日的总结、感受或期望
介绍中国传统节日（名称+时间）
习俗：团圆饭/走亲访友...
意义：是...的象征
总结：是团聚的时刻...
期望：邀请一起感受这个节日
step 2
列提纲
写作语料：
fall on 落在；发生在
in the Chinese lunar calendar 在中国农历中
like... best 最喜欢...
one of the most important traditional festivals 最重要的传统节日之一
gather together 聚在一起
spend...with 和...一起度过
watch the full moon 赏月
a symbol of... ...的象征
family reunion 家庭团聚
remind sb. of 提醒某人...
such a great time 如此美好的时光
be full of 充满
a delicious meal 一顿美味的饭菜
the best part of... ...最好的部分
范文
My favourite festival
Of all Chinese traditional festivals, the Spring Festival is my favourite. It comes in January or February.
It is the most important festival for us, full of joy and warmth. Before the festival, we usually clean the house to sweep bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, the family get together for a big dinner with dumplings. We enjoy the delicious food. After that, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and set off fireworks when midnight comes.
I love the Spring Festival because it lets families get together. The laughter, delicious food and warm wishes make me feel happy and lucky. It’s the best time to feel love and happiness.

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