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An English Writing Class
Unit 4 School Life
2025.11
Step 1
1.Greetings and Some jokes
What is the longest word in English When can you get water with a net
2.Have a dictation.
Step 2 Pre-writing
1>Check the meaning of these words.
Which ones describe positive features of a city
attractive lively busy vast
noisy peaceful poor
dangerous modern smart wealthy
industrial dirty
2> Make the sentences with the following words
1.attractive 2.busy 3.vast
4.noisy 5.peaceful 6.poor
7.dangerous 8.modern 9.smart 10.wealthy 11.industrial
12. lively 13.dirty
3> The introduction to the writing methods :
1.Write notes about some of the features in your hometown.
2.Write sentences using your notes
3.Use the link words such as “and”, “but” “so ” “although” and so on .
4.Organize the sentences into paragraphs.
5.Check up if there are any mistakes in grammar in your sentence.
Step 3 Practice Writing :
Making comparisons
A Model
Read this description comparing Shanghai with Guilin, then complete the blanks using the following words
a peaceful city f a lot more traffic
b very different g on the coast
c southern China
h high-rise buildings
d modern business i attractive
e crowded port j larger population
Although Shanghai and Guilin are ___cities, they are both very ___and they are visited by a lot of tourists. Shanghai is ___while Guilin is situated in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region of ____. Shanghai is a lively___ ,while Guilin is a small ___in a beautiful mountainous region.
The climate in both cities is warm and pleasant all year round but Guilin has more rain than Shanghai. Shanghai has a much ___than Guilin. It has nearly twenty million inhabitants while Guilin only has six
hundred thousand. It is also a very crowded city with ____.
Guilin has fewer ___than Shanghai. It is a beautiful historical city while Shanghai is a __city . Guilin has a history of more than two thousand years while Shanghai
started as a small fishing village in the eleventh century.
A Model Writing
Although Shanghai and Guilin are _b__ cities, they are both very _i__ and they are visited by a lot of tourists. Shanghai is _g__ while Guilin is situated in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region of _c___. Shanghai is a lively_e_ ,while Guilin is a small _a__ in a beautiful mountainous region.
The climate in both cities is warm and pleasant all year round but Guilin has more rain than Shanghai. Shanghai has a much _j__than Guilin. It has nearly twenty million inhabitants while Guilin only has six
hundred thousand. It is also a very crowded city with _f__.
Guilin has fewer _h__ than Shanghai. It is a beautiful historical city while Shanghai is a _d_city . Guilin has a history of more than two thousand years while Shanghai
started as a small fishing village in the eleventh century.
Step 4 Writing an article for your hometown
1> A Model: Complete the blank
My Hometown
I am a ___from___. I like living in ___ because_________. I have been away from my hometown for___. I miss ___very much.
There are ___people in my family:___ ___ ___ and I. My mother is ___.And my father is__. There used to be a ___river in my hometown, but now it has been polluted. There used to be ____trees on the hill around my hometown, but these years they have been ___.The people in my hometown live a ___life. I feel ___. Although my hometown is ___, the people in it are very ____,They often help each other if anyone is in trouble.
I hope my hometown will ___in the future!
2>
Write some ad-words or sentences for your hometown or your school. If possible you can add some songs and pictures on them.
圣地延安
再造秀美山川
The Folk Songs in the North
0f Shaanxi Province
3>Try to translate Chinese into English
我的家在延河岸边,绿色的风在黄土高坡上吹着,高亢的信天游在窑洞旁唱着。
这里山清水秀，空气新鲜，天蓝如洗。
环境优美，资源丰富。石油如泉涌，煤炭似黑金。红色旅游传天下，人民友好情谊长。
欢迎远方的好朋友来这里旅游、做客、谈生意。我骄傲我是延安人，延安因你而精彩！
参考词汇：
high loessial slope 黄土高坡
the Red Revolution Tour 红色旅游
Xintianyou, the folk songs of northern Shaanxi 信天游
loud and sonorous 高亢的
cave-house 窑洞
gush 喷涌
English version
Para.1
My hometown is situated on the Yan'an River. The green wind is blowing on the high loessial slope while loud and sonorous Xintianyou, the folk songs of northern Shaanxi are being sung near the cave-houses.
Para.2
Here, the mountains are green; the rivers are clear; the air is fresh. And the sky is so blue that it looks as if it were washed by human beings . As a result, the environment is very beautiful and pleasant to live in. Our hometown is rich in natural resources such as oil and coal .Look! The oil is gushing like the spring, and the coal looks like the black gold. The Red Revolution Tour is well-known all over the world .The inhabitants are very friendly to the friends from other places，so they will cherish the friendship forever.
Para.3
Dear friends, you are welcome here to be guests ,travel and do business!
I am proud of being a person of Yan’an.Yan'an is becoming more glorious because of your coming!
Homework
Writing : My School

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