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Unit 1 People around us
Writing
AI conversation
I wrote some questions on a piece of paper but I couldn’t find it. Please help me.
Wang Yao
Help Wang Yao check whether all the questions are covered in her article.
Who am I going to write about
(e.g. a family member / a teacher / someone in the community)
b. What is he / she like
c. What does he / she do
d. What does he / she often say
e. What do I think of him / her
Pre-writing
AI conversation
Read and match
My nice neighbour Yao Yuan
Yao Yuan is my neighbour and schoolmate. He is kind and hard-working.
Yao Yuan is very active in our community. At the weekend, he often helps out at a local retirement home. He teaches retired people to use computers and smart phones. He says, “I’m always happy to help!”
Yao Yuan also uses his time wisely. Every day, he gets up at six and exercises for half an hour before breakfast. Then he listens to English programmes on the way to school. He won the school English speaking competition last year.
Yao Yuan is an amazing person, and I wish I could be like him!
What does he often say
Who am I going to write about
What does he do
What is he like
What do I think of him
Match the main ideas with the paragraphs.
a
b
c
d
e
Structure
My nice neighbour Yao Yuan
Yao Yuan is my neighbour and schoolmate. He is kind and hard-working.
Yao Yuan is very active in our community. At the weekend, he often helps out at a local retirement home. He teaches retired people to use computers and smartphones. He says, “I’m always happy to help!”
Yao Yuan also uses his time wisely. Every day, he gets up at six and exercises for half an hour before breakfast. Then he listens to English programmes on the way to school. He won the school English speaking competition last year.
Yao Yuan is an amazing person, and I wish I could be like him!
Beginning
Body
Ending
relationship(关系)
character(性格)
action/behaviors(行为)
words(言语)
my feelings towards him/her(我对他/她的感觉)
my wish(我的希望)
appearance(外貌)
job(工作)
.......
A person I like
job
character
action&words
appearance
tall/slim
beautiful/
handsome
doctor
policeman
help sb. with/do sth.
cook...for...
amazing
forever(永远的)
hard-working
kind
Useful expressions
strict
(严厉的)
feelings
wish
a good example
be like(像) him
Matching game
Review
The greatest woman in the world
My best friend, my sunshine
Try to think of an eye-catching title for your composition.
Write
What do you need to pay attention to before writing
Writing tips
handwriting
person and tense
spelling and usage of words
(about 80 words)
Paragraph 1
relatioinship
a family member / a friend/
a teacher / a neighbor
e.g. I like my mom best./ Amy is my best friend and my classmate./ Mrs.Yang is my favorite English teacher.
his/her character
kind/ hard-working/ active/ friendly/ strict(严厉的)
e.g. She/He is ... and ... .
Useful expressions
(about 20 words)
Paragraph 2
appearance
e.g. She is young and beautiful./ He is handsome and tall./ She is slim and has big eyes.
job
e.g. She is a doctor.
He works as a teacher.
action/behaviors
eg. She cooks breakfast for me./ He helps me learn English.
words
e.g. She always encourages me with her words. /
He often says, “We should never give up.”
......
Useful expressions
(about 40 words)
Paragraph 3
my feelings towards him/her
e.g. He is an amazing person.
She is a good example for me.
She is a great and trustworthy(值得信赖的) friend.
my wish
e.g. I hope/wish be a person like him/her.
I hope we can be good friends forever.
I wish to share more wonderful memories with (与某人分享回忆) him/her.
Useful expressions
(about 20 words)
Check and revise
SA 自评 (self-assessment) PA 同伴互评
（peer assessment）
I wrote about what this person says and does to show his/her character. Yes No
I used suitable adjectives, such as _________, in the description. Yes No
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. Yes No
Things to improve ( 需要提升的地方）
1.
2.
3.
It is time for self-assessment and peer assessment.
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Yes No
Homework
Compulsory:
Revise your writing based on assessments. (You may ask for the help of AI.)
Voluntary:
Make a video to introduce the person you like according to your revised writing.
Thank you!
Unit 1 People around us
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G4
A person
I like
Beginning
Body
Ending
relatioinship
character
action
words
appearance
job
......
feelings
wish
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