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Unit 6
八年级（上）
Writing
The school short story competition is calling all talented writers! Please write a story and send it to us. Winning stories will be included in this year's storybook.
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Lead in
Writing a short story about wisdom
What stories about wisdom do you know
Guess what the following stories are.
A man uses a clever strategy to win a series of horse races.
During a battle on the Yangtze River, a general uses fire to defeat a much more powerful enemy.
To trick the enemy, a general leaves the gates to the city open. The enemy leader thinks this is a trap and orders his army to leave.
Game: guess the names of stories
田忌赛马 Tian Ji in a horse race
赤壁之战 The Battle of Chibi
空城计 Empty fort strategy
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Lead in
Writing a short story about wisdom
How to write them in your words
How to organize a short story
A new strategy: SCOOP
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What's the SCOOP
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Lead in
What's the SCOOP
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Tells WHEN and WHERE
How is the problem solved or fixed
Tell the story IN ORDER
WHO is in the story
Setting
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Characters
2
Oh no!
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Order of Events
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Problem Solved
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What is the PROBLEM in the story
(the problem)
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Pre-writing
It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do
One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment.
That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy.
The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!
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1. Setting
(when and where)
Analyze the story and fill in. (Task 1)
2. Characters
3. Oh no!
(the problem)
4.Order of Events
5.Problem Solved
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Pre-writing
It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do
One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment.
That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy.
The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!
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1. Setting
(when and where)
Analyze the story and fill in. (Task 1)
2. Characters
3. Oh no!
(the problem)
4.Order of Events
5.Problem Solved
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Pre-writing
It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do
One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment.
That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy.
The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!
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P
1. Setting
(when and where)
Analyze the story and fill in. (Task 1)
2. Characters
3. Oh no!
(the problem)
4.Order of Events
5.Problem Solved
Couldn’t capture Troy
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Pre-writing
It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do
One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment.
That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy.
The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!
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C
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O
P
1. Setting
(when and where)
Analyze the story and fill in. (Task 1)
2. Characters
3. Oh no!
(the problem)
4.Order of Events
5.Problem Solved
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Pre-writing
It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do
One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment.
That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy.
The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!
S
C
O
O
P
1. Setting
(when and where)
Analyze the story and fill in. (Task 1)
2. Characters
3. Oh no!
(the problem)
4.Order of Events
5.Problem Solved
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Pre-writing
How to write in three parts
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1. Setting
3. Oh no! (the problem)
5.Problem Solved
4.Order of Events
2. Characters
Hot dry summer, Troy, after ten years’ fighting
Greek soldiers, Trojans, Trojan captain
Couldn’t capture Troy
Built wooden horse → hid inside → placed outside Troy → pretended to sail away → Trojans took horse in → climbed out at midnight → opened gate → entered Troy
Captured Troy, went home
Part 1: Setting the scene
time, place, weather, character(s)(appearance, clothes, feelings, etc.)
Part 2: Developing the story
What happened at the beginning, in the middle, and at the end
(Put the events in time order.)
Part 3: Ending the story
What did the character(s) do at the end of the story, and how did they feel
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Pre-writing
It was another hot and dry summer. After ten years of fighting, we were still trying to capture the city of Troy. We were tired of war, and we missed home. What could we do
One of us finally had a clever idea. That day, we built a huge wooden horse, and some brave soldiers and I hid inside it. Then our friends put the horse outside the main gate in the middle of the night. The next morning, all the other Greek soldiers went on board their ships and pretended to sail away. Soon, we could hear the Trojans shouting outside: “The Greeks have gone! We have won the war!” Then they pulled the horse into the city. We waited quietly for the right moment.
That night, the Trojans drank and danced to celebrate their victory. Then they all went to sleep. At midnight, we climbed out of the horse and opened the gate. Our soldiers entered Troy.
The Trojan captain cried when we captured him, but all the Greeks were of course happy. Now, we could finally go home!
How does the article express the characters' feelings
Actions:
Feelings:
In a direct way
Indirect:
(Find out two examples)
cautious/careful
sad
Learn about the narrative feature. (Task 2)
(叙事特点）
Adding some detailed descriptions can make your story more vivid and attractive!
3
While-writing
Write a short story about wisdom.
Choose a familiar story: Focusing on culture (Page 94)
Borrow arrows from an enemy
（草船借箭）
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While-writing
Write a short story about wisdom.
Step1 Plan Plan your story based on the three parts in Exercise
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While-writing
Write a short story about wisdom.
Step 2 Write Write the story. Make sure to include detailed descriptions
of the character’s actions, feelings and comments
Borrow arrows from an enemy
（草船借箭）
It is your time to write now!
Different groups write different parts
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While-writing
Useful phrases we have learnt.
Borrow arrows from an enemy
（草船借箭）
嫉妒
在十天内
不可能完成的任务
能够做某事
在清晨
用……装满……
稻草人
呼喊并击鼓
遭受攻击
浓雾
向……射箭
把船掉头
be jealous of
within ten days
impossible task
be able to do sth
in the early morning
fill...with...
straw men
shout and beat drums
under attack
the thick fog
shoot arrows towards
turn the boats around
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Post-writing
Step 3 Check and revise
Check quickly:
动词时态问题
主谓一致问题
形容词和副词的正确使用
固定搭配
1 minute task
Show time
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Self-assessment & Mutual evaluation
After the class
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Further thinking
What can we learn from this story
Clever strategies can help us overcome difficult challenges.
not make but borrow
Know yourself and know your enemy.
Cao Cao’s character:
suspicious（多疑的）
Weather: foggy
Timing is important.
What we
learnt:
Use the way of SCOOP to plan a story
Write in three-part structure
Describe characters’ actions and feelings in detail
Understand the wisdom behind the story
Summary
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Homework
Basic基础:
完成短篇故事，利用评价表进行自评和互评，修改后工整抄写在作文本上。
Improving提升:
将游戏环节中的智慧故事任选其一，完成另一篇短篇故事并包含其中蕴含的道理。
Extend拓展:
小组合作，将一篇古代智慧故事改编成“现代版”，并在此基础上创作短剧（班级上演）。
“Stories are a way we explore what it means to be human”
“故事是我们探索人性本质的一种方式”
谢谢大家
谢谢大家

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