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读后续写
动作描写攻略
Continuation Writing
Skills for the description of actions
动词是句子的灵魂！
我们在写作时，应当精准地、贴切地运用动词进行动作等的描述，这样可以使不在场的读者时有强烈的画面感，如同身临其境一般。
要增添"读后续写"的表达效果，写出内容具体的续写，特别要注意避免使用泛泛而谈的抽象词，应该多使用具体词, 丰富、形象，使表达更加准确到位。动词的选择、动作描写是其中很重要的一项。
LEAD IN
We all like hot strips
The steps we should take to eat hot strips
Step 1
tear up the package
撕开包装
Step 2
squeeze out one strip
挤出一根
Step 3
take a big bite
大咬一口
动作链
Use a chain of verbs to describe an action in detail.
Action Chains
动作链
01
动作链
ACTION CHAINS
More examples
冲向湖边
脱掉衣服
跳入水中
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孩子们跳入湖中嬉戏
rushed to the lake
took off their clothes
jumped into the water
The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.
孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。
动作链
ACTION CHAINS
More examples
冲向前
蹲下
揽入怀中
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她抱住儿子
dashed forward
knelt down
gathered her son into her arms
She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms tightly.
她向前冲过去，跪下来，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里。
动作链
ACTION CHAINS
Practice
扫视观众
深吸一口气
开始唱歌
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歌手唱歌
glanced at the audience
took a deep breath
began to sing
The singer anxiously glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
歌手紧张地瞥了眼观众，深吸了一口气，开始唱歌。
I put on my clothes, grabed my bag and hurried to school happily.
我穿上衣服，抓起书包，快乐地冲去学校。
动作链
ACTION CHAINS
Practice
穿衣服
抓起书包
冲去学校
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我早上去上学
put on my clothes
grabbed my bag
hurried to school
I put on my clothes, grabed my bag and hurried to school happily.
我穿上衣服，抓起书包，快乐地冲去学校。
动作链
ACTION CHAINS
Which body parts do these actions belong to
The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.
孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。
She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms tightly.
她向前冲过去，跪下来，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里。
Actions of body parts
身体部位动作
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
Actions of body parts
one’s head
低头
drop / hang / lower
点头
nod
摇头
shake
挠头
scrach
抱头
put / hold...
in one’s hands
天旋地转
feel ...
spinning
①nod/shake/raise/scratch one's head
点头/摇头/抬头/挠了挠头
②hang/drop/lower/bend/bow one's head
低头
③hold one's head high
高昂着头
④rest one's head one's shoulder
将头靠在某人的肩膀上
头部动作
1.He was in a bad mood, but he dropped/lowered/hung/bent his head to hide it.
他心情不好，但他低下头来掩饰。
2.Steven walked slowly to the bus, his head down, tears in eyes.
史蒂文低着头，眼里含泪，慢慢地向公交车走去。
3. He put/held/buried his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.
他双手抱头，十分生气。
4. I walked out of the class, looking straight ahead with my head high.
我走出教室，高昂着头直视前方。
5.His head drooped and tears fell into his lap.
他耷拉着脑袋，眼泪滴落在大腿上。
Actions of body parts
one’s face
发红
burn / blur
发青
be blue
发白
pale
发光
light up / glow
/ brighten
笑
A bright smile
appears on/
spreads across
鬼脸
make a face at sb.
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
Actions of body parts
one’s eyes
打量
eye sb.
from top to toe
吸引
catch one’s eyes
哭
Tears blur
one’s eyes
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
盯
stare at
凝视
gaze at
怒视
glare at
扫视
glance at
用......眼神看
turn ... eyes toward sb.
Actions of body parts
Mouth
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
说，
温和地说，
补充道，
接着说，
坚持说，
抽泣着说，
低声说，
耳边轻声说，
结结巴巴地说；
say
say in a gentle way
add
continue
insist
cry / say in tears
whisper
whisper to one's ear
stammer
respond
回应
sigh
叹息
interrupt sb, explaining that
打断某人，说
complain about
抱怨
roar loudly
大吼
Actions of body parts
1. 习大大笑着说：“神州13号(launch)的成功发射，表明了中国人民的智慧(wisdom)。
Xi Dada _________________, “The successful launch of Shenzhou XIII shows the wisdom of Chinese people.
said with a smile
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
Actions of body parts
2. 这位市民不断重复：“袁隆平已经走了。再见了，’杂交水稻之父’！”
The citizen _____________,
“Yuan Longping has passed away. Goodbye, Father of Hybrid Rice!”
kept repeating
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
Actions of body parts
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
3. 就在这时，一个小女孩尖叫起来，“那就是那个因纯真笑容而一夜走红的男孩丁真！”
Just then a little girl __________, “That's the boy Ding Zhen who became famous overnight for his innocent smile.
screamed
Actions of body parts
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
4. 几秒钟之内，他们就像老朋友一样开始聊了起来，谈到他们作为打工人(laborer)的快乐。
Within seconds, they ______________________
like old friends, ___________ their happiness as laborers.
began chatting/to chat
talking about
Actions of body parts
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
5. 在直播节目中，李佳琦发出一声惊人的喊叫，“我的妈呀，答应我，买它！”
In the live program, Li Jiaqi _____________________, “Oh, my God! Promise me to buy it!
let out a surprising voice
(改编自Unit Two Module Three: Healthy Eating)
He smiled as he welcomed some customers warmly at the door but the smile left his face when he saw Yong Hui walking in. She did not look happy and glared at him.
“ May I ask what you were doing in my restaurant the other day I thought you were a new customer and now I know that you only came to spy on me and my menu!” she said.
“Please excuse me,” he calmly said, “I wanted to know where all my customers had gone last week. I followed one of them and found them in your restaurant. I don’ t want to upset you, but I found your menu was limited. Why don’t you sit down and try a meal ”
Yong Hui agreed to stay and soon they were both enjoying dumplings and breast of chicken cooked with garlic. When they were served the ice cream, Yong Hui began to look ill.
“The food is too fat and heavy,” she said, “I miss my vegetables and fruit.”
Wang Peng was enjoying a second plate of dumplings so he sighed.
“Yes,” he said, “ and I would miss my dumplings and fatty pork when I was in your restaurant. Don't you get tired quickly ”
“Well, I do have to rest a lot,” said Yong Hui. “But don't you think it would be better if you were a bit thinner I’m sure you’ d feel much healthier.”
shouted
explained
commented
added
admitted
say
shout explain comment add admit
有关hand的动作描写
take one’s hand
牵某人的手
reach for one’s hand
伸手抓住某人
in one’s hand
在手里
with both hands
用双手
hold out a hand
伸出手
slid one’s hands into
将手插进......
spread one’s hand
摊开双手
rub one’s hands together
使劲搓着双手
one’s hands shake/tremble
某人的手颤抖着
with one’s head in one’s hands
双手抱着......
put one’s hands to one’s cheeks
用双手捂住脸
1.她拉住孩子的手牵着他爬上台阶。
2.他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。
3.他们手拉手并肩走着。
She took the child's hand and helped him climb the steps.
He reached for her hand and held it tightly.
They walked along, holding hands.
4.他手里拿着钥匙。
5.他双手抓着绳子。
6.他握住我的手好像我们是失散多年的朋友。
He held the key in his hand.
He grasped the rope with both hands.
He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends.
描写与hand（手）有关的动作
我想都没想就下了车，举起手不让卡车司机往前走，然后弯下腰去看那只蝴蝶。
Without thinking I got out of my car, held my hand up so the truck driver wouldn't move forward, and bent down to look at the butterfly. (动作描写)
我俯下身，尽可能轻柔地将蝴蝶捧在手心。
I reached down and cupped the butterfly in my hands as gently as I could. (动作描写)
我托起它的腿。忽然间，它自由了。我张开双手，它朝明亮的太阳飞去。
I lifted its leg up and suddenly it was free. I opened my hands and up it flew towards the shining sun. (动作描写)
有关finger的动作描写
raise a warning finger
举起一个手指以示警告
raise/hold up a finger to one’s lip
把一根手指举到某人唇边
wag/wave one’s finger
某人摇着手指
wag [w ɡ] v.
（动物尾巴）来回摇摆；来回摇动（竖立的手指）
1.老师举起一个手指以示警告，我们停止了交谈。
2.她把一根手指举到唇边，要求肃静。
3.“这些都不是！”老师摇着手指喊道。
4. 我把手指蘸着酱汁舔了舔。
The teacher raised a warning finger and we stopped talking.
She raised/held up a finger to her lip to ask for silence.
"None of that!" cried the teacher, wagging/waving her finger.
I dipped my finger in the sauce and licked it.
有关arm的动词描写
with crossed arms
双臂交叉
fold one’s arms
某人双臂交叉
hold out/open one’s arms
某人伸出/张开双臂
catch /grab one’s arm
抓住某人的胳膊
arm in arm
手挽手
put/throw one’s arms around sb.
搂住某人
1.他向前跑着，挥动着双臂。
2.他站在那里，双臂交叉，看上去很生气。
3.她双臂交叉，盯着他
He was running forward, waving his arms.
He stood there with crossed arms, looking angry.
She folded her arms and stared at him.
4.他微笑着伸出/张开双臂。
5.他伸出一只手抓住她的胳膊。
6.她走近父亲，挽住他的胳膊。
He held out/opened his arms with a broad smile.
He reached out a hand and caught /grabbed her arm.
She moved closer to her father and took his arm.
有关shoulder的动作描写
shrug one’s shoulders
耸耸肩
looke (back) over one's shoulder
回头看
1.当我问他为什么这么做时，他只是耸耸肩。
2.他回头看了看
When I asked him why he had done it, he just shrugged his shoulders.
He looked (back) over his shoulder.
有关heart的动作描写
with a heavy/sinking/broken heart
怀着沉重的/沉的/破碎的心
with a light heart
心情轻松地
touch one’s heart
打动了某人的心
Pierce one’s heart
刺痛某人的心
follow one’s heart
跟随某人的心
pour out one’sheart to sb.
向某人倾诉自己的心声
fill one’s heart
充满某人的内心
one’s heart is breaking
某人的心正在碎
one’s heart melted
心被融化了
beat fast
跳得很快
1.她怀着沉重的/沉的/破碎的心，看着他走了。
2.他心情轻松地出发了
3.他的悲惨故事打动了她的心..
With a heavy/sinking/broken heart, she watched him go.
He set off with a light heart.
His sad story touched her heart.
4.她的话刺痛了我的心。
5.只要跟随你的心，你就会快乐。
6.最后，他泪流满面，向她倾诉了自己的心声。
Her words pierced my heart.
Just follow your heart and you'll be happy.
Finally, he broke down in tears and poured out his heart to her.
关于back的动作描写
bend one’s back
弯腰/驼背
stretch one’s back
伸懒腰
lean one’s back against......
把背靠在......
1.他走路时弯腰/驼背。
2.他下床时打了个哈欠，伸了个懒腰
3.他把背靠在吧台上
He bends his back when he walks.
He leaned his back against the bar.
He yawned and stretched his back as he got out of bed.
4.他笑了笑，狠狠地打了我后背一巴掌。
5.他们把他的手绑在背后。
6.他背着一个小孩。
He smiled and gave me a hearty slap/pat on the back.
They tied his hands behind his back.
He was carrying a small child on his back.
有关foot的肢体动作描写
描写与foot（脚）有关的动作
jump/rise to one's feet
跳起来/站起来
plant one's feet to the ground
站着不动
tap/stamp one's feet
跺脚，
with one's feet kicking
脚乱踢
drag one's feet
拖着脚步（磨蹭或不情愿）
walk
他开始皱着眉头在房间里走来走去。
He started walking up and down the room with a frown on his face.
走路walk的动作可以做到非常具体的表达
pace [pe s]
vi. 踱步，走来走去
(由于焦虑或不耐烦而) 在…踱步
--If you pace a small area, you keep
walking up and down it,
because you are anxious or impatient.
As they waited, Tom paced the room nervously.
他们等的时候，Tom在屋里不安地踱来踱去。
wander
vi. 游荡，漫游
--to walk slowly around or to a place,
often without any particular sense of
purpose or direction
Henry wandered aimlessly around the streets.-《百万英镑》
Henry在大街上漫无目的地到处游荡。
tiptoe [ t pt ]
vi. 踮着脚走；蹑手蹑脚地走
on tiptoe/tiptoes 踮着脚；蹑手蹑脚地
--to walk using tiptoes only, so that other people cannot hear you
She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.
她溜下床，蹑手蹑脚地走到窗户旁边。
sneak [sni:k]/slip
vi 潜行;偷偷溜走;
--to go somewhere secretly,
trying to avoid being seen
Sometimes he would sneak out of his house late at night to be with me.
有时候，他会在深夜里偷偷溜出家与我相会。
slip [sl p]
悄悄疾行；溜=slide
--to go somewhere quickly and quietly,
especially without being noticed
She slipped out of the house before the others were awake.
她趁别人还没醒，溜出了房子。
stagger [ st g ]
vi. 蹒跚；摇摇晃晃地走
--to walk with weak unsteady steps,
as if you are about to fall
hobble [ h bl] 蹒跚;跛行;艰难地走
--to walk with difficulty, especially
because your feet or legs hurt
He watched the old woman stagger out with a big bag and disappear.
他目送老妇人扛着一大包蹒跚而去。
head
to move in a particular directon (朝某个方向前行)
With a pair of shoes in her hands,the little girl headed for the lonely island eagerly.
rush `r `
vi. 猛冲;赶紧离开
If people rush to do something,
they do it as soon as they can,
because they are very eager to do it.
I woke up early and rushed out of the door in my eagerness to get to know my new school.
我很早就醒了然后迫不及待的冲出门去看看我的新学校。
The man dashed/rushed for the exit, and escaped with great panic.
男人向出口冲去，惊恐地逃走了。
flee `r `
vi. 逃走(尤指害怕有危险而）逃避，逃跑
escape because you are afraid of
possible danger
The elderly man fled away with great panic.
老人害怕地逃跑了。
有关knee的动作描写
hug one’s knees
抱着膝盖
on one’s knees
跪下
1.突然，她的膝盖弯曲/虚弱，她摔倒在地板上。
2.他抱着膝盖取暖。
3.他跪下乞求原谅。
Suddenly her knees buckled/ weakened and she fell to the floor.
He hugged his knees to keep warm.
He went/got down on his knees and begged for forgiveness.
4.他坐在她父亲的膝盖上，给她读故事。
5.他跪在地上，寻找丢失的戒指。
He sat on her father's knees while he read her a story.
He was on his knees, searching for the missing ring.
Sentence pattern 1: A, B and C
The boys A, B and C.
She A, B and C.
The singer A, B and C.
Sentence pattern 1：
Sb. 谓语 A, 谓语B and 谓语 C
身体部位动作
ACTIONS OF BODY PARTS
The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.
孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进了水里。
句式参考
SENTENCE PATTERNS
Appreciation
①Encouraged by the teacher's words, Li Hua raised his hand high, answering, ”
②Encouraged by the teacher's words, Tom hesitated to raise his hand , whispering, ”
心理
肢体
语言
句式参考
SENTENCE PATTERNS
①Encouraged by the teacher's words, Li Hua raised his hand high, answering, ”
②Encouraged by the teacher's words, Tom hesitated to raise his hand , whispering,”
Sentence pattern 2：
Done，句子主干，doing
句式参考
SENTENCE PATTERNS
Sentence exercises
2. The Corgi rushed into the snow.
Touched by the beautiful scene outside, the Corgi rushed into the snow, barking “Woof! Woof!”
The Corgi rushed happily into the snow, barking and jumping.
请套用第二种句式：
句式参考
SENTENCE PATTERNS
The Corgi rushed happily into the snow, barking and jumping.
心理
肢体
肢体
肢体
Sentence pattern 3：
句子主干，doing and doing.
句式参考
SENTENCE PATTERNS
Sentence exercises
3. The girl held the boy’s hand.
追上男孩
牵起手
漫步花海
catch up with the boy
hold his hand
walk in the sea of flowers
感受内心的平和
feel the precious peace within
动作过多时，可怎样处理？
句式参考
SENTENCE PATTERNS
Catching up with the boy, the girl held his hand and walked in the sea of flowers, feeling the precious peace from within.
Sentence pattern 4：
Doing，句子主干， doing.
肢体
肢体
肢体
心理
句式参考
SENTENCE PATTERNS
With the sea of flowers surrounding their bodies , she caught up with the boy and held his hand with a smile, feeling the precious peace from within.
Sentence pattern 5：
With复合结构，句子主干， doing.
肢体
肢体
面部
肢体
心理
句式参考
SENTENCE PATTERNS
Summary
The definition of action chains
Useful actions of body parts
5 sentence patterns
Sentence pattern 1：
Sb. 谓语 A, 谓语B and 谓语 C
Sentence pattern 2：
Done，句子主干，doing
Sentence pattern 3：
句子主干，doing and doing.
Sentence pattern 4：
Doing，句子主干， doing.
Sentence pattern 5：
With复合结构，句子主干， doing.
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写1:He took a taxi to the police station.
翻译:他拦下一辆的士，拿着手提箱跳进去冲着司机说，“去”
改写: He _____ a taxi, _______in with the suitcase and _____ the driver, “Go to the police station, please.”
took
jumped
told
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写2: The boys jumped into the lake to play.
翻译:男孩们兴奋地跑到湖边，脱下衣服，跳入湖中玩耍。
改写: The boys excitedly ______to the lake, quickly _____off their clothes and _______ into the water to play.
rushed
took
jumped
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写3: She hugged her son tightly.
翻译:她冲上前，跪下，把儿子抱在怀里。
改写: She ______ forward without hesitation, _______ down and _________ her son into her arms tightly.

dashed
knelt
gathered
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写4 : I rushed home to get the cotton cat.
翻译:我冲回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那顶棉质的。
改写: I ______ home, _______ through my collection of hats and _________ the cotton one.　
rushed
searched
grabbed
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写5: She looked at the trophy and thanked TUNTUN.
翻译:她先看一下奖杯，深吸一口气，说道：“谢谢吞吞！”
改写: She _______ at the trophy, ______ a deep breath and _____, “Thank TUNTUN!”
glanced
took
said
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写6 : Mac jumped off the bicycle to shut the door.
翻译:麦克毫不犹豫跳下自行车，冲向车的后门，猛然地关上车门。
改写: Mac _______off the bicycle without any hesitation, ________ to the back door and ________ the door heavily.
jumped
dashed
slammed
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写7 : I went to school in a hurry this morning.
翻译:翻译：我早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起书包，骑着自行车匆忙去上学了。
改写: I _____ on my coat hurriedly, ________ my bag and _______ to school hurriedly this morning.
put
grabbed
cycled
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写8 : My mum gave fifty dollars to the poor old man.
翻译:妈妈打开钱包，拿出五十元钱，递给那个贫困的老人。
改写: My mom _______ the purse, ______out fifty dollars and _______ it to the poor old man.
opened
took
handed
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写9 : She picked up the photo and placed it into the album.
翻译:她拿起照片，盯着看一会儿，仔细放进相册里。
改写: She ________ up the photo, _______ at it for a while and _______ it cautiously into the album.

picked
stared
placed
【示例】歌手瞥一眼观众，深呼吸一下，就开始唱起来。
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写10 : Jimmy quickly threw the meat at the fierce wolf.
翻译:吉米快速拿出肉，瞄准，径直朝凶猛的狼扔过去。
改写: Jimmy ______ out the meat, _______ at the wolf and _______ it straight to the fierce animal.
pulled
aimed
threw
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写1 : After having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out.
翻译:排了三个小时队后，他被告知票卖完了。
改写: _______________ for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out.
Having queued
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写2 : She wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, then she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.
翻译:她在街上漫无目的地逛了好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。
改写: ___________________ aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.
Having wandered
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写3 : After he told the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart.
翻译:说出真相后、他心里轻松了很多、心情放松地回家了。
改写: ___________the truth, he felt at ease in his mind and returned home with a lighter heart.
Having told
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写4 : After getting my promise of tending to my mother, my father felt assured and loaded his luggage into the car.
翻译：得到了我会好好照顾母亲的承诺后，爸爸放心地把行李放进车里。
改写: ____________ my promise of tending to my mother, my father felt assured and loaded his luggage into the car.
Having got
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写5 : After fighting in the war for years, the solider returned to his home, only to find his families had moved away.
翻译:征战多年后，战士回到家中，发现家人已经搬走了。
改写: _____________in the war for years, the solider returned to his home, only to find his families had moved away.
Having fought
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写6 : After I promised that we would get there before five, I was seized with panic when the car broke down.
翻译:因为承诺了五点之前我们一定到那儿，所以当车抛锚的时候，我非常慌张。
改写: _______________ that we would get there before five, I was seized with panic when the car broke down.
Having promised
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写7 : After she made full preparations, she stood by the window and expected the arrival of her daughter.
翻译:做好充分的准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。
改写: _____________full preparations, she stood by the window, expecting the arrival of her daughter.
Having made
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写8 : After receiving the Nimbus 2000, Harry Potter was so happy that he didn’t know what to do.
翻译:哈利波特收到光轮2000后高兴得不知所措。
改写: _______________ the Nimbus 2000, Harry Potter was so happy that he was at a loss what to do.
Having received
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.

仿写9 : After waiting for a long time, I walked to school through the snow by myself.
翻译:等了很久之后，我独自在雪地里跋涉到学校。
改写: ______________for what seemed to be ages, I trudged to school through the snow by myself.
Having waited
【示例】在银行排队等了一个小时后，这个女人变得不耐烦，然后离开了。
Having waited in line for an hour at the bank, the woman grew impatient and left.
仿写10 : After experiencing so many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up.
翻译:她接连经历了那么多次失败后，终于振作起来了。
改写: __________________so many failures one after another, she finally picked herself up.
Having experienced
PART THREE
高考实战运用一
(2023年新高考I卷
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运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
A few weeks later, I almost forgot the contest when the news came. To my surprise, I was informed that my essay had ranked first in the contest. A mix of excitement and doubt washed over me._________________________________________________________________________________________________________（再三仔细检查后，我再也无法控制自己，立即与我的英语老师分享了这个消息）Without her help, I would never have had the chance to obtain the honor. My face lit up with joy as I accepted the award, my smile filled with pride. I felt a burst of gratitude welling up in my heart and surging though me.
Having double-checked it, I could no longer contain
myself and promptly shared the news with my English teacher
PART FOUR
高考实战运用二
(2023年1月浙江卷
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运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. Passing the deserted house, I spotted the broken glass, which had been fixed perfectly. It reminded me of the hummingbird, the tiny cute creature. __________________________________________________________________________________________（在和主人聊了一会儿之后，我被告知她从那天起就再也没有回来过。） “Perhaps she is enjoying the valuable freedom at this moment,” I said to myself. Hours later, the sun began to sink.
Having had a small chat with the host, I was informed that she
had not come back ever since that day.
PART FIVE
高考实战运用三
(2023年1月浙江卷
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运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. I still remembered my friends‘ promise so I went past the abandoned milking house to see if they had fixed the broken window. To my satisfaction, no other tiny creatures would meet this trouble any more. As I approached the farm, I was greeted by a spicy smell of the barbecue, urging me to walk faster. We were totally immersed in the peaceful atmosphere, ________________________________________
____________________________________________（享受着精致的美食，谈论着我们的有趣经历，唱着歌直到日落）. It was time for us to say goodbye so we went to the parking lot together.
enjoying the delicate cuisines, talking about our
interesting experiences and singing songs till the sun set.
PART SIX
高考实战运用四
(2023年1月浙江卷
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运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. Tapping him gently on the shoulder, I asked David what had caused him to decide to give up the opportunity. 1_________________________________________________,___
（犹豫了一下，他低声回答） “You know, I run very slowly and my running posture is ugly, which will result in others laughing at me.” 2______________________________（我笑了笑，摇摇头说）“As a matter of fact, all the people respect and admire those who overcome their own difficulties and bravely achieve their goals.” “Really ” He seemed to be in doubt about my words. Seeing me nod firmly, he wore his big toothy smile again, his eyes sparkling with excitement and curiosity.
Having hesitated for a moment, he replied in a low voice
I smiled, shook my head and said,
PART SEVEN
高考实战运用五
(2021年新高考I卷
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运用读后续写“动作链”技巧，把下面的语篇补充完整。
In the morning, as scheduled, 1________________________
_____________________________________________________（双胞胎早早起床，踮着脚走进厨房，从袋子里舀出面粉）Once they set about making bread，they felt confused. At that time,2______________________________________________，____________________________________________（他们的爸爸溜进厨房，轻拍双胞胎的肩膀，柔声安慰道）“Don’t quit. You can overcome the challenge.” The twins made the bread smoothly. Then，3______________________________________
___________________________________（他们端着早餐，向楼上走去，喊醒他们的妈妈）. With her eyes glittering with excitement, the mother was so content that she gathered her children into her arms.
the twins got up early, tiptoed
to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag
their father slid into the kitchen, patting the twins’
shoulders and comforting them in a soft voice,
Then they carried the breakfast, advanced
upstairs and woke up their mother.
Micro-writing
1. It seemed as if Mary would be drowned(溺死). At the moment, Henry happened to be passing by. Hearing the screams, __________________________________ ________________________________________.
Henry rushed to the riverside, threw off his coat and jumped into water without thinking.
（听到尖叫声，亨利冲到河边，扔掉外套， 立刻跳进水里。）
2. Never had my mother received such a gift.
__________________________________________________________________________________________
（她紧紧地把我抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。）
She put her arms around me tightly, with tears welling up in her eyes.

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