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应用文写作分类突破
第一节　求助信&建议信
求助信是用于表达个人当前遇到的一些困难并请求帮助的信件。在撰写时,描述当前困难应使用一般现在时,而描述预期在未来得到帮助后可能取得的进步或改变时,应使用一般将来时。 文体一 求助信 首段:表明求助意图(针对陌生对象须自我介绍);主体:说明求助事由;尾段:表达希望并表示感谢。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.My name is Li Hua,a student of summer courses here.I’m writing this letter to report some of the problems and puzzles I encountered when learning the course of Business English.
我叫李华,是这里暑期班的学生。我写这封信是为了报告我在学习商务英语课程时遇到的一些问题和困惑。
2.I’m Li Hua,a Senior 3 student.Currently,I’m having trouble learning English so I’m writing in the hope that you could do me a favor.
我是李华,一名高三学生。目前,我在英语学习方面有困难,所以我写信是希望您能帮我一个忙。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.I was wondering if you could spare some time for removing the following doubts from me.
我想知道你是否能抽出一些时间来消除我的以下疑虑。
4.What troubles me most is that I fail to catch up with the teacher,which has been troubling me a lot.
最让我困扰的是我跟不上老师的进度,这一直困扰着我。
5.It can’t be better if you can look through my resume for possible mistakes and polish them up.
如果你能看一下我的简历,找出可能出现的错误并加以润色,那就再好不过了。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.I would be grateful if you can spare time to do me a favor.Looking forward to your early reply.　如果你能抽出时间帮我一个忙,我将不胜感激。期待你的早日回复。
7.I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties.I would really appreciate it if you could help me.　我想知道你能否帮助我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我,我将不胜感激。
晚练满分范文
(全国Ⅲ卷改编)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。内容包括:
1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间、地点。
注意:写作词数应为80 左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going I’m writing ①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (是为了征求你关于我们改编自教科书的一个剧本的建议).(写信目的)
The play is about how money influences the attitude of people treating others.②　　　　　　,③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我们不确定的是这个情节是否完整).④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, we are eager to know how to correct our tone and pronunciation in order to perform the play perfectly.⑤　　　　　　,⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我想知道您是否方便明天上午10点在学校大厅为我们指导).(求助内容)
⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(如果你能帮我们一个忙,
我将不胜感激).Looking forward to your early reply.(感激和希望)
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人、某个组织或机构,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法、观点或忠告。 文体二 建议信 首段:表明写信目的或意图;主体:提出具体的建议并说明理由;尾段:希望建议得到采纳,表达愿望。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.Learning that you will participate in a Chinese Speech Contest,I am more than delighted to offer some suggestions.
得知你将参加中文演讲比赛,我非常高兴提出一些建议。
2.In response to your requirement,I’m writing to provide my humble opinions to help solve your problems.　针对您的要求,我写信来提供我的拙见,以帮助您解决问题。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.First of all,it is wise of you to work on positive thinking because positive thinking will lead to positive results.
首先,你进行积极的思考是明智的,因为积极的思考会带来积极的结果。
4.Additionally,it is strongly advised that you’d better set realistic goals and break the overall goal into smaller ones,which makes it easy for you to get a sense of accomplishment.
此外,强烈建议你最好设定现实的目标,并把整体目标分解成更小的目标,这样你就很容易获得成就感。
5.Last but not least,having a face-to-face talk with your parents peacefully and listening patiently is a better choice.
最后但同等重要的是,心平气和地与父母面对面交谈并耐心地倾听是一个更好的选择。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.I sincerely hope my advice will be of benefit to you.If there is more I can do to help,please let me know.　我真诚地希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。如果还有我能帮忙的地方,请告诉我。
7.I am firmly convinced that you will regain confidence with your efforts.Don’t hesitate to contact me with any other questions.
我坚信,你的努力会使你重新恢复信心。如有其他问题,请随时联系我。
晚练满分范文
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教 Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Ryan,
I appreciate your idea of polishing up our oral English,but pairing us randomly may have some problems.(写信意图)
①　　　　　　(在个人看来),though fair,random pairing may not necessarily serve its purpose.②　　　　　　(特别的),③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果两人都说不流利,他们可能缺乏参与的动力),failing to reach the desired goal.④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, ⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我想知道流利程度高的学生是否可以和不那么流利的学生分成组).If it were possible,allowing students to choose their own partners couldn’t be better,as ⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (这可以更有效地促进他们的共享学习).(问题和建议)
⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果您能理解并考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激).(希望采纳建议)
Yours,
Li Hua
高分佳作仿写
一、(2025·长沙高三联考)假定你是李华,就读于一所国际学校。现阶段你正面临选择一个合适的专业的难题,希望得到学校职业规划办公室(Career Planning Office)的Mr.Smith的帮助。请按下列要求写一封求助信:
1.本人简介;2.对未来职业的畅想;3.现阶段的困惑。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Mr.Smith,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
二、(2025·潍坊高三模拟)假定你是李华,美国“汉语桥(Chinese Bridge)”网上冬令营组织方正在网上征集活动内容,欢迎网友献计献策。请你给组织方写一封建议信,内容包括:
1.你建议的活动(至少两项);2.你的理由;3.你的希望。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear committee members,
I’m glad to know that　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节　推荐信&申请信
推荐信是推荐某事(包括人文历史、旅游景观和文体娱乐等)或某人的书信。该文体按照推荐者的情况来分,可以分为自荐信和推荐信两种。 文体一 推荐信 首段:说明写信的目的及要推荐的对象(熟人需要寒暄语,陌生人需要进行自我介绍);主体:阐述推荐理由;尾段:期待自己的推荐能让对方满意。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.I’m delighted to learn that you are keen on traveling to China,so I’m writing to strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Xi’an.
我很高兴得知你很想去中国旅游,我写信强烈推荐你去西安游玩。
2.Learning from your last letter that you are eager to explore traditional Chinese culture,I think the ancient poetry is your best choice.
从你上一封信中得知你渴望探索中国传统文化,我认为古诗是你最好的选择。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.The ancient city is highly recommended for the following reasons.
强烈推荐你去古城,理由如下。
4.As one of the world wonders,the Great Wall is regarded as the symbol of China,which you can’t afford to miss.
作为世界奇观之一,长城被视为中国的象征,不容错过。
5.Additionally,with a history of hundreds of years,the Summer Palace reflects typical ancient Chinese architectural art and wisdom.
此外,有着数百年历史的颐和园反映了典型的中国古代建筑艺术和智慧。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.Hope my recommendation can be of help.Wish you a good time/journey.
希望我的推荐能有所帮助。祝你玩得/旅途愉快。
7.I do hope you can take my recommendation into account and whenever you need help,don’t hesitate to let me know.
我真的希望你能考虑我的建议,无论何时你需要帮助,请随时告诉我。
晚练满分范文
(北京卷改编)假定你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学,他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Jim,
①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (得知你未来在北京的教育计划,我写信是为了表达我最热烈的欢迎).Knowing your keen interest in Chinese culture,②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我建议你申请北京大学),one of the best universities in China.(说明写信的目的及要推荐的学校)
Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (在那里你可以完全沉浸在中国深厚的历史和丰富的文化之中).④　　　　　　,⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (参加一些在线的汉语口语课程是个好主意) so that you can adapt to the Chinese language environment.(推荐的理由)
⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (希望我的建议能有所帮助).If you have further questions,do let me know.(表示期待)
Yours,
Li Hua
申请信是个人或集体向组织、机关等单位表述愿望、提出请求时使用的一种文书。申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请等。 文体二 申请信 首段:自我介绍,点明写信目的和信息来源;主体:详述个人优势;尾段:表达决心和感谢,期盼批准。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.Learning that you are looking for volunteers,I am writing to apply for the position.
得知您在找志愿者,我写信想申请这个职位。
2.My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for this Olympics./I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.
我的名字叫李华。我想成为本届奥运会的志愿者。/我写信是想申请成为一名志愿者。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.First of all,I am easy-going and warm-hearted and I am sure to get along well with my partners.
首先,我性格随和、热心,我肯定能跟我的搭档相处得很好。
4.In addition,I once worked as a volunteer at Winter Olympic Games,so I have much experience in voluntary work.
另外,我曾当过冬奥会志愿者,所以我有很多志愿工作的经验。
5.Furthermore,I am good at paper-cutting.If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer,I can teach them how to make paper-cuts.
此外,我擅长剪纸;如果我足够幸运被选为志愿者,我可以教他们如何做剪纸。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.Should you offer me an interview,I would be very grateful.Look forward to your reply soon.
如果您能给我提供一个面试机会,我将非常感激。期待您的早日答复。
7.I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
如果您能考虑到我的申请,我会很感激,我期待着您的早日回复。
晚练满分范文
(2019·全国Ⅰ卷改编)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.表达决心。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua,a student taking summer courses in London now.①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (得知你们的美术馆需要为即将到来的中国画展招募志愿者,我迫不及待地想申请这个职位).(点明写信目的,提出申请)
②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我确信我能胜任这份工作).③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, ④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我流利的英语将使我能够顺利地与英国绘画爱好者交流).⑤　　　　　　,with my proficiency in Chinese painting,I can introduce the art form better.Better yet,⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(我参加过几次类似的活动,具有了相关的经验).(详述个人优势)
⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果被接受,我将不遗余力地介绍那些展出的画作,并耐心地回答问题).⑧　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果您能考虑一下我的申请,我将不胜感激).(表达决心,期盼批准)
Yours,
Li Hua
高分佳作仿写
一、(2025·八省联考)假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Beth想学打乒乓球,发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示支持;2.推荐教练。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Beth,
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis.　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
二、(2025·泉州高三质量监测)假定你是李华,打算应聘你校学生英语报Youth的Growing Up Stories栏目的编辑,请用英语写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.对栏目的理解;2.个人优势。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Chief Editor,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三节　邀请信&感谢信
邀请信是邀请对方参加某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。写作时一定要注意态度诚恳且措词委婉。邀请信的末尾要表达希望对方参加或出席的愿望。 文体一 邀请信 首段:表明写信意图,向某人发出邀请;主体:说明邀请的具体原因和邀请的内容(做什么、地点以及具体的时间等);尾段:期待对方接受邀请,并表示感谢。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.Learning that you show great interest in photography,I’m writing to invite you to shoot a short video.　得知你对摄影表现出极大的兴趣,我写信邀请你拍摄一个短视频。
2.Extremely delighted to know that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture,I’m writing to invite you to visit the Chinese paper-cutting exhibition.
很高兴得知您对中国传统文化感兴趣,我写信邀请您参观中国剪纸展览。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.The speech,especially designed for our school senior students,is scheduled in the hall from 4:00 pm to 5:00 pm,next Friday.
本次演讲特别为我校大四学生设计,定于下周五下午4点到5点在大厅举行。
4.Not only will we enjoy the folk art works,but also learn a lot about the customs of the Chinese people.
我们不仅会欣赏民间的艺术作品,还会了解很多中国人的风俗习惯。
5.To acquaint students with a general knowledge of English culture and promote their English learning,you are expected to talk about the customs and history of English-speaking countries and some ways of learning English.
为了让学生对英语文化有个大体了解,促进他们的英语学习,你需要谈谈英语国家的风俗习惯和历史,以及一些学习英语的方法。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.We would be more than happy if you could go with us.Looking forward to your early reply.
如果您能和我们一起去,我们会非常高兴的。期待您的早日回复。
7.I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience.
如果您能在方便的时候尽早考虑我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
晚练满分范文
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua,a student in charge of our Campus Broadcasting Station.①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我写信是为了真诚地邀请您参加我们节目的访谈).(自我介绍,发出邀请)
Mainly featuring our varied and colorful campus life,②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (“Talk and Talk”栏目在我们中间很受欢迎).③　　　　　　 (说实在的),fully aware of your abundant experience in teaching and rich knowledge of literature,④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我们渴望给大家谈谈如何提高写作能力).⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (星期六下午3点对你来说方便吗) (节目介绍;访谈的时间和话题)
Your presence will definitely impress and benefit us considerably.⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果您能在方便的时候尽早确认你能来,我将不胜感激).(再次邀请,期待回复)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书,是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,有感谢和表扬双重意思。 文体二 感谢信 首段:表明写信意图;主体:陈述感谢的理由;尾段:再次表达感谢及回报愿望。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon,I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your help.
得知您即将前往美国,我写信给您,以表达您对我帮助的诚挚感谢。
2.I would like to take this opportunity to express my thanks for your timely help and assistance.
我愿借此机会对您的及时帮助和协助表示感谢。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.It was your encouragement that built up my confidence when I had trouble in learning English.　当我学习英语有困难时,正是你的鼓励建立起了我的信心。
4.It goes without saying that I have made great progress in English with your help.
不言而喻,在你的帮助下,我在英语方面取得了很大的进步。
5.What’s more,whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness,you were always with me,and were ready to give me a hand.
更重要的是,每当我思念家乡时,你总是和我在一起,时刻帮助我。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.Thanks to your generous help,without which I wouldn’t have made such great progress.
幸亏你的慷慨帮助,要是没有你的帮助,我不会取得这么大的进步。
7.Without your assistance,my English couldn’t have got better in such a short time.Thanks again for your kind help.
没有你的帮助,我的英语不可能在这么短的时间内进步这么快。再次感谢你的帮助。
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(浙江卷改编)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Alex,
It’s really hard to say goodbye to you!①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (但与此同时,我正在急切地写信感谢你的帮助).(致谢)
②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我仍然记得你一直致力于提高我的英语口语和书面英语).③　　　　　　,④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (你还坦率地和我分享了你的学习经历).⑤　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果没有你的建议和帮助,我就不会取得这样令人难以置信的进步) in English and would not have even ranked first in the recent English speech contest.⑥　　　　　　　　,⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (言语无法表达我有多感激).(回顾Alex的帮助)
⑧　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (再次感谢, 并祝您回家的旅途愉快).(再次致谢并临别祝愿)
Yours,
Li Hua
高分佳作仿写
一、(2025·重庆高三质量检测)假定你是新华中学学生会主席李华,你校将举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的演讲比赛。请给外教David写邮件邀请他来做评委。内容包括:
1.演讲相关信息(时间、地点等);
2.询问对方的意向。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear David,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
二、(2025·广州高三调研)假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校外教Mr.Brown在学校英语文化节中应邀给学生做了一场讲座。请你代表学生会给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.表达感谢;2.告知讲座反响。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Mr.Brown,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
第四节　道歉信&投诉信
道歉信是因自己不当的行为给对方造成了不利影响而表达歉意,或者无法答应对方的要求而向对方道歉的一种书信。 文体一 道歉信 首段:表明写信意图,对某事表示歉意;主体:说明道歉的具体原因;尾段:再次表达歉意,请求谅解,并提出补救措施。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.Thanks a lot for your invitation to visit Changzhou Museum.I really wish to go with you,but I’m terribly sorry to say that I can’t make it.
非常感谢你邀请我参观常州博物馆。我真的很想和你一起去,但我很抱歉地说我不能去了。
2.I’m writing to make an apology to you because I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as scheduled.
我写这封信的目的是向您道歉,因为我本周六不能如期到机场给您送行。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.The reason why I can’t get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.(2023·长沙模拟)
我不能离开的原因是我必须帮助准备本周末即将举行的英语演讲比赛。
4.Eager as I am to join you,it is much to my regret that I cannot make the time,because I have to take the final exam next Friday.
虽然我渴望加入你们,但我很遗憾不能抽出时间,因为下周五我要参加期末考试。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
5.I sincerely hope you could accept my apology and give me a reply at your earliest convenience.
我衷心希望您能接受我的道歉,并在您方便的时候尽快回复我。
6.Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.
再次为我的缺席给您带来的不便表示歉意,并向您致以最美好的祝愿。
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(全国Ⅲ卷改编)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
注意:写作词数应为80 左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Bob,
①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(我写信向你道歉,因为错过了明天和你一起去书店的预定行程).(表达歉意)
②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (原因是,我明天将参加一个家庭聚会,我的表弟彼得将从北京回家了).③　　　　　　　(事实上),Peter and I grew up together when we were kids and later he went to study in Beijing.④　　　　　　,⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (半年后再次见到他,我很兴奋).(解释失约原因)
⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(我希望你能理解我的处境,接受我的道歉). ⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果我建议我们下周末去书店,你介意吗)
Looking forward to your early reply.(请求对方接受道歉并另约时间)
Yours,
Li Hua
投诉信常被用来解决诸如消费者利益受损、正常生活或工作受到干扰等问题。投诉信不同于申请信或邀请信,要直截了当、掷地有声地表达自己的观点,不能拖泥带水。 文体二 投诉信 首段:表明身份,交代要投诉的问题;主体:说明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果;尾段:提出解决方案,表示感谢。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1. I’m writing to express my disappointment/dissatisfaction with the rude attitude of your waiters to us.
我写信表达我对你们服务员粗鲁态度的失望/不满。
2.I’m Li Hua,a customer who bought a book from your website a week ago.There exists something wrong with several pages.That’s why I’m writing to complain.
我是李华,一周前在你们网站买了一本书。有几页有问题,这就是我写信投诉的原因。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.Personally,it’s time your service should be improved to live up to the customers’ expectations.
依我看,现在是改进你们的服务以满足顾客期望的时候了。
4. Worse still,several pages in the book are missing,which makes it impossible for me to make sense of the book.
更糟糕的是,书里少了几页,这让我无法理解这本书。
5.Much to my dissatisfaction,the cellphone is not easy to operate,causing me much inconvenience.
令我很不满意的是,手机不容易操作,给我带来了很多不便。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.I do hope you will take my complaint seriously and get it settled as soon as possible.
我真的希望你能认真对待我的投诉,并尽快处理它。
7.I wonder if you could refund my money,or you could have it repaired or changed.I hope you will do what you can to settle the problem.
我想知道你是否可以退还我的钱,或者把它修好或换掉。我希望你能尽你所能解决这个问题。
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(2025·潍坊高三模拟)假定你是李华,是纽约某中学的交换生。上周末你参加了一家旅行社组织的马萨诸塞州两日游活动。下面是这家旅行社的广告,请根据下面广告中箭头所指内容对其不实之处向消费者联合会写一封投诉信。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua,a Chinese exchange student,①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　 (我写信投诉令人失望的服务) provided by Star Travel Agency during my two-day trip to Massachusetts last weekend.(自我介绍,提出投诉)
②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他们的广告与他们的行为不符合).③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, ④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我们被提供的午餐味道糟透了).⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, ⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　 (导游带我们去了几家纪念品商店,导致我们浪费了很多时间).Thus,we were unable to visit two planned scenic spots.(投诉的问题)
Hopefully,⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (要采取措施防止此类事件再次发生).⑧　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 (非常感谢您对此事的关注).(表达期望)
Yours,
Li Hua
高分佳作仿写
一、(2025·石家庄高三模拟)假定你是李华,你和你的外籍好友Andrew约好了本周末去图书馆,但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“垃圾分类,全民行动”(Trash Sorting,All Involved)志愿活动而不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。内容要点:
1.表达歉意;2.简要介绍活动的内容和意义;3.另约时间。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Andrew,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
二、(2025·唐山高三二模)假定你是李华,两周前你从网上订购了一套英语书虫系列读物(Bookworm Series),昨天才到货,且包装破损、数量不足。请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下:
1.介绍购物情况;2.反映存在的问题;3.提出解决方案。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
To whom it may concern,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第五节　询问信&告知信
询问信,又称咨询信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。 文体一 询问信 首段:说明询问信息的原因;主体:写明咨询的具体内容;尾段:期待回复并表示感谢。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.I’m so interested in it that I’m writing to ask for more detailed information concerning swimming training.　我对此很感兴趣,所以写信来询问有关游泳训练的更详细的信息。
2.I’m more than delighted to join in a poetry recitation competition to be held in our school.So I’m writing to consult you about something relevant to it.　我非常高兴能够参加即将在我们学校举行的诗歌朗诵比赛。所以我写信是想咨询您与之相关的一些事情。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.First and for most,could you please tell me how the course is arranged and how long it lasts 　首先,您能告诉我这门课是怎么安排的,上多长时间吗
4.Aside from that,I intend to know how much I have to pay for the course if I sign up for it.
除此之外,我想知道如果我报名这门课程,我需要付多少钱。
5.Last but not least,I’d like to inquire if there is any discount available for students.
最后同样重要的是,我想询问一下学生是否有折扣。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.If there is anything else that needs special attention,please inform me at your convenience.　如果还有其他需要特别注意的事情,请在您方便的时候通知我。
7.Please share with me some specific information about your schedule.Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
请和我分享一些有关你们日程安排的具体信息。盼望尽快收到您的回信。
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(全国Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua,planning to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我想知道你能否给我提供有关为期六周的英语课程的信息).(说明身份和目的)
②　　　　　　,③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　 (如果你能告诉我课程什么时候开始,每周有多少课时,我将不胜感激).④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, ⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(班级规模怎么样呢) ⑥　　　　　　,⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我还想知道我需要为这个课程付多少钱,以及是否包括住宿费用).⑧　　　　　　,what deserves my special attention is whether there will be any host families or university dormitories.(询问情况)
⑨　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如能尽早回复,将不胜感激).(望回复,并致谢)
Yours,
Li Hua
告知信是用来通知对方某个情况或活动的信件。回复信则是针对询问信的回应,通常是对对方询问的相关事宜进行答复。 文体二 告知信 首段:告知/回复某人某事(写信的背景、目的);主体:相关事宜;尾段:期盼回复。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.Here is a piece of exciting news! There will be a volleyball match next month.
这里有一条令人兴奋的消息!下个月将有一场排球赛。
2.I can hardly wait to share with you the exciting news that a folk music festival is to be held in our city.
我迫不及待地想和大家分享一个激动人心的消息,我们市将举办一个民间音乐节。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.The course is arranged to start from Monday,which will last one month with one lecture each day from 9:00 am to 5:00 pm.
课程安排从周一开始,为期一个月,每天上午9点至下午5点授课。
4.The next class is about calligraphy,for which you should make some preparations.
下一节课是书法,你应做好上课准备。
5.In preparation for the coming event,you are supposed to collect some materials regarding the traditional festival.
为了准备即将到来的活动,你应该收集一些关于这个传统节日的材料。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.Come and experience real Chinese culture yourself.
来亲自体验真正的中国文化吧。
7.If you want to know anything else,please don’t hesitate to contact me.
你如果想知道其他事情,请随时联系我。
晚练满分范文
(全国Ⅱ卷改编)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请你写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:
1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear Chris,
①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我很高兴地通知你,我们队下周将参加一场重要的排球比赛).(告知比赛信息)
②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (按照预定时间),③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (该活动将于下周日上午9点在我们学校的体育馆举行).④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (为了做好充分的准备,我已经制定了一个具体的培训计划).⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (所有的队员都应该按时参加训练).⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, we are expected to practice a lot in an effort to improve our skills and cooperate better with each other.⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我确实希望我们能通过共同的努力做好工作).(介绍比赛具体信息和赛前的训练安排)
⑧　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(热切地期待着你的早日答复). (表达期待)
Yours,
Li Hua
高分佳作仿写
一、(2025·广东六校高三联考)假定你是李华,你将要参加“全国英语创新大赛(National English Innovation Contest)”夏令营。请你给该夏令营的外籍负责人写一封信,内容包括:
1.自我介绍;
2.咨询比赛的相关情况(时间、地点、流程等)。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
二、(2025·武汉高三调研)假定你是校英语文学社社长李华,准备召集社团成员开会,讨论如何响应以“和谐校园从每个学生做起”为主题的系列活动。请写一封邮件,告知大家开会,内容包括:
1.会议起因;2.会议主题;3.会议时间、地点。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear all,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Best regards,
Li Hua
第六节　短文投稿&人物介绍
短文投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作,所投稿件应紧贴主题,内容应新颖、实用。 文体一 短文投稿 首段:点明写作目的;主体:介绍基本情况;尾段:总结感想和祝福。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.English,as we all know,is a widely used language,connecting people all over the world.
我们都知道,英语是一种被广泛使用的语言,连接着世界各地的人们。
2.Mastering the universal language can definitely open up more possibilities in the future.
掌握通用语言肯定能在未来带来更多的可能性。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.As for me,I intend to become a doctor and English can help me exchange ideas with foreign experts.
至于我,我打算成为一名医生,英语可以帮助我与外国专家交流意见。
4.Moreover,English will serve as a window to the world,allowing me to gain a global view towards life,understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
此外,英语将成为一扇通往世界的窗户,让我能够获得对生活的全球视野,了解来自不同文化的人,并结交更多的朋友。
5.As a student,we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly,enduring all kinds of hardship.
作为一名学生,我们有责任认真、坚定不移地完成我们的学业,忍受各种困难。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.In a word,if knowledge enriches the mind,then English adds wings.
总而言之,如果知识丰富了心灵,那么英语就给心灵插上了翅膀。
7.In conclusion,all of us young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.
总之,我们所有的年轻人都应该向他们学习,并承担起我们的责任。
晚练满分范文
(2024·浙江1月卷)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括:
1.介绍这项运动;2.说明推荐理由。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
As students,we often spend long hours sitting in class,which can lead to health problems.①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (这就是为什么我们每天都需要锻炼的原因).②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(一个很好的方法是在两节课之间跳绳).(说明现状,推荐运动)
③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (这是一个简单和廉价的活动,你可以在任何地方做它).Jumping rope is a great way to get your heart rate up and help you burn calories.④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (这也有助于提高你的灵活性和平衡性).⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, jumping rope is a lot of fun,⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (这可以缓解压力,改善你的情绪).(推荐理由)
So if you’re looking for a way to get more exercise during the day,⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我强烈推荐你尝试把跳绳作为一项10分钟休息时间的运动).⑧　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (如果你试一试,你会很高兴的)!(再次推荐并祝福)
人物介绍属于记叙文的写作范畴,写作时要围绕人物组织材料,要做到主题鲜明,内容清楚,并注意结构的完整性。 文体二 人物介绍 首段:引入话题(介绍人物的基本情况,如外貌、年龄等);主体:具体介绍(包括人物的性格、事迹等);尾段:总结全文(对所介绍的人物进行整体评价)。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.As we know,most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts.For me,Yuan Longping is my national hero.
我们知道,大多数人心中都有一个或多个民族英雄。对我来说,袁隆平是我的民族英雄。
2.Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history,Confucius is my favorite.
在中国历史上的杰出人物中,孔子是我最喜欢的。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.It goes without saying that Confucius has a great effect on the values of later generations.
毋庸置疑,孔子对后世的价值观产生了深远的影响。
4.She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
她凭借她的智慧和勇气受到中国人民的高度尊敬。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
5.He set so good an example for us students that we all should learn from him.
他为我们学生树立了好榜样,我们都应该向他学习。
6.His perseverance,indifference to personal fame and fortune,his devotion to research work and profound insight are also great merits we should follow!
他的毅力,对个人名利的漠不关心,对研究工作的投入和深刻的洞察力,也是我们应该追随的优秀品质!
7.Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.
她的精神激励着我和数百万女孩过独立的生活,并为我们自己的决定负责。
晚练满分范文
(2023·全国甲卷改编)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;2.意义或启示。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
The Historical Figure in China
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
The Historical Figure in China
Among the Chinese historical figures that are widely acknowledged,①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (在我看来,范仲淹是最有影响力的).Here are the reasons.(引出人物)
②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (作为宋朝著名的中国作家和政治家),Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (他不遗余力地进行了一系列的改革,使国家繁荣起来).④　　　　　　,he proposed the establishment of a national school system,⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　 (这对中国的教育体系产生了深远的影响).(人物的事迹和影响)
⑥　　　　　　　　,⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (范仲淹是一个榜样,他总是鼓励我成为一个品格高尚的人).(整体评价)
高分佳作仿写
一、[2025·湖北七市(州)高三调研]假定你校的英文校报将发行以“劳动课”为专题的一期报纸。请你写一篇稿件投稿,内容包括:
1.介绍你最喜欢的劳动课内容(如做清洁、种植和做饭等);2.劳动课的意义。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Labor class,part of our school courses,is required in primary and middle schools every week.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
二、(2025·山东实验中学高三诊断)你校英文报正举办主题为“My Favorite Sports Star”的征文活动。请根据以下内容投稿:
1.介绍体育明星;2.喜欢的理由;3.给你的启迪。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
第七节　倡议书&演讲稿
倡议书是针对某一现象或者问题向学校、单位或者某个群体发出倡议,以得到大家的支持。 文体一 倡议书 首段:点明发出倡议的背景和目的;主体:列举倡议的具体内容;尾段:表明倡议者的决心和希望。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.To answer the call of our country to develop students’ overall competence,the Student Union is here to call on everyone to participate in the week-long activity “Labor is the Most Beautiful”.
为了响应国家培养学生综合能力的号召,学生会在此呼吁大家参加为期一周的“劳动最美”活动。
2.I am writing to call on all students to participate in the“Read Classics,Learn English” activity,whose theme is to appreciate the charm of English classics and promote English learning.
我写信呼吁所有学生参加“读经典,学英语”活动,其主题是欣赏英语经典的魅力,促进英语学习。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.Nowadays,many students attach great importance to academic learning while ignoring labor education,which is actually equally important.
如今,许多学生非常重视学术学习,而忽视了劳动教育,劳动教育其实同样重要。
4.It can cultivate our strong will,enhance our sense of teamwork and offer a platform to put what we have learned in class to practical use.
它可以培养我们坚强的意志,增强我们的团队合作意识,并提供一个平台,把我们在课堂上学到的东西付诸实践。
5.It can also equip us with valuable life skills needed for the future.
它还可以让我们掌握未来所需的宝贵的生活技能。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.So,all my fellows,come and enjoy the pleasure of labor and the satisfaction from it.
所以,所有的同伴们,让我们来享受劳动的乐趣并从中获得满足吧。
7.I am convinced that,with our joint efforts,the phenomenon of wasting food will disappear.
我深信,在我们的共同努力下,浪费食物的现象将会消失。
晚练满分范文
(2022·全国甲卷改编)假定你是李华,你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一封倡议书投稿。内容包括:
1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear students,
①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (6月8日举行的世界海洋日旨在提高人们对海洋保护的意识).(引入倡议话题)
The ocean plays a crucial role in the global ecosystem.Not only ②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (海洋为我们提供了丰富的资源,而且还保持着自然的平衡).③　　　　　　,it is vital to protect the ocean.Firstly,④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我们所能做的就是重视我们的日常行动).⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, garbage can’t be thrown into the ocean.⑥　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, ⑦　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我们可以散发传单,以提高人们保护海洋的意识).The more people are involved,the better the ocean environment is.(倡议原因及具体内容)
⑧　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(毫无疑问,我们是时候采取行动了)! Every little effort counts.(再次发出倡议)
Yours,
Li Hua
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等多种类型。人们可以通过演讲把自己的观点、主张与思想感情传达给听众,使他们信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。 文体二 演讲稿 首段:点明演讲的主题;主体:详细论述自己的观点;尾段:总结演讲。
晨诵高分佳句
【先声夺人开头句】
1.It is a great honor for me to share my experiences with books.Hopefully,you will enjoy their company as much as I do.
我很荣幸分享我的读书经历。希望你能像我一样喜欢书籍的陪伴。
2.The topic of my speech today is “Family Education Shapes Me”. Family education has always deeply influenced me,which has benefited me a lot.
我今天演讲的主题是“家庭教育塑造我”。家庭教育对我的影响一直很深,让我受益匪浅。
【引人入胜篇中句】
3.For me,reading is a necessity of life,which can be done at anytime and anywhere.
对我来说,阅读是生活的必需品,可以随时随地在任何地方进行。
4.Personally,I like science fiction in particular,because they are people’s fantasy of the future.
就我个人而言,我特别喜欢科幻小说,因为它们是人们对未来的幻想。
5.I suggest we should fit exercise into our busy schedule,making it part of our daily routine.
我建议我们应该在繁忙的日程安排中安排锻炼,让它成为我们日常生活的一部分。
【画龙点睛结尾句】
6.In a word,reading has a great influence on me,which broadens my horizon,raises my curiosity,and satisfies my desire to keep learning.
总而言之,阅读对我有很大的影响,它拓宽了我的视野,激发了我的好奇心,满足了我继续学习的愿望。
7.I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship.
我希望大家都在这里过得愉快,你们的来访一定会促进我们的友谊。
晚练满分范文
(2021·浙江1月卷)假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;2.介绍活动安排;3.表达祝愿。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
根据汉语提示补全范文,无汉语提示处填写衔接词汇
Dear students from New Zealand,
I’m Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union.①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我代表我们学校热烈欢迎您的到来).(说明身份,表示欢迎)
②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (旨在让您沉浸在中国文化之中), a Peking Opera performance will be staged at the School Hall on Monday morning,from 9:00 to 11:00.After lunch,mini workshops including paper-cutting,calligraphy,and porcelain making will be set up at the stadium,③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (在那里你可以欣赏到这些传统的手工艺品) by either seeing them in action or trying one by yourself.(介绍具体活动安排)
④　　　　　　,⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (您可以抓住机会去探索和享受我们迷人的文化).(表示祝愿)
Thank you.
高分佳作仿写
一、(2025·泉州高三模拟)假定你是李华,是某中学学生会主席。请以学生会的名义,以“如何表达感恩”为主题,用英语给同学们写一封倡议书。内容包括:
1.倡议的原因;2.倡议的内容;3.发出的号召。
Dear fellow students,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
The Students’ Union
二、[2025·湖北部分市(州)高三调研]假如你是新华国际学校的学生会主席李华,你校将举行主题为“Promoting Traditional Chinese Culture”的英语演讲比赛。作为主持人,请你致开场词。要点包括:
1.表示欢迎;2.介绍比赛流程。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Ladies and gentlemen,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Now let’s welcome contestant No.1!
答案
第一节　求助信&建议信
文体一
①to ask you for advice regarding a play we have adapted from our textbook　②However　③what we’re uncertain about is whether the plot is complete　④Besides　⑤Therefore
⑥I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to guide us at 10 am tomorrow in the school hall　⑦I’d appreciate it if you could do us a favor
文体二
①Personally　②Specifically　③if neither speaks fluently,they might lack the motivation to participate　④Thus
⑤I wonder if students with more fluency can be grouped with less fluent ones　⑥it can further their shared learning more efficiently　⑦Your understanding and consideration of my advice would be greatly appreciated
一、【参考范文】
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m Li Hua,a student in Class 1,Senior 3.Struggling with choosing a suitable major for the future,I am writing for your guidance and assistance.
Taking an interest in computer technology,I’m always energetic and focused on computer lessons.It will be enjoyable if I can work in my favorite field.However,I’m not sure what major is related to computer I can choose in university and what courses I need to take.In addition,I want to know what I should prepare for this major at present.Could you give me some professional suggestions
I would appreciate it if I could get your guidance.Look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、【参考范文】
Dear committee members,
I’m glad to know that you are making a call for events for your Chinese Bridge online winter camp.I’d like to share my ideas with you.First,I’d like to recommend a short video about the origination of the Chinese characters to you.Full of great fun,the video will arouse foreigners’ interest in Chinese characters.Secondly,you can hold a storytelling competition to spread Chinese culture.Thirdly,a movie about modern China can be shown.This can further campers’ understanding of China.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节　推荐信&申请信
文体一
①Learning your future education plan in Beijing,I’m writing to convey my warmest welcome　②I recommend you apply for Peking University　③where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture　④Additionally
⑤it’s a good idea to take some online courses of spoken Chinese
⑥Hope my recommendation can be helpful
文体二
①Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in your art gallery,I can’t wait to apply for the position　②I’m convinced I’m equal to the job　③Firstly
④my fluent English will enable me to communicate smoothly with British painting lovers　⑤Moreover　⑥I’ve participated in several similar activities,equipping me with relevant experience　⑦If accepted,I will spare no effort to introduce those paintings on display and answer questions patiently
⑧I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application
一、【参考范文】
Dear Beth,
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis.It’s a fantastic sport, and I’m sure you’ll find it both fun and challenging.If you want professional help, I recommend Coach Wang,who works at the local sports center.He is great with beginners and can teach you the basic skills and techniques.His classes are interactive and easy to follow, and he’s patient, which I think is perfect for someone just starting out.
I’m sure you’ll improve quickly under his guidance.Good luck with your lessons!
Yours,
Li Hua
二、【参考范文】
Dear Chief Editor,
I’m Li Hua,a student from Senior Three.Hearing that some editors are needed for our students’ English newspaper Youth,I’m writing to apply for the post sincerely.I want to be an editor of the Growing Up Stories.
As an English lover,I have been reading Youth since I became a student of our school.I have learned a lot about English learning skills and foreign cultures by reading.
Fluent in English writing,I am sure that I will be capable of doing well as an editor.Besides,I once worked as the chief editor of the English newspaper of our class,which I believe will be helpful for the job.
I would appreciate it if my application could be taken into consideration.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三节　邀请信&感谢信
文体一
①I’m writing to sincerely invite you to an interview in our program　②“Talk and Talk” program enjoys great popularity among us　③Actually　④we desire a talk concerning how to improve writing ability　⑤Would 3:00 pm this Saturday be convenient for you　⑥I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience
文体二
①But meanwhile,I’m eagerly writing to express my gratitude to you for your help　②I still remember your dedication to improving my oral and written English　③Additionally
④you also frankly shared your learning experience with me
⑤Without your advice and assistance,I would not have made such unbelievable progress　⑥All in all　⑦words fail to convey how grateful I am　⑧Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home
一、【参考范文】
Dear David,
I am Li Hua,chairman of the students’ union of Xinhua High School.I am writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest “Telling China’s Stories Well in English”.
Aimed at spreading Chinese history,the speech contest is due to take place in our school hall on Apr.15th.It starts at 9:00 am and will last for about 2 hours.Nine competitors will compete in the final.The judges will score and comment on their performances at the end of the competition.
It would be our greatest honor if you could accept our invitation.Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、【参考范文】
Dear Mr.Brown,
First of all,on behalf of the Student Union,I am privileged to express our most sincere thanks to you.
We benefited a lot from the lecture that you gave us during this year’s English Cultural Festival.The lecture left a deep impression on every student present.They showed great interest in the content of the lecture and were fond of it very much.In the past few days,we have received a flood of emails from the audience telling us how your lecture has helped them correct the mistaken belief that English is only a tool.
It will be great if there are more lectures like this in the future! Finally,thank you again for your wonderful lecture!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
第四节　道歉信&投诉信
文体一
①I’m writing to apologize to you for missing the scheduled trip to the bookstore tomorrow with you　②The reason is that I will attend a family get-together tomorrow when my cousin Peter will return home from Beijing　③Actually　④Therefore　⑤it’s exciting for me to see him again after half a year
⑥I hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology
⑦Would you mind if I suggested we go to the bookstore next weekend
文体二
①I’m writing to complain about the disappointing service
②Their ads didn’t consist with their actions　③Firstly
④the lunch we were served tasted terrible　⑤Worse still
⑥the guides took us to several souvenir shops,resulting in a big waste of time　⑦measures can be taken to prevent such occurrences again　⑧Your attention to this matter would be greatly appreciated
一、【参考范文】
Dear Andrew,
I’m writing to make an apology to you because I have signed up for a voluntary activity themed “Trash Sorting,All Involved” and won’t be able to accompany you to the library this weekend as planned.
As you know,we students should spare no efforts in carrying out the policy of garbage classification.So,I seized this opportunity without hesitation.On that day,we will go to communities to spread the significance as well as methods of trash sorting and direct the residents to accurately distinguish different kinds of rubbish,which will take a whole day.Considering that,I’m afraid I can’t keep my word.Shall we put it off till next Sunday
I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and hope you can accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、【参考范文】
To whom it may concern,
I’m one of your customers.I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago,but I didn’t receive them until yesterday.And much to my disappointment,the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To make matters worse,it is not a complete set,as I found one book missing.
I’m disappointed to have received such poor service.I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me.Besides,I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第五节　询问信&告知信
文体一
①I’m wondering if you can offer me information concerning your six-week English course　②Firstly　③I’d appreciate it if you could tell me when the course will start and how many class hours there are per week　④Besides　⑤what about the class size　⑥Additionally　⑦I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included
⑧Finally　⑨Any early reply will be highly appreciated
文体二
①I’m excited to inform you our team is to compete in an important volleyball match next week　②As scheduled　③the event/activity will be held in our school gym at 9 am next Sunday　④To make full preparations for it,I have made a specific training plan　⑤All the team members are supposed to take the training punctually　⑥Additionally　⑦I do hope we can do a good job through joint efforts　⑧Eagerly looking forward to your early reply
一、【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua,a Senior Three student.I have been offered the opportunity to participate in the summer camp of “National English Innovation Contest”.So I’m writing to inquire about the details of it.
Firstly,I’d like to know the exact time and place of the contest.I’d be obliged if you could also let me know the procedure that I’ll have to go through.Additionally,could you also tell me what I need to prepare
Your early reply would be highly appreciated.Thank you in advance!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
二、【参考范文】
Dear all,
In response to the call for a more harmonious campus,our club will hold a meeting and discuss relevant activities with the theme of “The harmony of school starts from every student”.
In the meeting,we will use meaningful ways to raise students’ awareness of behaving properly and acting politely in their everyday learning on campus.
Our meeting is due to be set on Monday noon at 12:30 in the school hall.Should it be inconvenient for you,please inform me by e-mail ahead of time.
Best regards,
Li Hua
第六节　短文投稿&人物介绍
文体一
①That’s why we need to exercise everyday　②One great way is jumping rope during your break between two classes　③It’s such a simple and inexpensive activity that you can do it anywhere　④It is also helpful to improve your flexibility and balance　⑤Plus　⑥which can relieve stress and improve your mood　⑦I highly recommend trying jumping rope as a 10-minute break time sport　⑧You’ll be glad if you give it a try
文体二
①In my opinion,Fan Zhongyan is the most influential
②Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty
③He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous　④Besides　⑤which had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese educational system　⑥All in all
⑦Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character
一、【参考范文】
Labor class,part of our school courses,is required in primary and middle schools every week.The new course arrangement stresses the importance of labor education and strengthens students’ awareness of labor.
Now the labor class includes activities like cooking,cleaning,and planting,among which I like planting most.Planting can always interest me because it offers me opportunities to endure hardships and get close to nature.When I’m involved in the planting process,the cycle of sowing,fertilizing and harvesting can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement,so I really consider it the best way to relax myself.
Thanks to labor class,I’ve found my personal interest and become a well-rounded student!
二、【参考范文】
Su Bingtian stands out as a 100-meter runner.Not only did he break the Asian Games’ record,but he competed with Usain Bolt many times.
Why do I like him Besides his talent for sprinting,what impresses me most is his intense training.His diligence and persistence have pushed his running career to new heights.
I learned a lot from him.In our studies and lives,as long as we hold on to our dreams and never give up,we will become better versions of ourselves.
第七节　倡议书&演讲稿
文体一
①World Oceans Day,falling on June 8th,is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation　②does the ocean offer us abundant resources,but it maintains the balance of nature
③Thus　④what we can do is to value our daily actions
⑤For example　⑥Moreover　⑦we can hand out leaflets to enhance people’s awareness of protecting the ocean
⑧Undoubtedly,it’s high time that we took action
文体二
①On behalf of our school,I extend a warm welcome to your arrival　②With the aim of immersing you in Chinese culture
③where you can appreciate these traditional crafts
④Hopefully　⑤you can seize the opportunity to explore and enjoy our charming culture
一、【参考范文】
Dear fellow students,
Through our life journey,there are many people who are devoted to supporting us.To express our heartfelt gratitude,we advocate doing something.
The forms of gratitude are varied.We can choose an appropriate way to express our thanks,like writing a thank-you letter to the person or giving him/her a hug,which are all small things we can do with a grateful heart.
Being grateful is not only a responsibility but also a moral beauty.Let’s learn to express our gratefulness to people around us.
The Students’ Union
二、【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! Welcome to the speech contest! Let’s express our warmest welcome to the guests and judges! Firstly let me introduce the arrangements of this contest.
There are ten competitors in total,who will deliver their speeches entitled “Promoting Traditional Chinese Culture” one by one.Following each speech,judges are supposed to grade it.At the end of the contest,our headmaster will announce the final winners.What excites us most must be the prize-awarding session when the top three will be awarded certificates.Let’s wait and see who will be the winners! Are you ready for their wonderful performances
Now let’s welcome contestant No.1 !
读后续写
第四讲　演练有主题——精准练
主题一　个人成长
(一)【参考范文】
Still in high spirits,Lauren cheered for Lady Tigers off the court.Just at that time,Coach Forsythe called a time-out.He walked over to Lauren and said something to her,then something to her teammates.In the minute,Lauren was in the game.My heart doubled its beat,watching wide-eyed.Just then,all across the stands,fans were on their feet clapping for Lauren.Our Lauren! Lauren kept pace with others fairly well.With less than a minute left,Lady Tigers was controlling the ball.I saw the point guard shout and flash a signal to her teammates.
Then a teammate passed Lauren the ball.She caught it and moved toward the goal.Amazingly,the opposing team didn’t block her.She shot.She scored! “Lauren,Lauren,Lauren,” chanted the cheerleaders.The crowd erupted into cheers.
Several minutes later,Lauren joined us.“Did you see I made a basket!” For sixteen years,I had tried hard to keep Lauren from feeling like she was different.But from this,I saw she was really different—not physically or emotionally,but spiritually.I wrapped my arms around her tightly.Lauren was different.And I was glad.
(二)【参考范文】
Suddenly Blake slowed and sat onto the ground painfully.My chance came! Excitement took over me.I refocused my attention on the course and fastened my pace.My legs didn’t feel like stone anymore;instead,the long lost springiness came back to me.I was about to overtake Blake when a second thought came to me.There was Blake,sitting on the ground.With a hint of desperation in his eyes,he squeezed a sad smile.I stopped.Putting one of his arms around my shoulder,I supported him slowly to the finish line.
A reporter took a picture of this moving scene and posted it online.It instantly received thousands of shares and likes.People expressed their respect and admiration for my courage and selflessness to give up what could be an easy victory.One viewer even commented,“It’s a great comfort to see that true sportsmanship still exists.” We were impressed with the idea that friendship comes first at an early age.I was quite proud to have lived up to that idea and to have served as a reminder.
主题二　家庭亲情
(一)【参考范文】
Rick was lost in thought.It slowly dawned on him that people he was angry at had done nothing wrong.His classmates who showed their new clothes and pencil cases to others might just want to share their happiness with friends.His teacher did blame him but he was being a problem.And his schoolmate’s father was just trying to help him correct his mistakes.They had no intention to hurt him but he just let his unreasonable anger consume him and hurt them.How ridiculous he had been!
Rick knew it was time to change.From then on,Rick tried his best to control his temper.Every time he felt he was to explode,he would walk away and ask himself why he was angry and whether it was reasonable to be angry.Then he would find his peace and laughed his anger away.Gradually,everyone saw a different Rick.He no longer shouted at others or threw things away.He chatted with classmates after class and complimented their new clothes and pencil cases.He even helped teachers carry books before class sometimes.Rick’s change surprised everyone and they all felt happy for him.
(二)【参考范文】
To save the kids,Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone.Without any better alternative,he had to seek help by himself,leaving children to stay where they were.After he made the decision,he wrapped his coat around them and kissed each of them on the forehead.“Stay here.No matter what,I’ll go for help,” he repeated several times in a trembling voice.In the following hours,Brandon walked through the bush blindly and even suffered another bad fall on the way.Fortunately,he landed on his back safely.Exhausted and bloodied,he emerged from the forest and bumped into a family of hikers,who called 911.
A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately.On the return trip,Brandon anxiously described the general location of the children to the rescuers.“If only I hadn’t left them!” he said regretfully.Finally,after a long search,they successfully located the poor children.Knowing this,their father leapt up,laughing and crying.Upon the helicopter’s arrival,Brandon jumped off and ran to embrace his children,moved to see so many strangers in bright red jackets.Every time he thinks of bright red jackets,he will feel he is not alone—there’s always someone out there who is willing to help.
主题三　轶闻趣事
(一)【参考范文】
When the students got back to class,no one noticed the toy frogs at first.Then Stacey,who finally noticed the frog,screamed and pointed at her desk.The whole class exploded.A couple of other kids shrieked while the rest were laughing and banging their desks.Nat was feeling very pleased with himself.His trick was definitely a success.He pretended that he was working and reached out for a piece of paper.It was then that something cold and wet slithered past his fingers.It was a frog—a real one!
Nat realized that he had opened the lid of the terrarium.Suddenly,there came a loud croak from under his chair.Nat almost jumped out of his skin with fright.What scared him even more was the only person who remained serious—Ms.Lopez.She calmly walked down the aisle,scooped up the frog and put it back into the terrarium.Then she came to Nat’s side,seemingly waiting for his confession.Nat felt his face burning and apologized to Ms.Lopez.He also promised to be considerate from then on.
(二)【参考范文】　
After that,I threw myself into math with newfound determination. Instead of hanging out with my friends after school,I would sit at the kitchen table,textbooks splayed out before me,and practice addition and subtraction. I thought to myself,“If Bubbles,a dog,could learn math,then surely,I could too.” With each passing week,I could see the fruits of my labor.Occasionally,during our study sessions,Dad would call Bubbles over.She would bark out the correct answers to simple math problems—it was a unique,interactive way for me to assess my progress.I swelled with pride at my a应用文写作满分攻略
　　无论是应用文写作还是读后续写,都应具备两个共同点:①语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;②上下文的连贯性。为了写出高分作文,应恰当使用高级词汇、句式和过渡衔接词汇。
满分攻略一　词汇高级——吸引阅卷老师的眼球
　　大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳,写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的,别人可能想不到的高级词汇,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉,从而提高文章的得分档次。
技法一　少笼统,多具体
所谓“少笼统,多具体”是指在写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、模糊的词,而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。
笼统词 具体词
very extremely极其;especially尤其; particularly特别;尤其;greatly非常; 大大地;highly非常;badly非常; terribly非常;more than非常
happy delighted快乐的;cheerful快乐的; joyful快乐的;pleased高兴的; enjoyable令人愉悦的
①Bernard and his parents were extremely grateful.And the Meredith family also felt delighted to help this family.
伯纳德和他的父母非常感激。梅瑞狄斯一家也很高兴能帮助这个家庭。
笼统词 具体词
important vital至关重要的;significant意义重大的;essential必不可少的;key关键的;fundamental根本的;primary首要的;crucial至关重要的
②Through the activity,we realize working with our own hands is significant.
通过这次活动,我们意识到用我们自己的双手劳动具有重要意义。
笼统词 具体词
beautiful attractive有吸引力的;appealing有吸引力的;elegant优美的;charming迷人的
③The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain,where the sky is blue and the air is fresh.We were deeply impressed by the attractive scenery.
农场坐落在山脚下,那里的天空碧蓝,空气清新。迷人的景色给我们留下了深刻的印象。
笼统词 具体词
difficult/hard tough艰难的;棘手的;challenging具有挑战性的;complex复杂的;难以理解的;puzzling/confusing令人困惑的;complicated复杂的
④However,the adaption is quite challenging.
然而改编非常具有挑战性。
笼统词 具体词
like/enjoy/love cherish/treasure珍视;珍爱;be keen on对……着迷;be crazy about热衷于;be fond of/have a taste for/have a passion/go in for喜爱;show great interest in对……很感兴趣
⑤China has always been an attraction for those who are keen on Chinese culture.
对于那些热衷于中国文化的人来说,中国一直具有吸引力。
技法二　短语优先
恰当地选用一些贴切、地道的高级表达,尤其是短语,对提高写作的得分档次至关重要。所以考生不妨考虑在文章中使用较高级的表达,充分展现自己的语言功底。
①I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
→I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account/consideration.
②And eventually,we can master what we desire to learn.(2021·全国乙卷)
→And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.
③Firstly,randomly pairing up students may cause imbalanced language abilities within the groups.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ卷)
→Firstly,randomly pairing up students may lead to/result in imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
技法三　避免重复
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的词汇水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是词汇高级表达的体现。
Many influential historical figures have appeared in China’s long history,each of whom made great contributions to the progress of society in their own way.(2023·全国甲卷)
→Numerous influential historical figures have emerged in China’s long history,each of whom made tremendous contributions to the progress of society in their own way.
即时演练　用高级词汇替换黑体词汇
1.I’d like to share with you some details about(　　　　　　) Chinese table manners.
2.I’m writing to tell (　　　　　　)you that we will have a volleyball match next month.
3.If offered the chance (　　　　　　) to be a volunteer,I will do it well and live up to your expectations.
4.There will be many (　　　　　　) good (　　　　　　) performances given by talented students.
5.Besides (　　　　　　),you’d better bring some meaningful gifts,such as a bunch of flowers or some fresh fruits.
6.Remember (　　　　　　)that you should avoid getting hurt during the training and keep a balanced diet.
7.I master (　　　　　　)spoken English,thus making it easy for me to communicate with visitors.
8.Through the activity,I realize (　　　　)that we should(　　　　　　　　) value (　　　　　　) hard working.
满分攻略二　句式靓丽——加深阅卷老师的印象
　　适当运用含有较高级语法结构的句式,比如各类从句、非谓语动词,强调句、倒装句、省略句等。这些结构的适当运用可以使文章语言丰富、可读性强。
技法一　巧用三大从句,丰富句式
1.实用“定”语,先声夺人——定语从句
关系代词who、whom、whose、that、which、as引导的定语从句是写作的一大亮点,尤其是which 和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高分范文中更是屡见不鲜。关系副词 when、where、why引导的定语从句和“介词+which/whom”引导的定语从句更能让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
①Such is my father,a great man who sets a good example for me and I love him a great deal.
这就是我的父亲,一个伟大的人,为我树立了一个好榜样,我非常爱他。
②The Internet gives me the opportunity to communicate in real-time with native speakers using video calling and online forums,which improves my spoken and written English.
互联网让我有机会通过视频通话和在线论坛与以英语为母语的人实时交流,提高了我的英语口语和写作能力。
③The book on which I spent a lot of money is very interesting.
我花了很多钱买的那本书非常有趣。
2.四大“名”句,内涵丰富——名词性从句
名词性从句是写作中常用的高级表达,包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。
①I was wondering if you could guide us to polish a short play adapted from our English textbook.(宾语从句)
我想知道你是否可以指导我们润色改编自我们英语课本的一个短剧。
②Through the activity,what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and I’ll become stronger and more determined.(主语从句+表语从句)
通过这次活动,我感到我能够承担起责任,我会变得更加坚强,更加坚定。
③The fact that the earth is becoming warmer and warmer these years has worried many scientists.(同位语从句)
这些年来地球逐渐变暖的事实,使许多科学家感到担忧。
3.巧用“状”语,文采斐然——状语从句
状语从句主要包括时间、地点、条件、原因、让步、比较、方式、目的和结果九类从句。
①Though Ms Li has been teaching English for twenty years,she is still passionate about teaching.
虽然李老师已经教了20年英语,但她仍然热爱教学。
②He was so delighted that he could hardly speak,but his bright smiling face spoke for him.
他高兴得几乎说不出话来,但他那灿烂的笑脸说明了一切。
技法二　活用非谓语,言简意赅
写作时,可以利用非谓语动词对简单句进行整合,使其成为高级表达,其中with复合结构,分词或不定式作状语是利用频率较高的高级句式。
①Wearing thick protective suits,he headed for the wards,leaving a thin but tall figure behind.
他穿着厚厚的防护服朝病房走去,留下一个瘦高的背影。
②Organized by the student union,a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend.
上周末,由学生会组织的一群志愿者去希望农场帮助农民摘桃子。
③With the college entrance examination approaching,we are occupied in making final preparations.
随着高考的临近,我们正忙于做最后的准备工作。
技法三　一点“特殊”,彰显水平
1.灵活机动的“it”
it在句中可以作形式主语、形式宾语和构成一些特殊固定的句式。
①It is+adj.+(for/of sb) to do sth/that从句
(对于某人来说)做某事是怎么样的
It is not uncommon that students make mistakes when speaking English.
学生在说英语时犯错误并不罕见。
②It be+an honour+(for sb) to do sth/It be one’s honour+to do sth做某事对于某人来说是个荣幸。
It is a great honour for me to deliver a speech to share with you my opinions on Peking Opera.
我很荣幸能发表演讲,与大家分享我对京剧的看法。
③It be+过去分词(said、thought、believed、supposed、reported、recommended...)+that从句　据……
It is said that he has traveled to more than 50 countries.
据说他去过50多个国家。
It is strongly recommended that the school should give students more free time to take part in sports activities.
强烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间来参加体育活动。
④Sb+谓语(think、find、feel等)+it+adj.+(for sb/sth) to do sth/that从句
某人认为/发现/觉得……做某事是怎么样的
I found it useful to visit the exhibition of the students’ Chinese painting.
我觉得去参观这次学生国画展览很有用。
⑤It goes without saying that...
毋庸置疑……
It goes without saying that oceans play a critical role in the world.(2022·全国甲卷)
毋庸置疑,海洋在世界上发挥着至关重要的作用。
⑥It occurred to/hit/struck sb that某人突然想到
Suddenly it occurred to me that I could have an online discussion with my classmates on self-discipline.
突然我想到,我可以和同学们在线讨论自律。
2.重点突出的强调句
①强调句型可强调除谓语动词和表语外的其他任何成分,如主语、宾语、状语等。其基本结构为:It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分。
It was at that time that their mother went out to buy the paper bags they needed.
就在那个时候,他们的妈妈出去买他们需要的纸袋。
It is we who will make the decision.
将由我们来做决定。
②助动词do表强调
We do hope that our school will carry out more similar activities in the future.
我们确实希望我们学校将来能开展更多类似的活动。
We do appreciate your help.
我们确实非常感激你的帮助。
3.平衡句子的倒装句
在写作中,倒装句型应用比较广泛,涉及的句型主要包括部分倒装和全部倒装。
①部分倒装1:So+adj./adv.+be动词/助动词+主语...that...　如此……以至于……
During the exam,so nervous was I that my mind went blank.
考试中我如此紧张以至于大脑一片空白。
In the race,so quickly did he run that no one could catch up with him.
在比赛中,他跑得太快了,没有人能赶上他。
②部分倒装2:n./adj./adv.+as/though+主语+谓语,主句　“尽管/虽然……”
Windy as/though it was that morning,athletes tried their strength all the way to the finishing line.
尽管那天早上风很大,运动员们还是竭尽全力冲向终点。
③部分倒装3:Only+状语/状语从句+助动词/情态动词/be动词+主语+其他　“只有……”
Only by daring to try can we make a breakthrough.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)
只有敢于尝试,我们才能取得突破。
I encouraged David who was at a loss,“Do keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.”(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
我鼓励不知所措的大卫:“务必记住只有拥有良好的心态你才能获得成功。”
④部分倒装4:Not until+状语/状语从句+助动词+主语...
Not until he had failed in the job interview did he realize how important confidence was.
直到他面试失败,他才意识到自信是多么重要。
⑤部分倒装5:Hardly had sb done...when.../No sooner had sb done...than...一……就……
No sooner had he realized his mistake than he apologized to his friend.
他一意识到自己的错误就向朋友道歉。
⑥全部倒装1:Here/There/Out/In/Up/Down/Away/Now/Then...+谓语(表示运动的不及物动词)+主语
Following the roar,out rushed a tiger from among the bushes.
一声吼叫,呼地从丛林中窜出一只老虎。
⑦全部倒装2:介词短语+谓语(不及物动词,如lie、stand、sit、exist、stretch、come)或系动词be+主语(名词)
In the doorway stood a man with a hammer.
门口站着一个拿锤子的人。
⑧全部倒装3:分词短语+be+主语(名词)
Lying on the floor was a boy aged about 17.
躺在地板上的是一个约17岁的男孩。
4.省略句式,简约不简单
状语从句的省略形式是写作中最为常用的高级句式,结构为when、while、once、if、unless、though、although等+doing/done/to do sth。
①Though tired and exhausted,the athletes all regarded this competition as a good opportunity to build up their strength.
虽然很累,运动员们都认为这次比赛是强身健体的好机会。
②Bathed in sunshine,we sang and laughed while picking apples.
沐浴在阳光下,我们一边欢歌笑语一边摘着苹果。
5.适时感叹,必要强调
在文章结尾处恰当使用感叹句,可以起到画龙点睛的作用,韵味无穷。
①What a wonderful time we had picking apples on the farm!
我们在农场摘苹果的时光多么美好啊!
②How happy I was to be one of the members in this warm family!This is one of the most treasured moments in my memory.
成为这个温暖大家庭的一员,我是多么高兴啊!这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。
6.“虚拟被动”,委婉地道
虚拟语气和被动句式可以使语气委婉,表达地道,在写作中要善于利用。
①But for his encouragement,I couldn’t have made such great progress.
要不是他的鼓励,我不会取得这么大的进步。
②As soon as we finished the song,all the audience gave us warm applause.If only you had been there!
我们一唱完歌,所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。要是你当时在那里就好了!
③She always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting,which is appreciated by all of us.
她总是尝试新的方法使她的课生动有趣,这是值得我们所有人赞赏的。
技法四　无灵主语　优化表达
所谓的无灵主语句,即用无生命的事物作主语来展开句子,吸引阅卷老师。
1.表示时间、地点等的名词作主语的句子。这类无灵主语句常用see、find、witness等动词作谓语,往往带有比喻或拟人的修辞手法。
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race,which drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
上周日,我们学校举行了一场非同寻常的越野赛跑,它吸引了我们学校每位学生和老师。
2.表示生理、心理状态的名词作主语的句子。此类句子仿佛为表达增加了血肉,注入了活力,使写作瞬间变得丰满起来。
①Grief and sorrow hit me like a bolt from the blue.
悲痛如晴天霹雳一般击中了我。
②Gradually,a strong passion to help others deeply rooted in my heart.
渐渐地,一种想要帮助他人的强烈的愿望深植我的心间。
技法五　名言谚语　增分提档
利用高级句式并引用名言谚语会增加亮点。
1.As an old saying goes... 俗话说……
As an old saying goes,where there is a will,there is a way.
正如谚语所说,有志者事竟成。
2.As everyone knows/As is known/It is well known that众所周知
As is known,the Earth revolves around the Sun.
众所周知,地球绕着太阳转。
即时演练　根据汉语提示,用靓丽句式补全习作
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。请你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
1.成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看我们参加过的活动录像等);2.对活动的感受;3.对自己未来的展望。
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　 (至于即将到来的6月8日举行的成人礼;非谓语动词作定语),I’d like to share some details.Firstly,the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adulthood,and looked back on ②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我们在过去的三年中所经历的一切;宾语从句).After that,we watched videos about the activities ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (我们参加过的,定语从句).Excitement and admiration welled up within me.④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (就是这个成人礼标志着告别过去和期待未知的未来;强调句型).⑤　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(我应该做的是承担 作为一个成年人的责任,为我的梦想不懈地努力,无论我遇到什么挑战;主语从句+让步状语从句).
Yours,
Li Jin
满分攻略三　衔接过渡——完美成篇秀佳作
　　高考作文如果缺乏衔接过渡,就好比一串珍珠项链断了线,每个词句虽光彩夺目,拿出来却七零八落,缺乏连贯性。要想成就美文,不仅需要高级词汇,还需“穿珠之线”,这个“线”就是衔接过渡。
1.段落起始过渡
过渡词 first of all;in the first place;to begin/start with;firstly;generally (speaking)
从句 as we know;as is known to us;as is shown in...;as is often the case;as a/the saying goes
①Generally speaking,the more you practice,the more skillfully you can write in English.
一般来说,你练习得越多,你的英语写作就越娴熟。
②As the saying goes,“Two heads are better than one.” As a result,teamwork is of vital importance.
正如谚语所说:“三个臭皮匠赛过诸葛亮。”鉴于此,团队合作极其重要。
2.时间顺序
表“现在;最近” nowadays/now;at present;currently;recently
表“首先,第一” first/firstly;to begin/start with;in the first place/first of all
表“后来,不久,然后” after;afterwards/later on;after that;after a while;before long;shortly after;since
表“在此期间,同时” meanwhile/meantime;in the meantime;at the same time;while
表“最后” finally/lastly;in the end/eventually/ at last
①In the end,I sincerely hope that you can share your experience of learning English on the Internet.
最后,我真诚地希望你能分享你在网上学习英语的经验。
②To begin with,I have such a good command of English that I can communicate with visitors without difficulty.
首先,我的英语很好,我可以毫不费力地与来访者交流。
③At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.
就在这时,我的父母回来了,他们非常惊讶地看到所有房间都很整洁,地板闪闪发亮。
3.空间顺序
on one side...on the other side...;on the opposite side;in front of;in the center of;in the distance;in the middle of;at the back of;on/to the left/right;close to;next to;nearby;beyond
Down the middle of the valley runs a clear,fast stream in which one may fish.In the low land along the stream are the farmlands;beyond them is the grassland.Behind the tops of the first hills are the big mountains.
一条清澈湍急的溪流沿着山谷的中部流淌着,人们可以在溪中钓鱼。沿溪而下,低地处是农田;越过农田是草原。第一层丘陵后是一座座大山。
4.递进关系
besides/moreover/furthermore/what’s more/in addition/additionally/also;not only...but also...;apart from/as well as...;more importantly;equally important;last but not least;worse still/what’s worse/to make matters worse
①Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking,but I could also feast on the sweetness!
我不仅可以体验采摘水果的过程,还可以品尝到香甜的水果!
②More importantly,I am willing to help others,so I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time.
更重要的是,我愿意帮助他人,所以我想在业余时间当一名志愿者。
③The car broke down when I was driving home from work,and what was worse,it was pouring with rain.
下班回家的路上我的汽车坏了,更糟糕的是,天还下着大雨。
5.转折关系
并列连词/副词 however;but;yet;otherwise;instead;unfortunately
介词(短语) despite/in spite of/regardless of;rather than;instead of;on the other hand
从属连词 although/though/as/while;even if/ though;no matter wh-/how
①Do your work every day;otherwise,it will pile up.
今日事,今日毕;否则,事情会堆积如山。
②Although/Though I can enjoy more freedom,I realize that being a grown-up means more responsibilities.
虽然我可以享受更多的自由,但是我认识到作为成年人意味着更多的责任。
6.比较和对比
比较 in the same way;just as;similarly;equally
对比 on the contrary;compared with/to;in comparison with;in contrast(to); instead;while;unlike;however;yet
①For one thing,the overall development over the past decades has been so striking that they feel eager to familiarize themselves with what is going on in China.For another,China enjoys a long history and rich culture.
其一,过去几十年的整体发展是如此引人注目,以至于他们渴望了解中国正在发生的事情。其二,中国历史悠久而且文化丰富。
②As we all know,friendship always comes first.However,we should still make good preparations for the match,and try our best to be the winner.
众所周知,友谊永远是第一位的。然而,我们仍然应该为比赛做好准备,尽我们的最大努力赢得比赛。
7.因果关系
(1)让“因为”变得不简单
介词 短语 as a result of;as a consequence of;due to;because of;owing to;on account of;thanks to
连词 since;for;as;now that;in that;considering
常用 句式 ①owing/due to the fact that...;②that is because...;③which results from/accounts for/makes for...;④the reason why...
①Because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture,I can enable visitors to know more about Chinese painting.
因为我熟悉中国绘画文化,我可以让游客更多地了解中国画。
②Due to the fact that Bernard was honest and hardworking,his small business took off.
由于伯纳德诚实勤劳,他的小生意兴隆起来。
(2)让“结果”不落俗套
副词(短语) thus;therefore;consequently;as a result;as a consequence
非谓语 end up doing;only/never to do
从句 which results in/leads to/contributes to;as a result/consequence of which
①Therefore,in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
因此,在我心目中,父亲是我最尊敬的人,我深深地爱着他。
②I eagerly unpacked the package,only to find a broken book in it.
我急切地打开包裹,却发现里面有一本破书。
③When facing trouble,he couldn’t keep calm,which results in his constant failures.
面对困境时,他不能保持镇定,这导致他不断失败。
8.解释和举例
解释说明 in fact;in this case;as a matter of fact;actually;to put it differently
举例 for example;for instance;such as
To put it differently,I will try my best to achieve my goal.
换言之,我会尽最大的努力实现我的目标。
9.表达观点
personally;I think;in my opinion;in my view;from my point of view;I’m afraid;as I see it;as far as I’m concerned
Personally,middle school students should not be allowed to take part-time jobs.
在我看来,不应该允许中学生做兼职工作。
10.总结用语
常用插入语 all in all;altogether;on the whole;in short/brief/general/conclusion;in a/one word;generally/briefly speaking;to conclude;to sum up;to put it simply
从句或非谓语 利用从句或非谓语动词等各种语法结构巧妙结尾
①To sum up/In short,I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.
总而言之,我希望你不辜负我们学校的期望。
②As is stated above,a conclusion can be drawn that this volunteer activity is well worth holding again.
综上所述,我们可以得出这一结论:这次志愿者活动非常值得再次举行。
③Given your busy schedule,I’d be very appreciative if you could offer me some professional advice.
鉴于你繁忙的日程,如果您能给我一些专业建议,我将不胜感激。
即时演练　用恰当的高级词汇、句式和衔接词完成以下各句
1.首先,记住,你最好准时到达,或者比约定时间早一点到达,这对于表示你的礼貌很重要。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
2.此外,通过做这份兼职工作,我不仅可以获得一些宝贵的经验,还能让我更好地适应社会。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
3.我最喜欢春天,因为我喜欢闻花的芳香,看树的新绿,听小鸟歌唱。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
4.总之,我坚信努力工作会带来好的结果!
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
5.另外,我很想学习如何欣赏西方绘画,如果你能告诉我们一些绘画技巧,那就太好了。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案：
满分攻略一
即时演练
1.regarding/concerning/related to　2.inform　3.opportunity
4.various/a variety of/varieties of/a large number of;fantastic
5.Additionally/Moreover/Furthermore/In addition　6.Bear in mind/Keep in mind　7.have a good command of　8.am aware/come to realize;are supposed to;attach great importance to
满分攻略二
即时演练
①As for the coming-of-age ceremony held on June 8th
②what we had gone through during the past three years
③that we had taken part in　④It is the coming-of-age ceremony that marks saying goodbye to the past and expectations of the unknown future　⑤What I should do is bear/shoulder responsibility as an adult and strive for my dream persistently whatever challenges I may face
满分攻略三
即时演练
1.First of all/To start/begin with,keep in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time,which is of great significance to show your politeness.
2.Moreover/Besides/In addition,by doing the part-time job not only can I get some precious experience but I can also better adapt myself to society.
3.I like spring best,owing to the fact that I love to smell the fragrance of flowers,see the new green trees and hear the singing of little birds.
4.To sum up/All in all/In short/In a word,I firmly believe hard work will bring good results!
5.Additionally/In addition/What’s more/Moreover/Furthermore,I’m crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings,and it can’t be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint.

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