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情感升华万能句
这个句式，非常简单。属于入门级的情感描述句。主句是用来描述情绪产生的原因。首先我们来看例句：
To my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
1、To one's +情绪名词，主句
令我惊讶的是，Tom获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如：
【正态度】
amazement惊奇, delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋,
【负态度】
annoyance烦恼, disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤,
【中性态度】
puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief 欣慰, surprise/ amazement
amazement
delight
joy
satisfaction
excitement
annoyance
disappointment
horror
shame
sorrow
puzzlement
regret
relief
surprise/ amazement/ astonishment
惊讶
【升级1】加强情绪的语气
注：在to前面加上much, greatly，或者在名词前面添加great这个形容词：
To my great surprise→
翻译：非常令我吃惊的是，汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。你可以这样写：
Much / Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
Much / Greatly to my surprise, Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
much / greatly to my surprise
【升级2】to the +情绪名词+ of sb（名词或者代词）
例：to my surprise→
本质上，是两种所有格的变换。
翻译：令他的父母感到吃惊的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。
to the surprise of his parents
To the surprise of his parents, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级3】情绪名词叠加使用。
翻译：令他惊讶和高兴的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖
To his surprise and joy, he won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【升级4】：“to one’s +情绪名词”位置可变换
这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请看下面例句：
I，to my surprise, found that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
2、What+情绪动词+sb +was +that从句
What 主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里通常可以表达故事发展情节。
【翻译练习】
让我惊讶的是, Tom 获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
What surprised me was that Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest.
【归纳整理】
【高兴类】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,
【生气类】annoy, upset【惊讶类】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze
【惊讶类】surprise, astonish, shock, amaze
【害怕类】frighten, scare, terrify,
【失望类】depress, disappoint, discourage, bore
【忧虑类】worry, concern，
【其他类】puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy,
annoy, upset
surprise, astonish, shock, amaze
frighten, scare, terrify,
depress, disappoint, discourage, bore
worry, concern，
puzzle, confuse, interest, relax, touch, move, embarrass, impress
3、sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.
“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。”
例：Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
3、sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.
“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。”
翻译：
Jane感到一股强烈的嫉妒，在她心中升腾，奔涌。（jealous嫉妒的，jealousy是“嫉妒”的名词形式。）
升级一：句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
翻译：
看到丈夫在跟一个漂亮的女孩聊天 ，Sunny感到一股强烈的嫉妒在内心升腾，奔涌
Seeing his husband chatting with a beautiful girl , Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging through her.
升级二：句尾可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果。
翻译：
简感到一种强烈愤怒感在她心中涌出来，把书扔向女孩。
Jane felt a great sense of annoyance welling up in her heart and surging through her，throwing the book at the girl.
3、sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.
“某人感到一股强烈的......在内心升腾、奔涌。”
例：Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。
Jane felt a great sense of horror welling up in her heart and surging through her.
例：再次看到字母表，我觉得它好像在鼓励我并说，“学习永远不会太晚”。
4、Seeing sth , sb felt as if it had been doing and saying,”...”
看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”。
Seeing the alphabet again, I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying, ” it’s never too late to learn”.
翻译1：看到标枪，我觉得它好像在鼓励我，并说，“你找到了你的天赋，我找到了你”。（标枪：javelin）
4、Seeing sth , sb felt as if it had been doing and saying,”...”
看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”。
Seeing the javelin, I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying, “You’ve found your talent and I’ve found you”
翻译2：看到那架直升机，简觉得它好像在用雷鸣般的声音安慰她，“你的等待是有回报的。”(直升机:helicopter)
4、Seeing sth , sb felt as if it had been doing and saying,”...”
看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”。
Seeing the helicopter, Jane felt as if it had been comforting her with its thunderous voice, “Your waiting pays off.”
翻译3：看到手提箱，亚瑟觉得好像在称赞他，“干得好！”
4、Seeing sth , sb felt as if it had been doing and saying,”...”
看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”。
Seeing the suitcase, Arthur felt as if it had been praising him , “Your did great job!”
翻译4：看到帐篷，我感觉它一直在叹息着说，“我想体验外面的世界。”
4、Seeing sth , sb felt as if it had been doing and saying,”...”
看到某物，感觉某物好像在做某动作，并且说“（突出主题的话）”。
Seeing the tent, I felt as if it had been sighing and saying, “I want to experience the outside world.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
实战训练
Edun did not want to go on a hike. She especially did not want to go on a long hike in the mountains that led to a tiny cabin (小木屋) with no electricity and no running water. She wanted to stay home reading a book instead while wrapped in a warm blanket.
“Ready ” Mom asked cheerfully after breakfast. Edun looked out the window and only saw rain, lots of it. “Weshould go another day,” Edun suggested. “Maybe a hundred years from now.” She worried she would get tired on the hike. She worried about getting bored at the dark cabin. Mom said it was time to stop worrying and get into the car.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
实战训练
Edun’s brother, Will, was waiting in the garage, who wore a camera around his neck. Will was four years older than Edun and had climbed many more mountains. He’d started hiking when he was two and loved it.
Because it was raining, Edun had to wear her rain pants, her rain hat, her rain jacket, and her waterproof boots. Her jacket had a rough material on the inside. She didn’t like how it felt against her skin.
After about half an hour’s drive, they parked at a trailhead (登山口). The rain had stopped but the ground was still dripping(滴下) wet. “We’ll be there by afternoon!” Mom promised. The afternoon sounded far away.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
实战训练
Will identified a bird sitting on a nearby branch—“Fox sparrow!”—then he raced down the trail and was soon out of sight.
Edun rested under a pine tree. “You can’t force me to walk,” Edun said. “You’re right,” said her mom smilingly, standing under the tree, too, “But you will never know what may lie ahead and amaze us.”
注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph 1: Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail.
Paragraph 2: Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin.
范文
Paragraph 1:
Thinking Mom was right, Edun followed her down the trail. They passed a tiny clear waterfall, and its trickling sound cheered her up. ① To her delight, as they walked on, the wet green woods had much to discover—animal tracks, wildflowers, little creeks. Soon they caught up with Will, who showed them his photos of a Fox sparrow on a branch. They walked past scratchy bushes, climbed gray rocks, and hiked through small trees. Edun laughed, “Mom, I’m a giant!” Unknowingly, they’d finished most of the climb.
范文
Paragraph 2:
Twenty minutes later, they saw the cabin. Edun and Will raced up the hill. Inside the small cozy cabin, ② Seeing the faraway meadows, lakes and mountains through the window, Edun felt as if the new world had been waving and saying, “Welcome!” That night, they stayed up late to watch the stars. ③ What excited her was that she took a perfect photo of them. Hugging Mom with a big smile, Edun whispered, “Thank you for bringing me here!” ④ She felt a great sense of joy welling up in her heart and surging through her. ⑤ It was the wonderful journey and precious family time that made this day unforgettable forever.
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