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Emotion description in continuation writing
读后续写之情绪描写
年份卷别 话题情境 侧重点
2025年高考Ⅰ 主人公因狗和哥哥产生隔阂 动作描写
心理描写
2024年高考Ⅰ&II 主人公因没拿现金而无法给出租车司机支付车费 动作描写
心理描写
2023高考Ⅰ&II 主人公因写作困难而不愿参加英文作文比赛 动作描写
心理描写
2022高考Ⅰ&II 残疾的David因害怕别人嘲笑不敢参与越野赛 动作描写
心理描写
2021高考Ⅰ&II 给母亲庆祝母亲节 动作描写
心理描写
高考考情分析
How to make character’s emotions vivid
in continuation writing
Don’t tell, show
Seeing Pang Ju was so cruel, Zhen Huan realized that she had been cheated. Shocked and desperate, she expressed her confusion . Suddenly, a wave of sadness took hold of her. She was so sad that she burst out crying. With eyes filled with tears, Zhen Huan finally knew that she was wrong.
She was shocked.
She was confused.
She was sad.
She was crying.
赏析比较
telling
showing
Useful tricks to show vividly
happy/excitement
I was incredibly excited.
I felt I was on top of the world.
I jumped up and down with excitement.
I smiled from ear to ear,showing my bright teeth.
facial expressions
body action
hyperbole 夸张
My eyes sparkled with excitement.
My face lit up with a bright smile.
多积累
sadness
I was extremely sad.
With tears filled with eyes ,I couldn’t help crying loudly.
I was so sad that I buried my face in my hands
and cried.
facial expressions
body action
眼中充满泪水，我情不自禁地大声哭了 。
我是如此的伤心以至于我掩面哭泣（bury...in...） 。
nervousness
我很紧张地走到舞台上。
I walked onto the stage nervously.
I walked onto the stage with my heart pounding with nervousness.
I walked onto the stage with my legs trembling
随着我的心紧张地跳（pound），我走上了舞台。
我走上了舞台,我的腿发抖（tremble）。
body action
Six useful sentences
a wave/burst of + 情感名词 + seized(抓住） /swept over (涌上）/took hold of（控制）/welled up in sb (一种 ... 涌上心头)
Eg：1. A strong wave of fear swept over him and he couldn’t say a single word. 一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身，他一个字也说不来。
万能句型1
A wave of +sadness/excitement/regret+swept over/seized/took hold of /welled up in sb.
A strong wave of excitement swept over him .
一阵强烈的兴奋涌上他心头。
A strong burst of excitement seized him .
A strong wave of excitement took hold of/welled up in him .
Practice
升级：
句首可以加上Upon doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
一听到老师所说的，她就感到一股兴奋感涌上了她的心头。(2023年全国卷)
Upon hearing what the teacher said, she felt a wave of excitement took hold of her.
一看到这个申请表(application form)，我就觉得一阵担心涌上心头。
Upon seeing the application form, I felt a wave of worry swept over me/welled up in me.
万能句型2
情感adj.1+ and+ 情感adj.2, sb. did sth.
Eg: 1. Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone.
1._________________________(骄傲和兴奋的) , David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line. （2022全国1&2卷）
2. 惊讶又感动，妈妈拥抱了我们并流下了喜悦的泪水。（2021全国1&2卷）
Proud and excited
Surprised and moved,my mother hugged us and shed tears of joy.
Practice
body action
facial expressions
万能句型3
So+情感adj.+was/were+主语+that从句 某人是如此的...以致于...
1.我如此的羞愧以至于感觉自己的脸在燃烧。
I was so ashamed that I could feel my face was burning.
So ashamed was I that I could feel my face was burning .
So nervous was David that his legs trembled violently.
Practice
David是如此紧张以至于双腿剧烈地发抖（tremble）.（2022全国1&2卷）
我是如此地尴尬以至于恨不得找个地缝钻进去.（2025全国1卷）
So embrassed was I that I wished the ground would open and swallow me.
body action
万能句型4
(much) to one’s + 情绪名词，sb did sth.
让我惊讶的是，我在这个比赛中获得了第一名.（2022全国1&2卷）
Much to my surprise/amazement,I got the first prize in the competition.
让我们失望的是，我们没有足够的钱去买一份礼物.（2021全国1卷）
Much to our disappointment,we didn’t have enough money to buy a gift.
万能句型5
表情绪的adj + as +sb was/were, sb did sth.尽管某人...,某人做了...
Eg: 1. Sad as he was, he comforted me gently.
尽管他很紧张，他深吸了一口气（take a deep breath）迫使自己冷静了下来。(2024全国1&2)
Nervous as/though he was, he took a deep breath and forced himself to calm down.
As he was sad, he comforted me gently.
万能句型6
with+身体部位+doing/done, sb did sth.
With eyes filled with regretful tears, sb did sth...
With eyes glittering with joy(眼中闪着喜悦的光芒), sb did sth...
With tears rolling down his face(眼泪在脸上滑落), sb did sth...
With heart pounding with tension(心紧张地怦怦跳), sb did sth...
With legs trembling and palms sweating(双腿发抖，掌心流汗)
With eyes widening with surprise(惊讶地瞪大眼睛)
Word Bank
多积累
With eyes filled with regretful tears, I sincerely apologised to my brother.
眼含悔恨的泪水，我真诚地向哥哥道歉了。（2025全国1）
With eyes filled with regretful tears, sb did sth...
With eyes glittering with joy, sb did sth...
With heart beating with happiness, sb did sth...
With arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking, sb did sth
Word Bank
1.他站在那儿，眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。 （句式6）
2.当他看着食物时，巨大的悲伤涌上心头。(句式1)
3.他太痛苦了以至于他的手颤抖(tremble)着。（句式3）
4.悲伤又绝望，他双手掩面哭泣。（句式2）
5.尽管他极度悲伤，他不敢放声大哭。（句式5）
Consolidation
He stood there,with tears rolling down his face.
Upon looking at the food, a wave of sadness swep over him.
So sorrowful was he that his hands trembled.
Sad and desperate, he buried his face in his hands.
Extremely painful as he was,he didn’t dare to cry loudly .
body action
facial expressions
Compulsory:高考读后续写应用翻译练习（2021年-2024年）
1. 他们的母亲既震惊又骄傲，轻声说：“谢谢，我的孩子们.”(句型2)
2. 让他们欣慰的是，在父亲的指导下，他们成功地做好了早餐。（句型4）
3. 看到David苍白的脸，我感到一种同情的心情涌上心头,这让我很难过。(句型1)
4. 她是如此的高兴以至于紧紧地抱着双胞胎，喜悦的泪水夺眶而出。（句型3）
Homework
Optional: Finish the writing task
Children’day is coming. Tom’s parents said that they would take him to the zoo .Hearing this, Tom jumped up with excitement. His face lit up and his eyes shone.
The next morning, they set out early. Tom was delighted all the way with the birds singing songs for him. When they got to the zoo, Tom saw many toys on sales(出售)at the gate of the zoo. He wanted to buy a car toy. His father wouldn’t buy it for him. Tom cried and rolledon the ground.
Para.1____________________________________（看着Tom，怒一股愤怒涌上父亲心头并想要揍他。)__________________________________________________，他母亲尽管不愿意，但还是他买了一个。)______________________________________让他开心的是，他一直在动物园里玩这辆车。)There were many lovely animals and people in the zoo. He was attracted by the lions. Suddenly, he couldn’t see his parents.
Para.2________________(他是如此的害怕以至于脸都变白了。)_____________(沮丧和无助,泪如泉涌,他不知道下一步该怎么办);Fortunately, with the help of a kind person, he found his parents. After a day’s play, _____________________.（汤姆太累了，很快就睡着了。）
Homework
你不屑做的基础题里
藏着英语读后续写的地道表达；
你不经意疏忽的阅读段落里
藏着你书面表达的锦囊妙句；
你不愿回顾的累累学案里
有着“词到用时方恨少”的一声叹息；
你背的每一个单词，每一个高级句型，
精心构思的每一篇书面表达，
终将回报你，
化作你对抗生活的铠甲。

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