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2. Whose birthday is it
Unit 6
Plan for Yourself
人教版 英语（八年级上册）
Section B
3a-3c
2. Whose birthday is it
01
02
03
学习目标
能够基于 “撰写新年决心” 的写作需求，在阅读 3a 范文、完成 3b“提升方向 — 决心” 表格梳理后，在教师引导下开展写作准备，梳理 “描述新年自我提升决心” 类短文的结构，确保要点逻辑清晰、无遗漏。
能够将本单元所学与 “新年决心、自我提升” 相关的词汇、阐述计划及说明意义的句型迁移应用到自己关于 “新年决心” 的短文写作中，确保词汇选用贴合主题、句型运用准确且符合语境。
通过自评和互评改进写作初稿，优化语篇结构、丰富内容表达、打磨语言表达，提升 “新年决心” 类短文的写作质量。
2. Whose birthday is it
Pre-writing
01 写前
Look and say.
As the year draws to a close, what resolutions do you want to make for the coming new year
Look and say.
painting
cooking
Learning an instrument
taking photos
planting
dancing
Look and say.
exercising
Healthy eating habit
Good mood
Teeth protection
No staying up late
regular physical check-up
Look and say.
Personal growth
Creativity
Time management
Confidence
while-writing
Choose the right answer.
What is the structure of the passage
1
2
3
4
A
1
2
3
4
B
1
3
4
C
2
Read the text.
3a
(1) How many New Year’s resolutions does the author have
Three.
(2) What are they
Taking up a new hobby, going to get fitter and studying English.
Read the text and complete the table.
3a
To improve ... Resolution
1.
2.
3.
singing
Join the school music club to improve singing
fitness
Do jogging, push-ups and sit-ups to get fitter
English
Study for two more hours each weekend
Read and learn
As the year draws to a close, it is the perfect time to think about the changes we want to make in the coming new year. We can improve our lives by learning something new, forming good habits, working harder at something, or even improving our relationships with others. I hope to make next year better than this one, so I am going to make three resolutions.
即将结束；即将完成
在即将到来的新的一年里
/f m/ v. （使）形成；组成
n. 类型；形式
/r le n p/
n. 关系；联系
The first one is about taking up a new hobby. I am going to join the school music club to improve my singing! I think singing is a great activity. And my friends and family all love my singing.
I am also going to get fitter. Besides jogging, I am going to do push-ups and sit-ups. I feel energetic after I exercise. I’m sure I’m going to be a healthier and happier person.
Last but not least, my English isn’t good enough, so I am going to study for two more hours each weekend. It might be hard, but I am going to get a lot better at English!
push-up / p p/ n. 俯卧撑
sit-up 仰卧起坐
energetic / en d et k/
adj. 精力充沛的；充满活力的
最后但同等重要的
Write down the things you want to improve and your resolutions.
3b
To improve ... My resolution
1.
2.
3.
Physical health
Go jogging for 30 minutes every morning and eat more vegetables.
Painting skills
Take a painting class every weekend and practice drawing for an hour daily.
Time management
Make a daily to-do list and follow it strictly, and avoid procrastinating(拖延).
Use the notes above to write three paragraphs. In each paragraph, write what you are going to improve and how.
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3c
Use the notes above to write three paragraphs. In each paragraph, write what you are going to improve and how.
3c
写作指导
文本体裁
话题分析
要求写三段话，每一段的内容都是自己想要提高改善的方面，以及自己如何进行的方式。
本文根据3c提示的内容，三段内容都是介绍自己的改善计划，因此是说明文。
人称时态
以第一人称为主；以一般现在时与一般将来时be going to do结构为主。
(1) How many paragraphs are there in the article
(2) What is the structure of this article
Four
Observe and think
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2-4
总述段落
分述内容
(3) How does the first paragraph narrate(叙述)
First sentence: Situation
Third sentence: author’s decisions
Second sentence: examples or ways
(4) How about paragraph 2 to 4
improvement
resolutions/actions
improvement+ actions
improve-ment
resolutions/actions
Feeling
The first one is about taking up a new hobby.
I am also going to get fitter
I am going to join the school
music club to improve my singing!
Besides jogging, I am going to do push-ups and sit-ups.
Last but not least, my English isn’t good enough, so I am going to study for two more hours each weekend.
feeling
I think...
I feel...
It might be hard, but I...
写自己新年决心。用一般将来时态，用 be
going to 结构。
根据3c中的要点提示，模仿3a中的写作方式。
通读一遍自己的短文，看是否通顺和正确。
写作指导：
写作结构：
Step 1 Beginning(开头)：Introduction(介绍)
(Resolutions are …)
Step 2 Body(正文)：Tell opinions(列举观点)
(I’m going to … /I will …)
Step 3 Ending(结尾)：conclusion(总结)
(It is important to …)
If a thing is worth doing it is worth worth doing well
Write about yourself
For next year
I’m going to
I will ...
I want to ...
I plan to ...
take up a new hobby
try a new sport
play more sports to keep fit
spend more time with family
help my friends more
read more books in English
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谋篇布局
引出话题
具体介绍
表明决心
Hey, Jane! Here I want to share my two other resolutions with you.
My first resolution is about improving...
...eat more fruit and vegetables...
My second resolution is...
...take up the same hobby...
...care about my friends...
I am sure my resolutions can come true.
↓
↓
↓
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2. Whose birthday is it
While-writing
02 写中
Writing time
2. Whose birthday is it
03 写后
After writinging
Resolutions are promises to yourself. They may help to make you a better person and to make your life easier.
I made two resolutions at the beginning of the year. The first resolution is about my physical health. I‘ m going to exercise more and eat less junk food. After all, health comes first. The second resolution is about my studies. I want to get better grades, so I’ m going to study harder. Taking more exercise and asking for teachers‘ help are also good ways for me to make progress.
Although it' s difficult to keep the resolutions, I will try my best to do it.
Sample writing 1
Beginning(开头)
Body(正文)
What Why
What Why How
I aim to become a better version of myself, so I'll set three resolutions.
First, to improve my spoken English, I'll have English conversations with my study-buddy(学习同伴) for 20 minutes daily. This way, I can practice pronunciation and learn new expressions, making my English sound more natural.
Second, I want to be more organized. I'll use a planner to write down tasks and deadlines. Checking it every morning and night will help me manage time well and avoid forgetting important things.
Third, to get healthier, I'll drink more water instead of sugary drinks. Having a water bottle with me and sipping from it regularly will keep my body hydrated and full of energy.
Sample writing 2
I hope I will be better than now, so I am going to make three resolutions.
Firstly, I want to improve my painting skills. I'll join the school art club. There, I can learn from teachers and practice with classmates. Drawing regularly will help me create better artworks and express my ideas more vividly.
Besides, I also want to get better at sports, so I'll play basketball every weekend. Running on the court and practicing shooting will make me stronger and more agile. Teamwork in games will also boost my communication skills.
Last but not least, to enhance my math, I'll do extra exercises each evening. Focusing on problem-solving and reviewing key concepts will help. I'll ask the teacher for help if stuck, aiming for better grades and a deeper understanding.
Sample writing 3
Show Time
Checklist Assessment(评价) Total stars Your stars
Complete in content(内容完整) ★★★★★
Grammatical accuracy(语法正确) ★★★★★
Richness of vocabulary(词汇丰富) ★★★★★
Neatness of handwriting(书写美观) ★★★★★
Finish the checklist with your partner.
句
讲
练
例
1. We can improve our lives by learning something new, forming good habits, working harder at something, or even improving our relationships with others.
我们可以通过学习新东西、养成良好习惯、在某件事上更努力，甚至改善与他人的关系来提升我们的生活质量 。
by 是介词，意为 “通过；凭借（某种方式、手段）” ，后常接名词、代词或动名词（即动词 - ing 形式 ），用来表明做某事的途径、方式 。
例如：They solved the problem by discussing it together.
他们通过一起讨论解决了问题 。
我通过看英语电影来学习英语。(翻译句子)
I study English by watching English movies.
句
讲
As the year draws to a close, it is the perfect time to think about the changes we can make in the coming new year.
“draw to a close” 是固定短语，意为 “接近结束；即将结束”，其中 “draw” 在这里表示 “逐渐移动；渐渐变得”，“close” 作名词，意为 “结束；结尾”。
练
例
The meeting drew to a close at around 5 o'clock.
当假期即将结束时，我们应该为新学期做准备。(翻译句子)
As the holiday draws to a close, we should prepare for the new term.
句
讲
The first one is about taking up a new hobby.
“take up” 是动词短语，此处意为 “开始从事；着手做（新的活动、爱好等）”，后接名词或动名词作宾语。
练
例
She took up painting after she retired.
He decided to take up (dance) after school.
dancing
句
讲
Besides jogging, I am going to do push-ups and sit-ups.
“besides” 是介词，意为 “除…… 之外（还有）”，强调包含后面所提的内容。
练
例
Besides Tom, there are five other students in the classroom.
除了语文书，我还带了数学书和英语书。(翻译句子)
Besides the Chinese book, I also brought a math book and an English book.
句
讲
Last but not least, my English isn’t good enough, so I am going to study for two more hours each weekend.
“last but not least” 是固定表达，用于列举事物时，意为 “最后但同样重要的是”，通常用于引出最后一个要点。
练
例
Last but not least, we should learn to be kind to others.
最后但同样重要的是，我们要保持良好的作息习惯。(翻译句子)
Last but not least, we should keep a good routine.
As the party ______ (draw) to a close, everyone started to say goodbye.
She plans _______ (take) up a new hobby like dancing next month.
_______ (beside) reading, he also likes playing chess in his free time.
Last but not least, you should ____(be) careful when crossing the road.
When the game ______ (draw) to a close, the players felt a bit tired.
Why not ______ (take) up a new activity such as swimming to keep fit
Last but not least, remember _________ (finish) your homework on time.
He wants ______ (take) up a new instrument, maybe the guitar.
draws
to take
Besides
be
draws
to finish
to go
take
Exercises
2. Whose birthday is it
Homework
【基础作业】
请根据所学语言点，写一篇关于 “New Term, New Me” 的短文。
【进阶作业】
假设你是学校英语社团的成员，需要写一篇倡议书，鼓励同学们在新的一年里制定积极的计划并坚持执行。
【拓展作业】
选择一个你感兴趣的名人研究其成长经历中关于 “自我提升” 的故事，写一篇短文。
2. Whose birthday is it
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