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Reading for Writing
Unit 4
SEEING THE TRUE NORTH VIA RAIL:
TORONTO AND MONTREAL
Lead in
What is the relationship between these two passages according to the titles
Seeing the True North via Rail: Vancouver and the Heart of Canada
Seeing the True North via Rail:
Toronto and Montreal
The first leg of Li Daiyu and her cousin’s journey
The next leg of their trip
路程（或赛程）
Read for structure
Part 1 : Para ___________
1-4
5-9
10
Part 2 : Para ___________
Part 3 : Para ___________
What they experienced in _______.
What they experienced in ________.
Time on the train to _________.
Text Type:______________.
In order of __________.
travel journal
time/space
Toronto
Montreal
Halifax
Read for details
Scan the passage and complete the table with information from the passage.
_______________
_______________
Place
Saw
Did
Felt
Toronto
Montreal
saw ______________ rising from the
Niagara Falls;
_______________of
glass and steel;
_____________ cars;
________________ in French;
people spoke English with _______________;
unique Quebec
______ and _______.
____________ the CN Tower;
_____________ in Chinatown;
visited lovely _______
and ___________ in their workplaces along St Paul Street;
_______________
in a restaurant.
Read for details
Experience in Toronto
_________
Place
Saw
Did
Felt
Toronto
saw ____________
rising from the
Niagara Falls;
_______________of
glass and steel;
________________
cars;
skyscrapers
old-fashioned
____________ the CN Tower;
____________ in Chinatown;
went up
misty clouds
met Lin Fei
astonished
Read for details
Place
Saw
Did
Felt
Montreal
________________
in French;
people spoke English with ______________;
unique Quebec
___________ and
_______________.
visited lovely _______ and ________ in their workplaces along St Paul Street;
_________________
in a restaurant
alongside the St
Lawrance River.
an accent
culture
traditions
shops
artists
surprised
signs and ads
met a photographer
Experience in Montreal
Read for language
Travel journal about
the rail journey
people
time
places
feeling
sceneries/activities
who
when
where
what
how
Analyze the features
Draw on the map a simple route of the girls' trip across Canada.
1.
01
brief introduction
02
what you experienced
03
conclusion
Summary : How to write a travel journal
structure
and
content
03
04
scenery
food
architecture
art
tips
discourse marker
sensory description
essential elements
aste delicious
food
ealize how big the world is
ppreciate
different
culture
isit
different
places
njoy
beautiful
scenery
eave happy
memory
Why do you
T
R
A
V
E
L
T
R
A
V
E
L
Travel Try Trek
行走天下
游历 · 知新 · 乐行
to various places
different cultures
with pleasure
广闻博识
步履生风
Why do we travel
Writing
Travel
Journal
短文可以分为三部分：
第一部分：
第二部分：
第三部分：
篇章结构：
1.时态：正文________ ,景色，感想________
2.旅游进程时要有一个清晰明确的顺序。
注意事项：
过去时
现在时
开门见山，旅行概况。
重点介绍旅游过程，描述所见所闻。
可适当表达自己的内心情感写景+抒情
谈此次旅行的感受，总体评价。
who
when
where
what
how
Suppose you were Li Daiyu’s cousin Mary, write a travel journal about 80 words, telling us about your trip in Beijing.
Write a travel journal
Para 1：开门见山
在国庆期间/带着兴奋，我参观了北京的一个著名景点---长城。
During the National Day, I visited one of the most famous tourist sights in Beijing---the Great Wall.
With great excitement,
1. 我早起乘坐长途汽车去了长城，它坐落在...。
2. 北京一如既往，天气温和晴朗。
3. 从高处看，长城的群山和森林看起来很巨大。
4. 最让我印象深刻的是，此文化遗址，追溯超过3000年。
travel style
travel style
travel style
I arouse early to take the coach to the Great wall, which is located in...
Para 2：见闻感
As is typical of Beijing, it is mild and clear.
What impressed me most was the cultural heritage site which/that dates back over 3000 years.
，which took my breath away with its exceptional beauty.
我惊叹于这极其的美。
Seen from the top, the rolling hills and forests looks massive.
5. 除了欣赏壮丽的山峰和森林，旅行的亮点之一是能买到许多不同的手工艺品和古董。
In addition to seeing spectacular mountain peaks and forests, one highlight of my trip was being able to buy various crafts and antiques.
travel style
travel style
travel style
Looking at the impressive scenery, I agreed that it was the most awesome journey I had ever taken.
Para 3：总评
看着美丽的风景，我认为这是我经历过最棒的一次旅行。
Suppose you were Li Daiyu’s cousin Mary, write a travel journal about 80 words, telling us about your trip in Shanghai.
Write a travel journal
Opening Sentences
①怀着无比期待的心情，我抵达了上海 —— 这座被誉为 “东方明珠” 的城市，我早已对它心向往之。
With great anticipation, I arrived in Shanghai, known as the "Pearl of the East", I had long dreamed of visiting it.
过去分词短语作定语（known as）+ 并列结构（and 连接两个分句）
②告别了家乡的宁静，我踏上了上海的旅程，这座城市的多元与繁华，从一开始就深深吸引着我。
Having left the peace of my hometown, I embarked on the trip to Shanghai, and the city’s diversity and prosperity deeply attracted me from the very beginning.
现在分词完成式(Having left)作状语 +名词作定语(diversity and prosperity)
Body Sentences
①我漫步在朱家角古镇，青石板路蜿蜒曲折，古桥横跨小河，这样的景致让我仿佛穿越回了古代。
I wandered around Zhujiajiao Ancient Town, where the bluestone roads wound through the town and ancient bridges straddled the small rivers, such scenery making me feel as if I had traveled back to ancient times.
非限制性定语从句(where 引导)+ 独立主格结构(such scenery making...)
②登上东方明珠电视塔，我俯瞰着整个上海城区，车流如织，高楼林立，一派繁华景象让我叹为观止。
Climbing to the top of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, I overlooked the entire Shanghai urban area. With endless streams of cars and countless high-rise buildings, the prosperous scene amazed me greatly.
现在分词作状语(Climbing...)+ with 复合结构(with + 名词 + 介词短语)
③在一家老字号餐馆，我品尝了正宗的本帮菜，红烧肉肥而不腻，糖醋排骨酸甜可口，每一道菜都让我回味无穷。
In a time-honored restaurant, I tasted authentic Shanghainese cuisine. The braised pork in brown sauce was fatty but not greasy, and the sweet and sour ribs were tangy and delicious, each dish leaving a lasting impression on me.
形容词短语作表语 (fatty but not greasy) + 现在分词作结果状语 (leaving...)
④我参观了上海博物馆，馆内陈列的青铜器、瓷器和书画作品，让我深深感受到了中国传统文化的博大精深。
I visited the Shanghai Museum, where the displayed bronzes, porcelains, and calligraphy and painting works made me deeply appreciate the profoundness and extensiveness of traditional Chinese culture.
定语从句（where 引导）+ 名词短语作主语（bronzes, porcelains, and calligraphy and painting works）
Closing Sentences
①上海的每一处风景、每一种味道都让我流连忘返，这趟旅程不仅开阔了我的眼界，更成为了我与黛玉分享的珍贵话题。
Every scenery and every flavor in Shanghai made me reluctant to leave. This trip not only broadened my horizons but also became a precious topic to share with Daiyu.
not only...but also... 并列结构 + 固定短语(broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界)
②虽然旅行即将结束，但上海的传统韵味与现代气息交织的独特魅力，已深深烙印在我的心中。我会把这份美好珍藏永远。
Although the trip is coming to an end, the unique charm of Shanghai, which combines traditional elegance with modern vitality, has been deeply engraved in my heart. I will cherish this beauty forever.
让步状语从句（although 引导）+ 定语从句（which 引导）
Closing Sentences
③上海就像一本耐人寻味的书，每一页都藏着惊喜。我已经开始期待下一次重逢，也盼着尽快把这些精彩的经历讲给黛玉听。
Shanghai is like an intriguing book, with surprises hidden on every page. I have already started looking forward to the next reunion and am eager to tell Daiyu all these wonderful experiences as soon as possible.
明喻修辞（like）+ 现在分词作定语（hidden）+ 并列谓语（have started...and am eager...）
With great excitement, I arrived in Shanghai, known as the "Pearl of the East", I had long dreamed of visiting it.
I wandered around Zhujiajiao Ancient Town, where the bluestone roads wound through the town and ancient bridges straddled the small rivers, such scenery making me feel as if I had traveled back to ancient times. In a time-honored restaurant, I tasted authentic Shanghainese cuisine—the braised pork in brown sauce was fatty but not greasy, and the sweet and sour ribs were tangy and delicious. Later, climbing to the top of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, I overlooked the prosperous urban area with endless cars and high-rises, which amazed me greatly.
Every scenery and every flavor in Shanghai made me reluctant to leave. This trip not only broadened my horizons but also became a precious topic to share with you.
voice yourself
“It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.”
读万卷书不如行万里路
在一段足够远的旅行中，你会遇到内心的自己。
----大卫 米切尔(英国作家)
名词(短语)作同位语
After Li Daiyu and her cousin arrived in Toronto, the largest and wealthiest city in Canada, they only had a few hours to kill before they had to proceed to the next leg of their trip to Montreal, so they went on a tour of the city.
李黛予和她的表妹来到加拿大最大、最富有的城市多伦多后，离出发前往下一站蒙特利尔之前只有几个小时的时间，于是她们就在多伦多逛了逛。
教材原句中“the largest and wealthiest city in Canada”作同位语，对Toronto进行解释说明。
可充当同位语的结构/成分：
(1)名词(短语)、代词；
My friend Lucy, a passionate lover of traditional Chinese culture, accompanied me to Yuyuan Garden. 我的朋友露西 —— 一位热爱中国传统文化的人，陪我去了豫园。
They all, local guides and volunteers, helped us find the way to the restaurant.他们所有人 —— 当地的向导和志愿者，帮我们找到了去餐馆的路。
名词(短语)作同位语
After Li Daiyu and her cousin arrived in Toronto, the largest and wealthiest city in Canada, they only had a few hours to kill before they had to proceed to the next leg of their trip to Montreal, so they went on a tour of the city.
李黛予和她的表妹来到加拿大最大、最富有的城市多伦多后，离出发前往下一站蒙特利尔之前只有几个小时的时间，于是她们就在多伦多逛了逛。
(2)从句。同位语从句往往用来说明某些比较抽象的名词的实际内容或对该名词作进一步解释。这类名词常见的有fact、 plan、 view、 idea、 belief、 opinion、 possibility、 doubt、 evidence、 word、 question等。
I hold the belief that Shanghai is a perfect mix of tradition and modernity.
我坚信上海是传统与现代的完美结合。
I had the idea that I should record every interesting moment with photos.
我曾有过这样的想法，即应该用照片记录下每一个有趣的瞬间。
【完成句子/句式升级】
(1)当我第一次独自旅行时，我不知道该做什么准备。
The first time I took a trip alone，I had no idea ________________________________．
what preparations I should make
(2)关于食物是否对学生的健康产生不良影响，存在一些疑问。
There is some doubt _______________________________________
___________________．
(3)Shanghai is one of the biggest cities in China. It has developed rapidly in recent years.
→_________________________________________，has developed rapidly in recent years. (名词短语作同位语)
whether the food have a bad effect
Shanghai, one of the biggest cities in China
on students' health
Ⅰ.品句填词
1．It's high time that we ________ (为……干杯) our friendship with a glass of wine, recalling all the wonderful memories.
2．_______________ (广告) persuade us that newer is better and that we will be happier with the latest products.
3．Kent __________(继续) to drive. He stopped at a petrol station where he wanted to purchase gallons of gasoline.
toasted
Advertisements
proceeded
4．I was a fat, awkward child with a high-pitched voice and a heavy southern a______．
5．C________ to popular belief, older people generally do not want to live with their children.
6．To our a______________, the boss will work on the project in association with another small firm.
ccent
ontrary
stonishment
7．Discover why artists and ______________(摄影师) continue to be drawn to this special place.
8．These small creatures have adapted to living __________ (与……一起) humans—similar to pet dogs.
photographers
alongside
Ⅱ.词块运用
1．The first experiment __________________________________(与我们最初的预期相反) and therefore, we were considering 1how to improve our project.
2．They ___________________________________ (对进步感到惊讶) made by the students over just one semester.
3．When asked about the secret of his success, he said that he ____________________________________ (他的成功很大程度上要归功于他的老师们).
was contrary to our initial expectations
were astonished at/by the progress
owed much of his success to his teachers
4．Before we _________________________ (继续下一篇课文), let's go over what we have learned.
5．________________(在远处), I suddenly heard someone screaming for help.
proceed to the next text
In the distance
Ⅲ.根据汉语提示并使用本部分句式结构完成下面的小短文
Dear Peter，
I am more than delighted to know that you are coming to China for the summer holiday. Here, I'd like to recommend Hangzhou, 1._____________________________________________________[一座在国内外都享有盛誉的城市；名词(短语)作同位语].
a city enjoying a high reputation both at home and abroad
The city possesses picturesque scenery, ancient architecture, beautiful legends and traditional cuisine. Of all these scenic spots, the West Lake is undoubtedly my top recommendation. Besides, Lingyin Temple and Leifeng Pagoda are also attracting an increasing number of tourists because of their unique architectural style and beautiful historical stories. As the host city of The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou in 2023, Hangzhou greeted the world in an open and inclusive manner. So, we can 2.__________________________________________(看到友好的当地人准备提供帮助； see＋宾语＋宾语补足语)whenever necessary, which added to the charm of the city.
see friendly locals ready to provide help
3．______________________________________________________________(直到你亲身体验过后，才会欣赏到它的美丽；not...until...). I believe you will find your trip enjoyable and worthwhile.
Yours，
Li Hua
It's not until you experience it in person that you can appreciate
its beauty

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