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如何写与成长经历相关的文章
本单元以“成长的痛苦与收获”为话题，主要围绕
与家人有效沟通、应对同辈压力、正确看待失败与挑战
等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面：
1.分享自己应对压力、困难或挑战的成长经历；
2.介绍某位名人的成长故事，并分享感悟；
3.谈论成长的意义及收获等。
写作时，人称多用第一人称和第三人称，时态以一
般现在时、一般过去时或现在完成时为主。
“艰难困苦，玉汝于成”。所有成长都始于破茧突
围的过程，从逆境走向成功。请你结合下面的图示信息，
以“Growing up”为题写一篇英语短文，分享你成长中的一
次挫折或困难，并讲述你的应对之道及这次经历带给你
的启示。#1
要求：1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Growing up
Growing up often comes with troubles and
difficulties. Here I’d like to share one of my own
experiences.
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审主题：成长经历
审体裁：记叙文
审人称：以第一人称为主
审时态：以一般过去时为主
审要点：成长中的挫折或困难、应对之道、启示
词 汇 感 受 upset 难过的 disappointed 失望的
nervous 紧张的 worried 担忧的
heartbreaking 使人心碎的 grateful 感激的
confident 自信的
can’t help doing sth. 忍不住做某事
cheer up （使）振作起来
词 汇 行 动 fail to do sth. 未能做到某事
encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
figure out problems 找出问题
make a study plan 制订学习计划
词 汇 行 动 ask sb. for advice 向某人寻求建议
have a talk with 和……谈话
give support 给予支持
prepare for 为……做准备 give up 放弃
词 汇 成 果 / 收 获 make progress 取得进步
take a turn 发生变化 grow up 成长，长大
succeed in sth. 在某方面取得成功
achieve success 取得成功
词 汇 成 果 / 收 获 build up confidence 树立信心
overcome difficulties 克服困难
keep trying 继续努力 learn from 从……中学
an opportunity to ……的机会
句 子 开头句
In life, every challenge is like a mountain to climb.
One such mountain I faced was... 在生活中，每一次
挑战都如同一座待攀登的山。我曾面对过这样一座高
山，那便是……
句 子 Growing up often comes with troubles and
difficulties. Here I’d like to share one of my own
experiences. 成长往往伴随着烦恼与困难。在此，我想分享一段我个人的经历。
句 子 中间句
1.经历及感受
I failed to win the speech competition I had
prepared for months. 我准备了好几个月的演讲比赛，
结果还是输了。
I felt so upset that I couldn’t help crying whenever
I thought of it. 我很难过，每当想到这件事就忍不住
哭泣。
句 子 2.解决方法
My friends encouraged me not to give up and
helped me figure out the problems. 我的朋友们鼓励
我不要放弃，还帮我找出了问题所在。
I realised that... 我意识到……
句 子 I made a study plan and practised English with my
classmates daily. 我制订了学习计划，每天和同学们一起练习英语。
I also asked my English teacher for advice. 我还向英语老师寻求了建议。
句 子 3.成果
I built up great confidence and succeeded in the
speech competition this term. 我树立了极大的信心，
并在这学期的演讲比赛中取得了成功。
I made great progress in... 我在……方面取得了巨大
的进步。
句 子 结尾句
This experience has taught me that... 这次经历教会了我……
I know clearly that failure is not the end but an
opportunity to learn and grow. 我清楚地知道，失败
并非终点，而是一次学习与成长的机会。
As long as we keep trying, we can overcome any
difficulty. 只要我们继续努力，就能克服任何困难。
佳作展示
Growing up
Growing up often comes with troubles and
difficulties. Here I’d like to share one of my own
experiences.
①Last term, I failed to win the speech competition
I had prepared for months. ②At first, I felt so upset
that I couldn’t help crying whenever I thought of it.
③But my friends encouraged me not to give up and
helped me figure out the problems. I realised that I
didn’t practise enough and lacked confidence.
教材原句 I couldn’t help laughing at my heartbreaking words then.（教材P29）
④Then I made a study plan and practised English with
my classmates daily. ⑤I also asked my English teacher
for advice. Finally, I built up great confidence and
succeeded in the speech competition this term.
⑥Through this experience, I know clearly that failure
is not the end but an opportunity to learn and grow. ⑦
As long as we keep trying, we can overcome any
difficulty.
教材原句 I know clearly that failure lasts just a moment.（教材P29）
名师点评
本文条理清晰，行文流畅，句式丰富，是一篇不错
的范文。
①运用fail to do sth.结构，点明了“我”一次失败的经历。
②运用so... that...及can’t help doing sth.结构，表现出“我”
面对失败的悲伤情绪。
③运用encourage sb. to do sth.结构及短语give up、
figure out，表达了朋友对“我”的鼓励和帮助。
④⑤运用短语make a plan、ask sb. for advice等，说明
了“我”应对失败的积极行动。
⑥运用“I know clearly+that引导的宾语从句”描述了“我”
在这次成长经历中的收获。
⑦运用含as long as引导的条件状语从句的复合句总结全
文，升华主题。

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