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如何写与提供帮助及志愿活动相关的文章
本单元以“伸出援手”为话题，主要围绕帮助身边的
人和动物、传递善意等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉
及以下几个方面：
1.谈论帮助他人的重要性及意义；
2.讲述自己/他人伸出援手或接受帮助的经历；
3.分享自己参加志愿活动的经历及感受等。
讲述助人经历或受助经历时，时态以一般过去时为
主，人称多用第一人称和第三人称。
你对陌生人做过一些温暖的、善意的小事吗？或者你接
受过任何萍水相逢的援助吗？请你回顾过往，以“A small
act of kindness”为题写一篇英语短文，分享一段你帮助
他人或接受他人帮助的经历。
要点：1.What’s your experience about helping others or
getting help from others
2.What have you learnt from the experience
3.What will you do in the future
要求：1.短文须包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A small act of kindness
We don’t always need to do something special to
help others. Sometimes a small act of kindness can
make a big difference._____________________________
_________________________________________________
审体裁：记叙文
审主题：助人经历/受助经历
审人称：以第一人称为主
审时态：以一般过去时为主
审要点：事情的经过、感悟与收获、未来行动
词 汇 活 动 an act of kindness 善举
offer/give a helping hand 伸出援助之手
cross/walk across the road 过马路
wander on the corner of the street 在街角徘徊
call for help 呼救
词 汇 活 动 wave goodbye to 向……挥手告别
race against time 争分夺秒
raise money for 为……筹钱
词 汇 感 受 / 收 获 warmth 温暖 goodwill 好意 happy 快乐的
proud 骄傲的 meaningful 有意义的
a sense of achievement 成就感
bring happiness/joy to 给……带来快乐
make a difference 产生影响
词 汇 其 他 not only... but also... 不仅……而且……
people in need 需要帮助的人
be ready to do sth. 准备好/乐意做某事
with the help of 在……的帮助下
句 子 开头句
Sometimes a small act of kindness can make a big
difference. 有时，小小的善举就能产生很大的影响。
As we all know, kindness is a traditional Chinese
virtue. 众所周知，善良是中国传统美德。
句 子 中间句
Last Thursday, on my way back home, I saw an
elderly blind man wandering on the corner of the
street. 上周四，我在回家途中看到一位上了年纪的盲
人在街角徘徊。
句 子 After talking with the elderly man, I decided to
help him cross the road. 与老人交流后，我决定帮助
他过马路。
When we were walking across the road, the drivers
on the road all stopped their cars and waited
patiently. 当我们过马路时，路上的司机都停下车耐心
等候。
句 子 After we reached the other side, the elderly man
thanked me warmly. 我们到马路对面后，那位老人热
情地向我道谢。
I waved goodbye to him and went home happily. 我
向他挥手告别，高兴地回家了。
句 子 结尾句
_________Roses given, fragrance in hand. 赠人玫瑰，手有
余香。
Helping others can bring happiness not only to
others but also to ourselves. 帮助他人不仅能给别人
带来快乐，也能给自己带来快乐。
句 子 Helping others is helping ourselves as well. 帮助他人也是在帮助我们自己。
I’ll always be ready to offer a helping hand to
people in need. 我会随时准备好向需要帮助的人伸出
援手。
佳作展示
A small act of kindness
We don’t always need to do something special to
help others. Sometimes a small act of kindness can
make a big difference.
①Last Thursday, on my way back home, I saw an
elderly blind man wandering on the corner of the street.
②I thought there must be something for me to do.③
After talking with the elderly man, I decided to help
him cross the road. ④When we were walking across the
教材原句 There must be something for me to do. （教材P53）
road, the drivers on the road all stopped their cars and
waited patiently. After we reached the other side, the
elderly man thanked me warmly. I waved goodbye to
him and went home happily.
⑤From this experience, I ve learnt that helping
others can bring happiness not only to others but also to
ourselves. ⑥In the future, I’ll always be ready to offer
a helping hand to people in need.
教材原句 She had offered a helping hand to Wenchuan 12 years ago.（教材P61）
名师点评
本文要点齐全，语言流畅，条理清晰，是一篇不错
的习作。
①句运用see sb. doing sth.结构，点明了故事发生的背景。
②句运用情态动词must表肯定推测，准确表达出“我”的心
理活动。
③句运用decide to do sth.及help sb. do sth.结构，描述
了“我”的助人行为。
④用含有when引导的时间状语从句的复合句，表现出
“个人善意”到“他人善意”的传递。
⑤句运用not only... but also...句式，总结了助人的感悟与
收获。
⑥句运用be ready to do sth.和offer sth. to sb./sth.结构，
表明了自己未来的行动。

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