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如何写与自然探索相关的文章
本单元以“自然探索”为话题，主要围绕人类对自然
奥秘的探索，以及科研工作者的贡献与精神展开。与其相
关的写作角度通常涉及以下几个方面：
1.介绍某一自然发现的科学价值；
2.介绍某一科研人物的职业生涯与精神；
3.讲述自然探索的意义并呼吁探索自然。
写作时，可灵活运用第三人称与第一人称；时态上，
描述历史发现、人物经历用一般过去时，阐述科学价值、
呼吁展望用一般现在时或一般将来时，同时可运用事例、
数据等增强文本说服力与真实感。
科学家是民族的脊梁、国家的骄傲，更是青少年学习的
榜样，请以“A Great Scientist”为题，用英语写一篇演讲
稿，在英语课上向全班同学介绍屠呦呦。要点如下：#1
基本情况 1.1930年出生于浙江；
2.第一个获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性。
主要经历 1.1955年毕业于北京医学院，大学期间勤奋
刻苦；
2.多年来研读医学，尽管困难重重，她从不
放弃。
主要成就 1.努力推动中医走向世界；
2.发现了治疗疟疾的方法。
个人感悟 ……
A Great Scientist
Dear teachers and friends,
Scientists are the pride of our nation. Today I’m
happy to be here to tell you something about my hero
Tu Youyou._______________________________________
注意：
1.须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
2.词数不少于100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：Nobel Prize 诺贝尔奖 malaria 疟疾#1.3
审体裁：演讲稿
审主题：介绍科学家屠呦呦
审人称：以第三人称为主
审时态：一般过去时，一般现在时
审要点：基本情况、主要经历、主要成就、自身的感悟#1.8
词 汇 基本 情况 scientist 科学家 hero 英雄
be born in 出生在……
win the Nobel Prize 获得诺贝尔奖
词 汇 主要 经历 graduate from 毕业于……
hard-working 刻苦的
win praise from 获得……的好评
for many years 多年 challenge 挑战
difficulty 困难 study medicine研读医学give up 放弃
carry sth. out 进行某事；执行某事
carry on with sth. 继续某事
词 汇 主要 成就 make efforts to do sth. 努力做某事
promote the spread of traditional Chinese
medicine 推进中医的传播
discover 发现
a way to treat malaria 治疗疟疾的方法
save lives 拯救生命
词 汇 个人 感悟 learn from 向……学习
stick to dreams 坚持梦想
face challenges bravely 勇敢面对挑战
encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
never give up 永不放弃
句 子 开头句
Today I’m happy to be here to tell you something
about my hero Tu Youyou. 今天我很高兴在这里告诉
你们关于我的偶像屠呦呦的一些事情。
句 子 中间句
She was born in Zhejiang in 1930. 她于1930年出生
在浙江。
She is the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel
Prize. 她是首个获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性。
句 子 During her college years, she was hard-working and
won praise from her classmates and teachers. 大学期
间，她勤奋刻苦，受到同学和老师的好评。
She has studied medicine for many years. Even
though there were lots of difficulties, she never gave
up. 她多年来研读医学，尽管困难重重，但她从不放
弃。
句 子 She made great efforts to promote the spread of
traditional Chinese medicine to the world. 她做了很
大的努力来推动中医走向世界。
She discovered a way to treat malaria, which has
saved countless lives. 她发现了一种治疗疟疾的方
法，这一发现拯救了无数生命。
句 子 结尾句
I’ve learned that we should stick to our dreams and
keep working hard. 我学到了我们应该坚持梦想、不
断努力奋斗。
I know that we should never give up no matter
what we meet. 我知道无论遇到什么，我们都应该永
不放弃。
句 子 Her spirit encourages me to face challenges bravely
in my study and life. 她的精神鼓舞我在学习和生活
中勇敢面对挑战。
佳作展示
A Great Scientist
Dear teachers and friends,
Scientists are the pride of our nation. Today I’m
happy to be here to tell you something about my hero
Tu Youyou.
①Tu Youyou was born in Zhejiang in 1930 and
she is the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize.
In 1955, she graduated from Beijing Medical College.
During university, she worked hard and was highly
praised. For years，she insisted on medical research. ②
Even though she faced many difficulties, she never gave
up. ③She carried out her research with strong
determination for many years. She made great efforts to
promote the spread of traditional Chinese medicine to
the world. What’s more, she discovered a way to treat
malaria. This discovery has saved millions of lives
around the world.
教材原句 To carry out his research, he spent years in wild mountains and forests.（教材P76）
④From Tu Youyou, I know that we should never
give up and keep working hard to achieve our dreams.
Thank you for listening.
教材原句 However, thanks to a piece of amber,
scientists now know that this idea is wrong.（教材P68）
名师点评
本文涵盖所有要点，语言通顺，逻辑清晰，层次分明。
①使用动词不定式短语作后置定语，简单明了地介绍了
屠呦呦的身份。
②③使用含Even though引导的让步状语从句的复合句和
carry out 短语，突出屠呦呦的科研韧性。
④使用that引导的宾语从句点明了“我”的感悟，升华了文
章主题。

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