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(共30张PPT)
掌握润色升格技法
技法1　词汇升级，高端大气
根据高考应用文写作的评分标准来看，应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是作文取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以，在词汇亮化上应遵循以下三个原则：
原则1　求新求变
同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。
①(2025·全国一卷)I'm sure that this striking column won't fail to create a harmonious atmosphere for the whole class.
→I'm convinced that this eye-catching column won't fail to create a harmonious atmosphere for the whole class.
②(2024·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)It was such a good experience that I would always remember it.
→It was such an extraordinary/a memorable experience that I would always keep it in my mind.
原则2　求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要用复杂句式，有时准确使用几个单词就会让整个句子增色。
①(2025·全国一卷) I believe this column will be more interesting for the majority of our classmates.
→I hold the firm belief that this column will be more engaging for the majority of our classmates.
②(2024·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)The sunlight and the light wind made the whole scene come to life.
→The sunlight and the gentle breeze made the whole scene come to life.
原则3　短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。
①(2025·浙江卷1月)I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. Let's focus more on our academic tasks and use our time well on campus.
→I make a propose that we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. Let's focus more on our academic tasks and make good use of/take full advantage of our time on campus.
②(2024·全国甲卷)Firstly, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way for us to travel short distances.
→To begin/start with, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way for us to travel short distances.
③(2023·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)When it comes to speaking English, different students have different levels of fluency, which causes gaps among students.
→When it comes to speaking English, different students have different levels of fluency, which leads to gaps among students.
④(2023·全国乙卷)It is very important for us to master some basic living skills to prepare us for our future life.
→It is of vital/great importance for us to master some basic living skills to prepare us for our future life.
普通表达与其对应升级表达总结：
类型1　学校生活
普通表达 升级表达
能够
做某事 can do sth be capable of doing sth，be competent/qualified to do sth
努力
做某事 try to do sth spare no effort to do sth，strive/struggle to do sth
试图
做某事 try doing sth attempt/seek to do sth，make an attempt to do sth
普通表达 升级表达
参加 join (in)，
take part in participate in，get involved in, engage in
想做
某事 want to do sth can't wait to do sth，desire/long to do sth，be eager/anxious to do sth
专注于 focus on concentrate on，be absorbed in，be immersed in
帮助
某人 help sb do sb a favor，lend/give sb a hand，come to sb's assistance
普通表达 升级表达
忙于 be busy with be occupied with，be engaged in
即将
来临 be coming be around the corner，be approaching，be drawing near
利用，
使用 use make (good) use of，take advantage of，make the best of
类型2　动作行为
普通表达 升级表达
记住 remember keep/bear in mind that...，be engraved in one's mind/heart/memory
面对，面临 face be faced with，meet with，encounter
意识到 know，realize recognize，be aware of/that, come to realize
重视 value place a great value on，take sth seriously, be much concerned about，attach great importance/significance to，give priority to
建议 suggest/
advise that... make a propose that...，recommend that...
普通表达 升级表达
吸引某人 attract sb appeal to sb，hold great appeal for sb
相信 believe that...，
be sure that... hold the firm belief/view that...，be convinced that...
影响 affect have an effect/influence/impact on, make a difference (to)
造成，导致 cause contribute to，lead to，result in，bring about
照顾 look after，
take care of tend to，attend to
类型3　修饰形容
普通表达 升级表达
不同
种类的　 different kinds of a wide range of，a variety of，various，varieties of，all sorts of
大量的，
很多的 a large number of，a lot of a considerable number of，an overwhelming majority of，large quantities of，scores of，dozens of，countless, numerous
对……
有益 be useful to/for，be good for be of great benefit to, be beneficial to
普通表达 升级表达
由……
组成 be made up of consist of，be composed/comprised of
疲惫
不堪 be tired be worn out，feel exhausted
立即 immediately instantly, right away，without hesitation/delay
擅长 be good at be skilled at/in，have a gift for，have a good command of，be expert at/in
准时 on time on schedule，punctually
类型4　陈述事实
普通表达 升级表达
大家公认 people think that... it's generally
acknowledged/ believed that...
显然 clearly apparently，obviously
应该 should be supposed to，ought to，It is high time
关于 about in terms of，as for，in/with reference to，regarding，concerning，when it comes to...
普通表达 升级表达
有时 sometimes occasionally，once in a while，from time to time
不得不做 have to do have no choice/alternative but to do
引起人们
关注 attract people's attention arouse/draw people's concern
越来越
多的 more and more an increasing number of，a growing number of
我担
心…… I'm worried that... What makes me worried is that...，It worries me that...
普通表达 升级表达
很重要 be very
important be of great/vital
importance/ significance
应采取有效措施解决这个问
题 should take
effective measures
to solve
the problem effective measures ought to be taken to deal/cope with the problem
忽视 ignore fail to take...into account/consideration，turn a blind eye to
因为 because (of) on account of, owing to，due to
与……有关的 be related to be associated/concerned/connected with
技法2　句式多变，彰显文采
在高考作文中，若能恰当运用一些高级句式和复合句，可让句子脱颖而出、亮点纷呈，彰显考生的写作能力。换用句式时，应遵循“高级但不浮夸，多变却不离谱，复杂而不晦涩”的原则。
句式1　巧用副词和形容词，生动形象
在写作中，考生可将副词置于句首，增强文章的连贯性或表示强调，彰显句子的感彩，也可以将形容词置于句首或句末，增强情绪感染力，使句子更生动形象。
①(2025·全国二卷)Accordingly/Consequently，we truly value your contribution and believe your expertise will greatly enrich our readers.
②(2024·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)Greatly inspired by the fantastic scenery，I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond，surrounded by blooming flowers.
句式2　活用三大从句，丰富结构
三大从句的灵活运用能够彰显考生对英语语法的驾驭能力。巧用三大从句会让写作成功吸引阅卷老师的目光。
1．运用定语从句，让表述更丰满
①(2025·全国二卷)I'm writing to follow up on the article about Canadian sports you previously agreed to write for our school newspaper.
②(2025·成都市第二次适应性测试)Last week, I took part in an environmental protection works exhibition, which was organized by the school student union.
③(2025·辽宁重点中学协作体高考模拟)Our school will hold a community-based practical activity next weekend, whose primary aim is to cultivate students' awareness of caring for others and serving the society.
2．运用名词性从句，让表述更具体
①(2025·全国二卷)With our publication deadline approaching, I would like to gently remind you that the final version is due by March 15th.
②(2025·福九联盟联考)What touches me most is his kindness and willingness to help, no matter how big or small the problem is.
3．运用状语从句，让逻辑更清晰
①(2024·浙江卷1月)Next time you feel a bit sleepy and tired between classes，remember to stand up and stretch!
②(2024·浙江卷1月)It's such a simple and inexpensive activity that you can do it anywhere，even in a small place.
句式3　巧用非谓语，精简表达
①(2025·哈尔滨市四模)Aiming to enrich students' cultural life and showcase our remarkable talents, our school will hold a music festival which is scheduled for June 30th.
→Aimed at enriching students' cultural life and showcasing our remarkable talents, our school will hold a music festival scheduled for June 30th.
②(2024·全国甲卷)Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations，which gives the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
→Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations，giving the Chinese people access to different ways of travelling.
句式4　套用提分句式，升级表达
1．运用强调句，突出重点
①(2025·全国一卷)By reading about each other's experiences, we'll better understand our classmates and build stronger bonds.
→It's by reading about each other's experiences that we'll better understand our classmates and build stronger bonds.
②(2025·石家庄市质量检测)I didn't realize friends need open communication and their bond became even stronger until then.
→It was not until then that I realized friends need open communication and their bond became even stronger.(强调)
→Until then did I realize that friends need open communication and their bond became even stronger.(倒装)
2．运用倒装句，以示强调
①(2025·浙江卷1月)It may not only distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-esteem when the videos don't get the expected response.
→Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-esteem when the videos don't get the expected response.
②(2025·皖北协作区联考)As we were tired, we thought this activity was quite rewarding.
→Tired as we were, we thought this activity was quite rewarding.
③(2025·湖北省部分高中协作体统考)We can think positively, study effectively and live happily only with mental health.
→Only with mental health can we think positively, study effectively and live happily.
3．运用感叹句，传递情感
I was delighted to be one of the members in your team.
→How delighted I was to be one of the members in your team！
技法3　巧妙过渡，斐然成文
一篇布局错落有致、行文流畅的作文，不仅能从视觉上吸引阅卷老师，更能从文笔上打动阅卷老师，作文取得高分甚至是满分也就在情理之中了。
1．表示“起”的词/词组：generally speaking，to begin/start with，first of all，in the first place，as we know，as is known to all，as is shown in...等，用于开篇引出扩展句。
(2025·全国一卷)To begin with，this column would be fun and interactive because students can write short, creative descriptions of classmates or teachers, and readers can guess who is being described.
2．有关“承”的常用词语：after/after that/afterwards，after a few days，certainly，therefore，also/too，for example，at the same time，for this purpose，besides/what's more/additionally，from now on，in fact，similarly，in other words，no doubt，obviously，of course等，用来承接上文。
(2025·全国一卷)Additionally, it can also bring back beautiful memories and enhance our community awareness.
3．有关“转”的常用词语：after all，fortunately，however，anyway，in spite of，though/although，in/by contrast，on the contrary，even though，otherwise，still，unlike，as a matter of fact，yet，especially等，用来表示不同或相反的意见。
(2024·全国甲卷)As a matter of fact，the introduction of high-speed trains has dramatically shortened travel time，making intercity travel faster and more comfortable.
4．有关“合”的常用词语：above all，accordingly，as a result，in sum，to sum up，as has been noted，as I have said，on the whole，at last，therefore，thus，briefly，to speak frankly，eventually，surely，finally，in conclusion，in a word，so，all in all等，用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。
(2025·全国一卷)To sum up, the new column will not only enrich our English learning experience but also create lasting memories of our school life.(共17张PPT)
学会三步速成文
高考英语应用文(如书信、通知、报道等)要求考生在有限时间内完成结构清晰、语言得体的写作。掌握“审题→构思→写作”三步法，可高效提分。以下是具体操作指南：
第一步：审题(1分钟)
审题是避免偏题、漏点的关键，需快速锁定以下5要素：
1．体裁(Genre)
确定文体是书信、通知、报道、演讲稿还是其他。
2．话题(Topic)
根据要点确定文章的主题和核心内容，确保不离题。
3．格式(Format)
根据已定文体，来确定写作所采用的具体格式。
4．内容(Content)
划出题目中的显性要点，用数字标注，同时补充隐性要点。
5．语言(Language)
根据题目要求和具体情境，决定使用正式语言或非正式语言。
第二步：构思(2分钟)
采用“三段式结构”(凤头→猪肚→豹尾)，确保逻辑连贯。
1．凤头(开头段)——直入主题
书信：
邀请信：“I am writing to invite you to...”
建议信：“I'd like to suggest that...”
通知：“The purpose of this notice is to inform you that...”
报道：“On [日期], our school held [活动] to [目的]．”
2．猪肚(主体段)——覆盖所有要点
分点展开(每点1－2句)。
活动类：时间→地点→流程→要求
建议类：问题→建议→理由
申请类：资质→动机→承诺
使用连接词：
Firstly, Secondly, Finally...(列举)
What's more, Additionally...(补充)
3．豹尾(结尾段)——简洁有力
书信：
邀请信：“We would be honored by your presence.”
建议信：“I hope my suggestions will be helpful.”
通知：“For further details, please contact...”
报道：“The event was a great success, and all participants enjoyed it.”
第三步：写作(12分钟)
1．按框架填充内容
直接套用构思好的句子，避免临场发挥错误。例如邀请信：
开头：模板句(“I'm writing to invite you to...”)
主体：分点写时间、地点、要求(用First, Additionally...连接)
结尾：固定句式(“Looking forward to your reply.”)
关键：提前准备各文体模板句，考场上仅替换关键词。
2．按照“5C”原则检查
Clear(清晰性)：主旨是否明确？
Concise(简洁性)：有无冗余词？
Complete(完整性)：题目要求是否全部回应？
Correct(正确性)：时态、主谓一致、拼写等是否无误？
Courteous(礼貌性)：语气是否得体？
3．卷面工整
字迹清晰，避免涂改。
段落分明(开头、主体、结尾)。
【典题示例】
(2025·全国二卷)假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．询问进展；
2．提醒交稿时间。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Best wishes，
Li Hua
三步成文
Step 1　“五定”审题，“三段”谋篇
定体裁 询问信
定时态 一般现在时为主
定人称 第一人称和第二人称为主
定要点、
定结构 三段
谋篇 第一段：开
篇引出话题 表明写信的目的：询问稿件的进度
第二段：
3个要点
缺一不可 1.告知用稿的时间，
2.提醒外教交稿的日期
3.读者对稿件的期待
第三段：巧妙收尾 表达希望及期待
Step 2　斟酌词句，话题表达成就亮点
1．感谢您同意为我们的校报撰稿。
__________________________________________________________
2．我们非常期待您对加拿大体育的见解。所以我写信来询问您投稿的进展情况。
_____________________________ on Canadian sports，___________ ______________________________________________________．
Thank you for agreeing to contribute to our school newspaper.
We're eager for your insights
so I am writing to check on the progress of your contribution
3．我想提醒您，提交文章的截止日期即将来临。
I would like to remind you that _________________________________ _____________________．
4．我们很乐意按照计划在我们学校的校报上刊登您的文章。
We would love to feature your article in our school newspaper __________．
5．如果您已经完成，请于6月16日前将您的作品发送至学校报纸的电子邮箱schoolnewspaper@。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
the deadline for submitting the article is approaching
as planned
Please send your piece to schoolnewspaper @ by June 16 if you have already completed it.
6．如果您有任何问题，请随时联系我。
_______________________________________________________
7．我坚信，您的专业知识与丰富经验，将会让这篇文章兼具知识性与趣味性。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't hesitate to contact me if you have any questions.
I hold the firm belief that your expertise and rich experience will make the article both informative and interesting.
Step 3　巧妙过渡，完美成篇
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Dear Chris，
Thank you for agreeing to contribute to our school newspaper. We're eager for your insights on Canadian sports, so I am writing to check on the progress of your contribution.
I would like to remind you that the deadline for submitting the article is approaching. We would love to feature your article in our school newspaper as planned.Please send your piece to schoolnewspaper@ by June 16 if you have already completed it. Don't hesitate to contact me if you have any questions. I hold the firm belief that your expertise and rich experience will make the article both informative and interesting.
Thanks for your efforts. Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua(共4张PPT)
专题五　应用文写作
卷别 年份 文体 主题语境 情境内容 命题形式
全国一卷 2025 建议信 人与社会 给校英语报增设的栏目提建议 文字提纲
全国二卷 2025 询问信 人与社会 催外教交稿 文字提纲
新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 2024 告知信 人与自我 分享在公园上的一节美术课 文字提纲
新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 2023 建议信 人与社会 给外教的分组方式提建议 文字提纲
1．增强试题开放性与灵活性
体裁形式多样，体现应用性、创新性、基础性与综合性相结合的特点。
2．深化育人性与素养考查
2025年全国一卷围绕班级英语报增设栏目，引导学生参与班级事务、表达观点，融合育人与语言运用能力考查；2024年新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷通过“公园里的美术课”体现美育核心理念，提升美育考查高度。
3．反押题、反模板化设计凸显
2025年全国二卷要求在有限篇幅内，完成“询问进展”和“提醒交稿时间”任务，兼顾了跨文化交际礼貌分寸，打破模板套用，促使学生灵活组织语言；且无固定“功能句型库”，考验语境动态把握能力，推动学生从机械模仿转向灵活运用。(共200张PPT)
文体分类突破
热考文体一　演讲稿
演讲稿是参加者为了在会议上或活动上发表自己的意见、看法等事先准备好的文稿，因此需要观点鲜明、条理清晰、语言简洁明快。具体写作架构为：
【典题示例】
(2025·浙江卷1月)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1．陈述看法；2.提出建议。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 校园内用手机拍
摄短视频的现象 My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Recently, filming short videos on campus has become a common sight. Some students record their daily school life, ①__________________________________________ (希望分享他们的快乐并展示他们的创造力).
hoping to share their joy and show their creativity
中段 陈述个人看法 　　As far as I'm concerned, it can be ②_______________ ________________(记录校园生活的一种有趣方式), but it also has its drawbacks. ③_________________________ ___________________ (它不仅可能分散我们的学习精力) and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-esteem when the videos don't get the expected response.
a fun way to record campus life
Not only may it distract us from our studies
尾段 提出建议 　　To solve this, schools could set rules about where and when filming is allowed.④___________________________ ________________________________________(我建议我们应限制拍摄时间并选择合适的地点). Let's focus more on our academic tasks and make good use of our time on campus.
Thank you！
I recommend we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①On behalf of our school，I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
②Good morning, dear teachers and fellow students. I'm Li Hua. It's my great honor to stand here and share with you how to stay motivated in school.
③Good morning! Today, I'd like to share my experience in protecting our community environment.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①Last weekend, I joined a volunteer team to clean up the park. Upon arrival, we engaged in various activities.
②Moreover, bookstores often serve as cultural hubs, hosting events and fostering community engagement.
③What can't be ignored is that digital reading brings us physical as well as psychological damages especially to the young.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①Let's keep our motivation alive and strive for a better tomorrow!
②Every little effort counts, and let's take action to make our community a cleaner and greener place. Thanks for your listening!
【即时演练】
(2025·河南省部分示范性高中考前冲刺)6月6日是全国爱眼日(National Eye Care Day)。请你以此为主题用英语写一篇课前演讲稿，内容包括：
1．良好视力的重要性；2.你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear classmates，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Thank you!
[参考范文]
Dear classmates，
National Eye Care Day reminds us of the incredible gift of vision and its impact on our daily lives. Not only does good eyesight allow us to connect with the world but it also plays a crucial role in learning, working, and enjoying life.
To protect our eyesight, I advise taking regular breaks from books and screens, wearing sunglasses to shield from UV rays, and maintaining a balanced diet which is rich in vitamins A and
C．Regular eye exams are also essential for early detection of any potential problems.
Thank you!
热考文体二　建议信
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，并说明理由，使别人了解自己的想法、主张，能利用所提建议解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信要简洁明确、理由充分、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作架构为：
【典题示例】
(2025·全国一卷)假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你的选择；2.说明理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________

Yours，
Li Hua
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 告知自己
的选择 Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.①_______________________________ ___________________________________________ (就我而言，“校园乐事”这个专栏是更好的选择). My reasons are as follows.
As far as I am concerned, the column “Fun at my school” is a better choice
中段 阐述选择
栏目理由 　　To begin with, I believe this column will be more engaging for us. ②___________________________________ (它可以涵盖各种各样的话题) such as club experiences, amazing discoveries and extra-curricular activities that take place in our school. They are not only fun, but also reflect our campus life. Moreover, it can encourage more students to participate in school activities and share their experiences, ③_________________________________________________ (这会让我们的校报更加丰富多彩、引人入胜).
It can cover a wide range of topics
which will make our newspaper more colorful and appealing
尾段 表达期望 　　I'd appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①(2025·北京卷)Knowing that you're participating in the UN's proposal-collecting activity, I'm writing to give you some suggestions.
②(2025·广东名校仿真模拟卷)I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely and have trouble adapting to life in Beijing. I can totally understand how you feel as everything there is new to you. Here are some suggestions.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①(2025·北京卷)I recommend focusing on “youth-led environmental protection actions”. To begin with, environmental issues are urgent globally, and young people's efforts can inspire more.
②(2025·北京卷)What's more/ In addition/ Moreover, you can mention practical steps like campus recycling campaigns or tree-planting drives. These are easy to understand and can show how teens make a difference.
③(2025·山西省部分学校模拟)Last but not least, don't hesitate to turn to me or other friends for help when you need it.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①(2025·北京卷)I'd be glad if you could take my suggestions into consideration/account.
②(2025·北京卷)I do hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you.
【即时演练】
(2025·山东省日照市高三二模)假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校将对图书馆进行升级改造，面向全校师生征求意见。请你给校长Mr. David写一封信，内容包括：
1．图书馆存在的问题；2.你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr. David，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mr. David，
I'm Li Hua, a student at our school. Knowing that our library will be upgraded, I'd like to offer some feedback. Currently, the library lacks enough comfortable reading areas, and many seats are occupied during peak hours. Besides, the book selection is outdated, failing to meet our diverse needs. Some books are even damaged.My suggestions are as follows.
To start with, add more reading desks and cozy sofas. In addition, update the book collection regularly and repair or replace damaged books. These improvements will surely make the library more appealing.
I'd appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
热考文体三　邀请信
邀请信既可用于给亲朋好友的普通邀请，也可用于给专家、教授等的正式邀请。具体写作架构为：
【典题示例】
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1．节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 发出邀请 Dear Caroline，
I'm Li Hua，①_____________________________ ______________________________________(负责英语访谈项目的学生). I'm writing to invite you to attend our programme and be our honored guest.
the student who is in charge of the English programme Talk and Talk
中段 访谈节目介绍；访谈的时间
和话题 　　Focusing on the topics appealing to teenagers，our programme ②____________________________________ ________________________________________________(致力于增强学生对国内外事务的理解). The topic of the coming show，③_________________________________ (定于下周五举行)，is environmental protection in our daily life. If you are available then，we are waiting for your coming.④_______________________________________ ____________________(如果不可以的话，请告知我，以便我们做出调整).
is committed to enhancing students' understanding of domestic and international affairs
which is scheduled to be held next Friday
If not，please let me know so that we can make an adjustment
尾段 表达希望
接受邀请 　　I'd appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①I'm writing to invite you to join our Music Club's upcoming musical appreciation session this Saturday at 2 p．m. in the Music Hall.
②I feel honoured to tell you that our school badminton club will hold the competition at 3 o'clock in the afternoon next Friday. On behalf of our school, I'm writing to invite you to participate.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①Here are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.
②As scheduled, the match will take place in the school gym beside the lecture building. Therefore, if it is convenient for you, how about meeting at the school gate at 2：45 on Friday afternoon
③There is no doubt that you will be greatly impressed with the excellent skills of the players and have a better understanding of the fascination of this sport.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
②I'd be grateful if you could confirm your attendance by Friday.
【即时演练】
(2025·贵阳市七校联考)假定你是光明中学学生会主席张华，你校将举办校园艺术节，主题为“传统与新生(Tradition and Renewal)”。请你代表学生会给来自英国的交换生Bill写一封邀请信，邀请他来参加。内容包括：
1．艺术节的举办时间、地点；2.活动的安排。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Dear Bill，
On behalf of the Students' Union, I'm writing to invite you to the upcoming School Art Festival, whose theme is “Tradition and Renewal”. The details of the event are as follows.
The event is scheduled for next Thursday at the school auditorium. The opening ceremony begins at 2 p．m. with a welcome address delivered by the headmaster. Then audience can appreciate artworks ranging from awe-inspiring traditional paintings to ground-breaking installations and New Media artworks, after which you can even create your own innovative 3D sculptures on the spot!
We sincerely hope you can join us, as your presence would greatly enrich our cultural exchange. Looking forward to your attendance!
Yours，
Zhang Hua
热考文体四　申请信
申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的能力、资历以及愿望等，所以对个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容。具体写作架构为：
【典题示例】
(2023·天津卷6月改编)假设你是晨光中学的李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊”活动。该活动主题涉及：中国美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画，拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请你写一封申请信，内容如下：
1．申请参加本次活动；2.阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；3.结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇：中国工坊Chinese Workshop；中华美食Chinese cuisine；手工艺handicraft；书法calligraphy
Dear Sir/Madam，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours，
Li Jin
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 自我介绍
说明申请
内容 Dear Sir/ Madam，
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Learning that a cultural communication activity called Chinese Workshop will be held，①___________________________ ________________________________(我迫不及待地想要写信申请参加这个活动).
I can hardly wait to write to apply to participate in this activity
中段 活动的意义
及个人优势 　　The theme of the activity includes Chinese cuisine, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. So I think this activity is very significant，②______ _________________________________________________________________ (这有助于传播中华优秀传统文化) and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, such as dumplings. ③_____________________________________ _______________ (我不仅可以教授参加者如何包饺子), but I can also make them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
which is beneficial to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture
Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings
尾段 表达期望 　　④___________________________________________ __________________________________ (如果您能考虑一下我的申请，我将不胜感激). Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours，
Li Jin
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into account/consideration
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①(2025·苏锡常镇四市调研)I'm Li Hua, a high school student from China. Having learned that you're looking for help to improve your Chinese this summer，I am writing to express my deep interest in helping you achieve your goal.
②I am writing to apply for a volunteer position in our community library during the summer break.
③(2025·杭州模拟)My name is Li Hua, an 18-year-old boy from Guangming Middle School in East China's Zhejiang Province. I'm writing to win a chance to take part in the coming summer camp.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①Firstly, I have abundant experience in language exchange programs, and I am skilled not only in English but also very familiar with the challenges of learning Chinese as a second language.
②Besides, with an outgoing and cheerful personality, I can get along very well with people around me...
③Most importantly, I'm thirsty for understanding Western cultures and spreading Chinese culture.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply.
②I would be very grateful if you could offer me a chance to be a volunteer.
③If accepted, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
【即时演练】
(2025·河北省高三联考)假定你是李华，得知学校将选拔学生代表参加“国际青少年文化论坛(the International Teenage Forum)”。该论坛旨在促进各国学生之间的文化交流和友谊，你希望参加此项活动，请你向学校负责人写一封英文申请信，内容包括：
1．说明写信目的；2.阐述你的优势；3.期待获得机会。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Sir or Madam，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua，a student from China. Learning that our school is selecting representatives for the International Teenage Forum, I am writing to apply for this precious opportunity.
Firstly, with a track record of successfully organizing small scale cultural sharing activities at school, I have proven my ability to engage effectively in cross cultural interactions. Moreover, I've won several awards in English speech contests, which further confirms my language proficiency. I'm good at English and have a strong interest in different cultures. Last but not least, I'm an active communicator and can express myself clearly.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
热考文体五　感谢信
感谢信用于表达对他人帮助、礼物或支持的感激之情，目的是传递真诚谢意并维系良好关系。写作时需具体说明感谢原因(如辅导学习、赠送礼物等)，语言简洁礼貌，体现真诚。常见于感谢老师、朋友或活动主办方等场景，是高考高频文体之一。具体写作架构为：
【典题示例】
(2025·浙江十校联考)假定你是李华，美国教授Smith先生在你校做了一次有关AI(人工智能)的报告。请你代表你校学生会给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；2.说明收获；3.期待今后再来你校演讲。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 说明写信目的 Dear Smith，
On behalf of the Students' Union of our school, I'm writing to express our heartfelt thanks for your wonderful speech on AI.
中段 说明感谢原因 　　①________________________(聆听了您的演讲后), we not only gain a better understanding of what AI is, but we're also aware of what effects it might have on us human beings. More importantly, ②_______________________ ______________________________________________ (我们知道了应该如何应对人工智能带来的挑战).
尾段 再次致谢并表达祝愿 　　③_________________________________________ (再次感谢您精彩的演讲). We look forward to welcoming you back to our school soon.
Best regards，
Li Hua
Having heard your speech
we know what we should do to meet the coming challenges brought by AI
Once again, thank you for your brilliant speech
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your generous help.
②I would like to extend my heartfelt thanks for your kind support during my studies.
③Thank you so much for the wonderful gift you gave me!
④I really appreciate your encouragement when I was feeling down.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①Your patient guidance helped me improve my English significantly.
②Without your advice, I wouldn't have been able to solve this problem.
③The book you gave me is not only interesting but also very inspiring.
④I really enjoyed the delicious dinner you prepared for us.
⑤The summer camp you organized was an unforgettable experience for me.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①Once again, thank you for your kindness.
②I look forward to returning your kindness in the future.
【即时演练】
(2025·台州模拟)假定你是李华，你在China Daily举办的中学生英语征文比赛中获得一等奖，你打算感谢曾帮你修改文章的你校美国外教Henry。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．告知获奖消息；2.表示感谢；3.未来希望。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Dear Henry，
I'm glad to tell you that I have won the first prize in the essay contest held by China Daily. I'm writing to extend my heartfelt thanks to you.
Thank you for taking the time to edit the article for me. You were so careful that you pointed out all the mistakes I had made in the article. To be frank, without your help, I couldn't have won the prize. I really appreciate you precious time and valuable effort. I feel proud to have a brilliant teacher like you.
I'm sure, with your help, I'll make even greater progress in the days to come.
Best regards，
Li Hua
热考文体六　告知信
告知信通常是告诉或通知对方某些重要信息，如活动安排、上课计划、方案简介、招聘信息等。此类信件要求考生将写作要点清晰准确地传达给对方。具体写作架构为：
【典题示例】
(2024·新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷)假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1．你完成的作品；2.你的感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.___
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 点名要告
知的事情 Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
中段 介绍完成的作品 　　We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. ①_________________________________(受到这迷人景色的启发)，I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond，②________________ ________________(被盛开的花朵环绕着). The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.③_________________ ________________________________________________________________________(置身于大自然中不仅激发了我的创造力，还减轻了我的学业压力). I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
Inspired by the fantastic scenery
surrounded by blooming flowers
Being bathed in nature not only sparked my creativity but also reduced my school pressure
尾段 收获、感
悟及希望 　　In a word，it was not just an art class，④________ _______________________________________________(它是我真正珍视的一次与大自然亲密接触的时刻). I do hope that you can join us in the next art outing class.
Yours，
Li Hua
it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①I'm writing to share with you a popular Chinese movie I saw during this Spring Festival. I had the pleasure of watching a fantastic cartoon titled Nezha 2.
②I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing to inform you of the school's class schedule adjustment during the coming Labor Day holiday.
③There will be a book-sharing activity and I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①In the morning, we'll visit Guangfu Ancient City, where you can see well-preserved traditional architecture and experience ancient Chinese culture.
②Then we'll go to Handan Museum to learn more about the city's 3, 000-year history.
③After lunch, we'll enjoy the beautiful scenery at Congtai Park, a perfect place to relax.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①If you want to know detailed information/anything else，please don't hesitate to contact me.
②(2025·湖北省十一校第二次联考)Please remember to wear comfortable walking shoes and bring a jacket as it might get cool in the evening. Looking forward to showing you around.
【即时演练】
(2025·辽宁省部分重点中学协作体高考模拟)假定你是李华，为了培养学生关爱他人、服务社会的意识，你校将于下周末举办一次走进社区实践活动。你希望你的交换生朋友 Mike一起参加，请写信告知他。内容包括：
1．活动简介；2.邀请体验。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike，
Hope this letter finds you well. ________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mike，
Hope this letter finds you well. Our school is to/will hold a community-based practical activity next weekend, with the primary aim of cultivating students' awareness of caring for others and serving the society.
During the activity, we plan to pay a visit to the nursing home in the nearby neighbourhood. We'll assist senior citizens with various daily chores, including cleaning their houses and buying groceries. Additionally, we've arranged some entertainment games, which can offer them a lot of happiness.
This is a great opportunity to make a great difference to the community and gain a better understanding of local life. I sincerely hope you can join us in this meaningful event. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
热考文体七　推荐信
推荐信是向对方推荐一个人、一个地方或一件东西等的信件。信中应提出推荐的理由，介绍自己所推荐内容的优点。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。具体写作架构如下：
【典题示例】
(2025·八省联考卷)假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Beth想学打乒乓球，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示支持；2.推荐教练。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. __________
_________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 表示支持学乒乓球 Dear Beth，
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. It's a great sport that's both fun and good for you! ①_______ __________________________________________________________________________________(我非常支持你的决定，因为这不仅会提升你的技能，还能帮你结交新朋友).
I highly support your decision, as it will not only improve your skills but also help you make new friends
中段 推荐对象及陈述推荐理由 　　As for the coach, I highly recommend Coach Zhang,
②_____________________________________________ ______________________________________ (他在乒乓球教学方面经验丰富，对初学者又非常有耐心). He can teach you various skills and techniques step by step. Many of his students ③________________________________________ (在他的指导下取得了巨大的进步). I'm convinced that you'll benefit a lot from his lessons.
who has rich experience in teaching table tennis and is very patient with beginners
have made great progress under his guidance
尾段 表达期待 　　④________________________________________ (如果你需要更多信息请告知我). Enjoy your training!
Yours，
Li Hua
Let me know if you need more information
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①For the upcoming English Festival, I'd like to propose an English Debate Competition with the theme “Voice Your Opinion！”
②Knowing that you're planning to visit China this summer, I'd like to recommend a wonderful tourist destination to you.
③I'm writing to recommend two topics for the “Safety” column of our school English newspaper.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①Firstly，food safety matters because what we eat directly affects our health. With food safety issues emerging frequently, students need to learn how to identify safe food and maintain a healthy diet.
②Moreover, as for information safety, in the digital age, where personal information is easily leaked, it is crucial for us to understand how to protect our data, such as passwords and private messages, from being misused.
③Last but not least, by discussing these books, we students can engage in lively debates, exchange ideas, and broaden our perspectives, all enhancing our critical thinking skills.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①I firmly believe that this event will help students build confidence, improve their critical thinking, and make the festival even more exciting and unforgettable.
②I hope these suggestions can be helpful. Looking forward to reading the column.
③Hope my recommendation(s) will be of great help to you. Wish you a pleasant journey!
【即时演练】
(2025·福建五校联考)假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Peter发来邮件说他对中国的方方面面非常感兴趣，很想订阅一份相关的报纸。请你给他回复邮件。内容包括：
1．推荐China Daily；2.说明推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter，
Glad to learn that you're interested in everything about China and want to subscribe to a newspaper. ________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Peter，
Glad to learn that you're interested in everything about China and want to subscribe to a newspaper. I'd like to recommend China Daily to you.
Founded on June 1，1981, China Daily is the most influential national English-language newspaper in China. With writers from China and abroad, it informs you of what's going on in China as well as in the world and offers you the in-depth reports and analyses. As a matter of fact, China Daily's reports are most frequently quoted by foreign media and it acts as an important window to “China understanding the world and be understood by the world”.
I hope my recommendation will satisfy your needs and you'll benefit from it. All the best!
Yours，
Li Hua
热考文体八　咨询信
咨询信是写信人就自己不太熟悉、不理解或想要进一步了解的事情及问题，向有关部门或个人请求解答时所使用的信件。写作时应注意分条陈述咨询的具体内容，且语气要委婉。具体写作架构如下：
【典题示例】
(2021·全国甲卷改编)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友 Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；2.征求建议；3.表示感谢。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 说明写信背景及写信目的 Dear Chris，
How are you doing recently？Our school is going to hold a class meeting ①____________________________ (主题是中国传统文化)．This activity will be shown on the English website, so I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
themed traditional Chinese culture
中段 具体阐述询问事由并强调其
重要性 　　②____________________________________________ __________________________ (众所周知的是中国有着丰富且独特的传统文化), including tea culture, Peking Opera, Chinese calligraphy and so on. ③_______________________ ____________________________________________________ (因此，我很难判断哪些在外国朋友中更受欢迎). In order to get more clicks, I hope you can tell me your and your friends' preferences. Most importantly, with your passion for traditional Chinese culture, ④___________________________ (我相信你能帮我解决这个问题).
What is well-known is that China has abundant and unique traditional cultures
Therefore, it is difficult for me to decide which are more popular among foreign friends
I believe you can help me out
尾段 表示感谢，
盼望回复 　　⑤____________________________________________ ___________________ (我坚信你的见解会带来巨大的改变). Your timely reply would be greatly appreciated.
Yours，
Li Hua
I hold the firm belief that your insight would make a huge difference
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①I feel puzzled about how to make preparations for the coming competition. So I'm writing to consult you about it.
②I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific information concerning it.
③To fully enjoy our holiday，I am writing to make some inquiries about our travel arrangements.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①I'd like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.
②Could you be so kind as to inform me of the time arrangement of the sports meeting
③If there is anything else that needs special attention, please inform me in advance at your convenience.
④As a foreign student，I am wondering if there are any special requirements or additional fees that I should be aware of.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①Your prompt response would be greatly appreciated.
②If possible, please reply to me at your earliest convenience.
③I would highly appreciate it if you could generously share with me your opinion.
【即时演练】
(2025·河北省部分学校高三联考)假定你是李华，你想设计一个网站来辅助你班同学学好英语。请你给擅长IT技能的外教Mr.Robert写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．介绍你的设想；2.咨询相关建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr. Robert，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mr.Robert，
How is everything going I'm writing to tell you that I've been thinking about creating an English learning website to help my classmates improve their language skills. The idea is to offer interactive lessons, video tutorials, and practice exercises tailored to different English levels.
Given your expertise in IT, I'd greatly appreciate your insights. Could you offer any suggestions on how to make the site user-friendly, engaging, and effective for language learning Also, do you have any recommendations for tools or platforms that could facilitate the development process
Your advice would be invaluable in bringing this project to life. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
热考文体九　倡议书
倡议书是一种为倡议或发起某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的应用文文体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作架构如下：
【典题示例】
(2022·全国甲卷改编)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 说明主题和目的 Our Oceans，Our Responsibility
When it comes to the pollution of the oceans，there's no denying that it is becoming more and more serious. World Oceans Day，falling on June 8th，①___________________ ____________________________(旨在提高海洋保护意识).
is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation
中段 发出倡议
的原因及
保护海洋
的具体行动 　　The ocean plays a key role in our world. ②___________ ______________________________________________________________________ (它不仅为我们提供了充足的食物，还维持了自然界的平衡). Thus，it is of vital importance to protect the ocean. First of all，what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example，garbage can't be thrown into oceans. ③____________________________ __________________________________________________ (而且，我们还可以分发传单，呼吁更多的人保护海洋). The more people are involved，the better the ocean environment will be.
Not only does it offer us sufficient food，but it also maintains the balance of nature
What's more，we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean
尾段 发起呼吁，
表达愿景 　　④____________________________________________ _____________________________ (总之，现在是我们致力于保护海洋的时候了). To protect oceans is to protect ourselves.
All in all，it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting oceans
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①As water pollution is worsening，immediate measures should be taken.
②As for keeping a clean campus，it is everyone's responsibility to work hard to achieve this goal.
③With the academic pressure increasing sharply, I, on behalf of the English club，appeal to us Senior Three students to take an active part in physical activity.
④On behalf of the Students' Union，I am writing to call on everyone to take part in our summer program named “Care for the Aged”．
[引人入胜篇中句]
①In my opinion, we should try to keep a balanced diet to build up a strong body.
②Regular exercise is also one of the most important ways to help you stay away from catching any disease.
③Therefore, I suggest both individuals and companies should stop dumping waste water into the sea. Meanwhile, I call for more relevant laws to protect the oceans.
④The activity will provide a good platform to promote the traditional Chinese culture and improve communication between people from different cultural backgrounds.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①Everyone is welcome to take part in it.
②Your active participation will surely make a difference.
③Your involvement will be highly appreciated.
④Don't miss the chance! We are looking forward to your participation.
【即时演练】
(2025·河南省TOP二十名校猜题大联考)暑假到来之际，你校向学生们发出暑期参与志愿者活动倡议。请你代表学生会在英文版校报发表一封倡议书，内容包括：
1．志愿者活动的益处；2.志愿者活动推荐；3.发出倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear fellow students，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
The Students' Union
[参考范文]
Dear fellow students，
With the summer vacation approaching, we call on all the students at school to actively participate in volunteer activities. Not only will these activities help us develop valuable skills and a sense of responsibility, but they will also allow us to make a positive impact on our community.
We recommend some attractive opportunities, such as organizing community clean-ups, tutoring underprivileged students, and visiting nursing homes. These experiences will enrich your summer vacation and foster personal growth.
Let's make this summer vacation meaningful and unforgettable by giving back to society!
The Students' Union
热考文体十　道歉信
道歉信通常是在因自己的过失或疏忽给别人造成麻烦或损失并发觉的情况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。具体写作架构如下：
【典题示例】
(2021·北京卷改编)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表达歉意并说明原因；2.提出补救建议。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 表达歉意 Dear Jim，
I am sorry to inform you that I won't be able to keep the appointment to go to the bookstore this Sunday.①____________ ______________________________________________________________________ (我写信是为了对给你造成的任何不便表示真诚的歉意).
I am writing to express my sincere apology for any inconvenience I have caused you
中段 说明原因并提出补
救建议 　　Actually，I won't hesitate to go with you if I am available at that time. However，my school is preparing for the upcoming Opening Day and ②__________________________________ _ (需要安排一系列活动). As the president of the Student Association，I am undoubtedly required to take charge of the grand event. ③________________________________________ ______________________________ (我在想我们是否有可能另约一个时间见面). If that suits you，please let me know.
a series of activities need to be arranged
I am wondering if it is possible for us to fix another date for our appointment
尾段 再次致歉并期待回复 　　Once again，I apologize for the unexpected change.④____ ____________________________________________________ (我真心希望你能理解我的处境并原谅我). Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
I do hope that you can understand my situation and forgive me
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①I am writing to say sorry as I will no longer be able to attend the conference next week.
②I am terribly sorry to tell you that I cannot make it to your birthday party next Thursday evening.
③I feel happy to receive your invitation to participate in the camp to be held this winter vacation, but I have no alternative but to turn down your invitation, for which I must convey my apology.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①The reason why I can't hang out with you is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
②I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
③You know I have no intention to break our appointment，so shall we make it next Sunday if you're available
④I have a great desire to meet you.Would you mind if I change the appointment time
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.
②I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation. Wish you a safe and happy journey!
③Please allow me to say sorry to you again.
【即时演练】
(2025·四川泸州市二诊)假定你是李华，因故不能参加外教Caroline 本周五晚上开设的关于中美文化差异的讲座。请给她写一封信表达歉意，内容包括：
1．表达歉意；2.解释原因；3.询问是否愿意提供相关资料。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右。2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Caroline，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students.I'm writing to apologize to you for not being able to attend your lecture this Friday evening, which is about the cultural differences between China and America.
Because of a high fever, I have been in hospital for treatment, which unfortunately prevented me from taking part in all school activities.But I have a strong interest in what you will share in the lecture.Therefore, I would appreciate it if you could provide me with some relevant materials.
I sincerely apologize and wish your lecture a success.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
热考文体十一　通知
通知是上级对下级或组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情时使用的一种应用文文体。通常要有发通知的时间及落款；写通知常用一般将来时，穿插使用一般现在时。具体写作架构如下：
【典题示例】
(2024·九省联考卷)你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：
1．介绍活动目的；2.说明参赛要求。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 说明通知的目的及内容 Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
To raise students' awareness of saving food, our school English newspaper is scheduled to hold a writing competition，①____________________________________________(其主题是“携手行动，节约粮食”).
whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”
中段 说明参赛要求 　　②________________________________________ ____________________________________(我们学校中任何对这次竞赛感兴趣的人，都欢迎参加). Entries should consist of an original piece of writing with 400 words or fewer. They should be related to the theme and show how we can contribute to saving food. ③______________________ _____________________________________________________(请于1月31日前将你的参赛作品发送至我们的电子邮箱englishpaper@) and the result will be published on May 1.
Anyone in our school interested in the competition is welcome to participate
Please mail your entry to our email address englishpaper@ by January 31
尾段 发起呼吁，表达愿景 　　④___________________________________________ _________________ (期待你的积极参与和创意写作).
Looking forward to your active participation and creative writings
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please I have an announcement to make.
②To raise awareness of the dangers of obesity and encourage healthy lifestyles, the Students' Union is organizing a series of events themed “Say no to obesity”．
③With the aim of improving our English speaking skill，the English Learning Club has decided to form an English Speaking Practice Group where students can practice in a diverse and supportive environment.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①The group will meet every Friday afternoon from 3：00 p．m. to 4：30 p．m. in Room 301 of the Classroom Building.
②Our activities will include engaging in lively conversations on a wide range of topics, participating in role-playing exercises, and practicing with native speakers whenever possible.
③All the students are welcome to attend. You are supposed to arrive on time, listen carefully and respect the lecturer.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①If you are interested, please send an email to FSPG@ or sign up at the club office, The deadline for registration is June 15th.
②We encourage all students to actively participate in these events and take the first step towards a healthier lifestyle.
【即时演练】
(2025·辽宁省实验中学第五次模拟)假定你是李华，是一所国际高中的学生。为了弘扬中国传统文化，你所在的英语俱乐部将举办一场唐装文化展 (Tang Costume Show)。请你用英语写一则通知，内容包括：
1．活动目的；2.时间、地点；3.号召大家参加。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Notice
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Notice
To promote the beauty of traditional Chinese culture, the Tang Costume Show is scheduled to take place in the Art Hall of our school next Saturday. Starting at 9：00 a. m. and lasting 3 hours, the show will serve as a fantastic opportunity for us students to develop a taste for Tang Costumes as well as get a knowledge of traditional clothing style.
Whoever is interested is welcome to attend the exhibition. For more information, please visit the school website and register before this Friday.
Looking forward to your enthusiastic participation.
English Club
热考文体十二　报道
报道类应用文通常用于描述活动、比赛或事件。要求语言简洁、客观，结构清晰。涵盖事件的时间、地点、人物和主要经过。具体写作架构为：
【典题示例】
(2023·浙江卷1月)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1．活动的过程；2.收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 介绍活动和参加人员 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
①_________________________________________ _______________________________________________ (上周日举办了一场以“认识我们身边的植物”为主题的活动)，which involved all students in our school.
Last Sunday witnessed an activity on the theme of “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”
中段 活动过程 　　The activity began with a lecture where we learned how to identify various plants depending on their characteristics. Following that，②___________________ ________________________________________________________________(我们出发去探索环境，被植物令人难以置信的多样性所吸引). Finally，we collected some maple leaves as a reminder of the discovery journey to the plant world.
we set out to explore the environment and were fascinated by the incredible varieties of plants
尾段 收获与感想 　　③________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________(毫无疑问，通过这次有意义的活动，我们获得了许多关于植物的知识，并对它们产生了浓厚的兴趣).
Undoubtedly, we gained numerous knowledge on plants and have become interested in them through this meaningful activity
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①Last Friday, the Campus Recycling Fair took place on the central square, which turned out to be a great success.
②Last Sunday, a wonderful Chinese martial arts competition was held in the playground of our school in order to enrich students' school life and build up body.
③Last week, a lecture on career planning was held in our school hall, which aimed to guide students to plan for future development.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①Aimed at cultivating our awareness of a low-carbon lifestyle, the fair attracted dynamic participation. Students exchanged used textbooks and electronics, while interactive stands displayed up-cycled artworks. The most impressive part was that there were even DIY workshops that taught creative ways to repurpose old items.
②Participants from different classes showed their skills in various forms of martial arts, such as kick boxing, Tai Chi and Shaolin Kung Fu.
③Finally, the event concluded with students actively participating in discussions and Q&A sessions.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①The fair not only gave belongings a second life, but also strengthened us students' commitment to sustainability. Small actions, when united, can create real changes for our planet.
②In short, not only did the event enhance students' physical fitness but also deepened their understanding of Chinese martial arts.
【即时演练】
(2025·南昌模拟)上周日你校体育馆举办了你市青少年无人机大赛。请你就此赛事写一篇报道，给你校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1．报道此赛事；2.同学们的收获。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇：无人机　drone
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
A drone competition was held in our school's stadium last Sunday morning in an effort to arouse young students' interest in AI technology.
As the first drone competition for teenagers in our city, it attracted more than 500 students from over 100 elementary and secondary schools. Young as the competitors were, they demonstrated such extraordinary skills at controlling and operating drones that all the audience were amazed by their remarkable performances.
The competition turned out a great success. Not only did it enrich our lives, but it also stimulated our interest in learning, exploring, mastering and applying modern science and technology.
热考文体十三　征文投稿
征文投稿类文章一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写，以议论文和记叙文居多。具体写作架构如下：
【典题示例】
(2024·浙江卷1月)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括：
1．介绍这项运动；2.说明推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 交代写作目的；推荐一项课间运动 Stand Up and Exercise，Everybody!
①_________________________________________ __________ (旨在确保我们学生的身体健康)，I propose the effective exercise：“Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk，stretching your arms，legs and back，and taking a few deep breaths. ②_________________________________ _____________________________ (这是一种快速简便的减压和改善心情的方法).
Aiming to ensure the physical health of us students
It's a quick and easy way to relieve stress and improve your mood
中段 推荐理由 　　This exercise is recommended for several reasons. To start with，it relieves back pain and stiffness from sitting too long. Moreover，it can improve your focus and concentration，③______________________________ ______ (让你更容易在课堂上保持投入). Last but not least，it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle，which is essential for overall well-being.
尾段 呼吁积
极参与 　　④________________________________________ __________(这个小小的改变却有重大影响)in your day. You'll be glad if you give it a shot！
making it easier to stay engaged in class
It's a small change that can make a big difference
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①Last month, our school had a competition on playing musical instruments. Having learned the piano/the violin for nearly five years, I participated in this activity without hesitation.
②Last Saturday, our school's Green Club organized a meaningful volunteer activity at a local park, aiming to raise our awareness of environmental protection.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①Twenty students participated in cleaning up litter and planting trees. Armed with gloves and trash bags, we worked in teams to collect scattered waste and sort recyclables.
②Additionally, we set up posters promoting eco-friendly lifestyles.
③Together we visited places of interest in Australia and took part in many interesting activities at the camp.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①This experience deeply impressed me. Not only did we contribute to environmental protection, but we also learned the importance of teamwork.
②I felt proud to take real action for our planet and realized everyone's small efforts can make a big difference.
③It was such a rewarding experience that not only enriched my school life but also taught me the value of community engagement. I am grateful for this opportunity and look forward to more such activities in the future.
【即时演练】
(2025·河北省全国统一考试模拟)假定你是李华，你校英文报新增设了“Culture Travel”栏目，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．地点介绍；2.你的文化体验和感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
Last summer, I had the opportunity to visit_______________________
_________________________________________________________
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[参考范文]
Last summer, I had the opportunity to visit the Forbidden City in Beijing, a place that has always fascinated me. As I walked through the massive red walls and ancient halls, I couldn't help but feel transported back in time.
The Forbidden City, now known as the Palace Museum, was the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. It is a treasure of Chinese art and architecture.
This trip to the Forbidden City was more than just a sightseeing tour. It was a journey through China's history and culture. It deepened my understanding and appreciation of the country's rich heritage and made me proud to be part of such an ancient civilization.
热考文体十四　人物介绍
人物介绍属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主要表达内容，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。具体写作架构如下：
【典题示例】
(2023·全国甲卷改编)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
A Historical Figure in China
_________________________________________________________
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布局谋篇·完美行文
首段 引出历史人物 A Historical Figure in China
①__________________________________________ (中国有无数的历史人物)，but whenever I'm asked about the one that I admire most，Fan Zhongyan always comes to my mind first.
There are countless historical figures in China
中段 历史人物主要事迹 　　Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty，②____________________________________ ___________________________________________(范仲淹备受推崇，因为他为社会作出了巨大贡献)．He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous.Besides，he proposed the establishment of a national school system，③__________________________ __________________________________________________________ (这对中国的教育体系产生了深远的影响).
Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society
which had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese educational system
尾段 历史人物带来的启示或影响 　　Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character. ④_______ _________________________________________________________(他至今仍是中国历史上最重要的人物之一).
He is still one of the most important figures in Chinese history today
【金句盘点】
[先声夺人开头句]
①There are many respectable people around us. And the person I respect most is my physics teacher, who is so patient with each student that we all like her.
②Old as Zhong Nanshan is, he still makes great contributions in the field of medicine.
③Whenever I talk about the Dragon Boat Festival, I can't help thinking of Qu Yuan，a great patriotic poet in Chinese history.
[引人入胜篇中句]
①It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her.
②She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
③Whenever people around get into trouble, they are willing to go to her for help which makes her respected by all our neighbors.
[画龙点睛结尾句]
①Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect.
②It goes without saying that Confucius has a great effect on the values of later generations.
③He set so good an example for us students that we all should learn from him.
假设你校正在组织题为“The Person Who Inspires Me”的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
1．该人物的简单介绍；2.激励或鼓舞你的原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式作答。
The Person Who Inspires Me
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[参考范文]
The Person Who Inspires Me
Su Bingtian，the first Chinese athlete to compete in the men's 100-meter track and field final at the Olympic Games，was one of the “People Who Moved China” in 2021.
He is my hero，who inspires me deeply. Actually，what impresses me most is his process to success as well as setting the record. Injury from practices and competitions seriously affected his career and once he even planned to retire. But it was the call to win glory for our motherland and challenge himself that brought him back. He trained harder than before and all his efforts paid off.
Learning from him，I'll study hard，face difficulties and challenge myself bravely to dedicate more to our country in the future.
训练23　人物介绍、报道
(建议用时：30分钟　总分：30分)
Writing 1 (人物介绍)
(2025·东北育才学校适应性考试)
中国古典诗词是中华民族的文化瑰宝，为鼓励同学们讲好中国故事，你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以“我最喜欢的诗人”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
限时规范
训练
1．简要介绍该诗人；
2．说明你喜欢他的理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
My Favourite Poet
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
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_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
My Favourite Poet
Of all the brilliant poets in China, I admire Du Fu most, who was one of the greatest realist poets in Chinese literature.
Known as “Poet-Sage”， Du Fu wrote with a realistic style and gave a vivid account of what's happening in his age. His poetry provides a vivid portrayal of his life's events, from the prosperity of the Tang Dynasty's early years to the chaos and suffering following the An Lushan Rebellion. Reading his poems helps us to know more about the Tang Dynasty.
I admire Du Fu not only because of his brilliant poems. More importantly, Du Fu showed great concern over poor people's lives. Many of his poems reflected on the great gap between the rich and the poor, and the effects of war on the people.
Writing 2 (报道)
(2025·德州三模)
你班周末到社区康养中心(Care Home)开展了“教老人使用一个新APP”活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括：
1．活动目的；
2．过程及效果；
3．你的感悟。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Tech Fun for Seniors
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Tech Fun for Seniors
Last weekend, our class visited the local Care Home to teach the elderly how to use a new APP.
We divided into groups and patiently showed them how to download, install, and use the APP's features, like video calls and health monitoring. The seniors were eager to learn, and many quickly mastered the basics.
This activity not only helped the seniors embrace new technology but also strengthened our bond with the community. It was a rewarding experience for everyone involved, and we felt proud to make a difference in their lives.
训练24　建议信、申请信
(建议用时：30分钟　总分：30分)
Writing 1 (建议信)
(2025·河南省名校联盟模拟冲刺)
假定你是李华，看到一位名叫Mark的高三学生在博客上求助，他制定了周密的学习计划，然而却总是因为完不成计划而沮丧。请根据以下提示给他回信，内容包括：
1．具体建议；
2．给予鼓励。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mark，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Best regards，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mark，
I'm Li Hua, a senior high school student like you. Learning that you feel frustrated due to the unfinished study plan, I'd like to share some practical tips that might help you out.
Firstly，start by setting smaller, more manageable goals. Break your tasks into small, specific parts that are easy to carry out, and be sure to take breaks to avoid burnout. Moreover, don't be too hard on yourself. It's okay if you don't always meet your targets. What's important is your progress, not perfection.
Stay positive! Remember, small consistent efforts will lead to big results. Keep going, and don't give up!
Best regards，
Li Hua
Writing 2 (申请信)
(2025·连云港模拟)
假定你是光明中学的李华，某国际夏令营将在暑假举办，请你给其负责人Henry先生写一封邮件申请参加。内容包括：
1．自我介绍并提出申请；
2．个人优势；
3．表达希望。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Dear Henry，
My name is Li Hua. I'm a 17-year-old student from Guangming Middle School. I'm writing to win a chance to take part in the coming summer camp.
I do believe I'm an ideal candidate for you. With an outgoing and cheerful personality, I can get along very well with people around me. What's more, having learned English for over ten years, I have a good command of English and I can communicate freely with foreigners. Most importantly, I'm thirsty for understanding Western cultures and spreading Chinese culture.
I sincerely hope I can get such a good chance and I'm sure I will make a positive influence in the camp. Looking forward to your reply.
Best regards，
Li Hua
训练25　推荐信、邀请信
(建议用时：30分钟　总分：30分)
Writing 1 (推荐信)
(2025·太原模拟)
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友John打算来中国进行研学游(study tour)，请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐一个目的地；
2．说明推荐理由。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
[参考范文]
Dear John，
I'm thrilled to hear about your upcoming study tour to China！I highly recommend Beijing as your destination.As the capital city，Beijing offers a perfect combination of history，culture，and modern education.
Firstly，Beijing is home to world-famous historical sites like the Great Wall and the Forbidden City, which provide first-hand insights into China's rich heritage.Secondly, it holds top universities such as Peking University, where you can attend lectures or workshops.Additionally, the city's efficient public transport makes traveling convenient.Don't forget to try local delicacies like Peking duck—they'll make your trip unforgettable!
Beijing's mix of ancient charm and academic atmosphere makes it ideal for a study tour.I'm sure you'll love it！Let me know if you need more details.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 2 (邀请信)
(2025·东北三校模拟)
假定你是校学生会体育部长李华，你校将举办以“快乐体育，健康生活”为主题的体育节活动。请你给学校的交换生Mike写邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1．活动的目的；
2．活动的相关信息。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Mike，
I hope this email finds you well. I'm Li Hua, the Sports Minister of the Student Union. I'm excited to invite you to our upcoming Sports Festival, themed “Happy Sports, Healthy Life”. The event aims to promote physical fitness, teamwork, and a positive attitude towards sports among students.
The festival will take place on November 15th at the school sports field. Activities include basketball matches, relay races, tug-of-war, and fun games like frisbee and obstacle courses. No prior experience is necessary—the festival is open to everyone. Hopefully, it's a great opportunity to have fun, make new friends, and stay active.
We would be thrilled if you are interested in joining us and sharing in the fun experience. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask in your email or reach out to me directly.
Yours，
Li Hua
训练26　感谢信、咨询信
(建议用时：30分钟　总分：30分)
Writing 1 (感谢信)
(2025·四川省第二次质量联合测评)
假设你是李华，外教Peter在你班上任教两年后，即将返回英国。请你写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1．表达感谢；
2．感谢的原因。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter，
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear Peter，
I'm writing to express my sincere appreciation for all that you have done for me. Your guidance, support, and expertise have been invaluable in helping me progress in my academic and personal life.
I have learned so much from you, and your behavior has made a significant impact on my decisions and actions. Your generosity and selflessness have inspired me to become a better person and to help others in the same way that you have helped me.
Please accept my heartfelt gratitude and sincere thanks for being a mentor who has made a significant difference in my life.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Writing 2 (咨询信)
(2025·重庆市七校联盟三诊)
假设你是李华，你校计划组织学生参加某国际青少年科技展(International Youth Science & Technology Exhibition)。请给主办方负责人 Dr Smith 写一封电子邮件，咨询相关事宜。内容包括：
1．表达参与意愿及目的；
2．询问展览相关事宜。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Dr Smith，
I'm Li Hua, a senior high school student from China._________________
_________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________(共8张PPT)
知晓评分标准
一、评分原则
1．本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3．评分时应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性、准确性以及上下文的连贯性。
4．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5．词数不够，酌情降档；词数不要超过120。
6．如书写较差，以致影响阅读，可将分数降低一个档次。
二、评分档次
档次 特征描述
第五档　优秀
13－15分 很好地完成了试题规定的任务
——覆盖所有要点，内容充实；
——表达流畅，语法结构多样，词汇丰富，显示出很强的语言运用能力；
——有个别语法小错误，但不影响意思的表达；
——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；
——卷面整洁，书写工整。
档次 特征描述
第四档　良好
10－12分 完成了试题规定的任务
——覆盖所有要点，内容较为充实；
——表达基本流畅，语法结构较为多样，词汇较为丰富；
——少量语法错误，基本不影响意思的表达；
——应用了简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构较为紧凑。
档次 特征描述
第三档　及格
7－9分 基本完成了试题规定的任务
——漏掉一些内容，但覆盖大部分要点；
——应用的语法结构和词汇基本能满足任务要求，表达较为准确，语法错误较多，只有半数句子基本正确；
——应用了简单的语句间连接成分，衔接较为流畅。
档次 特征描述
第二档　差
4－6分 未适当完成试题规定的任务
——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，思路混乱，呈现了一些无关内容；
——语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；
——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，影响了意思的表达；
——较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
档次 特征描述
第一档　极差
1－3分 未完成试题规定的任务
——明显遗漏主要内容，呈现了一些无关内容，或产出相关的只言片语；
——表达不准确，有很多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意思的表达；
——缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
通过评分原则和评分档次，我们知道优秀作文的要求， 需要注意：
1．书写一定要整洁；
2．内容要点要齐全；
3．词汇和语法结构的使用要丰富、正确；
4．注意连接词的使用。

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