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The adverbial usage of
“With” Compound Structure
in writing
--作文“杀手锏”之巧用with复合结构做状语
We are having
English class
at present,
___________________
___________________
__________________
_________________________
_________________________
_________________________
with the windows open.
with the lights on.
with teachers sitting behind us.
with some exercise done.
with some questions to discuss.
with books on my desk.
Lead-in
Q1:What structure(结构） have you found from these sentences
Translating
我们
正在上
英语课
有着老师们坐（sit）在我们后面
“With” Compound Structure
With you my guide, I’m confident.
With you supporting me, I’m brave.
With you to help me, I’m hopeful.
With your love around me, I’m lucky.
With your love kept in my heart, I’m powerful.
With your love on and on, I’m rich.
With your love deep as the sea, I’m grateful.
Q1:What structure(结构） have you found from the poem
with+ o(宾) +o.c(宾补)
Mother’s love
adj./adv./n./prep-phrase
doing/done/to do
(n.)
(doing)
(to do)
(prep-phrase)
(adv.)
(done)
(adj.)
代
名
One More
1.With all the racers_______ (row) the dragon boats quickly, they are speeding to the finishing line.
rowing
小结
with+o+o.c
doing
宾语和宾补为_____关系
主动
Observe and review
2.With meat and eggs ______(add) to Zongzi, they taste delicoius.
added
小结
with+o+o.c
done
宾语和宾补为_____关系
被动
Observe and review
with+o+o.c
to do
表_______的动作
将来
3.With a three-day holiday ________ ( spend) with my family , I’m looking forward to the coming year.
to spend
Observe and review
小结
4.The most famous story of the Dragon Boat Festival is about QuYuan.
(1)He, with his suggestions ______(refuse), felt hopeless.
(2)With Quyuan_________ (jump) into the Miluo river, people felt very sad.
(3)Next year, with the festival ___________ (celebrate), we will hold many activities in honor of Quyuan.
refused
jumping
to celebrate
Practice 1
Now, let’s apply it into our writing!
Dear Cathy,
Knowing that you’re quite interested in the Dragon Boat Festival, I’m delighted to invite you to celebrate it with my family.
The festival is approaching, and I have made a plan for it. First, we’ll go to buy some Zongzi. They are wrapped(包裹） with meat and eggs, so they are delicious . Then, we will visit the Water Park, because we can watch an exciting dragon boat race there. At last, we’re going to the No.1 International School to share the story of the festival with the students .
Hope you can accept my sincere invitation and I’m looking forward to your coming.
Rewrite（改写）
by using with+o+o.c.
Group2
With the festival approaching, I have made a plan for it.
With meat and eggs wrapped ,they are delicious.
With an exciting dragon boat race to watch, we will visit the Water Park.
How can we apply it to practical writing
Group3
Group1
You did a good job!
what about continuation writing
(2023新高考I卷读后续写) 泪水几乎模糊了我的视线，我给了他一个大大的拥抱。
With tears almost blurring my vision, I gave him a big hug.
(2023新高考I卷读后续写) “祝贺你！”我的老师骄傲地说，眼里噙满了泪水。
"Congratulations!" my teacher said, with pride and tears filling his eyes.
(2023新高考I卷读后续写)有人叫我去参加写作比赛的颁奖典礼，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。
I was told to attend the award presentation for the writing contest, with my jaw dropping in astonishment.
句型一： With+ 情绪名词+doing/done, 主谓……
句型二： With+身体部位+done/doing, 主谓……
眼泪顺着他的脸颊流下，他回答说：“我真的试过了。”
he replied, “ I did try.”
Joe的手被割伤，她突然大哭，腿抖着。
Joe burst into tears and her legs trembled.
With tears streaming down his cheek,
With her fingers cut,
sentence structure with “With” Compound Structure
句型一： With+ 情绪名词+doing/done, 主谓……
句型二： With+身体部位+done/doing, 主谓……
To her great delight, Jane finally arrived at an open area. Her eyes stared at the sky.
② She walked slowly to the stage and heart was pounding nearly out of her chest.
To her great delight, Jane finally arrived at an open area, with her eyes staring at the sky.
She walked slowly to the stage, with heart pounding nearly out of her chest.
upgrade sentences using ‘with’ compound structures.(句式升级)
Practice 2
you did a good job!
Then, spare no effort and challenge yourselves .
Do what you can do.
【2018全国卷I】假定你是李华，与留学生Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
表示歉意
说明原因
另约时间
有这么重要的会议要参加，恐怕我不能和你去书店了。
例句
With such an important meeting to attend, I’m afraid I can’t go to the bookstore with you.
Application
Application
作文免背一次
★刮刮卡★
【2016全国卷I】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗，请你回复邮件。内容包括：
到达时间
合适的礼物
餐桌礼仪
你应当在大家入座后开始吃饭，而且嘴里有食物时最好不要说话。
例句
You may start your dinner when everyone is properly seated and try not to talk with food in your mouth.
with your mouth full of food.
Application
Application
笔芯一支
★刮刮卡★
Application
【2020浙江I卷】读后续写
原文讲述了一个男孩离别父母和他的爱犬Puppy去上大学后，Puppy情绪低落，食不甘味；为了帮助其摆脱困境，男孩的父母想了一个办法 -- 为Puppy找了一个小伙伴。男孩回家后看到…
在得知Puppy的遭遇后，男孩拥抱了这两个可爱的小家伙（creatures），泪水顺着他的脸颊滚落下来。
例句
After learning what happened to Puppy, the boy hugged the two lovely creatures with tears rolling down his cheeks.
Application
听写免听一次
★刮刮卡★
Application
【2023新课标Ⅰ卷】读后续写
原文讲述了来自移民家庭的作者在老师的安排下参加了英语（作者的第二语言）写作比赛。最终在老师的鼓励下，作者想到一个独特的写作视角，完成了作品，享受了写作的快乐…
他立刻咯咯（giggle）笑了起来，脸上洋溢（spread）着灿烂的笑容。他告诉我，他为我的精彩表现感到骄傲。
例句
Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face, he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance.
Application
★刮刮卡★
资料书一本
With+宾语+n./adj./adv./prep.phrases
With 的复合结构做状语
With+宾语+
不定式
现在分词
过去分词
Summary
(将要发生)
(主动、进行)
(被动、完成)
With 的复合结构在读后续写中的句式结构
句型一： With+ 情绪名词+doing/done, 主谓……
句型二：With+身体部位+done/doing, 主谓……
Items Yes No Improvement needed
Are you familiar with usage of
“With” Compound Structure？
Have you mastered how to make sentences including “With” Compound Structure？
Have you applied “With” Compound Structure in your writing when opportunity arose
Will you spare some time to practice “With” Compound Structure when communicating with your classmates
Self-assessment
Micro-writing(微写作)
一进入这个大厅，她发现有很多观众正等待她的表演。突然，紧张淹没了她。她脸色苍白，双腿颤抖着向前走去。她努力地掩饰她的紧张，但是她仍能听到心脏砰砰的跳动声，痛苦的节奏让她窒息，使她很虚弱。最终，她还是成功的走到了台上。深呼吸，努力地让自己平静下来，但是大脑一片空白。她交叉双手，结果发现自己冰冷的双手在出汗、在颤抖着。
痛苦的节奏 painful beating
使某人窒息 choke sb
大脑一片空白 one’s mind went blank
出汗sweat
Homework
提示词：
一…就 on/upon doing sth
表演performance
紧张nervous， nervousness
苍白的white
Upon entering the big hall, she found there were a huge number of audiences waiting for their performance. Suddenly, nervousness came flooding over her. she stepped forward, _______________________________________________ (脸色苍白，神经紧张，双腿颤抖). She tried to hide her nervousness, but she could feel her heart thump, thump, thump; and the painful beats choked her and made her feel faint. Finally, she made it to the front. Breathing deeply, she tried to calm herself down, _____________________________(她大脑一片空白). Therefore, she crossed her hand, only to find her freezing fingers sweating and trembling.
with her face white and nervous, and her legs trembling
with her mind going blank
THANKS
I’m sure you can get it with your heart put into it!

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