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Unit 5 Off to space
Writing
英语沪教版七年级上册
Learning objectives
通过本课时学习，学生能够：
1. 通过分析范文的内容，总结范文的结构，完成有关太空旅行网帖的思维导图；
2. 制定自己的思维导图，综合运用本单元所学语言知识，充分发挥想象力，根据思维导图完成一篇网帖，介绍自己梦想中的太空之旅；
3. 使用写作评价量表，分析与评价自己和同伴的作品；
4. 通过展示自己的作品，分享自己的梦想和价值观，从而树立远大的目标。
重点
重点
Look and say
David hopes he can travel to space someday. Let’s take a look at his travel plan.
Where will he go
He will take a trip to the space station.
someday / s mde / adv. 总有一天；有朝一日
Look and say
How will he go there
He will fly out into space on a spaceship.
Look and say
Who will he go with
He will travel into space with his family.
Look and say
What is he going to do
He is going to look out of the window and enjoy the view of the Earth.
He is going to do some experiments.
view /vju / n. 景色；风景
Look and say
What is he going to do
He is going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
He is going to study how plants grow in space.
Look and say
What will he have to do
He will have to tie his sleeping bag to the wall.
Brainstorm
Write a post about a dream trip to space.
Space Adventure
Have you ever dreamt of travelling to space Now comes your chance: write a post about your dream trip and send it to our school website. The writer of the best post will win a free trip to space!
What will be included in your post Draw a mind map.
dream /dri m/ n. 梦想；理想 dream trip 梦想之旅
v. 做梦；梦见 dream of 梦想
send /send/ v. 邮寄；发送
chance /t ɑ ns/ n. 机会；机遇
Read and fill
David drew a mind map before he wrote about his dream plete the mind map and then read the post to see if you were right.
a What the trip will be like b Things I am going to do there
c Things I will have to do there d Introduction
introduction / ntr d k n/ n. 序言；引言
Read and check
Read David’s post and check your answers.
David
2053/11/5 20:05
I hope I can travel into space with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly out into space on a spaceship. When we get into orbit, we will visit a space station. It will take us about six hours to get there.
Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I'm going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
I really look forward to travelling into space someday—it will be an amazing experience!
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Read and check
Read the first paragraph and check your answer.
I hope I can travel into space with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly out into space on a spaceship. When we get into orbit, we will visit a space station. It will take us about six hours to get there.
a What the trip will be like b Things I am going to do there
c Things I will have to do there d Introduction
d
orbit / b t/ n. （天体等运行的）轨道
get into orbit 进入轨道
Read and check
Read the second paragraph and check your answer.
Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
a What the trip will be like b Things I am going to do there
c Things I will have to do there d Introduction
d
c
Read and check
Read the third paragraph and check your answer.
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I'm going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
a What the trip will be like b Things I am going to do there
c Things I will have to do there d Introduction
d
c
b
Read and check
Read the last paragraph and check your answer.
I really look forward to travelling into space someday—it will be an amazing experience!
a What the trip will be like b Things I am going to do there
c Things I will have to do there d Introduction
d
c
b
a
experience / k sp ri ns/ n. 经历；阅历
Read and summarize
I hope I can travel into space with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly out into space on a spaceship. When we get into orbit, we will visit a space station. It will take us about six hours to get there.
Things are very diferent in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I'm going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
I really look forward to travelling into space someday—it will be an amazing experience!
Structure
Introduction
Body part
Ending
Can you summarize the structure of the post
Read, think and complete
I hope I can travel into space with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly out into space on a spaceship. When we get into orbit, we will visit a space station. It will take us about six hours to get there.
Introduction
Organize the information and complete your mind map.
When:
Who:
How:
Where:
How long:
one day/in 2053/on...
with family/friends/classmates/...
on a spaceship/...
a space station/the Moon/Mars...
It will take us about ... hours
...
Read, think and complete
Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I'm going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
Organize the information and complete your mind map.
What will you have to do
What are you going to do
Body part
Because of less gravity:
Because of no air:
tie...to.../wash.. and brush.. in a different way/do exercise/...
put on a spacesuit/...
enjoy the view of.../do some experiments/study.../go on a space walk
...
Find the verbs or verb phrases that you can use in your post.
Read and summarize
Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I'm going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
What is the function of these words
These are the ______ words.
In the article, they help to:
linking
1. clarify the relationship between ideas, such as cause and effect.
2. organize ideas in a sequence, making the steps clear.
Read and summarize
I really look forward to travelling into space someday—it will be an amazing experience!
Ending
Can you think of more adjectives or verb phrases to describe the trip
What the trip will be like
amazing/look forward to/...
wonderful/exciting/
unforgettable/cool/fun
can’t wait to take off/dream of/...
Organize the information and complete your mind map.
Write
Write your post with the help of your mind map.
xxx
xxxx/xx/x xxxx
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Introduction
When, Where, Who, How, How long ...
Body part
What will you have to do
What are you going to do
What will you take with you
...
Ending
What will the trip be like
The details must be rich.
Checklist Result
Structure(结构) Does the passage have a clear beginning, body and ending
Content(内容) Does the writer focus on a clear topic in each paragraph
Does each paragrah include enough details
Language(语言) Does the writer use the linking words to make the text flow smoothly and logically
Does the writer use the words and expressions learnt in this unit
Does the writer use correct spelling, grammar and punctuation
Handwriting Is the writing neat and beautiful
5 = Excellent, 4 = Good, 3 = Acceptable, 2 = Needs improvement
Revise in pairs
Revise your partner’s draft according to the checklist.
Show your post
I hope I can travel to the Moon with my family one day. Here’s what my dream trip will be like. First, my family and I will board a spaceship and launch into space. It will take us about three days to reach the Moon!
Things are very different on the Moon. There is much less gravity, so we will bounce around instead of walking. When we sleep, we will need to tie our sleeping bags to keep us from floating away. Washing our hands and eating food will also be a fun challenge!
When we land on the Moon, I will look out of the window to see the Earth shining in the sky. After that, I want to explore the Moon and collect moon rocks. Next, I will put on a special spacesuit and go for a walk on the Moon!
I can’t wait to travel to the Moon someday—it will be an unforgettable adventure!
Summary
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How to write a post about a dream trip to space
Have a clear beginning, body part and ending.
Introduce your trip in details.
Use the linking words to make the text flow smoothly and logically.
Homework
1. Read and recite the passage on Page 76.
2. Revise your article about a dream trip to space and post it on the school website.
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