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高分写作
第5讲　求助信
A. 应用文
1. 求助信的基本结构
求助信是指当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。注意语气要委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。通常包括三部分内容：开篇表明写信目的，即请求帮助；正文说明理由，陈述需求助的具体内容；结尾希望得到帮助并表达感谢。
2. 常用表达
开头语：
(1)I'm writing to ask you to do me a favour/give me a hand.
我写信想请您帮我一个忙。
(2)I'm writing to ask you to give us some guidance.
我写信想请您给我们提供一些指导。
正文：
(1)Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on…
面对以上的问题，我渴望得到您的帮助。您能给予我一些关于……的建议吗
(2)I have some trouble/difficulty (in) doing/with…
我做……有困难。
(3)I'm in urgent need of your professional guidance in…
我急切需要您在……方面提供专业指导。
结束语：
(1)I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I'd really appreciate it if you could help me.
我想知道您能否帮助我解决这些问题。如果您能帮助我，我将感激不尽。
(2)Looking forward to your reply. And I'd be really thankful.
期待收到您的回复。非常感谢！
典例体验
(2024·江苏南通)
假定你是李华，将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人，并正在设计节目串词。请你给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件，请他给予指导，内容包括：
1. 陈述问题；
2. 请求指导。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇：情景喜剧 sitcom；串词program cue
写作指导
体裁 求助信 时态 一般现在时和现在完成时
主题 设计节目串词 人称 第一、二人称
结构 第一段：表明写信目的 第二段：陈述问题——如何设计英文情景喜剧表演大赛的节目串词 第三段：请求指导，并表达感激之情 核心词汇
1. 包含，使并入 v. ____________________
2. 在……方面专业 ____________________
3. 维持，保持 v. ____________________
4. 气氛，氛围 n. ____________________
5. 指导，引导 n. ____________________
incorporate
expertise in
maintain
atmosphere
guidance
核心要点的不同表达
1. 我面临的最大挑战是设计节目串词，特别是在涉及在节目片段之间创造流畅的过渡和融入适当的幽默时。(cue, transition, appropriate)
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What challenges me most is designing the program cues, especially when it comes to creating smooth transitions between programs and incorporating appropriate humor. /It's challenging for me to design the program cues, especially concerning creating smooth transitions between programs and incorporating appropriate humor.
2. 我早就听说了您在戏剧和表演方面的专业知识，所以我想知道您是否能给我提供一些建议，以有效地安排节目串词，并在整个比赛中保持活跃的氛围。(hear of, structure)
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heard of your expertise in drama and performance, so I wonder if you could kindly provide me with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere throughout the competition./Hearing of your expertise in drama and performance for a long time, I wonder if you could kindly provide me with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere throughout the competition.
小试牛刀
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to seek your guidance as I'm going to host our school's upcoming English sitcom competition. What challenges me most is designing the program cues, especially when it comes to creating smooth transitions between programs and incorporating appropriate humor.
I have long heard of your expertise in drama and performance, so I wonder if you could kindly provide me with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere throughout the competition. Any advice on my hosting work would be greatly appreciated.
I'm eager for your precious guidance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2025·江西宜春)
假定你是李华，你校外教老师Mathew要求以小组为单位做一个关于“Sports and Fitness”的项目。请你作为小组长给老师发一封邮件沟通有关事宜并向他寻求建议，内容包括：
1. 项目内容以及进展；
2. 寻求建议。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear Mathew,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Mathew,
I'm writing to update you on my group project about “Sports and Fitness” and seek some advice.
With the intention of promoting the importance of sports and fitness among students, we plan to create a poster that highlights the benefits of regular exercise and encourages everyone to participate in sports activities. So far, we have collected information about different types of sports and their benefits. However, we have difficulty in finding suitable pictures for our poster. Could you please suggest some websites with relevant images Additionally, if you have any other suggestions for our project, we would greatly appreciate it.
Thank you for your guidance and support. We look forward to your response.
Yours,
Li Hua

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