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第2讲　根据六要素和三线把握故事梗概情节
A
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·湖南长沙)
Ramu started a business with great enthusiasm but just after a few months his business went under. Time passed but Ramu didn't start any new work. His teacher got to know about his situation and called him to his home.
The teacher asked, “Why don't you start some other work ”
Ramu replied, “I gave my everything to my business, and yet it still failed.”
The teacher tried to comfort him, saying, “But that's life. Sometimes we get success and sometimes we don't. This doesn't mean that we stop working.”
“What's the point of doing work when I can't be sure of success ” Ramu replied with a bit of annoyance.
The teacher took Ramu to a room and showed him a dead tomato plant. Ramu was confused and said, “It's dead. Why are you showing it to me ”
The teacher replied, “When I sowed its seed, I did everything right for it. I watered it, fertilized it, sprayed it with pesticide (杀虫剂). I took great care of it but it still died.” He stopped for a while and then said, “Doing work is the same… No matter how hard you try, you cannot decide what happens in the end. However, you can control those things in your hands. Just do your best！”
Ramu asked, “But if there is no guarantee of success, then what's the use of doing anything ”
The teacher said, “You'd better not think like that…”
“What's wrong with that… I have given so much hard work, so much money, so much time; if success is only a matter of chance, then what is the use of doing so much ” said Ramu and he was about to leave.
Just then the teacher stopped him and said, “Before you leave, I want to show you one more thing.”
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
He took Ramu to another room and opened the door. ___________________
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At that very moment, Ramu read the lesson of success. _________________
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One possible version：
He took Ramu to another room and opened the door. There was a pile of big red tomatoes lying there. Ramu asked, “Why are you showing me these ” Just then the teacher said, “These tomatoes are the result of not giving up on growing plants. Similarly, if you keep doing the right things, your chances of getting success are greatly increased. But if you give up because of one or two failures, life will reward you with nothing.”
At that very moment, Ramu read the lesson of success. He understood what he had to do now and left with a different idea. He conducted some market research and started a new business. No one could guarantee he would succeed this time but there was a chance. Like Ramu, many people make their failure as a reason for not trying further. It is true that no matter how hard we try, we cannot control the result. But it is also true that those who keep trying to get success will get it tomorrow if not today. Every failure is a step toward success.
B
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·山东青岛)
Mike and Daniel were good friends. They ran a barbershop in a town. Mike and Daniel were kind to others, so they had a good relationship with the neighbors around them. One of them was an elderly lady called Mary.
Mary's house was located in the same street as their barbershop, a few hundred metres away. Mary lived alone and her son worked in another city. So, she usually came to the barbershop to chat with Mike and Daniel. They liked Mary very much and regarded her as their own family.
One day three years ago, Mike and Daniel noticed that Mary had not been in their shop for a long time. They both began to feel worried about her. But the other neighbors told them that Mary might have gone to see her son. That reassured them.
A few weeks later, Mary returned. The next day, she came to the barbershop. Unlike before, Mary looked sad this time. Instead of talking to Mike and Daniel, she sat silently. At that time, Mike and Daniel were busy, but they still smiled and asked Mary what had happened. Mary just laughed and asked them not to worry.
After a few minutes, they finished their work, so they began to ask Mary in detail about the specifics of the situation. Mary remained silent and just got up slowly. She came and sat down in front of Mike and said sadly, “I don't want to cut my hair, but I have to.” Mike didn't pay much attention to what she said and just told her to relax. Then he picked up the scissors and started to work.
At this time, Daniel noticed that Mary started to cry, so he hurriedly asked Mike to stop. They started begging Mary to tell them the truth. Eventually, Mary told them what had happened. It turned out that Mary had been diagnosed with a brain tumor (肿瘤) and needed to undergo surgery and have her hair cut. But she was unwilling to cut it and felt that being bald (秃头的) would make her look ugly.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
Mike and Daniel got an idea after knowing Mary's worry. _______________
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After seeing what Mike and Daniel had done, Mary decided to let them cut her hair. ___________________________________________________________
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One possible version：
Mike and Daniel got an idea after knowing Mary's worry. It occurred to them that there was a wig (假发) maker in the city and they arranged to meet with him. After seeing the picture of Mary's hair, The wig maker promised to make a beautiful wig for Mary that looked just like her real hair. Before they left, the wig maker also gave them several samples for Mary to choose from. Mike and Daniel went away on the top of the world.
After seeing what Mike and Daniel had done, Mary decided to let them cut her hair. She was deeply moved by their kindness. Mary was happy when she put on her new wig and enrolled herself in a wig tending program. She was so touched by their thoughtful kindness that she was no longer embarrassed to go out. From then on, she looked more confident than before. Mary considered them as her own children and would come to their barbershop more often. She was no longer alone and it showed how much they meant to her.

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