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高分写作 B.读后续写
第3讲　围绕中心词提问法构建合理的续写情节
A
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·江苏南通)
I spent 15 years trying to make it in the music industry. When I was a teenager, I did any odd job to afford time in a recording studio. I knocked at managers' doors and sent out demo (录音样带) after demo, but I got nowhere. In 2010, aged 27, I was doing a job in a restaurant when I wrote a song called Dream Goes On. It was a song about never giving up. I just let out all of my frustrations at the keyboard.
Over the next five years, the music career never materialized but I persisted. Then, in 2019, I uploaded Dream Goes On to a music sharing website. I just wanted someone to notice my music.
Later that year, I received an email out of the blue from Music World from South Korea, requesting a license for the song. They had chosen my song from the millions on the music sharing website as a theme tune for one of their shows. I was amazed and negotiated a contract for $5，000 for the use of the song and signed up straight away. I was pretty excited, but didn't think anything more would come of it, so I focused on my job in the restaurant.
This February, Music World organized a musical festival in Seoul and my song Dream Goes On was also chosen as the theme tune for the festival. I watched on YouTube as my song was being played to a huge crowd of people. It was amazing.
After three days of the festival, I was contacted by Music World and they asked if I'd like to go to Seoul to sing Dream Goes On in a concert. They flew me out there the next day. I was welcomed like a celebrity—everyone I met thought I was a big name in England. I had to break the news to them that I wasn't a pop star.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
I had never performed the song live, and hadn't been on stage for years. ____
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After the concert, I had photographers and journalists battling to interview me._______________________________________________________________
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One possible version：
I had never performed the song live, and hadn't been on stage for years. Seized by a strong sense of tension, I stood on the stage, seeing the huge cheers and a sea of lights below the stage. I was lost at the moment, holding the microphone tightly. I tried my best to collect myself and began to sing my own song which I had practiced hundreds of times. Looking back the years I had spent as I sang on the stage, I realized that it was an opportunity that I had been waiting for the whole life. I kept myself full of enthusiasm as I was singing on the stage, showing the best to the audience.
After the concert, I had photographers and journalists battling to interview me. With them around me, a long queue of fans were waiting to have their photograph taken with me. I was like a superstar and that night was like a real dream for me. I had knocked on doors for years, yet my moment came when the opportunity called me. Life can surprise you. It has reinspired my passion for music. This has made all the odd jobs and weekends spent in recording studios all worthwhile.
B
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·广东深圳)
Kat was learning to adapt to the new home, but Aunt Lucy sensed that deep inside her niece was a place that no one could reach. She had set up a barrier to keep herself from others since her parents passed away. She made friends at school, but never had close friends. Kat was a loner and too proud to tell anyone why she lived with her aunt. Back home, in Kat's heart, not her own home, she often helped do housework but was unwilling to participate in any entertainment. It seemed that she was interested in nothing. Kat even told Lucy that she didn't want to go to school. Aunt Lucy decided to do something to change all that.
Aunt Lucy was a teacher and her home was filled with books. Lucy got an idea that it might be helpful to lead Kat to a world of books, where Kat could heal (治愈) herself by reading. She told the young girl there was a wonderful world in the library. “Read, and you will learn where you came from and where you're going. You will understand more about life and dreams, baby.” Sitting on the doorway side by side with Kat, Lucy said. Kat looked up at the moon in the sky with her hands supporting her head. “Dreams ” Kat repeated the last word of her aunt and seemed to ask herself. “Yes, dreams. You can become anybody you want to be, a movie star, a scientist, or a sport legend.” Aunt Lucy put her arm on Kat's shoulder and answered her niece. Kat turned to her aunt and said seriously, “I want to be a doctor to help the children who lose their parents.” “But you have to get an education first,” Lucy told her.
注意：续写词数应为150个左右。
Kat became crazy about reading and found a new world in books. _________
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Instead of pursuing her initial dream to be a doctor, she chose to be a teacher like Lucy.__________________________________________________________
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One possible version：
Kat became crazy about reading and found a new world in books. She discovered that there were people on the Earth who suffered a lot, even worse than her. However, those unfortunate people didn't acknowledge defeat and never stopped trying. They were not only brave enough to face the challenges of life, to endure the loss of loved ones, but also devoted themselves to helping others, to inspiring others and even to saving their lives. Kat was thankful that Aunt Lucy helped her to heal herself and to make her stronger than before.
Instead of pursuing her initial dream to be a doctor, she chose to be a teacher like Lucy. She realized that a doctor could save a child's parents, but reading could save some parents' child. And a teacher was most likely the person who led children to the path of reading and the discovery of a new world. Kat told Aunt Lucy her decision, “Sorry, I don't keep my dream, but I want to be a teacher like you.” Hearing Kat's words, Aunt Lucy was more than happy and deeply moved. With tears welling up in her eyes, Aunt Lucy nodded to approve.

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