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Understand and master the basic structure of activity reports;
Accurately describe an event using appropriate vocabulary and sentence structures;
Memorize practical sentence
pattern formulas and apply them
in news report writing;
Learning objectives
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School activities
Sports Meeting
Art Festival
Walking Event
Motivation
Structure
Outline
Writing
Polish
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Review
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Activity Report
[活动报道 × 校园活动】 应用文写作
Yoyo
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Past Paper Presentation
时间 试卷 体裁 题材
2020 全国III卷 记叙文 介绍农场采摘活动
2020 新高考I卷 报道 报道五公里赛跑情况
2021 全国I卷 投稿 向庆祝“世界六五环境日”的主题网站投稿
2022 新高考I卷 报道 在英语节目对外教访谈
2023 全国甲卷 报道 用英文讲中国故事征文活动
2023 浙江卷 报道 “认识我身边的植物”
2024 全国I卷 书信 为校“中国古诗词演唱比赛”写通知
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Outline
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Past Paper Presentation
时间 试卷 体裁 题材
2020 全国III卷 记叙文 介绍农场采摘活动
2020 新高考I卷 报道 报道五公里赛跑情况
2021 全国I卷 投稿 向庆祝“世界六五环境日”的主题网站投稿
2022 新高考I卷 报道 在英语节目对外教访谈
2023 全国甲卷 报道 用英文讲中国故事征文活动
2023 浙江卷 报道 “认识我身边的植物”
2024 全国I卷 书信 为校“中国古诗词演唱比赛”写通知
近年来，应用文以活动报道为载体，命题多是半开放式作文,给学生充分的发挥空间。
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What is “Report”
报道
新闻、活动报道是典型的应用文体裁，也是新高考常考体裁，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历、举办的活动或发生的事件给予明确的、实事求是的报道。
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Figure out its structure
President Macron Tours Sichuan University
Headline 标题
Lead 导语
Body 主体
Tail 结语
Time
Who
Where
What
Why
How
Ending
Evaluation（评价）
Details
注意：“报道”的格式与信件写作不同，不需要开头结尾段落的“客套话”!
Feedback（反响）
第三方角度→客观描述！！！
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When
【2020年新高考I卷】
假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3.活动反响。
1. 体裁： 活动报道
2. 人称： 第三人称
3. 时态： 一般过去时
Practical application
报道
上周日
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Write an outline
Para1: Lead
5 W+ 1H
Para 2: Body
More details:
Para 3: Tail
Li Hua
last Sunday
our school
目的？
and students
First→ Then→ Last
Feedback / Evaluation
参与人员 + 跑步路线+亮点
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How to make writing go smoothly
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Para 1:
介绍活动时间目的+介绍活动安排/内容+说明活动意义价值
“活动”通知
“活动”报道
In order to enrich campus life, our school will hold an activity in 地点+ 时间 with the theme of....
介绍活动时间目的+回顾活动安排/内容+点评活动意义价值
找联系
will hold
In order to enrich campus life, our school will hold an activity in 地点+ 时间 with the theme of....
last Sun-
held
A Cross-Country Running Race
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Para 1:
In order to broaden students’ horizons and enrich campus life, our school held an activity last Sunday with the theme of“A Cross-Country Running Race”
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Aiming to
With the purpose of doing sth
减轻学生的压力 reduce students' pressure增强信心 boost our confidence
促进友谊 promote our friendship
激发兴趣/好奇心arouse our interest /curiosity
培养对…的热爱cultivate our love/passion for
Useful expressions
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Para 2:
活动路线
参与人员？
活动亮点
来自不同年级的100个学生
来自我校的100个学生
100个学生
100 students
100 students
from different grades
100 students
from our school
参与人员 + 跑步路线+亮点
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Para 2:
（人）....参与了....（活动）with 情绪
来自不同年级的100个学生热情地参与了这次比赛。
100 students from different grades
took part in this race
with enthusiasm.
participate in
get invovled in
参与者+（定语）+参加+活动+ 状语 （如：with 结构）
[Exercise]
1. 全校学生都热情地参加了丰富多彩的活动。
2.50名对舞蹈天赋极高的学生积极参加了这个比赛。
All students in our school
participated in various activities
with enthusiasm.
50 students, who have a great gift for dancing，
get invovled in this contest
actively
参与人员 + 跑步路线+亮点
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Para 2:
根据安排，.....（活动）将于某地开始，从....点到....点
“活动”通知
As scheduled, ....will be hold 地点， which begins from... to....
“活动”报道
根据安排，比赛在九点（具体时间）开始，从校门口到南山脚下。
As scheduled, the race will be hold
will hold
held
at 9，
which began from the schoold gate to the foot of the South Mountain.
参与人员 + 跑步路线+亮点
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Para 2
最让我疑惑的是....
咨询信
What confuses me most is that.....
“活动”报道
最让学生们兴奋的是....
What excited students most was that.....
最让学生们印象深刻的是....
What impressed students most was that.....
参与人员 + 跑步路线+亮点
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Para 3:
good great wonderful
Evaluation→ adj
大开眼界的
有所收获的
鼓舞人心的
这次活动结果是一个巨大的成功。
太low啦！
This activity _____________ to be a great success.
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eye-opening
rewarding
inspiring
turned out
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Feedback→ 好评如潮
高度评价
这次活动结果是一个巨大的成功。
太普通啦！
This activity turned out to be a great success.
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popular
赢得了所有人的好评
won favorable comments from everyone
think/speak highly of
受欢迎的
,which
This activity turned out to be a great successs, which has won favorable comments from everyone.
Motivation
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How to polish the senteces
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无灵主语→ witness 见证；目击
时间 witnessed an activity themed “.....” in 地点, which aimed to 目的.
How to polish the sentece
In order to enrich campus life, our school held an activity last Sunday with the theme of “A Cross-Country Running Race”
Last Sunday witnessed an activity themed “A Cross-Country Running Race”in our school, which aimed to enrich campus life.
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假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了爱国主义人物事迹展览活动。请你为校报写一篇英文新闻报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员
2. 展览路线:从校门口到操场
3. 活动反响
Motivation
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Outline
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假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了主题为“优秀文化之美”的校园文化节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括：
1.活动时间地点、参加人员等；
2.活动内容；
3.活动反馈。
Last Friday witnessed an activity themed “patriots’ stories in our school, which aimed to enrich our campus life.
Last Sunday witnessed an activity themed “patriots’ stories in our school, which aimed to cultivate our love for the beauty of Chinese Culture.
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Review
时间 witnessed an activity themed “.....” in 时间+地点, which aimed to 目的.
Headline
Lead
Body
Tail
details
5 W
1 H
A News Report
活动反响、意义
Feedback or Evaluation
This activity turned out to be a great successs, which has won favorable comments from everyone.
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【2023年1月浙江】
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动的过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意: 写作词数应为80左右;
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