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定语和定语从句
在写作中的应用
1.只要两句话的主语一致，就可以把后一句话改成非限制性定语从句。如果先行词是人，引导词就用who/whom；如果先行词是物，引导词就用which。
①莉莉是一个老师，她喜欢唱歌和跳舞。
【翻译】Lily is a teacher. She enjoys singing and dancing.
【拓展】Lily is a teacher, who enjoys singing and dancing.
②这次活动很有趣，可以让你交到更多的中国朋友。
【翻译】This activity is interesting. It can help you make more Chinese friends.
【拓展】This activity is interesting, which can help you make more Chinese friends.
1.只要两句话的主语一致，就可以把后一句话改成非限制性定语从句。如果先行词是人，引导词就用who/whom；如果先行词是物，引导词就用which。
③我爸爸是一个警察，他总是尽力去帮助需要帮助的人。
【翻译】My father is a policeman. He always tries his best to help people in need.
【拓展】My father is a policeman,who always tries his best to help people in need.
1.只要两句话的主语一致，就可以把后一句话改成非限制性定语从句。如果先行词是人，引导词就用who/whom；如果先行词是物，引导词就用which。
④英语是世界上广泛使用的语言，它能帮助你更流畅地阅读全世界的名著。
【翻译】English is a widely spoken language in the world,and it can help you to read the world's classics more fluently.
【拓展】English is a widely spoken language in the world, which can help you to read the world's classics more fluently.
2.作文中的句子要有长有短。把短句子写成长句子的一个重要方法是给名词加定语。
①Keeping pets can relieve loneliness.
【解析】句子读起来有种干瘪的感觉。为了使之生动，可以加上定语，句子读起来就会感觉不同。
【拓展】Keeping those pets that look so cute and smart can relieve loneliness of some senior citizens and children who stay at home alone. 养那些看起来既可爱又聪明的宠物可以缓解一些独自待在家里的老人和孩子的孤独感。
2.作文中的句子要有长有短。把短句子写成长句子的一个重要方法是给名词加定语。
② Worshipping stars blindly will waste time.
【解析】句子有些简单且片面，加上定语就讲明了具体的原因。
【拓展】Worshipping stars who might be good at singing and dancing blindly will waste a lot of time of young people. 盲目崇拜那些可能擅长唱歌和跳舞的明星会浪费年轻人的很多时间。
2.作文中的句子要有长有短。把短句子写成长句子的一个重要方法是给名词加定语。
③ Reading books can broaden the horizons.
【解析】这个句子读起来没有语法错误，但缺乏生动性。尝试一下给名词加定语。首先这个句子有两个名词，分别是 books 和 horizons，可以用单词、短语或者定语从句来修饰它们。
【拓展】Reading books which are beneficial to our mental and physical health can broaden the horizons of children and adults.阅读有益于我们身心健康的书籍可以开阔孩子和成人的眼界。
2.作文中的句子要有长有短。把短句子写成长句子的一个重要方法是给名词加定语。
④Surfing the Internet wastes time.
【解析】这句话有两个名词——分别是 Internet 和 time，考虑到加的定语太多也不好，所以可以只给time 加定语。
【拓展】Surfing the Internet wastes time of students who should spend more time on their study. 上网浪费了学生的时间，他们应该把更多的时间花在学习上。
Writing practice
建议信
假定你是李华，你的外国笔友 Frank想要提高中文写作水平，向你寻求建议。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.提出建议；2.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Frank,
I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble improving your Chinese writing. I'm more than glad to offer you some suggestions.
To begin with, a good way which helps you improve your Chinese writing is to read other people's articles, from which you can learn how skillful writers use Chinese to express themselves and present information in an excellent way. Besides, you should improve your writing by practicing. Keeping a diary is a wise choice that can help you stick to this daily practice. Remember that practice makes perfect.
Hopefully, the advice would be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写
野外历险
续写情节构建
第一步：恶劣环境（环境的描写，人物绝望、恐惧、挣扎情绪的描写）；
第二步：转危为安（转机描写，描写听见了什么或看见了什么，希望十努力情绪的描写，脱险感恩＋高兴情绪的描写）；
第三步：升华主题（需要牢记，历险类的文章不要无缘无故拔高主题，一般的主题词是“勇敢”“克服困难”，当然还有一个常用的表达“这是一次难忘的经历”）。
核心短语：
踏上旅途 set out on a journey
自然风光 natural scenery
收获勇气 gain courage
生存技能 survival skills
与时间赛跑 race against time
克服困难 overcome obstacles
无畏前行 march forward fearlessly
化险为夷 turn danger into safety
1.我的荒野探险之旅既充满了兴奋也充满了危险。
My adventure journey into the wilderness was filled with both excitement and danger.
2.带着地图和指南针，我踏上了未知的探险之旅。
Equipped with a map and compass, I set out on my adventure into the unknown.
3.尽管有时迷路，最终我还是设法在指南针的帮助下找到了回安全地带的路。
Despite getting lost at times, I finally managed to find my way back to safety with the help of my compass.
4.自然环境的美丽令人叹观止，但我始终警惕着前方可能存在的危险。
The beauty of the natural environment was breathtaking, but I was always alert to the potential dangers that lay ahead.
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don't be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Para.1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
Para.2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
So cute was it that I decided to touch the little animal.
However, the smart rabbit, which aroused my interest, ran as quickly as it could. "I have to catch it," I thought. My father and I followed it without hesitation. The thick forest, the tiny flowers that perfumed the air, the groups of sheep in the far distance and the singing river, all made me totally immersed in the charm of nature. Both my dad and I forgot the time and finally it seemed difficult for us to go back.
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. In the darkness, there was only the faint light given off by a few stars in the sky and the forest kept extremely quiet so that I could hear my own breath, which made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, all of a sudden, I saw torchlight moving and heard the voice of Uncle Paul who came to save us. Ultimately, we were back to the farm house, safe and sound. Sitting in the guest room, I found it really happy being accompanied by my beloved ones!

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