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读后续写
continuation writing
③思路讲解
③七不原则
②三大原则
①具体要求与评分参考
目录
④思路讲解
③七不原则
②三大原则
①具体要求与评分参考
目录
提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。续写部分分为两段。
--《考试说明》
具体要求与评分参考
评分参考：
1.本题总分为25分，按档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和词汇语法和篇章内容三个方面考虑，具体为：
（1）创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及原文情境的融洽度；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性、恰当性；
（4）上下文的衔接和连贯；
3. 评分时，先根据作答的整体基本情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4. 评分时还应注意：
词数少于120的，酌情扣分。
单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面。
书写较差，以至影响交际，酌情扣分。
具体要求与评分参考
具体要求与评分参考
维度 评价项目
立意 紧扣主题，弘扬正能量
结尾、完整
逻辑 逻辑清晰、顺承上文
与首段衔接合理
内容 场景描写
修辞手法
人物塑造 外貌
心理
动作
维度 评价项目
语言 时态正确
词汇准确、丰富
句型多样
有效使用语句连接
拼写、大小写、标点
150词
书面干净、整洁、美观
三大原则
1. 原文一致原则
2. 正能量原则
3. 曲折性原则
内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，语言表达风格一致。
凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。
故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。
七不原则
① 不增加人物
②不增加旁支情节
③不要用过多对话
④ 不用负能量的结局
由考纲样题及近年高考真题中所给的段落首句可知，续写的故事情节发展都是由原文的人物所推进。因此，强行增加人物有可能会偏离情节发展。
题目要求“考生根据所给情节进行续写”，旨在延续原材料的故事情节，并不是要发展新情节。
在续写中展示对话，虽能丰富内容和语言，增强语篇的连贯性，但使用过多的对话，会显得篇幅累赘且很难在限定的词数里把整个后续情节发展补充完整。
结局决不能负能量，内容应该积极向上，能增长知识或者传播正能量。
七不原则
⑤不在文末设置悬念
⑥不偏离原文主题
⑦不违背逻辑常理
若在文末设置悬念，就会给人一种还没结束的感觉，这样的故事是不完整的。
续写应该围绕短文主题去推进。
思路讲解
1. 阅读材料
2. 思考
3. 写作
读六要素
读情节
读情感
思考故事中的冲突
思路讲解
阅读材料
1. 读六要素
when
where
what
why
how
2. 读情节
beginning
development
climax
ending
3. 读情感
情感随着时间的发展而变化
who
思路讲解
思考
思考故事中的冲突
冲突
解决
成功
三大主题
人与自我
人与社会
人与自然
与自己
靠自己
与别人
靠别人
与环境
靠环境
如：自卑 —— 自信； 失败 —— 勇气......
如：争吵 —— 帮助； 误解 —— 安慰......
如：遇险 —— 机会； 干旱 —— 甘霖......
思路讲解
写作
Para.1
Para.2
开头提示句
开头提示句
句1
句2、3、4
句5
句1
句2、3、4
句5
句6
衔接（可用人物的情感、心理、动作描写...)
增加细节
增加细节
有所体现
故事的结局
升华主题
契科夫法则
一个故事中提到的每一个元素都应该在后面出场，不然就没有必要提及。
衔接
应用
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ken, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back ”
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father’s death, Desiree refused to accept it. “Daddy will be home soon, she'd tell her mother. “He’s at work. When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chatting with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,” she’d say. “When will you come back ” Desiree’s situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken’s birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said, “and send it up to the sky ” Desiree’s eyes immediately lit up.
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy Birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid(《小美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child’s eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken’s grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January.”
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they’d released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
One day, 3000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes.
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived.
where
what
Desiree's home ；
Ken's grave
Desiree refused to accept her father's death and she missed her father. On his birthday, she and her mother send a letter attached to a balloon to him in the sky. Since then, Desiree wanted to get responses.
who
Desireee; her mother; Ken
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ken, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back ”
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father’s death, Desiree refused to accept it. “Daddy will be home soon, she'd tell her mother. “He’s at work. When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chatting with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,” she’d say. “When will you come back ” Desiree’s situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken’s birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said, “and send it up to the sky ” Desiree’s eyes immediately lit up.
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy Birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid(《小美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child’s eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken’s grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January.”
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they’d released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
应用
when
where
why
how
nine months after the death of Ken; on Ken’s birthday.
Desiree's home；Ken's grave
Desiree refused to accept her father's death.
Desiree’s mother proposed the idea of sending a balloon with a letter to the sky.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Desiree, a 4-year-old girl, was sobbing quietly over a photo of her father, Ken, who had died nine months earlier. She was hugging the photo with her fingers running around his face. “Daddy,” she said softly, “why won't you come back ”
Instead of gradually adjusting to her father’s death, Desiree refused to accept it. “Daddy will be home soon, she'd tell her mother. “He’s at work. When she played with her toy telephone, she pretended she was chatting with her father. “I miss you, Daddy,” she’d say. “When will you come back ” Desiree’s situation made her mother worried.
Days later, it was Ken’s birthday. “How will I send him a card ” Desiree asked her mother. “How about if we tie a letter to a balloon,” her mother said, “and send it up to the sky ” Desiree’s eyes immediately lit up.
Her mother took her to a store and Desiree picked out a balloon with Happy Birthday above a drawing of The Little Mermaid(《小美人鱼》). Desiree and her father had often watched it. The child’s eyes shone as they were on the way to Ken’s grave. Then Desiree read a letter to her dad. “Happy birthday, Daddy. I love you and miss you,” she said quickly. “I hope you will get this and can write to me on my birthday in January.”
Her mother wrote the message and their address on a small piece of paper, which was then wrapped in plastic and tied to the end of the string on the balloon. Finally, Desiree released the balloon. For almost an hour, they watched the shining spot of silver grow smaller and smaller till it disappeared. “Now Dad’s going to write back to me,” Desiree declared confidently.
Every day since they’d released the balloon, Desiree had asked her mother, “Do you think Daddy has received my balloon yet ” Several weeks passed, and she stopped asking.
应用
冲突
解决
成功
三大主题
人与自我
人与社会
人与自然
Desiree refused to accept her father's death and she missed her father.
Desiree’s mother proposed the idea of sending a balloon with a letter to the sky.
Wade did something for Desiree.
爱
帮助
应用
beginning
development
climax
ending
情节
Desiree refused to accept the death of her father, Ken, which made her mother worry about her.
On Ken’s birthday, Desiree’s mother suggested sending a card to him via a balloon. They bought a balloon and tied the letter and a note with their address before releasing it.
After releasing the balloon, Desiree waited for a response, asking her mother daily if her father had received the message. However, as weeks passed, she gradually stopped asking.
情感
sorrowful
hopeful
disappointed
Desiree may receive a gift from “her father”.....
joyful
touched
...
应用
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
One day, 3000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes.
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived.
Wade看见了什么？
Wade看见了这个东西之后怎么做？
（可从动作描写、心理描写、对话等进行续写）
Wade最后给Desiree寄了什么东西？
衔接
有所体现
Desiree/Desiree’s mother 看到这个包裹后的心理/心情是怎样的？
衔接
Desiree/Desiree’s mother 看到这个包裹后做了什么？
（可从动作描写、心理描写、对话等进行续写）
结尾
无明显主题，可不升华主题
应用
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
One day, 3000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes.
Curiously, he approached to find a balloon, with a piece of paper at the end of the string,wrapped in plastic.
Wade看见了什么？
Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines to his wife Donna. She was deeply moved. With tears in her eyes, Donna decided to help Desiree.
Wade看见了这个东西之后怎么做？
The couple went to buy a birthday card and a book The Little Mermaid, and then she began to write a letter to Desiree.
给Desiree寄了什么东西？
契科夫法则
一个故事中提到的每一个元素都应该在后面出场，不然就没有必要提及。
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived.
Desiree/Desiree’s mother 看到这个包裹后的心理/心情是怎样的？
Looking at the unfamiliar return address, Desiree’s mother was confused. Suddenly an idea struck her: the balloon.
Desiree/Desiree’s mother 看到这个包裹后做了什么？
She opened the parcel and found a card with “For My Dear Daughter”. Her heart raced. She rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter. “It’s from Daddy!” Desiree jumped with joy, asking her mother to read it for her. “Happy birthday, my little girl,” he mother began.
结尾
Tears began to run down Desiree’s cheeks.
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
One day, 3000 miles away, Wade was on a duck hunt when suddenly something in the bush caught his eyes.
Desiree’s fifth birthday came and later in the afternoon, a package arrived.
Curiously, he approached to find a balloon, with a piece of paper at the end of the string,wrapped in plastic.Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines to his wife Donna. She was deeply moved. With tears in her eyes, Donna decided to help Desiree.The couple went to buy a birthday card and a book The Little Mermaid, and then she began to write a letter to Desiree.
Looking at the unfamiliar return address, Desiree’s mother was confused. Suddenly an idea struck her: the balloon. She opened the parcel and found a card with “For My Dear Daughter”. Her heart raced. She rushed to Desiree’s room and showed her the letter. “It’s from Daddy!” Desiree jumped with joy, asking her mother to read it for her. “Happy birthday, my little girl,” he mother began. Tears began to run down Desiree’s cheeks.
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