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续写一
目录
01.
什么是续写
02.
如何续写
03.
操练
04.
总结
什么是续写
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续写
读后续写：提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生根据所提供的 和 进行续写；词数要求： ，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
材料内容
两段开头语
150 词左右
续写评分
单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要地阐述您的观点。根据需要可酌情增减文字，以便观者准确地理解您传达的思想。单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要地阐述您的观点。根据需要可酌情增减文字。单击此处添加文本具体内容，简明扼要地阐述您的观点
如何续写
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如何续写
读： 原文，读两段提示语
思：情节
写：用语，书写
5W1H, main idea
who,what,why,where,when,how
the plot and feeling情节和感受
the tense时态
the main characters主要人物
the style写作风格
vocabulary sentence 词汇 句型
structure linking words 结构 连接词
点明主题
照应第二
段第一句
第一段第一句
第二段第一句
v
v
续写主题
人与社会（ ）
人与自我
人与自然
续写原则
原文一致：时态，风格，逻辑...
趣味性/曲折性
正能量
弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。
操练
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At the age of 12, Lily earned a scholarship to study at a boarding school in Australia. Her father told her to study hard and practice running every day in Australia. She nodded because that was much easier than staying happy in a complctely new country. Several days later, she kissed her family and boarded the plane for Australia. As the plane took off, she looked out of the window at the goats and brown rivers of Kenya. She stared down at the green fields where she used to run barefoot, like the wind.
Find out 5W1H and the main idea of it
At school, Lily had lots of math problems to solve,essays to write, and books to read. She also joined the school running team. They were preparing for an important running race, in which runners from different schools took part. In order to practice running, her coach gave her a striped shirt,white shorts, shoes with cleats(防滑钉)and another pair with spongy soles(吸水鞋底)for cross-country. Honestly speaking,she had always run barefoot at home, so the shoes felt tight.But all the other runners wore shoes and Lily didn't want to be different.
The team practiced every weekday afternoon. On Saturdays, everyone watched football-everyone but Lily. She would run alone on the country roads barefoot and run over fields thick with mud just as in her hometown. Each day at lunch, she would sit alone in the large dining hall, eating dishes totally strange to her and missing her family.
One Saturday, Lily ran up a hill and found herself in a yard. To her surprise, one of her classmates, Thomas, stood just inside the barn(谷仓)door. After he greeted her, Lily asked,"Why aren't you watching football ""I have to help my father," said Thomas,"but why aren't you wearing your shoes "
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Main idea: Solve the problem of Lily
who Lily,Her father ,coach, teammates,(classmates)Thomas
when One Saturday
where the school running team,hill
why in a complctely new country;But all the other runners wore shoes and Lily didn't want to be different
what everyone watched football-everyone but Lily;Each day at lunch, she would sit alone in the large dining hall, eating dishes totally strange to her and missing her family.
how

Paragraph 1:On hearing this question,Lily felt embarrassed.
Paragraph 2:On the day of the race, all the runners were wearing professional suits and shoes except Lily.
为什么“shoes”反复出现，是重要信息吗？为什么？
升华：坚持自我
Paragraph 1:On hearing this question,Lily felt embarrassed.
Paragraph 2:On the day of the race, all the runners were wearing professional suits and shoes except Lily.
Plot
尴尬
不尴尬
sb 做了某事
action，dialogue，feelings...
Race
outcome
升华：坚持自我
Paragraph 1:On hearing this question,Lily felt embarrassed.
She responded in a whisper, her head hanging down,"Strange,right I know it goes against the normal to run barefoot."But to her surprise, Thomas didn't tease her but burst out laughing with admiration, "Wow, cool! Let go of your concern that others will mock your habit. You are who you are. Take off your burden, and just run the way you feel good!"Thomas'encouragement was like a ray of sunshine, driving away her embarrassment. So she kept on running barefoot, with confidence.
Paragraph 2:On the day of the race, all the runners were wearing professional suits and shoes except Lily.
Standing on the lane barefoot, she could hear others murmuring about her, which still troubled her. But among the crowds, she caught sight of Thomas, who was waving at her and shouting at the top of his voice,"Keep running, Lily! Be yourself!"With efforts, Lily won the race as well as confidence and a brand new life. She found it not so hard to stay happy in a completely new country.
Paragraph 2:On the day of the race, all the runners were wearing professional suits and shoes except Lily.
Standing on the lane barefoot, she could hear others murmuring about her, which still troubled her. But among the crowds, she caught sight of Thomas, who was waving at her and shouting at the top of his voice,"Keep running, Lily! Be yourself!"With efforts, Lily won the race as well as confidence and a brand new life. She found it not so hard to stay happy in a completely new country.
总结
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summary
读懂文章：5w1h
构思情节：时态，动作，对话，情感，心理......；首句
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