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(共18张PPT)
高中英语
Story
Continuation
Writing
高中英语
I Everyday English
There is no royal road to learning.
I believe, “there is no royal road to learning.” Books are my best friend, I learn more knowledge, and know what truth is.
我深信，“书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟”，书是我最好的伙伴，它让我学到了更多的知识，懂得了真理是什么。
书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。
高中英语
①The Smith’s family lived in a friendly community near the woods. It was a normal Tuesday afternoon. Mom Alice Smith returned home from selling food and drinks along the roadside in Plantersville, Texas. Her business had been fairly profitable and she was happy to see her husband preparing dinner in the kitchen and her 4-year-old son, Carlos Smith, playing in the yard. However, when she turned to unload things from her car, she didn’t notice the kid followed a neighbor’s dog into the woods.
②When they couldn’t find Carlos, the panicky family called for help, and within a few hours, 48 different agencies arrived to comb the area around their home. Their entire community started to help find Carlos. Some walked into the woods and others drove farther away.
③After days with no sign of the kid, rescuers feared the worst, but Alice never stopped hoping for her son’s safe return. At long last, after four long days and nights, the sheriff（区治安官）received a phone call from a man named Jack Halfin.
④Jack Halfin’s house was about three miles away. He had heard of the missing boy when he returned home from a business trip. He didn’t think a 4-year-old boy could walk that for to where he lived. However, as all the previous searching efforts were in vain, he decided to try his luck around his own house.
高中英语
⑤Not long after he went out into the woods, he was surprised by what came into his sight. There was Carlos! Aside from being dehydrated （脱水的）and very hungry, the kid was completely unharmed. He was found outside the range where authorities were looking for him, so it was pretty amazing that Jack discovered him.
⑥When Jack picked him up, the kid was still conscious（有意识的）.
⑦Carlos spent two days recovering at the hospital before he was taken home.
高中英语
Words and expressions
fairly profitable
the panicky family
agency
comb the area
with no sign of the kid
fear the worst
at long last
in vain
try his luck
not long after
come into his sight
aside from
outside the range
高中英语
II Read for the story elements(5W1H)
(5minutes)
On a normal Tuesday afternoon.
In the area around their home.
Mom Alice Smith, the husband, Carlos, 48 different agencies, the entire community, Jack Halfin.
Carlos was lost and many people helped to find him, at last, Jack found him in the woods.
Carlos followed a dog into the woods and lost, so the family called for help.
Jack's house was near the woods and he decided to try his luck around his house, luckily he found Carlos.
高中英语
①The Smith’s family lived in a friendly community near the woods. It was a normal Tuesday afternoon. Mom Alice Smith returned home from selling food and drinks along the roadside in Plantersville, Texas. Her business had been fairly profitable and she was happy to see her husband preparing dinner in the kitchen and her 4-year-old son, Carlos Smith, playing in the yard. However, when she turned to unload things from her car, she didn’t notice the kid followed a neighbor’s dog into the woods.
②When they couldn’t find Carlos, the panicky family called for help, and within a few hours, 48 different agencies arrived to comb the area around their home. Their entire community started to help find Carlos. Some walked into the woods and others drove farther away.
③After days with no sign of the kid, rescuers feared the worst, but Alice never stopped hoping for her son’s safe return. At long last, after four long days and nights, the sheriff（区治安官）received a phone call from a man named Jack Halfin.
④Jack Halfin’s house was about three miles away. He had heard of the missing boy when he returned home from a business trip. He didn’t think a 4-year-old boy could walk that for to where he lived. However, as all the previous searching efforts were in vain, he decided to try his luck around his own house.
Setting & Beginning
Development
高中英语
⑤Not long after he went out into the woods, he was surprised by what came into his sight. There was Carlos! Aside from being dehydrated （脱水的）and very hungry, the kid was completely unharmed. He was found outside the range where authorities were looking for him, so it was pretty amazing that Jack discovered him.
⑥When Jack picked him up, the kid was still conscious.
⑦Carlos spent two days recovering at the hospital before he was taken home.
Climax
Ending


ending
故事结尾
climax
故事高潮
development
故事发展
beginning/setting
故事开端/背景
2. When they couldn’t find Carlos, the panicky family called for help.
5. Aside from being…, the kid was completely unharmed. …, so it was pretty amazing that Jack discovered him.
1.Mom Alice Smith returned home from selling food and drinks along the roadside.
3. … but Alice never stopped hoping for her son’s safe return.
4. Jack Halfin decided to try his luck around his own house.
7. Ending
6. What happend later

hopeful
amazed
fearful
anxious
III Read for plots & emotions
高中英语
IV Read for conflict and decide on the theme
However, when she turned to unload things from her car, she didn’t notice the kid followed a neighbor’s dog into the woods.
Aside from being dehydrated and very hungry, the kid was completely unharmed.
Carlos Smith was lost.
Carlos Smith was found.
Be ready to help others if necessary.
Be grateful to those who spare no effort to help us, and pay it forward by helping those in need.
The theme can be
(3minutes)
高中英语
V Predicting the ending with questions
Logical Plotting with the given key words 情节推理和关键词协同
P1: When Jack picked him up, the kid was still conscious.
P2:Carlos spent two days recovering at the hospital before he was taken home.
Q1: How did the kid feel
Q2: What did Jack do
Q3: How did Alice feel when she heard about the news
Q1: How did the kid feel after leaving hospital
Q2: How did the family feel What did they do or say
对段首语进行分析、设问
两个段首语是重要的续写提示，控制着情节的发展方向。对其分析设问，能够将预测的故事情节以问题的形式呈现，利于打开思路，整理信息和组织语言。
两段两首定一框
二框二首正能量
高中英语
VI Continue story elements, list outline and write the story
Para.1 plot emotions
Para.2 plot emotions
1. Jack wrapped the kid with his own jacket and took him home.
careful
(5minutes)
2. Jack called the sheriff, who informed Alice in no time.
3. Carlos’s family rushed to Jack’s house.
excited
delighted
1. Carlos was running across
the house happily.
2. The family expressed gratitude to all those who helped to find their son.
3. They decided to pay the kindness forward.
happy
relaxed
moved
grateful
You can use Chinese if you need!
小结：读后续写，续什么？写什么？
续人物及人物性格（通过动作、语言、肢体语言、思想、感情等展现）
Continue characters and characteristics (behaviour, words, body language, thoughts, feelings, etc.)
续情节及主要矛盾或冲突，续解决方案
Continue plot, conflict and solutions
续主题意义（通过故事矛盾、环境描写、人物刻画、情节发展等体现）
Continue the theme (embodied through conflict, environment, characters and plot)
写得语言表达丰富（词汇&句式结构准确、恰当、多样）
Write with abundant and correct expressions (synonyms近义词, antonyms反义词, hyponyms下义词 [如：fruit的下义词有apple, orange, cherry, banana等]，clauses从句, inversion倒装结构, elliptical sentences省略句, present participlas[v-ing], past participals[v-ed], infinitives[to do], phrases[固定搭配], etc.)
写得逻辑清晰，前后连贯（自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。）
Write with clear logic and connection (connecting words: so that, in the end, as a result, besides, however, etc.)
Assignment
1. Write down the draft with enough correct choices of words and sentence structures.
根据提纲写下草稿，并尽可能采用丰富且正确的词句表达。
2. Peer-check draft for theme, logic, tenses, spelling mistakes, capitals, punctuation, etc. and revise your own draft accordingly.
与同伴互相检查主题表达、文章逻辑、动词时态、拼写错误、字母大小写、标点符号等问题并修正。
高中英语
谢谢观看
Appreciate a possible version
When Jack picked him up, the kid was still conscious. He wasn't shaking, neither was he nervous. Jack wrapped the kid with his own jacket and took him home. Not knowing the phone number of the kid's home, he called the sheriff, who informed Alice in no time. On getting the exciting news, Carlos's family immediately rushed to Jack's house. Alice couldn't wait to wrap her little one up in her arms and hug him tightly! Tears of happiness rolled down her cheeks.
Carlos spent two days recovering at the hospital before he was taken home. Seeing Carlos running around the house, the family was extremely grateful to all the agencies and volunteers, who had sacrificed their time to look for Carlos and shared their panic and worry. They were especially thankful to Jack who didn't give up hope when chances seemed to be slim. They knew well that they couldn't repay those kind people for what they had done, but they decided to pay it forward by lending a helping hand to whoever might be in need of it.

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