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读后续写之情绪描写句型
近几年高考真题读后续写总结
年份
主题语境
主旨大意
(续写段落)情感变化
2024新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷
2023新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷
2022新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷
2021新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷
2020浙江卷
人与自然
人与社会
人与自我
人与自我
人与社会
我与出租车司机的约定
写作比赛
身残志坚的男孩
母亲节惊喜
为狗找伴
尴尬→感激→开心
紧张→开心
焦虑→感动→开心
惊讶→欣慰→开心/感动
开心→欣慰
2025.6 全国I卷
人与社会
兄弟之间的矛盾与和解
愧疚难过→ 歉意、开心
What are the important factors in continuation writing
How to describe emotions more vividly and specifically？
01
无灵主语
情绪名词 固定动词
a feeling/ sense/ wave of happiness/joy/delight/pleasure 高兴 sorrow/sadness/grief/heartbreak 伤心 anger/rage/fury/annoyance 生气 surprise/astonishment/shock 震惊 fear/horror/panic/terror/fright 害怕 anxiety/stress/tension 焦虑紧张 worry/concern 担忧 disappointment/despair 绝望 satisfaction/contentment 满意 ... seize/take hold of 抓住
well up/surge through/flow over 涌出
overwhelm 难以禁受 ，压垮
creep over 渐渐出现
flash across/ spread across 闪过
envelop 笼罩
flood over /sweep over 席卷
dominate 支配
wash over 彻底深入地影响
...
无灵主语：情绪名词＋固定动词+sb.
当她听到这个好消息时，一阵兴奋席卷了她。
when she heard the good news.
看图完成句子（使用无灵主语）
A wave of excitement/joy/delight swept over her
当她听到这个好消息时，一阵兴奋席卷了她。
02
倒装句型
强调情绪的强度导致具体行为，逻辑清晰，适合描写“情绪→行动”链条。
表示情绪的形容词：
句型1：情绪adj.+as/though sb. +be动词，sb. did sth.
句型2：so+情绪adj.+sb. + be动词+that+结果从句
joyful
delighted
pleased
glad
cheerful
angry
furious
annoyed
upset
frustrated
helpless
depressed
heartbroken
afraid
scared
terrified
shocked
frightened
hopeful
thrilled
overjoyed
。
Practice
1. 尽管很生气和不情愿(unwilling)，我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。
___________________________________I still went to wash the dishes as Dad’s request .
Annoyed and unwilling as/though I was,
2. 他是如此害怕以至于一句话也说不出来。
that he couldn't utter a word.
So frightened/scared was he
03
with复合结构
With + 名词 + 补语（adj./doing/done/介词短语）
通过“with”引导伴随状态，刻画人物在情绪中的外在表现，极具画面感。
常见的有：with one’s face pale（脸色苍白）、with one’s eyes wide open（眼睛睁大）、with one’s hands clenched（紧握的双手）、with one’s voice trembling（颤抖的声音）、with one’s tears rolling/streaming down（眼泪流下）、with one’s palms sweating （手掌冒汗）、with tears in one’s eyes（眼含泪水）
e.g. With eyes wide open in terror, the child froze at the sight of the snake.
孩子惊恐地睁大双眼，看到蛇时一动不动。
当她听到这个好消息时，一阵兴奋席卷了她。
完成句子（使用with复合结构）
With tears streaming down his face, he felt a deep sense of regret.
泪水顺着他的脸颊流下，他感到深深的悔恨。
04
what引导主语从句
通过主语从句揭示“真正让某人产生情绪的原因”，突出情绪背后的深层触动。
表示情绪的动词：
喜悦开心类：please、amuse、delight
悲伤难过类：depress、upset、hurt、disappoint、frustrate
愤怒生气类：annoy、anger、irritate
惊讶震惊类：surprise、astonish、shock、stun（stunned）
感动印象类：impress、move、touch
害怕担忧类：frighten、worry、terrify、scare
困惑困扰类：puzzle、bother、confuse
句型：what + 情绪动词 + sb + was + that 从句
。
Practice
1. 让我惊讶的是，他礼貌地拒绝了邀请。
___________________________________he refused the invitation politely.
What surprised/astonished me was that
2. 让他们失望的是，音乐会因天气恶劣取消了。
the concert was canceled due to bad weather.
What disappointed them was that
05
情绪转变
表达情绪转变过程，强调从一种状态过渡到另一种，体现成长或释怀。
表示转变的动词：gave way to（让位于），transformed into（转变为）、turned into（变成）、evolved into（演变为）
一些常见的情绪转变：fear → courage/curiosity，jealousy → admiration，sorrow→ acceptance，shock→ grief，despair→ hope，anxiety→ motivation，love→ indifference
e.g. In time, her sorrow gave way to a peaceful acceptance.
不久，她的悲伤被平静的接受所取代。
The previous anxiety miraculously transformed into our motivation to go on. 之前的焦虑奇迹般地变成了我们继续前进的动力。
句型：情绪名词1 +转变类短语+ 情绪名词2
当她听到这个好消息时，一阵兴奋席卷了她。
完成句子
The moment she got on the roller coaster,
当她坐上过山车那一刻，紧张和恐惧让位于喜悦。
nervousness and fear gave way to joy
Summary
无灵主语：情绪名词＋固定动词+sb.
情绪adj.+as/though sb. +be动词，sb. did sth.
so+adj.+sb. + be动词+that+结果从句
With + 名词 + 补语（adj./doing/done/介词短语）
what + 情绪动词 + sb + was + that 从句
情绪名词1 +转变类短语+ 情绪名词2
Group work 小组合作
根据视频写一段60词左右的文章，用所学句型描述视频中Riley的情感变化。
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Please use the proper emotional descriptions according to the scene.
Group work 小组合作
根据视频写一段60词左右的文章，用所学句型描述视频中Riley的情感变化(在全班做自我介绍时的恐—回忆起和家人在一起的喜—搬家后不能继续打冰球hockey的哀...)
Show Time
Introducing herself in front of the class, （她是如此的害怕以至于）her knees felt weak. After seeing the encouraging looks of classmates, （她的恐惧被喜悦所代替）. （让Riley印象最深刻的是 ）the vivid picture of her life in hometown, Minnesota, from the hockey team to family and friends. Yet, as she mentioned the move that forced her to leave from that beloved place, （Riley感到十分伤心）, .（眼泪从脸颊滚落）
______
Possible version：
Introducing herself in front of the class, so frightened was Riley that her knees felt weak. After seeing the encouraging looks of classmates, her fear gave way to great joy.What impressed Riley most was that the vivid picture of her life in hometown, Minnesota, from the hockey team to family and friends. Yet, as she mentioned the move that forced her to leave from that beloved place, a strong sense of grief wshed over Riley,with tears rolling down from her cheeks.
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Possible version：

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