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综合二 写作指导
应用文 写作指导
认真审题，把握要写的核心内容和人称、时态。
假定你是李华，你的外国留学生朋友James想在中国进行社会实践，现有如下两种选择：博物馆讲解员或乡村中学志愿者。James来信向你寻求建议，请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.建议其中一项活动；2.说明至少两点理由
类型：回信 时态：将来时时态为主
人称：二人称 核心内容：推荐的理由
写作知识储备--回信常用开头语
1.自我介绍： I am Li Hua, coming from a middle school, which is the best education institution in my beautiful city.
2感谢信：I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for your help.
3.道歉信：I am writing this letter to express my apology for any inconvenience caused.
4.询问信：I am writing this letter to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some information which is very important to me.
5.建议信：I am writing this letter to make some conductive suggestions.
6.邀请信：I am writing this letter to invite you to come with us in an important issue.
7.请求信：I am writing to ask you whether you can do me a favor.
Dear James,
范文：How is everything going Based on your interests, I would recommend you to become a museum guide. （17 words）
你也可以这样写-- 老师作品
Dear James,
开篇直奔主题 （高分句1）I’m pleased to receive your e-mail, where you asked me how to choose a part -time job. I advise you to be a rural teacher.(24 words)
范文：Firstly, working as a museum guide will provide you with a unique opportunity to soak yourself in Chinese history and culture, offering insights into the country’s past and present. What’s more, by engaging in daily conversations with tourists and explaining the cultural significance of the artifacts in Chinese, you’ll have ample chance to practice and enhance your language proficiency（能力）.
Hopefully, my suggestions will be of help to you and feel free to reach out if you need further guidance.
（79+17）=96 Best regards,
Li Hua
老师作品
For one thing, you can benefit a lot from your
rural teaching.高分句2：For another , children who receive your education can learn more about the culture of your country. 高分句3：Furthermore, volunteer teaching not only provides a chance for them to receive good education and increase their desire for knowledge but also sets a good example for them in contributing to our country.
I wish my suggestion to be helpful to you. (69+24=93 words)
续写 写作指导
文章主旨大意
本文是记叙文，以人物为线索而展开，讲述了住在沿海城市的玛丽亚和彼得发现塑料袋被扔在海滩上，对此很苦恼，决定要做点什么来呼吁大家保护海洋。
1.（故事的背景介绍）玛丽亚和彼得发现海岸和水中发现了很多塑料袋：Maria and Peter lived in a coastal city. The greatest pleasure in summer for them was to swim at their local beach after school. But one day they started to lose their enthusiasm for swimming in the waters. More often than not（通常情况下）, they would find plastic bags thrown on the beach. Worse sill, as they swam in the water, some plastic bags would float around them and even stick to their legs when they walked to the shore.
2. （续写背景介绍：拯救措施无效）They were upset and decided something needed to be done to stop the beautiful sea becoming consumed by waste. One weekend, Maria and Peter brought a big bag to the beach and determined to clean it up. Sweat streamed down from their forehead while they bent down and picked up the plastic bags. To their disappointment, after a day’s hard work, there were still many plastic bags lying on the beach or floating in the water. Going home with aching legs and arms, Maria and Peter were almost defeated by a strong sense of failure.
3.和妈妈交流了塑料袋的事情：That night over dinner with their parents, the pair ate silently. Noticing their low spirits, Mother asked gently, “You two looked so down. What happened “Exchanging glances with Peter, Maria replied in a low voice, “It’s those annoying plastic bags. We tried to clean up but it was just impossible.
4.末段是续写的重要信息段：在爸爸的提示下，玛丽和彼得要发动更多的人来保护海洋：Understanding the pair’s disappointment, their father patted them on the back and comforted, “Well, it’s really hard for just two of you to fix such a big problem. ”Just two of us. “complained Maria and Peter, looking at each other. Suddenly, an idea flashed through their minds, their eyes shining with excitement. “yes, that’s the point! We should make more people aware of the problem and encourage them to take action!” the pair said in chorus.
Quickly finishing their dinner, the pair went upstairs and started planning.
Excited and nervous, they posted the video and article on WeChat.
“两人很快吃完晚饭，上楼开始计划。”可知，第一段可描写Maria and Peter商量出了什么样的对策。根据第二短的提示，第一段要写决定在网上制作视频、写文章来呼吁大家一起爱护环境。（第一段写过程。）
“他们既兴奋又紧张，在微信上发布了这段视频和文章。”可知，第二段可描写视频和文章在网上发布后得到的反应以及大家都行动起来才是本文的落脚点。（第二段写结果）
范文：Quickly finishing their dinner, the pair went upstairs and started planning. Maria and Peter decided to take advantage of the Internet. “Maybe we can write an article to arouse people‘s awareness.” Maria proposed. “Good idea! We can also make a video!” Peter added. The next few hours witnessed their heated discussion and growing confidence in a clean and beautiful coast. The next day, they went to the beach and filmed a short video showing plastic bags lying on the beach and floating in the sea.高分句1 Peter, who was good at writing, wrote an article talking about the present situation of the beach and asking people to take part in the clean-up.
Excited and nervous, they posted the video and article on WeChat. To their amazement, their post went viral online（网上病毒式传播）immediately. 高分句2 Countless comments flooded in saying how heartbroken they were when looking at the polluted beach and ocean. 高分句3：What amazed Maria and Peter more was that numerous people in their community, encouraged by their efforts, offered to join in their clean-up. More and more people came to the beach to collect plastic bags and they also appealed to others to avoid throwing or using plastic bags. A year later, with their joint and continuous effort, the coast regained its beauty and Maria and Peter regained their long-awaited pleasure.
你也可以这样写--老师作品
Quickly finishing their dinner, the pair went upstairs and started planning. 高分句1：After further discussion, the decision they made was to make a video to arouse people’s awareness of protecting the sea.高分句2：So the next day they went to the local beach where they had swum the day before.高分句3： They used a camera to record the flying plastic bags over the beach and the ones that was floating on the sea. 高分句4：Peter wrote an article describing the situation where the ocean is badly polluted and asking more people to participate in this activity.(81 words)
Excited and nervous, they posted the video and article on WeChat. 高分句5： However, what amazed them was that their posts were wildly circulated on
it. 高分句6：Some people posted saying that seeing the sea and beaches polluted so seriously, they felt pretty heartbroken and determined to take immediate action to collect the plastic bags lying on the beach. The next day, under their initiative （倡议）, numerous people not only took part in the clear-up activity but also appealed to others not to throw plastic bags into the sea. Thanks to their efforts,the sea restored its beauty of the past. (84+ words)

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