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应用文 写作指导
认真审题，找到写作的核心内容
假定你是李华，正在英国某中学交流学习，你所在的社区近期将举办各国传统美食交流活动，正在招募参与者。请你用英语给活动组委会写封信，申请参加此次活动。内容包括：
1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.希望得到答复。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
这是一封申请信。人称：1. 时态：一般现在时为主。
核心内容：个人优势。
范文：Dear Committee Members,
I am Li Hua, a student from China currently studying in the UK. Learning that an upcoming traditional food exchange event will be held in our community, I am writing to apply for it.（33words）
老师作品
Dear Committee Members,
高分句1. I’m Li Hua, an exchange student who is studying in London. 高分句2：I’m writing to become a volunteer, who will work in the upcoming traditional food exchange activity that will be held in our community.（33 words）
范文：Having learned a lot about Chinese food, I am extremely thrilled to share my knowledge with others. In addition, I have experience in cooking traditional Chinese food, such as dumplings and hot pots, which would be a valuable addition to the event.
I would appreciate it if accepted. I hope to hear from you soon.（55+33=83）
老师作品
范文：Firstly, as a foodie（吃货）, I know a lot about Chinese food, and my fluent English enables me to introduce it clearly to others.高分句3： Secondly, I excel in（擅长） cooking traditional Chinese food, mooncake, zongzi and dumpling included. I believe these foods will add flavor to the event.
I would be extremely grateful if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your reply.
（60+33=93 words）
续写 写作指导
文章的主旨大意
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了麦迪逊要过生日会，她的爸爸让她邀请班上的所有女同学，可麦迪逊不想邀请新来的女孩子露西。注意：通篇文章都充满了对话，所以，为了文体一致，你的续写也要有对话。
全文的1—5段都在写父亲劝麦迪森邀请路西吉尔伯特。
1.Dad and Madison were walking through the party store, gathering decorations for Madison’s upcoming birthday party.
2. “But I don’t want to invite Lucy Gilbert! I don’t like her!”
3. “Madison, you are being unreasonable. If every girl in your class is invited to a party but you, you’ll feel left out. It would be a big mistake not to invite Lucy to the party. ”“She never even talks to me! ”
4. Dad sighed and moved down the aisle （走廊）. “Lucy is a new girl in class. She just moved here a little over a month ago. Think about how that must feel. She doesn’t know one single person in the school. She left all of her old friends behind and now she has to try to make new friends. Your party will be a great chance for her to get to know everyone. ”
5.“No it won’t. She will probably sit in the corner and not talk to anyone. Every day at lunch she sits all by herself. She wants to eat alone!” Madison shrugged and rolled her eyes （翻白眼）.
6. 麦迪森的爱好：“Madison, I’m done discussing this. You will invite every girl in your class, including Lucy Gilbert!“ On Saturday morning, the family blew up balloons and decorated the house cheerfully. Madison was dressed beautifully for the day, wearing her new blue dress. It was not typical of her to dress herself like this. She usually wore sports clothes because she loved to be outside riding her horse Star with a lead rope （缰绳）.
7.麦德森对同学送的礼物感到很满意：Madison greeted her friends at the doorstep, picturing （想象）various presents her friends would bring her. In the meanwhile, she was wondering whether Lucy would ruin the party if she came. Anyhow, all the girls she invited came finally, including Lucy. The girls had a fantastic time by singing and dancing while Lucy sat in the corner silently alone. Later, all the girls gathered around the table as Madison opened her presents. Opening them one by one, Madison thanked her friends, with a bright smile on her face.
（认真分析两个提示句的意思，这是续写的关键所在）
Lucy’s present was the very last to be opened.
Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands.
第1段写过程：“露西的礼物是最后一个被打开的。”根据提示2可知，第1段要描写露西送给麦迪森的是一根美丽的缰绳和打开盒子看到缰绳后的心情。
第2段写结果：“麦迪逊被她的话深深打动了，她紧紧地握着那根缰绳。”可知，第二段要描写麦迪森被露西的真诚所感动，并和路西结为朋友。
范文：Lucy’s present was the very last to be opened. Worrying that it would ruin the party, Madison grabbed the present reluctantly（勉强地）. As soon as she opened the box, her eyes widened in surprise——inside was a delicately hand-made lead rope（牵引绳）! Amazed at its beauty, Madison pulled it out of the box. “It’s a lead rope for your horse Star. I made it by myself!” Lucy added, “I heard you talking about your horse at school. That’s when I got the idea of making you a lead rope. ”
老师作品
Lucy’s present was the very last to be opened. 高分句1:Thinking Lucy couldn’t send her the gift she liked best because she always didn’t like her, she opened the box unwillingly. 高分句2：But hardly had she seen the gift when she was too excited to say a single word and almost jumped up. 高分句3：Just then, Lucy approached and said gently, “ Hearing you often walk your horse after school, I think I will send you an elegant lead rope on your birthday. So I waved it by myself in my spare time. I think you may like it.” (86)
范文：Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands. It was the most beautiful birthday present she ever received. She suddenly felt so guilty because she had been so mean to Lucy. Feeling a mixture of regret and gratitude, she blinked back her tears and said, “Thanks so much for this lead rope. I love it! Would you like to join us and be our friends ” Lucy nodded cheerfully——Madison put her arm around Luey’s shoulders, both smiling. With applause and laughter echoing through the house, Lucy joined the other girls to enjoy the party.
老师作品
Deeply moved by what she said, Madison held the lead rope tightly in her hands. She thought it was the first
time that she had ever received such a beautiful gift on her birthday. 高分句4：It was at that moment that she regretted what she had done to Lucy, a sense of guilt arising naturally. 高分句5：Eyes filling with grateful tears
, she said to Lucy, “ Thank you very much for your kindness and trust to me. I am wrong. Would you like to become my good friend ” Lucy said excitedly, “This is a wish I have always wanted to fulfill.” They hugged tightly, smiling happily. With applause and laughter echoing through the house,

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