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高中英语作文——观点类
观点类议论文写作五步骤
步骤1：审题目 确定全文主题（名词短语、各方围绕）
确定各方观点（单体、二选一、三选一等）
步骤2：挑观点 “随大流”观点作为己方
“好反驳”观点作为对方
步骤3：找理由 筛选万能理由（十八罗汉）
步骤4：写中文 开头结尾一带而过，主体段火力全开
步骤5：翻英文 将书面中文翻译成书面英文
独门秘籍——“交锋式”结构
“交锋式”结构
审题“三板斧”——思路图
全文主题
对方观点
己方观点
对方理由
己方理由
反驳理由
观点类议论文结构
段落一 观点（3句） ①全文主题：It is now widely debated whether…
②对方观点：Some claim that …
③自己观点：However, I do not agree with the opinion
for the following reasons.
段落二 理由（5句） ①对方理由：Admittedly, it is true that …
②反驳理由：Nonetheless, … +③理由展开：This is
because…
④己方理由：On the other hand, …+⑤理由展开：For example,…
段落三 结论（2句） ①总结结论：In conclusion, were it left for me to
decide … , I should not hesitate a moment to prefer …
②该怎么做：Therefore, we ought to seize every opportunity to…
观点类议论文结构
段落一 ①It is now widely debated whether我们应该在做决定的时候多听 别人的意见还是収表自己的意见。②Some claim that应该尽量让别人 接受自己的看法，而非随便受别人的影响。③However, I do not agree with the opinion for the following reasons.
段落二 ①Admittedly, it is true that在决策过程中应该保持自己的独立思考。
②Nonetheless,我们发现往往难以和过亍坚持自己看法的人沟通。③ This is because这些人一旦有了自己的想法就不会考虑别人的建议是否 有道理。④On the other hand,善亍倾听的人可以有更多的朊友，而这 对亍他们的成功是关键。⑤For example,我父亲非常乐意在与同事的讨 论中尽量少发表自己的意见，因此其他人都愿意在我父亲面前讲真话。
段落三 ①In conclusion, were it left to me to decide多听还是多说，I should not hesitate a moment to prefer前者。②Therefore, we ought to seize every opportunity to听取周围人的建议。
句型&词汇积累
1.陈述现象：
Nowadays an increasing/ a growing number of teenagers…
Recently, there has been a popular trend towards...
… has gained/ enjoyed/ witnessed/ seen increasing popularity.
Recently the problem of …has been brought into focus.
It is a common phenomenon in society that ….
Lately, there has been a fierce debate in our class on whether…
Recently the practice of … has become increasingly common/ widespread/ prevalent.
阐明观点、态度：支持
I am in favor of using…
Personally, I advocate this technology for the following reasons.
We approve of/ subscribe to the view that …
After a rational discussion, our group draw a conclusion that it is feasible to …
stand up for the idea back up the plan
阐明观点、态度：反对
However, from my perspective, we should suspend the adoption of this technology for the following reasons.
I don’t think it is a good idea to …/ it will lead to a positive outcome if we ignore the problem.
Nevertheless, it is not feasible for us to turn a blind eye to its inherent disadvantages.
lead to/ result in/ bring about/ cause/ give rise to serious/ severe/ grave consequences/ outcomes.
不同意，反对：oppose/ be opposed to/ object to/ disagree
正面影响+潜在问题：
The benefits of … outweigh the disadvantages.利大于弊
The practice, in fact, brings more positive impacts than drawbacks.
It indeed serves as a remarkable platform for students to showcase their creativity and unique perspectives.
Not only does it sharpen students’ academic skills but also nurtures their resilience, equipping them with essential qualities for future success.
However, it also has some potential problems, like…
此外what’s more, moreover, furthermore, additionally, in addition…
同样重要的是 Of equal importance is …
负面影响+潜在作用：
While it may seem convenient, I firmly believe it lacks ...
What often goes unnoticed is its/ potential harm. 常常被忽视的是…
… do more harm than good. 弊大于利
The drawback of overemphasizing grades is that it can lead to…
Excessive use of pesticides is detrimental to the ecological balance.
Constantly comparing oneself with others can be a source of stress and low self-esteem.
更糟糕的是 what’s worse/ worse still
个人建议：
I also think it would be beneficial if you could still provide some personalized feedback, especially on the content and creativity of our essays.
To address these concerns/ issues, I suggest only using AI as a supplementary tool.
It’s advisable that you should…
I strongly recommend you that…
My recommendation goes to...
(湖北部分高中高二10月考)你校英文报最近举办以“AI and Humans”为主题的科技节征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 简述人工智能的现状；
2. 人工智能给生活带来的利与弊；
3. 表明个人看法。
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一、审题与内容构思
第一步：明确指令与要点（包含三个必须覆盖的要点，绝不遗漏任何一点，尤其第一个要点。）
第二步：为每个要点填充具体内容
1. 现状：不只说“AI很流行”，尽量具体化。
思路：从广度（应用于哪些领域）和深度（发展到了什么程度）入手。
2. 利与弊：这是文章主体，需要平衡论述。
利：选择2-3个最突出、最容易表达的方面。（例如：a效率与便利：自动化家务、提高生产效率。b精准与个性化：医疗诊断、个性化教育。c处理重复性工作：解放人类去从事创造性劳动。）
弊：选择与“利”有所对比的方面，体现思辨性。（例如：a对人类能力的影响：如削弱批判性思维、创造力。b隐私问题等。）
3. 个人看法：这是展示思想深度的部分，不能简单重复前文。（可提出平衡、辩证的观点。）
二、结构与段落安排：“总-分-总” 结构，即引言段 - 主体段 - 结论段。
第一段：引言 - 简述现状 + 引出话题
开门见山，提及AI的迅速发展。用一句话概括其影响，并表明本文将探讨其利弊。
第二段：论述“利”“弊”
使用主题句，然后列举2-3个好处，并辅以例子。使用转折词（However, Nevertheless）自然过渡。
第三段：结论 - 个人看法 + 总结升华
With the development of science and technology, AI has become an increasingly hot topic. It is well known that the opinion concerning this varies from person to person.
On the one hand, there are many people around the world who hold the view that AI has potential dangers. They think that can pose a threat to personal privacy. On the other hand, AI has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years. Moreover, AI has made it possible for people to save a lot of time by using the modern technology.
Personally speaking, AI has more advantages outweigh its disadvantages. I hold the firm belief that with the help of AI, it will be easier for us to improve our life in the future.
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