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高考写作精讲之
——感谢信
作者：Lambert
第一步：探求真知
—了解内容及其构成
感谢信通常是向别人表达感谢之意而写的文章， 其重心放在于感谢的理由，写的时候语言真挚，内容充实，情感充沛，但不要描述的太夸张而缺失了真实感
了解感谢信的简要构成：
1.首先，对于开头来说，我们要明确写信的目的是表达真挚谢意
2.对于中间的主要部分来说，我们要明确具体阐述感谢的原因与需要描述的具体事件
3.对于结尾来说，需要再次表达自己真挚的谢意，同时希望有了这一次的鼓励与支持，自己会努力坚持走下去，变的越来越很好
第二步：谋篇布局
对于开头：I would like to extend my sincere gratitude to you for your unselfish assistance given to you during ……………
开门见山，
表达谢意
高三备考必备句型
第二步：谋篇布局
对于有能力的来说，我们的开头后可以跟一个if 引导的虚拟语气
比如说：If it had not been for your tremendous support and continuous encouragement,I would have never entered my ideal college.
虚拟语气加上高级词汇短语！！！
虚拟语气在高考中加分！！！
第二步：谋篇布局
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对于中间部分，要求考生具有一定的表达能力，一般在第二段
句子开头做个小总结引出下文：
For example：It goes without saying that it was your enlightening guidance that ushered me into the academic world.
运用高级句型与词汇简要引出下文
那么，接下来，我们需要对主干内容（也就是对感谢的原因进行具体阐述）
在叙述原因的过程中，注意一些衔接词，比如otherwise，for another，what‘s more，further，last but not least ，in a word
第二步：谋篇布局
阐述原因及清晰的事实：
用 1-2 个具体事例说明 “对方做了什么”“对自己有什么帮助”，这是得分关键（避免空泛的 “Thank you for your help”）。
写作公式：时间 + 事件 + 具体动作 + 结果 / 感受
示例：Last month, I struggled a lot with my English listening (事件). You spent 20 minutes every evening with me, listening to the mock test materials and marking the key words I missed (具体动作). Thanks to your patient guidance, my listening score improved by 12 points in the final mock exam (结果).
第二步：谋篇布局
中间的部分一定要描写的生动——高级词汇，句子，语法
举例：
Your care and love made me melt into the whole class，which brought about dramatic changes to me.
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.
It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself in Chinese
What's more, whenever I was overwhelmed by homesickness, you were always with me, and were ready to give me help patiently.
第二步：谋篇布局
对于结尾段来说，再次感谢，补充祝福
基础句型：Again, thank you for your help. Wish you all the best!
升级句型：I will always remember your kindness. I hope you stay healthy and happy in the future.
考场神级句型：
My appreciation is beyond any words and it is really an honor for me to be your students and I will always bear your guidance and scholar spirit in mind.
第三步：实战演练
以 “感谢老师帮自己攻克英语作文” 为例：
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for helping me improve my English writing.（开门见山）
Last month, I always got low scores in writing because I couldn’t organize my ideas clearly. You noticed this and spent 15 minutes after class every Wednesday with me: you taught me to make an outline first, and pointed out the mistakes in my sentence structure (like using too many simple sentences). （阐述事件）
With your guidance, my writing score rose from 18 to 24 out of 30 in the latest mock exam. I even got a “well-organized” comment from the teacher who marked the paper!
Again, I really appreciate your patient help. Wish you a happy and healthy new term!
Yours sincerely,Zhang Hua(再次表达感谢）
示例亮点：
主体段有具体时间（every Wednesday）、动作（taught me to make an outline）、结果（score rose from 18 to 24）；
用 “With your guidance”“Again” 等连接词，篇章连贯；
词汇（sincere gratitude, well-organized）和句型（原因状语从句）符合高分要求。
范文：考生给自己老师写感谢信
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I would like to extend my sincere gratitude to you for your unselfish assistance given to me during my preparation for the College Entrance examinition.
It goes without saying that it was your enlightening guidance that ushered me into the academie world.otherwise, I would be at a loss every day, holding no aims in life. For one thjng, your care and love made me melt into the whole class, which brought about dramatjc changes to me.
I started to reflect on the true essence of fife and set goals to accomplish. For another, your help and support in my study unleashed the enormous potential inside me, which made me readily indulge in the sea of knowledge. Accordingly,I fulfilled my dream.
In a word, my appreciation to you is beyond words . It is really an honor for me to be your student and I will always bear your guidance and scholar spirit in mind. Best wishes!
三、评分标准对应得分要点
————了解考情
三、评分标准对应得分要点
高考英语写作评分分 “内容”“语言”“篇章” 三部分，感谢信需针对性满足以下要求：
1. 内容分（3-4 分）：完整、具体
必含要素：明确感谢对象、具体帮助事件、帮助带来的实际影响。
失分雷区：只说 “感谢”，不说 “对方做了什么”，内容空洞。
2. 语言分（3-4 分）：准确、多样
词汇升级：避免重复使用 “thank”，可替换为 “express my gratitude to”“be deeply thankful for”“appreciate your help greatly”。
句型优化：用 “高级句型” 替代简单句，如：
强调句：It was your encouragement that helped me get through the stressful review period.
虚拟语气：Without your help, I couldn’t have made such great progress in math.
3. 篇章分（2-3 分）：连贯、流畅
用 “逻辑连接词” 串联内容，如：
引出事例：First, / Specifically, / Last week,
说明结果：As a result, / Thanks to this, / Because of your help,

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