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2025年全国1卷英语
读后续写
Continuation Writing
-Based on Book One Unit Two and Unit Three
Develop empathy through analyzing character emotions
Teaching Objectives：
3
2
1
Understand the "story mountain" structure and apply it to analyze the original article.
理解“故事山”结构，并将其应用于分析原文。
Master the coherence with the original text, language accuracy and richness.
掌握与原文的连贯性，语言的准确性和丰富性。
Develop empathy through analyzing character emotions.
通过分析人物情感来培养同理心。

Lead in
Do you have siblings / s bl z/
Have you remembered the biggest quarrel between you and your brother/sister
How do you settle such quarrels
Continuation Writing
Activity One: Read the original story.
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
①a small gathering 小聚会 ② snacks 小吃 ③ backyard 后院
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire.
I hadn’t counted on 我没想到
Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
knock over 将某物击倒在地，使其倒下
showed up 出现
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
①using up 用尽
②back and forth来来回回地
③Unexpectedly adv. 出乎意料地
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
① awkward adj. 令人尴尬的
② decided to leave rather than force the issue.
决定离开而不是强行解决这个问题。
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.（推理）
① texted v.发短信 ② Not a chance 绝对不可能
③ parted v. 离开 ④ get over 克服 ⑤ reasoned v. 推理
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
①resisted v. 回击
② conscience / kɑ n ns/ n. 良知
③put myself in my brother’s shoes 设身处地为我哥哥着想
④constant companion 忠实的伴侣
Continuation Writing
Activity Two:
Text Analysis (5 W +1 H)
2.Text Analysis
when
where
who
what
how
why
Story
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
Who
What
When
Where
when in the early summer / after supper/ A few days passed/ Two months passed/a few months earlier
where at our new home / in the backyard
who I, my wife, my brother, Toby
what 1.Beginning: I and my wife planned to host a small gathering at my new home in early summer; my wife prepared snacks, and I tidied the backyard.
2.Development: My brother brought his dog Toby to the gathering. I asked the brother to keep Toby outside , and Toby stayed outside happily at first.
3.Conflict:I didn’t want Toby inside, the brother left unhappily. Later, I texted the brother, but the brother refused to meet; I resisted contacting him at first but then felt guilty.
4.Reflection: I realized my brother was going through hard times (health issues, wife’s death) and that Toby was the brother’s only companion.
why Focusing on the child's safety, yet overlooking the brother's dependence on Toby.
How At first, I thought “he’ll get over it”; then, my conscience bothered me, and he felt guilty when I put myself in my brother’s shoes.
Continuation Writing
Activity Three:
Plot Design
十句五定法 展开剧情
十句五定法
读后续写要求续写词数为150词左右。若一句话平均15词，则10句话就够了。
“十句五定”通常指10句话中5句的位置及内容已定，并不限于文章是10句话。
para1 para2
第1句：接着para1给出首句（心理/情绪） 第6句：接着para2给出首句（心理/情绪）
第2句：动作描写 第7句：动作加环境描写
第3句：动作描写 第8句：动作加神态描写
第4句：语言动作描写 第9句：故事结局（动作加语言）
第5句：根据para2首句来写（动作/情绪） 第10句：主题升华
Para 1: I realized it was me who was at fault.
Para 2:With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
①What was my fault
②How did I feel
③What did I decide to do and what did we prepare
①When the door was opened, what were their reactions
②What did I say and do What was my brother's response
③What did we do together
④What was the theme
注意:作者向弟弟道歉或者兄弟俩聊天的时候,没有心要把前文弟弟妻子去世的事情再说一遍!
Plot Design Make a prediction. What will happen next
Continuation Writing
Activity Four:
Language Expressions
Strangers under the same roof Friendship on the rock: please advise! 2025 Continuation writing
words 矛盾相关：tensions、arguments、silences、disagree、concerns、struggle 和好相关：improve、communicate、understand、calm、listen、explain、work together 矛盾相关：lie、trick、hurt、angry、stress、problem、ignore、suffer 和好相关：save、apologize、explain、listen、solve、value、understand
phrases turn into a battle（变成一场争执） cannot see eye to eye（无法达成共识） heated arguments and cold silences a breakdown in your relationship（关系破裂） struggle with the stress（承受压力、应对压力） regular and honest communication（定期且真诚的沟通） calm down（冷静下来） understand...from one's point of view explain one's actions and feelings address one's concerns（回应某人的担忧） healthy discussion（健康的讨论） work together to improve（共同努力改善） break one’s heart（让某人心碎） pick up the pieces（收拾残局、平复心情） be at a loss what to do（不知所措） the stress of this situation（这种情况带来的压力） avoid sb.（避开某人） trick sb.（欺骗某人） ignore one’s feelings（忽视某人的感受）have a full and frank talk（进行一次全面且坦诚的谈话） explain how you feel（解释你的感受） listen to what sb. has to say（倾听某人的话） solve the problem together（一起解决问题） be worth saving（值得挽回） value the friendship（珍惜这份情谊）
教材相关语料整合
句型1：A sense/feeling/surge of+表情感的名词+有灵动词 +sb+when+从句
描述心情的名词 happiness/joy/delight 开心 anger/rage/fury 狂怒 sadness/sorrow 悲伤 gratitude/appreciation 感激 admiration 钦佩/赞赏 guilt/ɡ lt// remorse /r m rs/ 愧疚悔恨 fear/terror/fright/panic 害怕 astonishment/shock/surprise 震惊 disbelief/doubt/puzzle/ suspicion /s sp ( )n/怀疑 动词 weep (wept过去式)over seize/overwhelm catch (caught过去式) strike (struck 过去式) surround take hold of wash over come (came)over creep(crept/creeped)over v.爬行 surround/envelop


+sb.
情绪描写
我感到有些后悔。 I felt a bit regretful.
升级: A sense of regret crept into my heart.
A surge of regret seized me.
A wave of regret surrounded my mind.
句型1：A sense/feeling/surge of+表情感的名词+有灵动词 +sb+when+从句
后悔是没有用的。 Regret is useless.
升级:
There is _______________________ regretting what I have done.
句型2：There be sentence pattern.
no point/sense/use/good
我是如此的后悔与愧疚，以至于我寝食难安。
I was so regretful and guilty that I could neither eat nor sleep.
改成倒装句:
_________________________that I could neither eat nor sleep.
改成无灵主语:
_________________ have robbed me of my appetite and my sleep.
句型3：“so... that..." sentence pattern
So regretful and guilty was I
Regret and guilt
我的妻子在这件事情上和我意见一致，并且做了一些饼干让我带过去。
My wife agreed with me, and she baked some cookies for me to take over.
词汇升级/句式升级:
My wife saw eye to eye with me on this matter, ___________________for me take over.
听到我的道歉后，他温暖地把我拥入怀中。
________________________, he warmly gathered me in his arms.
句型4：Non-finite verbs as adverbials 非谓语动词作状语
baking some cookies
Having heard my apology
心里带着一丝尴尬和内疚，我轻轻地敲了敲门。
With a sense of embarrassment and guilt in my heart, I knocked softly on the door.
双手微微颤抖着，他把我抱在怀里。
_______________________________, he gathered me into her arms.
我如鲠在喉，泪水模糊了我的眼眶。
I felt a lump in my throat, ______________________________
句型5： With复合结构：with +宾语+ doing/to do /done /介词短语,S+V.
独立主格：n/pron+ doing/to do /done /介词短语,S+V.
（With） his hands shaking slightly
(with) tears clouding my eyes.
就是在这一刻我明白了家人的真正含义。
_______at that very moment ______ I understood the true meaning of family.
是原谅和同情能让世界变得更美好。
It is _____________________________ that can make the world a better place.
句型6： The Emphatic Pattern 强调句型 ( It is/was+主语/宾语+that+其他
It was not until +强调部分 that sb did sth)
It was
that
forgiveness and compassion
最让他感动的是，他的兄弟原谅他了并紧紧的拥抱了他。
最让他惊讶的是他兄弟能如此迅速地原谅他.
_______________________________his brother forgave him so quickly.
____________________________ his brother forgave him and hugged tightly each other.
句型7： What + V + sb most was/is that 从句
What moved him most was that
What surprised him most was that
直到那时，他才意识到原谅和爱的重要性。
_______________________the importance of forgiveness and love.
直到那时我才意识到生命中最重要的事情就是和家人在一起。
_______________________the most important thing in life is to spend time with family.
句型8：Only then did sb. realize ...（结尾升华句）
Only then did he realize
Only then did I realize
参考常用高级句型 完成第一段第二段升华
句式1: A sense /feeling /surge of+表情感的名词+有灵动词 +sb+when+从句
句式2:There be sentence pattern.
句式3:“so... that..." sentence pattern
句式4:Non-finite verbs as adverbials 非谓语动词作状语
句式5: With复合结构：with +宾语+ doing/to do /done /介词短语,S+V
句式6:The Emphatic Pattern 强调句型 ( It is/was+主语/宾语+that+其他 It was not until +强调部分 that sb did sth)
句式7:句型7：用what 引导的主语从句:What made him +V原+was that+完整句子
句式8:Only then did sb. realize ...（结尾升华句）
一、表示愧疚
1. A wave of guilt swept over me.一阵愧疚感席卷了我。
2. A strong sense of guilt overwhelmed me as I recalled how I had treated my brother.当我回想起自己是如何对待兄弟，一种强烈的愧疚感淹没了我。
二、表示道歉
1. I sincerely apologize for.../ I owe you an apology for...我为…….真诚道歉/我应该向你道歉。
2. Please forgive me for being...请原谅我
三、表示紧张
1. My heart pounded in my chest as I raised my hand to knock.当我举起手去敲门时，我的心砰砰直跳。
2. I stood there, clutching the box of biscuits, my palms sweaty.我站在那里，手里抓着那盒饼干，手心冒汗。
3. An awkward silence hung in the air for a moment.空气中弥漫着一阵令人尴尬的沉默。
四、表示惊讶
1. When my brother opened the door, his eyes widened in surprise.当我哥哥打开门时，他惊讶地睁大了双眼。
五、表示释然
1. A wave of relief washed over me when I saw his smile.看到他的微笑，我如释重负。
2. I felt a huge weight lift off my shoulders.我感到肩上的重担减轻了。
3. We both let out a laugh, and all the tension melted away.我们俩都笑了，所有的紧张都消失了。
4. I took a deep breath to steady my nerves.我深吸了一口气，让自己的神经镇定下来。
5. My voice trembled as I spoke.我说话时声音颤抖。
课外相关语料整合
六、表示温暖
1. Tears welled up in my eyes, but this time they were tears of joy. 泪水涌上了我的眼眶，但这一次是喜悦的泪水。
2. A warm feeling spread through my chest.一种温暖的感觉传遍了我的胸膛。
3. I was deeply touched by his generosity and forgiveness.他的慷慨和宽容深深打动了我。
4. A warm feeling welled up in my heart when we made up.当我们和解时，一股温暖的感觉在我心中涌起。
七、表示和好
1. Let’s put this behind us and make up.让我们把这事翻篇吧
2. I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me.希望你能从心底原谅我。
八、表示高兴
1.His face broke into a wide smile.他的脸上突然绽出灿烂的笑容。
2. We hugged tightly and laughed heartily.我们紧紧拥抱，尽情欢笑。
3. A warm smile spread across my brother's face.一个温暖的微笑从我哥哥的脸上掠过。
4. Gradually, the ice between us melted, replaced by a warm and familiar feeling.
渐渐地，我们之间的冰融化了，取而代之的是一种温暖而熟悉的感觉。
5. When we hugged each other, I felt all the tension and misunderstanding disappear, leaving only the warmth of family. 当我们拥抱在一起的时候，我感觉所有的紧张和误解都消失了，留下的只有亲情的温暖。
课外相关语料整合
Continuation Writing
Activity Five:
Make a draft（打草稿）
Activity 5: Make a draft.
Writing Help:
Group 1-3 : paragraph 1
Group 4-6: paragraph 2
Start your continuation with a new plot based on what has happened;
Include different types of details;
Write in the same tone and tense as the original story;
Use descriptive language.
Continuation Writing
Let’s share our stories!
Anger makes you smaller, while forgiveness forces you to grow beyond what you were.
愤怒会让你变得渺小，而宽恕会让你超越过去。
The Power of
Homework
1.Polish your writing and hand in your paper based on what you have learned today.
2.Have regular and honest communications with your family members.
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn't just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood. how lonely he must have felt and how selfish I was! The hurt look on my brother's face when he left that day lingered in my heart constantly. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. The next few days witnessed my conscience being tortured deeply, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn't delay this apology any longer. The moment I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. Driven by a desperate need to make things right, I grabbed rny keys , jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home without a second thought.
Para 1
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Before I could even knock, Toby's vibrant barking erupted from inside.scratching at the door. The door creaked open an' out rushed Toby,with its tail wagging wildly. Then I was met with a surprise, with indifference and annoyance from my brother. It took a deep breath and began, “Brother, I come here with a heavy heart, full aware of my thoughtlessness. Toby is as much a part of your family as any human member, ard l should have show greater empathy." Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tears, he took the biscuits and signalsd me to enter, As we sat in ihe cosy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded, replaced by laughter and tears.Through open hearted conversations, we healed the wound between us, proving that empathy,forgiveness and commnunication are tne true bridges to mend broken bonds.
Para 2

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