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八年级上册 Unit 6
Plan for Yourself
支架式写作课
Scaffolding Writing
Learning Objectives
语言能力：Use “be going to” to talk about future plans.
能用 “be going to” 谈论未来计划。
思维品质：Organize writing using a mind map and linking words. 能用思维导图和连接词组织文章。
文化意识：Show understanding of personal growth, family life, or holiday traditions in your plan.
能在计划中体现对个人成长、家庭生活或中外节日文化 的理解与安排，展现积极、健康的假期生活理念。
学习能力：Improve writing through model texts, self-assessment, and peer feedback.
能通过范文、自评与互评修改作文。
学习目标：
Lead-in & Warm-up
Winter vacation is coming!
What are you going to do in the winter vacation
Lead-in & Warm-up
I'm going to···
study harder
work hard at maths
read more books
about science
What are you going to do in the winter vacation
Lead-in & Warm-up
I'm going to···
play basketball
do lots of exercise
eat healthy food
What are you going to do in the winter vacation
Lead-in & Warm-up
I'm going to···
learn to take photos
take up a hobby
like painting
learn to cook a simple dish
What are you going to do in the winter vacation
Writing Task
写作任务 (Writing Task)
时间过得真快,寒假就快要到了。为了让自己的假期过得更精彩、更充实、更有意义,同学们一定有很多打算。请以“My Plan for the Winter Vacation”为题,根据以下思维导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文。
参考词汇:实行计划 carry out the plan
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右。作文标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Plan for the Winter Vacation
How time flies! The winter vacation is coming!_______________________
文体：
人称：
时态：
必须涵盖8个要点：
说明文
第一人称 (I)
一般将来时
(be going to / will)
①
②
③
④
⑤
⑥
⑦
⑧
文化 意识
Culture Awareness
复合句及格言警句
中华优秀传统文化（传统文化、家风美德······）
对祖国、家乡、人民的热爱以及积极健康向上的价值取向
Model Analysis
范文分析：请阅读范文A，逐句分析
范文 A (基础版)
How time flies! The winter vacation is coming! I have a plan for it.
First, I am going to study harder. I am going to work hard at
maths and read more books about science. Second, I am going to exercise every day to keep healthy，such as doing some running or playing basketball with my friends. Besides, I want to take up a new hobby. I am going to learn to cook a simple dish.
I believe if I carry out the plan wisely, my winter vacation will be meaningful and enjoyable.
Model Analysis
范文分析：请阅读范文A，逐句分析。
范文 A (基础版)
How time flies! The winter vacation is coming! I have a plan for it.
First, I am going to study harder. I am going to work hard at
maths and read more books about science. Second, I am going to
exercise every day to keep healthy，such as doing some running or playing basketball with my friends. Besides, I want to take up a
new hobby. I am going to learn to cook a simple dish.
I believe if I carry out the plan wisely, my winter vacation will be meaningful and enjoyable.
happiness and love to my family.
Cooking can
bring
①表明有一个计划
②计划内容 （学业） 及实行方法
②计划内容 （身体健康） 及实行方法
②计划内容 （兴趣爱好） 及实行方法
③假期愿景
Model Analysis
范文分析：请阅读范文A和范文B，完成表格。
范文 B (进阶版)
How time flies! The winter vacation is coming! To make it meaningful, I have a clear plan.
First of all, I'm going to manage my study well. I plan to finish all my homework in the first week. Besides daily review, I'm also going to read two English novels to improve my reading skills. What's more, I believe health comes first. So, I'm going to do sports like running and playing badminton at least three times a week. Also, I want to develop a new hobby. I’m going to learn to play the guitar because music makes me happy and relaxed. Meanwhile, the Spring Festival is around the corner! I'm going to help my parents clean the house and learn to make dumplings. It's a great way to experience our traditional culture.
I'm going to carry out my plan and enjoy my holiday.
Model Analysis
分析维度 范文A (基础版) 范文B (进阶版) 我的收获
文章结构 开头、主体、结尾 开头、主体、结尾 清晰的___段式结构
“be going to” 找到了 ____ 句 找到了 ____ 句
连接词 “First of all, Besides, What's more, Also, Meanwhile”
要点齐全 8个要点 8个要点（更具体） 必须覆盖所有要点。
文化意识 无 “ the Spring Festival is around the corner!” “It's a great way to experience our traditional culture.”
高级表达 “I believe if I..." “...because...”
"I'm going to..”
三
First,
Second,
Besides
四
六
Meanwhile 同时
Besides 而且、此外
What's more，而且
尽量写，加分项
尽量写，加分项
Language Bank
语言支架
类别 核心词句
好用动词/短语 “make a plan”, “finish homework”, “read more books”, “read some classics”, “improve my writing”, “keep healthy”, “do sports”, “play basketball”, “take up a new hobby”, “learn to cook”, “take...lessons”, “carry out the plan”, “improve myself”...
精彩形容词 "wonderful/fantastic", "meaningful", "healthy", "delicious", "interesting", "exciting","enjoyable/pleasant" ，"relaxing" "colorful" "unforgettable"...
核心句型 "I'm going to...", "I plan to...", "I will try to...", "I want to..."
逻辑连接词 "First, ...", "Then, ..." "Next, ...", "Also, ..." "Besides, ...", "What's more, ...", “Mean while,...” "Finally, ..."
文化/感受表达 "Because the Spring Festival is coming, I'm going to..."/ "I can't wait to..."/ "It's a great way to experience our traditional culture."/ ''Cooking can bring happiness and love to my family."/ "I believe I will have a happy and healthy vacation." /“I'm sure I will have a wonderful vacation!”···
Writing Structure
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写作结构
Start Writing
开始写作(present orally）
How time flies! The winter vacation is coming!_____________
First,
Second,
Also,
I'm going to_________________________________________
I want to
I plan to_________________________
study harder
_______________________________ to keep healthy.
/eat healthy food
I'm going to____________________________________________________
I'm going to____________________________________________________
I'm going to_______________
finish homework carefully/read some classics/···
read more books/
/improve my writing/···
play football with my friends every afternoon.
drink milk and eat more vegetables .
take up a new hobby.
take singing
lessons
/learn to cook a new dish
/learn to ride a bike/···
carry out my plan and have a _____________winter vacation.
I can't wait for __________________________to come and the delicious food.
I have a plan for it.
I'm going to
meaningful
enjoyable
the Spring Festival
do sports
Start Writing
开始写作(在任务单上完成初稿)(12 minutes)
How time flies! The winter vacation is coming!_____________
First, I'm going to __________________________________________
I'm going to________________________________________________________
Second,I plan to ___________________________________________________
I'm going to________________________________________________________
Also,I want to________________________________________________________
I'm going to__________________________________________________________
I'm going to carry out my plan and have a ________________winter vacation.I can't wait for __________________________to come and the delicious food.
可参考框架：
一、自我检查 Self-check：请对照检查表打 ：
1. 至少3个“be going to”句子
2. 至少3个连接词
3. 覆盖至少3个方面
4. 词数约70词
5. 包含文化内容（挑战项）
Self-check&Peer Review
检查与互评（5分钟）
二、交换作文，同伴互评，填写评语与建议
典型作文进行展示与点评
（突出优点与改进点）
Revise & Shine
Who wants to share your great work
Summary:
Today, we learned to use "be going to "to make a great plan!
Homework (Must-do & Optional):
Must-do: Copy your final draft on your exercise book.
Optional: Make an English poster for your winter plan.
Summary & Homework

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