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第六讲　续写话题演练
Writing 1　个人成长类——电台实习生成长记
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·临沂市统考一模)
I had a dream from primary school: to work in television.My parents owned a little grocery store, so we were definitely not fancy people.Thankfully, my dad had raised me to have a lot of confidence.He often said，“You can do anything you want to do.” My dad was particularly supportive.He was my steady rock—always there for me.
With his help and encouragement, I was admitted to the radio and television arts program at Ryerson in Toronto.I really loved the program and worked hard and I was named the most outstanding graduate.I felt like I was already living my dream.I began to think that maybe I could apply for an internship(实习资格) in CBC or CTV.
Luckily, Global Television had just started broadcasting in Canada that year.I thought to myself：I'm new and they're new, so if I'm going to get to know one person at Global, it might as well be the president.I was scared, but I knew deep down inside that this was what I wanted.When I called my dad and told him my plan, he said，“Good, Faye.That's exactly what you should do.”
With my heart just about pounding out of my body，I called up the president of Global Television.Suddenly Mr.Slaight was on the phone.“I've heard that your studio facilities are amazing.I could come at eleven o'clock on Monday or eleven o'clock on Sunday for a tour.What would suit you better？”I caught him totally off guard.He stuttered a bit, and then picked a day.When I hung up, I was scared but excited.
I arrived at the studio on the appointed day.When Mr.Slaight took me around, he looked at me and said，“What do you want？” He sounded furious but curious.“All I want is a chance to audition (试镜)．I just want you to know my face.That's all I'm asking.”
I didn't know whether I'd ever hear from him again, but two weeks later, his secretary called，“Mr.Slight wants to know if you'd like to come and audition for a new school life show.”I immediately answered，“Sure！”
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
When I arrived at the station，I went direct into the audition and began my short performance.
Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.
第一步　细读原文，获取双线
人物 I, my dad, Mr.Slaight, Mr.Slaight' secretary
时间 before working in television
地点 at home, at Ryerson in Toronto, at the station
情节线 a dream of working in television→my dad encouraged me→I was admitted to the radio and television arts program→his secretary asked me to come and audition for a new school life show
情感线 ambitious→afraid→confident→anxious→excited
主旨 努力奋斗，实现梦想
第二步　研读首句，巧定框架
1．两段首句定一框
由第一段首句和第二段首句可以构思第一段内容： 只有我面试通过，这样才有机会在电视上表演。所以我的表现最后一定是不错的，并且获得了面试机会。
构思情节如下：
开始感到紧张→受到鼓励→建立信心→努力排练
2．二框二首正能量
根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第二段内容： 我开始第一次亮相，可以写表演的顺畅，是因为多天的排练和努力。演出大获成功，名声大噪等等，事业蒸蒸日上，最后点题呼应第一段由于爸爸的支持、帮助和鼓励进行点题。
构思情节如下：
在舞台上专心表演→大受欢迎→心中充满了无限的喜悦→父母激励我继续努力实现自己的梦想
第三步　3句衔接，主旨升华
When I arrived at the station，I went direct into the audition and began my short performance.
1． Hardly had I said a few words when my mind went blank. (与第一段首句衔接，倒装句)．..
2． Whenever I felt worn out, my fatigue magically faded away after imagining the bright smile on my parents' cheeks when they saw my performance on TV. (与第二段首句衔接)
Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.
3． Through the spotlight, what came into my sight was a full house.　(与第二段首句衔接，介词短语作状语)．..
4． I deeply knew that without my father's help and encouragement，I wouldn't have fulfilled my dream and achieved so much. (主旨升华，虚拟语气)
第四步　语言提升，写作定稿
注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生动化。
When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance.
Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.
【参考范文】
When I arrived at the station，I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. Hardly had I said a few words when my mind went blank.Overwhelmed by a sense of nervousness，I began to stumble over my words.When I was at a loss, the chief examiner slowly came over and gently patted me on the shoulder, encouraging me not to be tense.Slowly, my previous restlessness gave way to the full confidence to well finish the performance.The next three minutes witnessed my smooth performance and I was told to have passed the audition.During the next few days，I often threw myself into the rehearsal round the clock.Whenever I felt worn out, my fatigue magically faded away after imagining the bright smile on my parents' cheeks when they saw my performance on TV.
Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching. Through the spotlight, what came into my sight was a full house.With every line deeply engraved in my mind, I stood on the stage and devoted myself to the performance.Eventually, the show became a hit and its ratings were more than high.With infinite joy in my heart, I couldn't wait to share the good news with my parents.They inspired me to carry on and strive to shine in the industry.I deeply knew that without my father's help and encouragement，I wouldn't have fulfilled my dream and achieved so much.
Writing 2　家庭亲情类——母子情深
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·揭阳市高三联考)
Moving In
My eighty-five-year-old mother offered that familiar tilt(倾斜) of the head, the one that told me something was up.I tensed my shoulders and bit my lip, waiting for whatever was coming next.
I could handle it.She was predictable, though dramatic.I expected her to express her thoughts on the latest news or share the senior community news.
Instead, she calmly said, as though she were sharing her dinner menu，“I'm going to downsize and sell my house and nearly everything I own.” The breaking news was followed by a matter of fact stare.
“Do what？” I asked.“I'll be a floater，” she said.
“I'll stay with you, then with my brothers in Maine, and then with some of my friends.I'll just float around and enjoy myself.” She laughed as though she'd just discovered the perfect lifestyle.“I'll take my cat everywhere with me.I can't bear to leave him behind or give him away.What do you think？”
“No one will want you to show up with your cat.” My answer seemed a shock to her.After only seconds, she added，“Well, I just won't tell them he's coming.We'll just show up.What can they do？”
Shocked，I took a deep breath and forced myself to respond by explaining all the reasons why selling, moving in with me, and fearlessly dragging the cat across the country in secret were terrible ideas.
Unbothered, she simply said，“You're so dramatic.It'll be fine.”
I didn't take her announcement seriously.A few days after her announcement, my brother and I enjoyed a few laughs over her idea.After all, our mother was too independent to be placed in a place long-term with any of her children.She had made this clear on many occasions when I'd begged to live next door to her.I'd wanted to be close enough to watch over her but not too close, but she'd always refused.
I enjoyed living alone, hearing the quiet, writing and reading.I hated noise.My mother loved radio, television, and phone calls, endless phone calls.We would not make good housemates.
注意：续写词数应为150 左右。
I really panicked when she started having yard sales.
I took her to my home from the hospital happily, no longer bothered by her moving in.
第一步　细读原文，获取双线
人物 my mother and I
时间 at her age of eighty-five years old
地点 at home
情节线 mother wanted to sell her house→I can't believe→mother explained→I felt shocked and explained→we woudn't make good housemates
情感线 puzzled→shocked
主旨 理解母亲，尊重母亲
第二步　研读首句，巧定框架
1．两段首句定一框
由第一段首句内容“她开始搞庭院甩卖的时候，我真的慌了”可知，第一段可描写 作者得知母亲真的在卖房子时的恐慌，后来母亲生病住院及照顾母亲的情景。
构思情节如下：
恐慌→确认→母亲生病住院→照顾母亲
2．二框二首正能量
根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第二段内容： 描写作者把康复后的母亲接回自己的家中，开始照顾她，并带她去旅行，实现她的梦想。
构思情节如下：
接母亲回自己家住→意识到亲情的价值→带母亲旅行→实现她的梦想
第三步　3句衔接，主旨升华
I really panicked when she started having yard sales.
1． “Are you serious？”I asked her one day. (与第一段首句衔接，运用对话)．..
2． Luckily, she recovered. (与第二段首句衔接)
I took her to my home from the hospital happily, no longer bothered by her moving in.
3． Actually，I am not saying we would get along perfectly, but I see things differently. (与第二段首句衔接，副词作状语)．..
4． Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful. (主旨升华，倒装句)
第四步　语言提升，写作定稿
注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生动化。
I really panicked when she started having yard sales.
I took her to my home from the hospital happily, no longer bothered by her moving in.
【参考范文】
I really panicked when she started having yard sales.“Are you serious？”I asked her one day.“Of course，” she answered.I forced myself to face what was happening, and I begged for some cherished items.Then one day Mom caught a bad cold and had a high fever.I was afraid and sent her to the hospital.During those days，I was no longer stressed about her floater plan, whether it was right or logical.I just wanted her to be okay.Luckily, she recovered.
I took her to my home from the hospital happily, no longer bothered by her moving in. Actually，I am not saying we would get along perfectly, but I see things differently.Her moving in with me hadn't been part of the plan—living next to her had been.I've realized I don't have to understand her, just love her while she's here and take every moment I have with her as a gift.Whenever I had time, I would take her to travel, to realize her dream.Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.
Writing 3　友情友爱类—风雨之后见彩虹
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2024·扬州市高三调研测试)
I looked up from my desk to see the teacher writing on the board：“Battle of the Books！” She smiled and said，“This time it's a teamwork.You're going to be in teams of two, and set a reading goal.Every team that meets their goal by the end of the month will get a prize！” The lunch bell sounded before she could explain any more rules.
As I gathered my things，Liya passed my desk and said，“Teammates？” Since Liya and I shared the same interest in graphic novel(漫画小说), and we took Hindi language class together, we teamed up automatically.I was both relieved and excited to have my team.Then we got to the cafeteria and quickly threw out a bunch of ideas of what to do at our table.
I looked to our third friend Kash, with whom the three of us always do stuff together，“Kash, do you have ideas for us？”“Why would I give you guys ideas？” he said gloomily(阴沉地)．“I'll save that for my team...whoever that is.Now I see how I rank in the friendship lineup.” Kash replied in an angry tone.
I knew he was mad for a reason.If I were him, not only would I think that I ranked last in that group, but I'd also be panicking about what team I could join.But now, I was on the inside and Kash wasn't, I felt like the only way to fix this would be three people on a team.So, as the teacher walked by our table, I asked for her permission.What surprised me was that she had intended to draw names to assign random groups, but didn't get a chance to say it before lunch.
Awkward and frustrated, we were stuck in this dilemma.Having first teamed up without Kash didn't mean we didn't like him.I knew we—especially I—wouldn't be able to enjoy any prize if our friend felt bad about being left out.So, I decided to do something to make it up for him and convince Kash he was an equal friend.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
That night, I was struck by an idea as I read a graphic novel that all three of us liked.
The next day, I handed my pages of apology to Kash.
第一步　细读原文，获取双线
人物 Kash, teacher, Liya，I
时间 when we had a reading competition
地点 at school
情节线 we're going to be in teams of two→our third friend Kash became angry→we were stuck in this dilemma
情感线 relieved and excited→awkward and frustrated→ forgivable
主旨 消除误会，再续友情
第二步　研读首句，巧定框架
1．两段首句定一框
由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，当我读了一本我们三个人都喜欢的漫画小说时，我被一个想法打动了。”和第二段首句内容可知，第一段可描写 我们写道歉信、弥补友情的过程。
构思情节如下：
两人商量→写出道歉信
2．二框二首正能量
根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第二段内容：第二段可描写 卡什接受我们的道歉、重新修复友谊的过程。
构思情节如下：
接受道歉→重归于好
第三步　3句衔接，主旨升华
That night，I was struck by an idea as I read a graphic novel that all three of us liked.
1． Thrilled and inspired，I sprang in front of my desk, racked my brains and started drawing a few scenes of three of us giggling, chattering and enjoying each other's company like we usually did. (与第一段首句衔接，形容词作状语)．..
2． Pierced to the heart with guilt，I gingerly tucked the paintings into an envelope, hoping this would be an ice-breaker. (与第二段首句衔接)
The next day, I handed my pages of apology to Kash.
3． He took it, looking surprised at the first sight. (与第二段首句衔接，现在分词作状语)．..
4． We exchanged a knowing smile, realizing that sincerity, trust and communication were always the key to clearing up the misunderstanding between friends. (主旨升华，现在分词作状语)
第四步　语言提升，写作定稿
注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生动化。
That night, I was struck by an idea as I read a graphic novel that all three of us liked.
The next day, I handed my pages of apology to Kash.
【参考范文】
That night，I was struck by an idea as I read a graphic novel that all three of us liked.Thrilled and inspired, I sprang in front of my desk, racked my brains and started drawing a few scenes of three of us giggling, chattering and enjoying each other's company like we usually did.On the last page，I wrote，“Dear Kash, you are not the one left behind.Liya and I are so sorry about the way we messed things up.” Pierced to the heart with guilt，I gingerly tucked the paintings into an envelope, hoping this would be an ice-breaker.
The next day, I handed my pages of apology to Kash. He took it, looking surprised at the first sight.After he read it, an expression of intense joy illuminated his eyes.Blushed，I broke the silence，“I'm sorry, dude.We should have talked to you.” With her eyes fixed on the floor, Liya came over and apologized in a low voice，“You mean a lot to us.” Hearing her words, Kash shook his head and beamed，“I was too sensitive.” We exchanged a knowing smile, realizing that sincerity, trust and communication were always the key to clearing up the misunderstanding between friends.
Writing 4　和谐自然类——人猫情未了
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2025·南通市调研)
It was Christmas Eve morning, and I awoke with a mission: to find my lost cat, Baby-Girl.As I got ready，I could hear icy rain pelting the windows.Baby-Girl was out there somewhere in the storm.I could just feel it.Sure, it had been a couple of weeks since she'd gone missing, but I still had faith.This was the season for miracles, after all.
About two weeks ago, my sweet kitty disappeared from my parents' house in my hometown.Baby-Girl had been staying with them while I was between apartments.At the time, I lived and worked in another city.I was staying with friends until I rented my own house.Baby-Girl had gotten out of my parents' house the day before I was set to drive back home to pick her up.
My dad and I had spent that entire visit searching for her.Dad was a“realist”， which meant he spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst.“She's either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found her，” he said.I rolled my eyes.He could do with a little more faith!
Besides, though I couldn't explain it, I knew I'd see Baby-Girl again.She could survive all on her own.If any cat could do the impossible, it was my Baby-Girl.Even after I returned to my house without her, deep down I had this undeniable feeling that we would be reunited one day.
Now, home again for the holidays, I was determined to pick up my search right where I'd left off.I grabbed Baby-Girl's cat carrier and loaded it into the car, then asked my dad to drive me to the shelter.
At the shelter, a staff member took us to see the cats.We walked through rows of cages.My eyes scanned cats of all colors and sizes.None of them was my Baby-Girl.Then I noticed a room farther back.I pushed ahead.“Sweetheart, that's where they keep the cats that just came in，” Dad said.“Your cat wouldn't be in there.”
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room.
Sensing their doubts, I was ready to prove she was my cat.
第一步　细读原文，获取双线
人物 Baby-Girl, my dad and I
时间 Christmas Eve morning
地点 at the shelter
情节线 my cat was missing→my dad and I searched for her→ I believed that we would be reunited one day→we walked through rows of cages
情感线 faithful→determined
主旨 关爱动物，初心不改
第二步　研读首句，巧定框架
1．两段首句定一框
由第一段首句内容“我坚持认为看看没有关系，并走进了房间。”可知，第一段可描写 作者在那个房间发现自己心爱的猫咪。
构思情节如下：
传来了喵喵叫声→发现我的小猫→收容所的工作人员怀疑不是我的
2．二框二首正能量
根据第二段首句和正能量结尾可以构思第二段内容：可描写 作者通过自己与猫咪的互动证明这只猫就是自己丢失的那只。
构思情节如下：
证明她是我的猫→我训练小猫→确认小猫
第三步　3句衔接，主旨升华
I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room.
1． Suddenly, there came a familiar meow. (与第一段首句衔接，倒装句)．..
2． The shelter staff were skeptical too, saying the cat had just been brought in during the morning storm. (与第二段首句衔接)
Sensing their doubts，I was ready to prove she was my cat.
3． Cautiously，I grabbed the carrier. (与第二段首句衔接，副词作状语)．..
4． As a saying goes，“Stick to your hopes and never give up.” (主旨升华，引用名言)
第四步　语言提升，写作定稿
注意词汇精确化，句式多样化，描写生动化。
I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room.
Sensing their doubts, I was ready to prove she was my cat.
【参考范文】
I insisted it didn't hurt to look and stepped into the room. Suddenly, there came a familiar meow.I followed the sound and my eyes fell on a little cat with big green eyes.She was skinnier than I remembered, but it was Baby-Girl! My eye swelled up with tears.I opened the cage door.Baby-Girl practically jumped into my arms.I held her close as Dad looked on.“There's just no way...，” he mumbled.The shelter staff were skeptical too, saying the cat had just been brought in during the morning storm.
Sensing their doubts，I was ready to prove she was my cat.Cautiously, I grabbed the carrier.I'd trained Baby-Girl to walk inside the carrier.Sure enough, when she was letdown, she made a dash for the carrier and rushed right inside.I was overjoyed to have her back.It was a miracle that she had managed to survive on her own for so long, and I was filled with admiration for her strength and determination.I thanked my lucky stars that I had never given up hope, and that I had come back to the shelter one last time.As a saying goes，“Stick to your hopes and never give up.”

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