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外研版新七上期末作文复习 Unit1-Unit6
写作话题与命题分析
七上教材所涉及的话题与学生的生活密切相关，涉及“人与自我”“人与社会”“人与自然”三大范畴， 具体分析如下：
- Unit 1 初中新生活 - Unit 2 兴趣爱好 - Unit 3 家庭关系
- Unit 4 节假日及庆祝方式 - Unit 5 动物朋友
- Unit 6 植物的力量
通过分析七上教材中的话题和写作任务，并结合各地中考题、期中题和期末题，我们发现，现在
的写作情境越来越贴近学生的生活，趋向于引导学生解决真实情境中的问题。因此，我们对七上教材
的写作命题进行如下预测：
方法指导与范文赏读
Writing 1（介绍学校课程和所学科目）
某英语学习网站上同学们正在就各自的学校生活展开讨论。假如你是张京，请你阅读讨论内容，
并用英语写一篇回帖。
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；2. 词数 100 左右。
名师解题--学审题、抓要点
- 主题：介绍我的学校生活
- 体裁：网络回帖
- 人称：第一、三人称 - 时态：一般现在时
- 要点：上课情况、科目情况、个人感受
优秀范文--读佳作、学方法 By: John
Hello, everyone. How is your school life What subjects do you learn at school Do you enjoy your
school life Please write and let us know.
By: Zhang Jing
Hello, everyone! Let me tell you something about my school life.
My school life is very interesting and I like it very much. Classes begin at 8:00 a.m. There are four classes in
the morning and two in the afternoon. We have many subjects, such as Chinese, Maths, English and PE. Of
all the subjects, I like English best because it's interesting and we learn a lot about the world. I don't like
Maths, for it's a little difficult. But my parents say Maths is important and useful, so I try to study it well.
I enjoy my school life. It is colourful and full of happiness every day.
从范文学布局
第一段点明写作目的；第二段详细介绍上课情况和所学科目；第三段表达感受，总结全文。
从范文学好词
- such as 例如
- like...best 最喜欢......
- learn about 了解......
- a little difficult 有点难
- try to do sth. 尽力做某事
- be full of 充满......
从范文学佳句
- 原句 1: I don't like Maths, for it's a little difficult.（for 引出原因）
仿写 1: 我不喜欢地理，因为它对我来说太难了。
_______________________________________________________________
- 原句 2: But my parents say Maths is important and useful, so I try to study it well.（so 连接两个并列分 句，表示“前因后果”）
仿写 2: 我的英语老师很棒，所以我最喜欢英语。 _______________________________________________________________
参考答案:
- 仿写 1: I don't like Geography, for it is too difficult for me.
- 仿写 2: My English teacher is excellent, so I like English best.
Writing 2（介绍学校和学校生活）
假如你是李华，你的一位英国笔友 Tom 来信询问你的学校生活。请你根据他的来信给他回复， 向他介绍你的学校和学校生活。
Dear Li Hua,
How's everything going I hear that you are now studying in a middle school. What's your school like Do you enjoy your school life Tell me something about your school life.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes,
Tom
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2. 短文须包括所有要点，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理
清楚，书写规范；3. 词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
名师解题--学审题、抓要点 主题：介绍我的学校和学校生活
体裁：书信
人称：第一、三人称
时态：一般现在时
要点：学校设施、上课情况、科目、学校活动、感受等
优秀范文-读佳作、学方法 Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I'm very glad to tell you something about my school and my school life.
My school is big and beautiful. There are two classroom buildings, a dining hall, a teachers' building, a
sports field and a library in it. You can also see many flowers and trees in my school.
I go to school from Monday to Friday every week and we have seven classes every weekday. I like
English best because my English teacher always makes her classes interesting. I like music, so I am in the
school music club. There are many activities in my school, such as singing contests, sports meetings and
school trips.
I like my school very much and I think my school life is colourful. What about your school and school
life Can you tell me something about them
Yours, Li Hua 从范文学布局 第一段点明写作目的；第二、三段详细介绍学校设施、上课情况、最喜欢的科目和学校活动；第四段
表达感受，并询问对方的情况。
从范文学好词
- big and beautiful 又大又美丽 - from...to... 从......到.....
- make sb. /sth. +adj. 使某人/某物处于.....状态 - be in the...club 加入......社团
- singing contest 歌唱比赛 - sports meeting 运动会
- school trip 学校旅行
从范文学佳句
原句: There are many activities in my school, such as singing contests, sports meetings and school trips. （there be 句型；such as“例如”）
仿写: 我的新学校里有许多漂亮的建筑，比如教学楼、学校礼堂和餐厅。 _______________________________________________________________
参考答案:
仿写: There are many beautiful buildings in my new school, such as the classroom building, the school hall and the dining hall.
Writing 3（介绍学校生活）
中学时光如诗如歌。假如你是月光中学的张明，请根据下图提示，以“My happy school life”为主题， 用英语写一封电子邮件，向你的英国笔友 James 介绍你的校园生活。
提示：
学校设施（三栋教学楼，一个图书馆，一个新运动场）
科目增多，感受...... 最爱地理，因为...... 课外活动丰富（运动会，戏剧表演） 老师和蔼可亲（举例.....），同学互帮互助，互相学习
要求：1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，要点全面；2. 词数 100 左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，
不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。
名师解题--学审题、抓要点 主题：我的学校生活 体裁：电子邮件 人称：第一、三人称 时态：一般现在时 要点：学校设施、科目情况、课外活动、师生关系、感受
优秀范文--读佳作、学方法
Dear James,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Moonlight Middle School.
Our school is big and modern. There are three classroom buildings, a library and a new sports field. We
learn some new subjects this term, such as Geography and History. Among them, Geography is my favourite
because I can learn a lot about different cities and countries. We also have some wonderful activities at
school. There is a sports meeting and a drama show every term. How exciting! What's more, all my teachers
are kind enough to help us with all kinds of problems. My classmates are polite and friendly. We often help and learn from each other.
I always have a good time at school. It's lucky for me to study in a school like this. What about your school life I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours, Zhang Ming
从范文学布局
第一段点明写作目的（已给出），第二段详细介绍学校设施、科目、课外活动、师生关系等，第三段
表达感受，第四段询问对方的学校生活（已给出）。
从范文学好词
- among them 在它们中
- different cities and countries 不同的城市和国家 - drama show 戏剧表演
- what's more 更重要的是
- help sb. with sth. 在某方面帮助某人 - all kinds of 各种各样的
- learn from each other 互相学习
- have a good time 过得愉快
- help each other 互相帮助
从范文学佳句
原句 1: What's more, all my teachers are kind enough to help us with all kinds of problems.（adj. +enough + to do sth. 足够......做某事）
仿写 1: 我们的学校礼堂足够大，可以容纳三千人。 ____________________________________________________________________
原句 2: It's lucky for me to study in a school like this.（It's+ad. +for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是...... 的。）
仿写 2: 对我来说，每天与老师和同学们在一起是有趣的。
____________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
- 仿写 1: Our school hall is big enough to hold 3, 000 people.
- 仿写 2: It's fun for me to stay with my teachers and classmates every day.
Writing 4（介绍兴趣爱好）
兴趣是最好的老师，不同的兴趣爱好带给每个人不同的感受。你校英语俱乐部正在举行英语征文比赛，
请你以“My favourite hobby”为题，写一篇英语征文。
写作要点:
1. 你的兴趣爱好是什么；
2. 你有这项兴趣爱好的原因（至少 2 个）； 3. 你是如何培养这项兴趣爱好的。
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包含所有写作要点；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露任何个人信息；
4. 词数 100 左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
名师解题--学审题、抓要点 主题：介绍兴趣爱好 体裁：说明文 人称：以第一人称为主 时态：以一般现在时为主 要点：兴趣爱好是什么、有此爱好的原因、如何培养的该兴趣爱好
优秀范文--读佳作、学方法
My favourite hobby
Different people have different hobbies. Some like listening to music, while some like doing sports. For
me, I like reading best.
I began to read in my spare time when I was a little girl. At the beginning, I read storybooks. But now I
enjoy reading novels, because there are lots of interesting stories. When I am in trouble, reading can make
me calm down. I often go to the school library to borrow books and sometimes I buy some books from the
bookstore. It takes me about an hour to read books every day. I read books during the break, after school or
before I go to bed.
I think reading is a part of my life. Reading not only brings me a lot of knowledge but also keeps me in a
good mood and is good for my health.
从范文学布局
第一段点明自己的爱好是什么；第二、三段详细介绍自己是如何培养该爱好的、有该爱好的原因以及
该爱好给自己带来的益处。
从范文学好词
- in my spare time 在我的空闲时间
- enjoy reading novels 喜欢读小说
- lots of 许多
- in trouble 处于困境
- make sb. do sth. 让某人做某事
- calm down （使）平静，镇静
- during the break 在休息期间
- a part of ......的一部分
- not only...but also... 不仅......而且...... - in a good mood 心情好
- be good for 对......有好处
从范文学佳句
原句 1: It takes me about an hour to read books every day.（it takes sb. some time to do sth. 做某事花费某 人多长时间）
仿写 1: 完成这个项目花了我三个月的时间。 _________________________________________________________________
原句 2: Reading not only brings me a lot of knowledge but also keeps me in a good mood and is good for
my health.（not only...but also...连接两个并列的谓语部分）
仿写 2: 她不仅歌唱得好，而且舞跳得也美。 _________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
仿写 1: It takes me three months to finish the project. 仿写 2: She not only sings well but also dances beautifully.
Writing 5（介绍家人）
家人和家庭对每个人来说都很重要。你的家庭是什么样的呢？请以“My Family”为题，根据以下要点 和要求写一篇英语短文，介绍你的家庭。
1. 要点:
1) 你的家庭成员；
2) 他们的年龄、职业、爱好； 3) 你最想对你的家人说的话。
2. 要求:
1) 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2) 词数 100 左右。
名师解题--学审题、抓要点 主题：介绍我的家庭 体裁：记叙文 人称：第一、三人称 时态：一般现在时 要点：家庭人口数，家人的年龄、职业、爱好，对家人的爱
优秀范文--读佳作、学方法
My Family
There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and me.
My father is a 40-year-old doctor. He is kind to his patients and he always tries his best to help people in
need. In his free time, he likes playing basketball. My mother is 39 years old. She teaches Chinese in a
primary school. When she has time, she likes to paint. My brother is six. He is in Grade One. He enjoys
playing Chinese chess. I'm thirteen and I study in a middle school. Reading is my hobby, so I joined the
Reading Club.
I'm happy to live with my family and I want to say "I love you" to them.
从范文学布局
第一段简要介绍家庭的基本情况，第二段详细介绍家人的年龄、职业、爱好，第三段表达对家人的爱。
从范文学好词
- a 40-year-old doctor 一名 40 岁的医生 - be kind to sb. 对某人友好
- try one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 - people in need 需要帮助的人
- play basketball 打篮球
- play Chinese chess 下中国象棋
- be happy to do sth. 很高兴做某事
从范文学佳句
原句 1: He is kind to his patients and he always tries his best to help people in need.（and 连接两个并列分 句）
仿写 1: 王星宇对他的同学很友好，并且总是尽自己最大的努力帮助有困难的同学。 _________________________________________________________________
原句 2: When she has time, she likes to paint.（when 引导的时间状语从句）
仿写 2: 当我有空的时候，我喜欢和妈妈去散步。 _________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
仿写 1: Wang Xingyu is kind to his classmates and he always tries his best to help his classmates in need. 仿写 2: When I have time, I like to go for a walk with my mother.
Writing 6（介绍中秋节）
假设你是张燕，请根据下列提示，给你的英国笔友 Jack 写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国中秋节的情 况。内容包含:
1. 中秋节的日期；
2. 中国人在中秋节的习俗（如吃月饼、赏月、讲嫦娥的故事等）； 3. 你对中秋节的感受。
注意: 1. 词数 100 左右；2. 内容必须包含所给的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文章开 头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇: the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month (农历八月十五) ; reunion (重逢，团聚); get together (聚集); moon cake (月饼)
名师解题--学审题、抓要点
- 主题：介绍中秋节
- 体裁：电子邮件
- 人称：以第三人称为主 - 时态：一般现在时
- 要点：中秋节的日期、习俗，你的感受
优秀范文--读佳作、学方法
Dear Jack,
Let me tell you something about the Mid- Autumn Festival in China. The Mid- Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It usually falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month. People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion. They often give best wishes to each other at this special time.
On this day people usually go back home to get together, enjoying a large meal with their family. At night, they admire the full moon, share delicious moon cakes with their family and tell stories about Chang'e.
Spending traditional Chinese festivals with my family always makes me feel the love and warmth of family. Yours, Zhang Yan
从范文学布局
首先介绍中秋节的日期及重要性，然后介绍中秋节的习俗，最后表达感受。
从范文学好词
- important traditional festivals 重要的传统节日 - a symbol of .........的象征
- give best wishes to sb. 给予某人最美好的祝愿 - get together 聚集
- admire 欣赏；观赏
- spend...with sb. 和某人一起度过..... - warmth 温暖
从范文学佳句
- 原句 1: People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion.（believe +that 从句；a symbol of）
仿写 1: 中国人认为竹子是美好品格的象征。（character 品格） _________________________________________________________________
- 原句 2: On this day people usually go back home to get together, enjoying a large meal with their family. （动词-ing 短语作伴随状语）
仿写 2: 孩子们跑出房间，开心地说着、笑着。 _________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
仿写 1: Chinese people believe that bamboo is a symbol of good character. 仿写 2: The children run out of the room, talking and laughing happily.
Writing 7（介绍元宵节/端午节）
在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中，你班对“元宵节”和“端午节”两个中国传统节日开 展了小课题研究，经过探究与实践，你们收集了一些信息与资料（见下表），假设你是李华，请选择 其中一个节日，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果以及下阶段计划进 行发言。
注意:
(1) 短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥； (2) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
(3) 词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
名师解题--学审题、抓要点 - 主题：介绍节日
- 体裁：演讲稿
- 人称：第一、三人称
- 时态：以一般现在时为主
- 要点：所选节日、节日介绍、节日宣传计划
优秀范文--读佳作、学方法
Dear classmates, I'm very happy to share our research with you. The subject we choose is the Dragon
Boat Festival. To do the research, we searched for information online and visited a local museum about
culture and customs.
Now we know a lot about the festival. With a history of about 2, 000 years, the Dragon Boat Festival
falls on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. Chinese people usually celebrate it by watching dragon boat
races. How fantastic the dragon boat teams are! Zongzi is the most traditional food and people eat it to honour the great poet Qu Yuan.
Next, we plan to learn how to make zongzi, and produce an English video to make more people around
the world know the festival.
That's all. Thank you!
从范文学布局
第一段点明探究的节日并说明探究的方式，第二段详细介绍该节日的历史、庆祝时间、庆祝方式、食
物等，第三段表明下一步的计划，最后一段结束讲话并表达感谢（已给出）。
从范文学好词
- do research 进行研究
- search for information 搜索信息 - with a history of 有......的历史
- fall on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month 在农历五月初五 - dragon boat races 龙舟赛
- honour 纪念
- plan to do sth. 计划做某事 - make zongzi 包粽子
- produce an English video 制作英语视频 从范文学佳句
原句 1: To do the research, we searched for information online and visited a local museum about culture and customs.（动词不定式短语位于句首，作目的状语）
仿写 1: 为了发现宇宙的秘密，科学家们努力工作。 _________________________________________________________________
原句 2: How fantastic the dragon boat teams are!（"how +adj.+主语+谓语"形式的感叹句）
仿写 2: 孩子们多么开心啊！ _________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
- 仿写 1: To find out the secrets of the universe, scientists work hard. - 仿写 2: How happy the children are!
Writing 8 (介绍动物)
上周日，你和 Sandy 去了野生动物园，了解到很多野生动物的生存现状，你想在 School Newsletter 上 发文呼吁同学们保护野生动物。请你就下面表格中的提示内容写一篇 90 词左右的短文。
|内容提示| |
注意:
1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2. 可展开合理想象，适当发挥；
3. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
名师解题--学审题、抓要点
- 主题：保护野生动物 - 体裁：说明文
- 人称：以第一人称为主
- 时态：以一般现在时为主
- 要点：野生动物的生存现状及原因、应对措施、建议
优秀范文--读佳作、学方法
Last Sunday, Sandy and I went to the wildlife park. We learnt that wild animals have nowhere to live and
no food to eat. That's because humans keep cutting down forests and taking up land and the living space for
wild animals gets smaller and smaller. As a result, we should take action to improve the environment and
protect wild animals. We can both make laws and build more nature reserves.
As students, we should always ask our parents and relatives not to buy any fur coats or eat the meat of
wild animals. We should try to keep a balance between humans and animals.
从范文学布局
文章开篇陈述野生动物的生存现状并分析其原因；然后针对现状提出应对措施；最后，以中学生的身
份提出切实可行的建议。
从范文学好词
- have nowhere to live 无处栖息
- have no food to eat 无食可吃
- cut down forests 砍伐森林
- living space 生存空间 - take up land 侵占土地
- smaller and smaller 越来越小 - as a result 因此
- take action 采取行动
- improve the environment 改善环境 - make laws 制定法律
- nature reserves 自然保护区
- protect wild animals 保护野生动物
- ask sb.not to do sth. 请求某人不要做某事
- keep a balance between....and... 保持......与.....之间的平衡
从范文学佳句
- 原句 1: That's because humans keep cutting down forests and taking up land and the living space for wild animals gets smaller and smaller.（That's because+从句）
仿写 1: 那是因为他不得不帮助他的妈妈照顾他的妹妹。 _________________________________________________________________
- 原句 2: We can both make laws and build more nature reserves.（both...and...连接两个并列谓语部分）
仿写 2: 我的弟弟既会读又会写。
_________________________________________________________________ 参考答案:
- 仿写 1: That's because he had to help his mother look after his little sister. - 仿写 2: My little brother can both read and write.

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