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应用文写作山形框架写作法
祝贺信
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行业PPT模板http:///hangye/
题型分析
祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学或成功完成了某事等时，向对方表示祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。内容通常包括：开篇表明祝贺事由；正文说明被祝贺人所取得的成绩，肯定对方的努力及优点；结尾表达祝愿。
思维导图
Step 1 审题
填充要点
丰富语言
明确要求
衷心祝贺
积极评价+求教/请求
再次祝贺/祝愿
Step 2 架构
Step 3 优化
Opening
Body
Closing
内容要点的全面性：覆盖所有
语法结构与词汇的丰富性、准确性：较多、较复杂、较高级
再上下文连贯性：紧凑
五档
作文
（13-15）
写作方法
Step 1 审题
填充要点
丰富语言
明确要求
Step 2 架构
Step 3 优化

1.体裁：
2.命题形式：
3.考查内容：
4.词数要求：
5.题型分值：
6.建议用时：
应用文
提纲式（半开放式）
实际生活情境下用英语传达信息、表达观点的能力
80
满分15分
15分钟
假如你是李华，你的好友李明在网上中国诗词朗诵比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
1. 表达你的愉悦心情并表示祝贺；
2. 肯定对方成绩并予以赞美；
3. 希望共进晚餐以示庆祝。
Compare the requirements
假如你是李华，得知你的好友Peter以优异成绩高中毕业并被一所重点大学录取。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件表示祝贺。内容包括：
1. 向Peter表示祝贺；
2. 请他介绍学习经验；
3. 再次表达祝贺和祝愿。
假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter给你发来一封邮件，告诉你他被推选为学校篮球队队长。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。要点包括：
1. 对他的祝贺；
2. 你对此事的看法；
3. 对他的祝愿。
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫"苏琳"和她的母亲"白云"。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1. 祝贺苏琳生日；
2. 感谢工作人员并索取苏琳三岁生日照；
3. 再次祝贺苏琳生日。
积极评价+虚心求教
积极评价+其他请求
积极评价
高阶模板
Dear Mrs Wang ,
This highlight moment in your life prompts me to write at once, and in my peculiar way, to attempt to offer my warmest congratulations.
I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ... . I’m amazed at your extraordinary achievement since it is difficult to ... It is your untiring diligence, perseverance and immense devotion that stand you out in the crowd. What deserves being emphasized is that it is your consistent efforts that push you to this level. If possible, ...
I have confidence that you will gain more shinning achievement in your future life. I shall,one more time, offer you my sincerest congratulations.All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Mrs Wang ,
This highlight moment in your life prompts me to write at once, and in my peculiar way, to attempt to offer my warmest congratulations.
I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your winning the "Chinese Idioms" contest held by your school's Chinese Learning Club, which came as no surprise. I’m amazed at your extraordinary achievement since it is difficult to study Chinese idioms. It is your untiring diligence, perseverance and immense devotion that stand you out in the crowd. What deserves being emphasized is that it is your consistent efforts that push you to this level. If possible,wish you new and greater progress in the journey of your Chinese study!
I have confidence that you will gain more shinning achievement in your future life. I shall,one more time, offer you my sincerest congratulations.All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（湖南省长沙市长郡中学2023-2024学年高三下学期）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。要求如下：
1.表达祝贺；2.肯定努力；3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
模板套用
通用模板
Dear_______,
(首段祝贺) Congratulations on your _______ . It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your ___________.
(评论事件) I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Now you prove to me a mature and well-rounded（全面的）________in every respect.
(展望未来，再次祝愿) Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ . Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours，
___________
Dear Chris,
Congratulations on your winning the championship in the interschool basketball game last week, which came as no surprise.It was delightful for me to hear that you win the championship. I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your winning the championship in the interschool basketball game.
I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work and your excellent ability that leads you to the current success.
Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your winning the championship in the interschool basketball game. May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours，
___________
（英语周报2023年度春季学期高一课标第59期高一英语下学期总复习三）
假定你是李华，收到外国朋友Chris的邮件，告诉你他所在的球队上周在校际篮球赛（interschool basketball game）中获得冠军。请给他回一封邮件，祝贺他取得的好成绩，并赞赏他付出的努力。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
模板套用
真题链接
【2025·河北唐山】假定你是李华，你的英国好友Jim来信告知他被国际野生生物保护学会录用为暑期项目的志愿者。你对此非常感兴趣，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；2. 肯定他的努力；3. 寻求项目信息。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇：国际野生生物保护学会Wildlife Conservation Society(WCS)
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
审题
体裁 祝贺信 时态 一般现在时
主题 保护野生生物 人称 第一、二人称
结构 第一段：表示祝贺 第二段：肯定他的努力并寻求项目信息 第三段：期待回复
列纲
衷心祝贺
评价、请求
再次祝贺
Body
Closing
Opening
句型变换 一句多译
先内后外 先努力后天赋
前后衔接 逻辑清晰
繁简搭配 自然流畅
Structure
Content
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Tips
1. Congratulations on your success in (祝贺事由). We are very proud of you for you remarkable achievement.
2. I am writing to extend/convey/express my sincere/cordial/hearty congratulations on your (祝贺事由), on behalf of (某方).
3. I am exceedingly/more than delighted/pleased to learn that (祝贺事由)! Congratulations!
4. It is such a great excitement that (祝贺事由), so I am writing to send my congratulations to you from the bottom of my heart.
5. What uplifting/thrilling/inspiring news that (祝贺事由)! Congratulations!
6. On hearing (祝贺事由), I can't help feeling exceedingly delighted.
7. Good news travel fast! It was delightful for me to learn that (祝贺事由). Please accept my sincere congratulations!
the Chinese Speech Competition
Para 1 衷心祝贺
开门见山：事由+祝贺
内因
外因
勤奋
diligence/industry/devotion
天赋
talent/gift
毅力
persistence/perseverance
能力
ability/capability
Brainstorm: what makes for success
环境
environment/conditions
机遇
chance/opportunity
运气
good luck/fortune
Tip 1: 先内后外 先努力后天赋
Para 2 积极评价+虚心求教
S1：你获奖我不意外，因为你一向是个努力又投入的人。
Version 1: I am not at all surprised at the news because you are always hard-working and devoted.
Version 2: It comes as no surprise to me that you have won the first prize due to the fact that you are always so diligent and devoted.
名词性从句
Practice
作为你的好朋友，我一直坚信你迟早会成功，因为你勤奋又投入。
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As your close friend, I always hold the belief firmly that you will make it
in time as a result of constant diligence and devotion .
Para 2 积极评价+虚心求教
S2：你的坚持和语言天赋促成了你在汉语学习上的进步。
Version 1: You are persistent and talented in language, so you can make rapid progress in Chinese.
Version 2: You are persistent and talented in language, which contributes to your rapid progress in Chinese./contributing to your…
Version 3: It is your persistence and talent in language that bring about your rapid progress in Chinese.
定从非谓
Practice
你能被北大录取源于你的坚持和付出。
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You spares no efforts to equip yourself, leading to your successful admission…
强调句型
It is your persistence and efforts that earned you your successful admission…
Para 2 积极评价+虚心求教
S3：你优美的发音和流利的口语一定给观众和评委留下了深刻的映像。
Version 1: I'm sure you impressed the audience and the judges with your pronunciation and fluency.
Version 2: Your beautiful pronunciation and fluency in spoken Chinese must have left the audience and the judges a deep impression.
Version 3: Without your beautiful pronunciation and fluency in spoken Chinese, you couldn't have left the audience and the judges a deep impression.
虚拟语气
Practice
要不是之前积累的丰富经验，你比赛的时候也不会如此从容自信。
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If it hadn't been for the rich experience accumulated previously, you wouldn't
have been so calm and confident when in the competition.
Para 2 积极评价+虚心求教
S4： 你的成功令我开心，使我鼓舞。我也将参加英语演讲比赛，能否分享一些成功经验？
Version 1: Your success makes me pleased and encouraged. I will take part in an English speech competition. Would you like to give me some advice
Version 2: Not only does your success function as a delight, it also serves as an encouragement to me. I plan to take part in an English speech competition, so I wonder if it is possible for you to share with me your advice.
倒装
Practice
我为你骄傲，因为你的努力在那一刻终于得到了回报（not until…）。
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I take pride in you as not until then did all your efforts pay off.
Tip 2: 句型变换 一句多译
Para 2 积极评价+虚心求教
1. Congratulations again on your success and best wishes.
2. Sincere congratulations to you again and I am looking forward to your further achievement.
3. May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
4. I wish you success and fulfillment in the year ahead.
5. I wish you greater success and I am looking forward to good news from you soon.
6. Please accept our sincere congratulations and best wishes for all the good future.
7. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
Para 3 再次祝贺/祝愿
强调主题
One possible version：
Dear Jim,
How excited I was when knowing that you were admitted to be a volunteer of Wildlife Conservation Society. Please accept my heartiest congratulations on this meaningful experience in your upcoming summer.
You have been saving the abandoned animals and helping the lovely animals all the time. Having always appreciated your devotion to wildlife conservation, I firmly believe that it is your enthusiasm and determination that make you selected to be a volunteer. How I wish to join you and be a volunteer like you! Could you please send me some information on how to apply for it I'm sure I will make even greater efforts to do something for nature and people.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1. 2024·湖北武汉
假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：1. 取得成就的原因(努力与坚持)；
2. 继续努力；3. 希望见面和交流。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
参考词汇：“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest
Dear Peter,
_________________________________
_________________________________
Dear Peter,
I'm more than delighted to hear that you won the first place of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your achievement.
As we all know, it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success. In the past few months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Chinese every day, because of which you made great progress. But in order to achieve more in your study and embrace a better future in your life, you'd better go on studying Chinese harder. Eventually, I hope to see you and communicate with you soon.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
巩固
2. 2024届湖南省长沙市湖南师范大学附属中学高三下学期模拟
假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛”(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.回顾他的付出和努力；3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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【参考范文】
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on winning the first prize of the foreign contestant group in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest, which came as no surprise.
As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.” The past days witnessed you giving up your rest time and burying yourself in the library to get a deeper insight into the types and characteristics of Chinese traditional culture to enrich your knowledge reserve 知识储备. Additionally, you immersed yourself in the question bank provided by the contest organizer to make perfect, so perfect that many Chinese students are no match for you. Now, your hard work has finally paid off.
Looking forward to your making greater contributions to the promotion of Chinese culture!
巩固
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