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人教新目标九年级英语Unit14主题写作（一）
毕业演讲
满分范文及名师点评
Part 1.写作要求
Part2.主题相关的高级短语或表达
It’s my great honor to stand here as an outstanding graduate representative.
我很荣幸能以优秀毕业生代表的身份站在这里。
As our busy but wonderful junior high school life comes to an end, let’s look back on these three years.
当我们忙碌而美好的初中生活即将落幕，让我们一同回顾这三年的时光。
I’d like to express my thanks to all the people who have lent a helping hand to me.
我想向所有曾向我伸出援手的人表示感谢。
It is you who gave me support and helped me overcome many difficulties.
正是你们给予我支持，帮助我克服了诸多困难。
Even though I will graduate from this school soon, I'll never forget Mr. Li who helped me a lot.
尽管我即将从这所学校毕业，但我永远不会忘记给予我诸多帮助的李老师。
I realize that the harder I work, the better results I will get.
我意识到，我越努力，就能取得越好的成绩。
The teachers here are not only knowledgeable but also warm-hearted.
这里的老师们不仅学识渊博，而且热心肠。
Hope our school will be more beautiful and our friendship will last forever.愿我们的学校更加美丽，愿我们的友谊天长地久。
We should be thankful to all of our teachers, parents and classmates for what they have done for us from the bottom of our hearts.我们应当发自内心地感谢所有老师、父母和同学，感谢他们为我们所做的一切。
During these years in junior high school, we have experienced so much together.在初中的这些年里，我们一同经历了太多。
For one thing, I learned how to manage my time and balance study with hobbies. For another, I understood the importance of teamwork and friendship.
一方面，我学会了如何管理时间、平衡学习与兴趣爱好；另一方面，我明白了团队合作与友谊的重要性。
I would like to express my sincere thanks to our teachers—thank you for your patience, guidance, and encouragement.我想向我们的老师们表达诚挚的感谢 —— 感谢你们的耐心、指导与鼓励。
You not only taught us knowledge but also showed us how to be better people.你们不仅教给我们知识，还教会我们如何成为更优秀的人。
I’ve not only mastered rich knowledge but also learned how to get along with others and solve problems independently.我不仅掌握了丰富的知识，还学会了如何与人相处、独立解决问题
Part3.高分范文
It is my honor to make a speech on behalf of the graduates of 2026. Looking back at these past three years, I have gained a lot. I not only have made some friends who share the same interests as me but also mastered many useful skills.
Firstly, I am thankful to all my teachers from the bottom of my heart. With the encouragement of them, I put in more effort and make greater progress in my study. Furthermore, I would like to express my thanks to my parents who have always been there for me no matter what happens. Last but not least, I want to thank my classmates. Without you, my school life would not have been so colorful and unforgettable.
All good things come to an end. As we are about to leave, I sincerely wish our school a brighter future. May our teachers stay healthy and happy and all the classmates enter their dream senior high schools.
Part4名师点评
一、核心点评总览
本文紧扣Unit14“回顾初中生活、感恩他人、展望未来”的写作主题，完全符合毕业演讲的文体要求。全文结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语言表达准确规范，情感真挚自然，较好地融合了单元核心语法与高级表达，是一篇贴合中考评分标准（内容完整、结构清晰、语言准确、情感真挚）的高分范文。
二、亮点细节剖析
1. 主题契合度高，内容完整充实
范文精准覆盖了毕业演讲的核心要素：开篇以毕业生代表身份引出演讲主题，中间部分分层次向老师、父母、同学表达感恩（感恩对象全面，符合单元写作“感谢影响自己的人”的核心要求），结尾通过祝福升华主题，兼顾对学校、老师和同学的美好期许，内容完整且贴合演讲场景的情感需求。同时，文中“回顾三年收获”“感恩他人帮助”“展望未来发展”的逻辑链条，完美呼应了Unit14“回顾过往+感恩+展望”的写作核心任务。
2. 结构清晰严谨，层次分明有序
全文采用“开篇点题—分层感恩—结尾祝福”的经典演讲结构，脉络清晰，过渡自然：
-第一段开篇点题：以“It is my honor to make a speech on behalf of the graduates”引出演讲身份与主题，用“Looking back at these past three years”自然过渡到对初中生活的回顾，简洁明了；
第二段分层感恩：通过“Firstly...Furthermore...Last but not least”三个逻辑连接词，清晰划分出对老师、父母、同学的感恩层次，让听众能快速把握核心内容；
第三段结尾升华：以“All good things come to an end”引出离别氛围，随后用真挚的祝福收束全文，情感递进自然，符合演讲的表达逻辑。
3. 语言表达规范，高级用法凸显
本文语言准确、简洁且富有感染力，较好地运用了Unit14重点语法和高级表达，符合中考高分作文的语言要求：
高级句型运用：① 开篇使用形式主语句型“It is my honor to...”，符合演讲正式语境；② 运用定语从句“I have made some friends who share the same interests as me”“thank my parents who have always been there for me”，丰富句子结构；③ 采用虚拟语气“Without you, my school life would not have been so colorful and unforgettable”，强化同窗情谊的重要性，表达更生动；
核心短语活用：文中融入了“on behalf of”“from the bottom of my heart”“put in more effort”“make greater progress”“no matter what happens”等单元重点短语，用法准确，贴合主题；
逻辑连接自然：除了分层感恩的连接词，“Furthermore”“Last but not least”等词的使用，让段落内部、句子之间的逻辑更连贯，提升了演讲的流畅性。
4. 情感真挚自然，贴合演讲场景
作为毕业演讲，本文情感表达真挚且贴合场景：对老师的感恩、对父母的依赖、对同学的不舍，通过“thankful”“sincerely wish”等情感词汇传递到位；结尾的祝福既包含对学校发展的期盼，也有对老师健康、同学升学的祝愿，兼顾了不同听众群体，情感饱满且有温度，能引发听众的共鸣。

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