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人教新目标九年级Unit14毕业演讲(精英版)满分冲刺写作宝典
（高阶句型 + 范文 + 名师点拨）
Part 1.写作要求
Part2.主题分类高级句式表达
一、开篇引出主题（点明场合 + 心情）
It’s my great honor to stand here and deliver a speech at our graduation ceremony.能站在这里，在我们的毕业典礼上发表演讲，是我的莫大荣幸。
Today, as we gather to say goodbye to our junior high school life, my heart is filled with mixed feelings of sadness and excitement.今天，当我们相聚告别初中生活时，我的心中充满了悲伤与兴奋交织的复杂情绪。
Looking back on the past three years, I have countless memories to cherish and so many people to thank.回顾过去的三年，我有无数值得珍藏的回忆，还有许多要感谢的人。
二、回忆初中收获（知识 / 能力 / 友谊）
Not only have I gained a wealth of knowledge in different subjects, but I have also mastered important life skills like teamwork and resilience.我不仅在不同学科中收获了丰富的知识，还掌握了团队合作、坚韧抗压等重要的生活技能。
During these three years, I’ve learned how to face difficulties bravely and how to turn failures into stepping stones to success.在这三年里，我学会了如何勇敢面对困难，以及如何将失败转化为通往成功的垫脚石。
The precious friendships I’ve made here will be the most valuable treasure in my life.我在这里收获的珍贵友谊，将是我人生中最宝贵的财富。
三、感恩类高分句型（老师 / 父母 / 朋友）
(一）感谢老师
I am truly grateful to my teachers, who are so caring and responsible that they always spare no effort to help me with my studies.我由衷地感谢我的老师们，他们如此体贴负责，总是不遗余力地在学习上帮助我。
Whenever I felt lost in my studies, my teachers patiently guided me and encouraged me to keep going.每当我在学习中感到迷茫时，老师们都会耐心引导我，鼓励我继续前行。
It is my teachers’ dedication that lights up my path to growth.正是老师们的付出，照亮了我成长的道路。
（二）感谢父母
I can never thank my parents enough for their selfless love and unwavering support.父母无私的爱与坚定的支持，我永远感激不尽。
No matter what happens, my parents always stand by my side and fill my life with warmth and happiness.无论发生什么，父母始终站在我身边，让我的生活充满温暖与幸福。
Thanks to my parents’ endless care, I have the courage to chase my dreams fearlessly.多亏了父母无尽的关怀，我才有勇气无畏地追逐梦想。
（三） 感谢朋友
I’d like to express my sincere thanks to my friends, who cheer me up when I’m down and share my joy when I succeed.我想向我的朋友们致以诚挚的感谢，在我低落时他们给我打气，在我成功时他们与我分享喜悦。
With my friends’ encouragement, I can overcome all kinds of challenges bravely.有了朋友们的鼓励，我能勇敢地克服各种挑战。
We’ve laughed and cried together, and these memories will stay with me forever.我们一起欢笑、一起落泪，这些回忆将永远伴我左右。
四、名言升华 + 结尾祝福
（一）励志名言（直接套用）
As the saying goes, “A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.” Let’s take this graduation as a new start.正如谚语所说：“千里之行，始于足下。” 让我们把这次毕业当作新的起点。
“The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.” Hold fast to your dreams and never give up.“未来属于那些相信梦想之美的人。” 坚守你们的梦想，永不放弃。
“Where there’s a will, there’s a way.” I believe all of us will achieve our goals in the future.“有志者，事竟成。” 我相信我们所有人都能在未来实现自己的目标。
（二）祝福句式
May our school continue to shine brightly and cultivate more excellent students.愿我们的学校继续熠熠生辉，培育更多优秀的学子。
I wish all our teachers good health and happiness every day.祝愿所有老师身体健康，天天开心。
Hope all my classmates can realize their dreams and have a bright future!希望所有同学都能实现梦想，拥有光明的未来！
Part3.满分范文
It's a great honor for me to speak at the graduation ceremony.Looking back, I’ve gained not only knowledge but also precious friendships. I’ve learned to face difficulties bravely, which keeps me sticking to my dreams and making progress every day.
From the bottom of my heart, I want to thank all the important people in my life.First of all, I’m truly grateful to my teachers who are so caring and responsible that they always spare no efforts to help me with my studies.Besides, I can never thank my parents enough for their selfless love. No matter what happens, they always stand by me and fill my life with warmth and happiness.What’s more, I’d like to express my thanks to my good friends. When I feel upset or meet with difficulties, they always give me a lot of encouragement,making it possible for me to face and overcome all kinds of challenges.
“The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.” As we set out on our new journey, I hope all of us can hold fast to our dreams and make them come true!May our school continue to shine brightly and everyone have a bright future!
Part4名师点评
这篇毕业演讲稿是一篇精准契合写作要求与思维导图的优质范文，在结构逻辑、内容落地、语言表达、情感共鸣四方面均表现突出：
1. 结构逻辑：紧扣框架，闭环完整
完美覆盖思维导图 “收获 - 感谢 - 祝愿” 核心板块：
开篇：以 “It's a great honor...” 快速切入典礼场景，用 “Looking back” 自然引出初中收获，开篇简洁高效；
收获部分：一句话浓缩 “知识 + 友谊 + 抗挫能力” 三大成长点，既呼应初中阶段的核心成长，也为后续感恩做铺垫；
感谢部分：通过 “First of all（老师）→ Besides（父母）→ What’s more（朋友）” 的分层衔接词，清晰覆盖所有关键感谢对象，逻辑层次一目了然；
结尾：用名言 “The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams” 升华主题，再衔接 “新旅程的祝愿 + 对学校和众人的祝福”，收尾既有力又温暖，结构闭环完整。
2. 内容呈现：贴合成长，真实具体
内容落地不空洞，精准呼应初中生活的核心体验：
收获部分：不仅提到 “知识”“友谊”，还补充 “learned to face difficulties bravely”“sticking to my dreams”，体现了初中阶段 “能力 + 意志” 的成长，符合毕业生的真实成长轨迹；
感谢部分：每个对象都搭配了具体支撑（老师 “spare no efforts to help with studies”、父母 “stand by me and fill life with warmth”、朋友 “give encouragement to overcome challenges”），让 “感恩” 不是空泛的口号，而是有细节支撑的真情实感。
3. 语言运用：素材活用，句式丰富
语言既贴合主题素材，又体现了句式的多样性：
灵活调用了核心表达（如 “spare no efforts”“stand by me”“set out on our new journey”），自然融入文本；
句式有变化：定语从句（“who are so caring and responsible...”“which keeps me...”）、现在分词作状语（“making it possible for me to...”）的使用，让文本避免了单一的简单句，既符合初中写作的进阶要求，又让表达更流畅生动。
4. 情感共鸣：真挚自然，契合场合
情感基调贴合毕业典礼的氛围：从开篇的 “荣幸”，到中间的 “由衷感恩”，再到结尾的 “对未来的憧憬与祝福”，情感层层递进，既传递了毕业的不舍，也饱含对未来的期待，容易引发老师、同学、家长的共鸣。

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