资源简介

一、写作范例
初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的 情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当 天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~ 100 词。
要求：（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
（3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school,
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Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
Step 1 认真审题，明确要求
主题 校园生活
人称 第一人称为主
时态 一般过去时为主
文体 记叙文
要点 第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受； 第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，抒发毕业感悟并书写结语。
Step 2 列要点，编提纲
立框架 列要点 添细节
开门见山，描述入 校当天的感受。
结合自身经历，描述 你入校时的所见所 闻和经历感受，可列 举具体的事例。
进行总结概括，重 申主题和观点。
Step 3 巧用词句，衔接成文
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school, I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well. However, when I sat down at my desk and
began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I
played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. Looking at the beautiful campus, I
gradually forgot my nervousness. I felt at home. At the end of that first school day, I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school.
Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
二、实战演练
假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数 70 左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi Li Ping!
How are you It’s my first day at a new school today. It’s a great school. Do you like your school How do you feel about your school and classmates Can you write to me soon
I’m looking forward to your reply. All the best.
John
Dear John,
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Li Ping
1、话题分析
本单元的写作主题是“介绍自己的信息去交朋友 ”。
2、好词佳句
词汇短 语积累 1.Personal Information (个人信息) Full name (全名)First name (名)Last name (姓)Age (年龄)Nationality (国籍)Hometown (家乡)
Hobby (爱好) Favorite food (最喜欢的食物) Favorite sport (最喜欢的运动) 2.Introduction Expressions (介绍用语) Nice to meet you. (很高兴认识你。) I'm pleased to introduce myself. (我很高兴介绍我自己。) Allow me to introduce myself. (请允许我自我介绍。) 3.Social Skills (社交技能)
Make friends (交朋友) Cross-cultural communication (跨文化交际) 4.Detailed Description (详细描述) be interested in (对...感兴趣) enjoy doing sth. (喜欢做某事) Cultural awareness (文化意识) Respect and understanding (尊重与理解) spend time doing sth. (花时间做某事) have a passion for (对...有热情)
话题常 用句型 1. 自我介绍开头 My name is [Name], and I'm [Age] years old. (我叫[名字] ，今年[年龄]岁。) I come from [Country/City], which is a beautiful place full of history. (我来自[国家/城市]， 那是一个充满历史的美丽地方。) 2.描述个人信息 I'm currently in [Grade] at [School Name]. (我现在在[学校名称]读[年级] 。) I was born and raised in [Hometown], where I spent my childhood. (我在[家乡]出生长大，度 过了我的童年。) 3.表达兴趣爱好 My favorite hobby is [Hobby], as it helps me relax and unwind after a long day. (我最喜欢的 爱好是[爱好] ，因为它能让我在忙碌一天后放松身心。) I love [Favorite Sport], especially playing with my friends on weekends. (我喜欢[最喜欢的 运动] ，尤其喜欢周末和朋友们一起玩。) 4.展示交友意愿 I'm always open to making new friends and learning about different cultures. (我总是乐于结
交新朋友，了解不同的文化。) I believe that through mutual understanding and respect, we can build strong and lasting friendships. (我相信通过相互理解和尊重，我们可以建立牢固而持久的友谊。) 5.结束语 I hope to get to know you better in the future and share our experiences together. (我希望将 来能更深入地了解你，并一起分享我们的经历。) Feel free to reach out if you want to chat or do something fun! (如果你想聊天或做些有趣的 事情，请随时联系我！)
示例段 落 1.开头段落： Hello everyone! My name is Li Hua. It's a great pleasure to introduce myself to you all. I'm thrilled to start this new chapter in my life, attending junior high school and meeting new friends like you. 大家好!我的名字叫李华。很高兴向大家作自我介绍。我很高兴开始我人生的新篇章， 进入初中，认识像你这样的新朋友。 2. 中间段落： I'm 13 years old, and I come from a beautiful city called Hangzhou in China. My hometown is famous for its stunning West Lake and delicious Hangzhou cuisine. Living there has given me a deep appreciation for nature and culture. 我今年 13 岁，来自中国一个叫杭州的美丽城市。我的家乡以美丽的西湖和美味的 杭州菜而闻名。在那里的生活让我对自然和文化有了深刻的欣赏。 I'm passionate about many things, but my favorite hobby is playing basketball. I spend most of my free time either practicing with friends or watching NBA games. Basketball not only keeps me physically fit but also teaches me teamwork and perseverance. Besides sports, I enjoy reading books, especially adventure stories that take me to faraway lands. 我对很多事情都充满热情，但我最喜欢的爱好是打篮球。我的大部分空闲时间要么 和朋友一起练习，要么看 NBA 比赛。篮球不仅使我保持身体健康，而且教会我团队合 作和毅力。除了运动，我还喜欢读书，尤其是那些把我带到遥远国度的冒险故事。 I'm also an animal lover. My family has a cute little dog named Max. He's always there to cheer me up whenever I feel down. Caring for Max has taught me responsibility and compassion. 我也是一个动物爱好者。我家有一只可爱的小狗叫马克斯。每当我感到沮丧时，他 总是在那里给我打气。照顾麦克斯教会了我责任和同情心。
I'm excited to be part of this diverse community and learn from each one of you. I believe that through sharing our stories and interests, we can build strong friendships and support each other in our journey through junior high school. 我很高兴能成为这个多元化社区的一员，并向你们每个人学习。我相信通过分享我 们的故事和兴趣，我们可以在初中的旅程中建立牢固的友谊和相互支持。 3.结尾段落： In conclusion, I'm a friendly and enthusiastic person who loves sports, reading, and animals. I hope that through this introduction, you'll get to know me better and perhaps we can become good friends. Let's make the most of our time here and create wonderful memories together! 总之，我是一个友好而热情的人，喜欢运动，阅读和动物。我希望通过这次介绍， 你能更好地了解我，也许我们能成为好朋友。让我们充分利用在这里的时光，共同创造 美好的回忆!
3、写作框架
Step 1 认真审 题，明确 要求 审主题 My Personal Profile
审文体 记叙文
审人称 第一人称为主
审时态 一般现在时为主
审要点 观点鲜明，层次分明，语言简洁，过渡自然，综述观点。
Step 2 分析要 点，编制 提纲 开头 开门见山，点明主题。 引入话题： 开头（Introduction） 简短问候：Hello everyone! / Hi there! 引入自我介绍：I'd like to take this opportunity to introduce myself.
正文 介绍自己个人的具体情况 1.姓名与年龄 句型：My name is [姓名] and I am [年龄] years old. 示例：My name is Li Ming and I am 14 years old. 2. 国籍 句型：I come from [国家]. / I am from [国家]. 示例：I come from China. 3.爱好
Unit 1 单元主题写作指导
句型：I enjoy [爱好]. / One of my hobbies is [爱好]. 示例：I enjoy reading books. One of my hobbies is playing the guitar. 4.喜爱的食物 句型：My favorite food is [食物]. / I love eating [食物]. 示例：My favorite food is dumplings. I love eating sushi too. 5.喜欢的运动 句型：I really like [运动]. / Playing [运动] is my favorite sport. 示例：I really like basketball. Playing tennis is my favorite sport. 6.喜欢的地点 句型：My favorite place is [地点] because [原因]. 示例：My favorite place is the beach because I love the sound of the waves and the feeling of the sand between my toes.
结尾 进行总结概括，表示感谢。 1.总结并感谢： That's a little bit about me. Thank you for listening! / I hope you enjoyed learning about me. 可选添加：If you have any questions, feel free to ask. 范文示例 Hello everyone! I'd like to take this opportunity to introduce myself. My name is Li Ming and I am 14 years old. I come from China. I enjoy reading books. One of my hobbies is playing the guitar. My favorite food is dumplings. I love eating sushi too. I really like basketball. Playing tennis is my favorite sport. My favorite place is the beach because I love the sound of the waves and the feeling of the sand between my toes. That's a little bit about me. Thank you for listening! If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
Step 3 巧用词 句，衔接 成文 类别 单词/ 短语
顺序 first of all/ first (ly) / to start with/...comes first.首先 secondly/ second/ next/ then 其次 finally/ in the end/at last 最后 last but not least 最后但同样重要的是 at the same time/ meanwhile 同时
并列 补充 and 和；又；而且 besides 除此之外 in addition 除此之外还有 not only. . . but also 不但 … …而且 on the one hand … ，on the other hand …一方面 … … 另一方面 … …
Unit 1 单元主题写作指导
转折对比 but 但是 however 然而 while 然而
递进 what’s more 甚至;更重要的是 even 甚至 especially 特别是 what’s worse 更糟糕的是 above all 首先；最重要的是
因果 /目的 because/ as/ since/ because of/for 因为 as a result 结果 with the help of. . . 在 … … 的帮助下 for this reason 因为这个原因 in order that/ in order to 为了 thanks to 多亏了 … … without 没有 therefore 所以 so that 以便于 for this purpose 为了这个目的
举例 for example 例如 such as. . . 比如；例如 and so on 等等
观点 陈述自己观点： as far as I know 就我所知 in my opinion 依我来看 to tell the truth 说实话 to be honest 诚实地说 generally speaking 通常来说 陈述正反方不同观点： on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . 一方面 … …又一方面 … … some. . . while others. . . 一些人认为 … …而另一些人为 … … Everything has two sides. 事物都具有两面性。 Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . 一些人坚持这种观点, 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点
总结 in short /in a word/ all in all 总之
4、评价量规
Mark（打分）each other’s passages（满分 15 分）
Structure （结构） Does it have a clear beginning, body and ending 文章结构是否完整？ 满分 2 分 分数：
Content （内容） Does it include（包含）these main points: topic sentence, examples, reasons, feelings and conclusion 文章内容是否包括以上要点？ 满分 5 分 分数：
Linking words （连接词） Does he/she add enough linking words 是否有连接词？ 满分 2 分 分数：
Expressions （表达） Does he/she use special sentences 是否使用特殊句型？ 满分 3 分 分数：
Grammar （语法） Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes 是否有拼写或语法错误？ 满分 2 分 分数：
Handwriting （书写） Does he/she use neat handwriting 书写是否工整？ 满分 1 分 分数：

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