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Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 课件-人教版（2019）必修第一册
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack总是忍不住看短视频，严重影响学习，故写信向你求助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1．写信目的；　
2．提出建议；　
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；　
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Learning objectives:
1. Master the basic structure of advice letters and use over 3 sentence patterns.
掌握建议信基本结构，运用 3 种以上建议句型。
2. Understand the communicative culture of "polite suggestion-giving" and build intercultural communication awareness.
理解 “礼貌提建议” 的交际文化，具备跨文化沟通意识。
3. Develop logical thinking and innovative thinking skill for personalized suggestions by analyzing model essays and discussing issues.
通过分析范文、讨论问题，发展逻辑思维与个性化建议的创新思维。
4.Improve group cooperative learning skill.
提高小组合作学习能力。
中文 英文 中文 英文
1.担心 6.玩电脑游戏
2.特别理解 7.你们这代青少年
3.被吸引 8.专注于
4.对...上瘾 9.尝试新的爱好
5.鼓励某人去做
be worried about
be attracted to
be addicted to...
try new hobbies
encourage sb to do sth.
focus on
concentrate on
teenagers of your generation
understand quite well
play computer games
导学案 课前预习
Adam and Chen Lei
September 2018
Dear Susan Luo,
I'm Adam. I'm writing to ask for your advice because I'm extremely worried about my friend Chen Lei. He plays computer games too often and spends an excessive过度的 amount of time online, which makes me fear that it's harming his health and daily life. I don't know what to do, so I hope you can help me.
Yours sincerely,
Adam
This is a letter of .
Letter Strucure:
It has parts, they are: ___________________________________________________________________________
advice
five
date(日期), greeting(问候), body(主体), close(结束语) , signature(署名).
Read for organization 结构
1. What is Worried Friend's problem
Chen Lei plays ________________ too often
Chen Lei spends _______________ online.
2. What are Susan Luo's suggestions
computer games
too much time
1. Talking to his friend about his
behaviour
2. Encouraging his friend to try new
hobbies.
3. Disscuss the question together.
Read and Answer the questions
Mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.
找出并标记信件中匹配特定要点的部分
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason.
D. I think my advice will help.
Read for organization 结构
写信目的
表示理解
建议+原因
表达祝愿
第一段：
第二段：
第三段：
Beginning（开头）I am sorry to know that you are having trouble with..., and I'm writing to offer my advice.
得知你在……方面遇到困难，我深感遗憾，特此写信提出我的建议。
I understand quite well that...我非常清楚地了解到……I am writing to provide you with some practical suggestions regarding..我写这封信是为了关于…… 向你提供一些实用的建议。
Read for language features
写信目的
表示理解
Equip 装备自己- 必备“技能包”
让你的建议更地道的“魔法句型”
Body（主体）I recommend that +完整句子Why not +动词原形It might be a good idea to +动词原形If I were you, I would +动词原形It would be better if you could+动词原形I think you are supposed to +动词原形阐述原因句型
The primary reason is that... This will help you...
主要原因是…… 这将帮助你……
By doing so, you will find it easier to... because...
建议+原因
Ending（结尾）
I believe you will take my advice into consideration.
我相信你会考虑我的建议
I believe that if you follow my advice, you'll +动词原形
我相信如果你听从我的建议，你会……
I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.
我真心希望你会觉得这些建议有帮助。期待你的早日回复。
表达祝愿---希望可以帮助到对方
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack总是忍不住看短视频，严重影响学习，故写信向你求助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1．写信目的；　
2．提出建议；　
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；　
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Writing
小组讨论：针对 Jack看短视频，严重影响学习的问题，运用表示建议的句型提出建议
示例：I recommend that you set a strict time limit for using short video apps.
Group discussion
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack总是忍不住看短视频，严重影响学习，故写信向你求助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1．写信目的；　
2．提出建议；　
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；　
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Writing
写信目的
表示理解
建议+原因
表达祝愿
第一段：
第二段：
第三段：
连接词：首先：First of all,
还有：Besides, What’s more, 最后：Finally, Last but not least，
A letter of advice
I am sorry to hear that you can’t help watching short videos all the time. I understand quite well that___________. I’d like to offer you some useful advice.
To begin with, I recommend that you_______ because________. What’s more, it’s also a good choice to _____________, which will_______________. Besides, doing sth also helps. Only in this way can you ______________
I’m confident that you will ______ with these suggestions.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua　
Dear Jack，
Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you can’t help watching short videos all the time. I think it is a must for you to take action right now, so I am writing to give you some advice.
To begin with, setting some time limits could be a good start, which will help manage your time properly. Besides, I think you can try to start some other hobbies, such as reading, doing some sports or playing chess. Last but not least, you’d better make more friends through face-to-face communication to share your life. And you’ll find there’s a wonderful world outside Tik Tok.
I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you solve the problem. All the best!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua　
评分维度 分值 核心标准 互评选项（打√） 单项得分
内容要点 5 分 核心：是否完整覆盖三个内容要点，且建议具体可行。关键点：1. 写信目的：明确回应 Jack 的求助，表达理解与关心。2. 提出建议：至少两条具体、合理、可操作的建议。3. 表达祝愿：包含祝愿或鼓励的句子。 □5 分（全覆盖，建议具体）□3-4 分（基本覆盖）□1-2 分（遗漏要点）□0 分（无关） _________
语言表达 6 分 核心：词汇语法是否丰富、准确、得体。关键点：1. 使用与 “建议”“问题解决” 相关的词汇和句型。2. 语气需真诚、友好、充满鼓励，避免说教。 □5-6 分（丰富准确）□3-4 分（基本正确）□1-2 分（错多）□0 分（不达意） _________
篇章结构 3 分 核心：格式正确，逻辑清晰，衔接自然。关键点： （结构：推荐 “三段式”：开头段（写信目的 + 理解）、主体段（分点建议）、结尾段（祝愿）。衔接：使用逻辑连接词。） □3 分（逻辑顺）□2 分（基本合理）□1 分（混乱）□0 分（破碎） _________
书写与卷面 1 分 书写工整、卷面整洁 □1 分（清晰）□0 分（潦草难辨） _________
总分 15 分 总分：__________分
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