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感谢信
感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当收到馈赠、邀请、帮助、慰问等时，向对方道谢的信件。感谢信最主要的特点是真诚，另一个特点是具体，应着重于具体的感谢事由。感谢信还有一个特点是及时。收到别人礼物或得到别人帮助，应及时写信予以答谢。
写作分析
日积月累
说明感谢原因的短语
- Thanks to your...（多亏了你的……）
- Owing to your...（由于你的……）
- Because of your...（因为你的……）
- It is your... that...（正是你的……才……，强调句式）
-be grateful/thankful to sb for...
考点二
经典必背
开头句
写作背景+目的
On behalf of ..., I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks/ sincere gratitude for ...
On behalf of ..., I am writing to
On behalf of the Student Union, I’m writing to convey our sincere appreciation to you for the lecture you gave during this year’s English Cultural Festival.
我代表学生会，就您在今年英语文化节期间所做的讲座，向您表达诚挚的感谢
我代表学生会，感谢您为今年英语文化节带来的讲座
On behalf of the Student Union, I'm writing to thank you for the lecture you gave at this year’s English Cultural Festival .
考点二
经典必背
篇中句
感谢理由
If you hadn't...,I would/could not have done ...
Without your help, I would/could not done...
感谢原因1
感谢原因2
It was kind and generous of you to do..., and I appreciate it more than I can say.
陈述具体的帮助
Without your patient guidance, I couldn’t have made so great an achievement.
没有你耐心的指导，我不会取得这么大的成就。
Without your ..., I couldn’t have...
没有您的及时帮忙，我不可能按时解决这个急事。
Without your timely help, I couldn’t have solved this urgent matter on time
If you hadn't...,I would/could not have done...
如果你当初没把笔记借我看，我就过不了那场考试了。
If you hadn't shared your notes with me, I would not have passed that exam.
Had you not shared your notes with me, I would not have passed that exam.
三、描述帮助细节的短语(中间段)
- You spared no effort to...（你不遗余力地……）
- You offered timely help when...（当……时你提供了及时的帮助）
- You were always there to...（你总是在那里……）
-Your support was crucial to...（你的支持对……至关重要）
1. 你不遗余力地帮我准备面试。
2. 下雨天我忘带伞时，你提供了及时的帮助。
3. 我情绪低落时，你总是在那里鼓励我.
4. 你的支持对我完成这个小项目至关重要。
You spared no effort to help me prepare for the interview.
You offered timely help when I forgot my umbrella in the rain.
You were always there to cheer me up when I felt down
Your support was crucial to me finishing this small project.
考点二
经典必背
结尾句
再次表
达感谢
Please accept my sincere thanks again for your help, which I will never forget.
Best wishes to you and your family!
结尾致谢的短语
- Please accept my deepest thanks once again.（请再次接受我最深切的感谢）
- I hope to have the opportunity to repay your kindness.（我希望有机会回报你的善意）
- Thank you from the bottom of my heart.（我从心底里感谢你）
- I look forward to expressing my gratitude in person.（我期待能当面表达我的感谢）
练一练
假定你是李华，已申请就读美国南加州大学（University of Southern California)。在申请过程中，得到前美国外教Mr. King的帮助。请你给Mr. King写信，内容包括： 1.已被大学录取；2.感谢他的帮助；3.期待在美国相见。
注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. King,
_____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
文体 感谢信
写作情境 申请大学过程中，得到前美国外教Mr. King的帮助。顺利申请就读后，给他写信表达谢意
信的作者 李华（已申请就读美国南加州大学的学生）
写作对象 前美国外教Mr. King
时态 以现在时为主，在提及过去的情境需要使用过去时
语气 总体礼貌、正式而热情诚挚；使用正式措辞以示尊重
步骤一：审题
步骤二：谋篇布局
Dear Mr. King,
How is everything going I’m Li Hua, your former student in China. I’m writing to express/convey my sincere /heartfelt gratitude to you for your timely support and assistance when I was applying for the University of Southern California last year（时间状语从句）.
I’m extremely delighted to tell you that I have been admitted to the University and will start my study there next September.
步骤三：经典范文 熟记文中黑体词块及有下画线的功能句型。
I still remember the day when you helped me with my application letter and revised it patiently. 【帮助1：修改申请信】Without your inspiring, instructive and practical guidance, my dream wouldn’t have come true（虚拟语气）. Besides, you are the very person who offered me useful suggestions on how to choose a major, without which it would have been much more difficult for me（定语从句、虚拟语气）. 【帮助2：建议如何选专业】
Thanks again for your kind help. Looking forward to meeting you soon after I get to the university.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
即时训练
训练二
假定你是李华，在英国笔友Jim的帮助下，你在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，请给Jim写一封电子邮件，
内容包括：1．告知获奖情况;
2．表达获奖心情;
3．感谢他的帮助。
注意：1.词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体 感谢信
写作情境 在准备比赛的过程中，得到英国笔友Jim的帮助。获奖后，给他写信表达谢意
信的作者 李华（在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖）
写作对象 英国笔友Jim
时态 以现在时为主，在提及过去的情境需要使用过去时
语气 总体礼貌、正式而热情诚挚；使用正式措辞以示尊重
感谢外国
笔友的帮助
para1(导入)
内容：问候对方+写作目的
（对演讲比赛中获得的帮助表达感谢）
句型：I'm writing to thank you for...
/I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for...
para 2 (主题)
要点一：告知对方在英语演讲比赛中获得第一名
句型：I am delighed to share the good news that...
要点二：感谢他的帮助（帮助1+2+3）
句型：（总起）虚拟，without your help,I couldn't have...
(帮助：润色草稿polish my draft
纠正发音 correct my pronunciation
分享演讲技巧 share public speaking skills
鼓励：encourage/make me confident )
para3 (结尾)
再次表达感谢
Dear Jim,
How is everything going (问候)I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you for your selfless help when I prepared for the speech contest. (感谢)
I'm delighted to share the good news with you that I’ve won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school.(要点一)I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me. Without your patient guidance, I couldn’t have made so great an achievement.(帮助的总起句) During the preparation for the contest, you helped polish my draft many times and better my pronunciation with great patience,without which I couldn't have won the contest （帮助一,定语从句+虚拟语气）The public speaking skills you shared turned out really effective. （帮助二）
More importantly, whenever I felt hesitant and unsure about myself, you were always there to back me up and boost my confidence.（帮助三）
No words are strong enough to express my heartfelt gratitude to you. Thank you very much and wish you all the best.（再次感谢）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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