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How to better our writing
写作复习课
ABCDE-writing method
Step 1
Analyze(审题)
Step 2
Brain storm
Step 4
Decorate (美化)
Step 3
Connect
Step 5
Erase(排除错误)
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How many parts should we write
Part 1 Understanding
Part 2 Examples
Part 3 What you learn
Introduction
Body part
Conclusion
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What tense and person might we use
>=100 words
Write down your title
No copy
No real names
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Eddie has trouble with _______.
I have trouble with _______.
doing CLC
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How could trouble be our friend
Trouble
Experiencing trouble is a common part of life, but it can be our stepping stone(垫脚石).
Trouble is a great chance for learning and growth rather than failures. Face it and solve it. In this way we can understand that our abilities can improve with practice and that mistakes are a key part of the learning process.
Trouble teaches us valuable lessons, for example, asking for help. Making mistakes is a natural part of learning and we shouldn’t feel afraid to ask our parents, teachers and friends for help. Trouble provide a great chance for to learn from each other.
Trouble can teach us how to solve problems. A big problem can be separated into several small and manageable problems. When we face a big problem, keep positive and break it down into smaller ones. Then we can solve it.
In conclusion, trouble is our chance to embrace a better version of ourselves.
Writing Tip:
Remember useful expressions when reading.
Eddie's Part 1
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. I realize that trouble is a friend. It means that trouble is a great chance for learning and growth.
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Circle the linking words(连接词)
I had trouble these days because my mother asked me to attend CLC(中式补习班). However, my friend could play outside while I was doing extra homework.
I was so jealous(嫉妒的) of him that I could not focus.
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How to use linking words
So I decided to talk to my mom. ________ I gave her my straight-A school report, she was happy. I told her that I needn’t do extra homework. ________, I needed some time to relax.
___________, my mom said that she loved me and she hoped that I could have a better future. I understood her worries about my future. _________, I promised that I could handle my school work. __________, my mom agreed to give me some free time.
When
Instead
However
Therefore
Finally
Writing Tip: Use linking words according to the context(情境) and punctuation.
When
Instead
However
Therefore
Finally
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How to better it
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. I realize that trouble is a friend. It means that trouble is a great chance for learning and growth.
I had trouble these days because my mother asked me to attend CLC. ①However, my friend could play outside while I was doing extra homework. ②I was so jealous(嫉妒的) of him that I could not focus. So I decided to talk to my mom. When I gave her my straight-A school report, she was happy.
③I told her that I needn’t do extra homework. Instead, I needed some time to relax. However, my mom said that she loved me and she hoped that I could have a better future. I understood her worries about my future. ④Therefore, I promised that I could handle my school work. Finally my mom agreed to give me some free time.
From this experience, I know that when we disagree with our parents, we should understand each other and have a talk.
Chinese Learning Centre
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Which sentence should we delete
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After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. I realize that trouble is a friend. It means that trouble is a great chance for learning and growth.
I had trouble these days because my mother asked me to attend Chinese Learning Centre. So I decided to talk to my mom. When I gave her my straight-A school report, she was happy.
I told her that I needn’t do extra homework. Instead, I needed some time to relax. However, my mom said that she loved me and she hoped that I could have a better future. I understood her worries about my future. Therefore, I promised that I could handle my school work. Finally my mom agreed to give me some free time.
From this experience, I know that when we disagree with our parents, we should understand each other and have a talk.
I had trouble these days because my mother asked me to attend Chinese Learning Centre. So I decided to talk to my mom. When I gave her my straight-A school report, she was happy.
I told her that I needn’t do extra homework. Instead, I needed some time to relax. However, my mom said that she loved me and she hoped that I could have a better future. I understood her worries about my future. Therefore, I promised that I could handle my school work. Finally my mom agreed to give me some free time.
So a talk with my mom is needed.
I told her that doing extra homework is unnecessary.
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How to better it
After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. I realize that trouble is a friend. It means that trouble is a great chance for learning and growth.
I had trouble these days because my mother asked me to attend Chinese Learning Centre. So a talk with my mom is needed. When I gave her my straight-A school report, she was happy.
I told her that doing extra homework is unnecessary. Instead, I needed some time to relax. However, my mom said that she loved me and she hoped that I could have a better future. I understood her worries about my future. Therefore, I promised that I could handle my school work. Finally my mom agreed to give me some free time.
From this experience, I know that when we disagree with our parents, we should understand each other and have a talk.
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字迹 /
内容
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How to better it
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After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. I realize that trouble is a friend. It means that trouble is a great chance for learning and growth.
I had trouble these days because my mother asked me to attend Chinese Learning Centre. So a talk with my mom is needed. When I gave her my straight-A school report, she was happy.
I told her that doing extra homework is unnecessary. Instead, I needed some time to relax. However, my mom said that she loved me and she hoped that I could have a better future. I understood her worries about my future. Therefore, I promised that I could handle my school work. Finally my mom agreed to give me some free time.
From this experience, I know that when we disagree with our parents, we should understand each other and have a talk.
Synonym(近义词)
realize aware/ recognize/ come to realize/ become consious of/ …
ask sb. to do requrie/ urge/ command sb. to do
a talk a heart-to-heart talk/ conversation/ chat/ …
handle deal with/ manage/ work through/ …
finally at last/ in the end/ eventually/…
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How to better it
From this experience, I know that when we disagree with our parents, we should understand each other and have a talk.
From this experience, I understand that when we have disagreements with our parents, we should understand each other and communicate openly. Only in this way can we solve the trouble and grow together.
Which is better Why
VS
Before decorating
After decorating
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After reading Auggie’s story, I’m really touched. I realize that trouble is a friend. It means that torubles are a great chance for learning and growth.
I had trouble these days because my mother asked me to attend Chinese Learning Centre. So a talk with my mom is needed. When I gave her my straight-A school report, she is happy.
I told her that doing extra homework is unnecessary. Instead, I needed some time to relax. However my mom said that she loved me and she hoped that I could have a better future. I understood her worries about my future. Therefore, I promised that I could handle my school work. Finally my mom agreed to give me some free time.
From this experience, I understand that when we have disagreements with our parents, we should understand each other and communicate openly. Only in this way can we solve the trouble and grow together.
Writing Tips:
Read and check your sigular and plural nouns, spelling, tense and punctuation.
trouble
was
,
is
ABCDE-writing method
Step 1
Analyze(审题)
Step 2
Brain storm
Step 4
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Step 3
Connect
Step 5
Erase(排除错误)
Step 6 Handwriting
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If we want to get a better writing, we will make it like bone and jade processing.
有匪佳文，如切如磋，如琢如磨。
Summary
1. Finish the next two parts of your own writing.
2. Make your passage better.
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