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reject the propaganda of cyber-violenc
unit 3
bx2 unit 3 reading for writing
Write a blog post
how to avoid bad experience on the Internet
How do you feel when you are online
When seeing someone share the same/similar ideas with yours
When seeing someone hold different ideas from yours
When seeing someone posting something rude/ impolite/ offensive
Are you always feeling happy
1. What is it How do you
know
2. How many parts dose
it have
The blog part
The comment part
A blog post
Two parts
from a website
What is a blog post
A blog post is an entry (article) that you write on a blog. It can include content in the form of text, photos, infographics (信息图), or videos.
navigation bar导航条
title
content of the blog
comment area
What are shown on this page What’s the pattern for a blog post
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Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times — how do ou stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
What’s the topic of this blog post
What can be the title of this blog post
What’s the function of this paragraph
Online Safety/How to Stay Safe Online
Introduction
topic
background information
qualification -convincing
First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. Don’t post comments or click on anything. Second, protect your privacy. Don’t give out your address or phone number. Someone might use the information to steal your identity. Identity theft is a common and serious problem. Third, be polite. Being online is no excuse for being rude, and you don’t want to become a target for a troll or cyberbully. A troll is a person who posts comments or questions in order to stir up trouble online. Trolls often use several false names so that they can stay on a site. A cyberbully uses the Internet to be mean to others. Like a troll, a cyberbully will also write something mean but it is usually directed at particular people. He or she may also post embarrassing photos and information about those people. However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked.
How many guidelines are provided by the author
According to the author, who are the troublemakers on the Internet
What are the guidelines that the author provide
situation dos don'ts
read something uncomfortable
leave the site immediately
post comments or click
protect your privacy
give out the address or phone number
be polite
Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe Post your comments below!
Why do Amy and Boy579 give their comments
They are asked to do so
The pattern of a blog post
Title
Tell the focus.
Beginning
Body
Ending
Introduce the topic.
Background information.
Tell the readers what they should do or keep in mind
Ask for comments.
Tell the main idea.
Introduce the topic.
Background information.
Tell the readers what they should do or keep in mind
Ask for comments.
The purpose of a blog post
-- To tell people what should be done in order to be safe online.
The blog post should be:
-- clear
-- easy-understanding
-- convincing
How to achieve
Be clear
-- Use linking words
first of all, to begin with, firstly, first, in the first place, on top of the list, for a start ...
besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, what's more, furthermore, plus, second, secondly ...
lastly, finally, in the end, consequently, last but not least ...
Be easy-understanding
use simple words
tips:
language:
new terms:
tell the dos and don’ts directly
give definition/
explanation
--How
Someone might use the information to steal your identity. Identity theft is a common and serious problem.
A troll is a person who posts comments or questions in order to stir up trouble online.
A cyberbully uses the Internet to be mean to others. Like a troll, a cyberbully will also write something mean but it is usually directed at particular people.
use simple words to explain what the identity theft would do
Use simpler words and an explanation sentence to define “troll”.
Define it by comparing it with “troll”.
Be convincing
Tell what you know about the topic
Explain why/ tell readers the consequence of not doing so
Use imperative sentences (祈使句) to make your point strong and powerful
Useful sentence structure
Introduction:
Lead in to the topic:
Nowadays, ... has become a serious problem.
Recently, the problem of... has aroused people's concern.
It is said that...
A recent survey has found that...
Why to post this blog/ Harmful effect of the issue:
It has greatly influenced...
...which/that did a lot harm to...
Our lives have been badly influenced. For example,...
Qualification of sharing opinions/tips:
Though I’m not an expert, but many years as a ... have taught me a thing or two.
Useful sentence structure
Body:
Providing guideline:
There are some suggestions for...
I would like to suggest/recommend that...
If I were you, I would do...
You should/ can /could do...
You’d better do…
You are supposed to do ...
The best way to do ... is to do ...
Why not… /Why don’t you do...
How/What about doing…
Don’t forget:
Using linking words
Telling why to do so/ why not
Explaining the new terms
Using imperative sentences
Useful sentence structure
Wishes/ ask for some feedback:
I hope you will find these suggestions /recommendations helpful /practical /useful.
I trust you will take my suggestion into account.
I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
Do you have some good advice to share with us Your comments are highly welcome.
Have you had any similar experience Post your comments below to share with us!
Ending:
Since we can’t live without the Internet, we should know about how to use it safely. Use what you have learnt to write a blog post about online safety. Share with us:
how to avoid being cheated when shopping online
how to avoid bad experience when chatting with others
how to avoid getting into trouble when playing video games
how to avoid getting into trouble when following celebrities
... ...
This may help
Organize your draft and arrange your ideas with the help of this table
Use the checklist to revise your draft
Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic
Are the tips and suggestions well organised
Has the writer defined the new words
Does the author include examples, comparisons, or explanations
Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions
Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes
reject the propaganda of cyber-violenc
say no to cyber-bullying
THANK YOU
BX2 Unit 3 Reading for writing
how to avoid bad experience on the Internet

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