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(共18张PPT)
Unit1 Teenage life
Reading For Writing
——A letter of advice
PART ONE
Analyzing the Reading Text
Step Ⅰ Lead in
Brainstorm
The problem:
A student of mine plays computer games too often . I am worried about him so much. Can you give me some useful advice
Step 2 Reading to discover writing details
Susan Luo, an advisor for teenagers, has received a letter asking for some advice.
Task 1 Look at her reply and learn about the structure of her letter.
10th September 2018
Dear worried friends,
All the best,
Susan Luo
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
Task 2 Reading for contents and structure
Fill in the blanks according to the outline below,and match the following points.
1.You are very ___ ___ about your friend,who plays computer games too often.
2.It’s not unusual for ___ ____ of your generation to be attracted to computer games.
3.You should __ to your friends.
You should ___ _____ your friend to try new hobbies.
4.I’m ____ he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
worried
teenagers
talk
encourage
sure
structure
advice
problem
view
wish
contents
How to orgnize a letter of advice
Put forward ____________
the problem
Body
Beginning
(1) Show the ______________
(2) Put forward specific________
(3) Explain the ______ or _______
understanding
advice
reasons
benefits
Ending
Express our ___________
wish
content
Describing the person in trouble
Showing the writer’s understanding
Giving advice
words and sentences
worried, anxious, upset, confused, disappointed, helpless…
I understand quite well that…
I’m sorry to hear that…
I know you have trouble in…
I know how it feels to…
I recommend/suggest that …
You'd better...
I think it would be more helpful if you could...
You’re supposed to do…
Task 3 Reading for language
PART TWO
Writing
——a letter of advice
Write a reply to David according to the material.
Step 1 Group work
Hi！ My name is David and I’m a freshman at senior high school.
These days I found it hard for me to catch up with teachers, and too much homework made me so anxious. I had trouble sleeping at night.
I feel bad and don’t know what to do. Can you give me some advice
Problems
Advice
Model
Dear______，
You wrote that you had a difficult time in school these days.I understand that____________________.
I think_________________________________
Because____________________________________.
I am sure_______________________________.
Best Wishes, (close and sign the letter).
________
Tell the reader you understand he/she feels. Tell the reader what you think he/she should do. Explain your reasons. Tell the reader what you think will happen.
学
科
Step 2 Write a letter of advice
1．段首常用语(照应材料，表明写作意图)：
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble in… I am eagerly writing
to provide you with some useful advice.
Knowing that you have difficulty in... , I am writing to offer you some practical advice on…
建议信常用句式
2．表达建议常用语：
I recommend/suggest that you should...
I think it would be more helpful if you could...
If I were you, I would …
You'd better.../It's better to...
3．段尾常用语：
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
I am convinced that you can get over these difficulties with your effort .
I'd appreciate it if you could take my tips into account...
step 3 Check-list
Items Criteria
Content 1. Put forward the problem.
2.Show understanding for the people you’re writing for.
3. Use proper expressions to give suggestions.
Organization All the parts of letter are included and organize in a good order.
Language 1.Correct grammar and spelling.
2.Handwriting is easy to read.
Notes: A: B: C：
The characteristics of a good letter of advice :
organize all the parts in a good order
内容齐全，逻辑通畅
give advice with good reasons
建议实用，有理有据
use expressions we have learnt
活学活用，表达生动
correct grammar, beautiful handwriting
语法准确，书写优美
Possible version
8 October 2019
Dear David.
I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in your school life. I can fully understand your feeling . I have some advice that might help you.
First of all, try to make full use of your time and do your homework quickly and effciently. Secondly,it’s a good idea to listen to teacher carefully, ask teachers when you are in trouble.Or you may ask your teachers to give you less homework if possible. What’s more, you'd better do some sports which will help you feel relaxed.Last but not least, why not ask other classmates for good learning methods which suit for you Don't be too stressed and try to be confident.
I hope you can get over your problems soon.
Yours
Lucy
Step 4 Summary
·Date
·Greeting
·Body
·Close
·Signature
·Put forward the problem
·Show your understanding
·Give your suggestions and reasons
·Encourage and wish
·I recommend/suggest that you should...
·I think it would be more helpful if you could...
·If I were you, I would…
·You'd better...
Homework
1. Please polish the writing with more useful words, expressions and sentences.
2. Use the check-list to complete self-evaluation and peer evaluation on your writing.
3. Review the words, expressions and sentences we have learned in this class.
Thank you for listening !
That's all for today ！

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