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板块三 写作
专题五 应用文写作
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02便捷操作
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第二讲 学会润色升级
第二节 学会运用高级句式
高分作文的重要特征之一就是句式多变，华丽出彩。 因此，考生在写作时要善于合理升级句式，熟练掌握润色句子的技能，交叉使用不同句型，增加句子的层次感。考生可以通过以下五大技巧升级句式，写出高分句子。
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技巧1　运用三大从句，结构斐然出彩
[微解]　which引导非限制性定语从句常代指整个主句，意为“这一点”；who常作主语，代指人。whose作定语，修饰名词。
[例句]　(2025·全国一卷)Moreover，it can encourage more students to participate in school activities and share their experiences，which will make our newspaper more colorful and appealing.
此外，这能鼓励更多学生参与校园活动并分享经历，让我们的报纸内容更丰富、更具吸引力。
[微解]　在该句式中，that引导同位语从句。
[例句]　(2025·全国二卷)As we are preparing a special sports themed issue，there is no doubt that your professional insights will be a highlight.
由于我们正在筹备一份以体育运动为主题的特刊，您的专业见解无疑会成为亮点之一。
②That/This/It is why/because...这就是为什么/因为……
[例句]　(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)The reason why I have different ideas is that randomly pairing up students may lead to an imbalanced problem.
我有不同想法的原因是，随机分组学生可能会出现不平衡问题。
[微解]　该句式表示同一个主语发出两个不同的动作，主要动作是句子谓语，次要动作用非谓语动词。
[例句]　(2025·全国一卷)Such an inviting column, adopting a“description and guess”approach，must expose everyone to others' characteristics，thus strengthening mutual understanding.
这样一个极具吸引力的专栏，采用“描述与猜测”的方式，必定能让每个人了解到他人的一些特点，从而增进彼此的了解。
技巧2　活用非谓语动词，表达言简意赅
[例句]　(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)It is widely accepted by us students that this class offered us the access to learning art from real life rather than textbooks.
我们学生普遍接受的是，这堂课为我们提供了从现实生活而不是教科书中学习艺术的途径。
技巧3　运用it句式，句式灵活亮眼
类型1　倒装句
技巧4　运用特殊句式，表达更加有力
[例句]　(2025·浙江1月卷)Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order，but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self esteem when the videos don't get the expected response.
它不仅会让我们分心，无法专心学习，甚至还会扰乱学校的秩序，而且如果视频没有得到预期的反响，还可能会引发不必要的攀比，从而影响我们的自尊心。
[微解]　Only后的状语从句中，主谓不倒装。
[例句]　(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)Only in this innovative form of art education was I provided with an opportunity to appreciate the beauty of art.
只有在这种创新的艺术教育形式中，我才得到一次去欣赏艺术的美的机会。
[例句]　(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)True as it is that randomly pairing up students can contribute to more interaction to some extent，there may also be some potential problems that cannot be ignored.
诚然，随机分组的学生可以在一定程度上促进更多的互动，也可能存在一些不可忽视的潜在问题。
[例句]　(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)So excited and privileged am I to hear the news that you will hold an oral English course for our students.
听到你将为我们的学生开办一门英语口语课程的消息，我感到非常兴奋和荣幸。
类型2　强调句
[例句]　It wasn't until that moment that I realized I was so desperate for the prize to prove myself.
直到那一刻，我才意识到我非常渴望这个奖项来证明自己。
技巧5　运用with复合结构或独立主格结构，表达简洁好用
[微解]　非谓语动词形式有三种：doing (主动或进行)，done (被动或完成)，to do (将来的动作)。
[例句]　(2025·全国二卷)With the submission deadline (June 15th) approaching，we would love a quick update on your progress.
随着提交截止日期(6月15日)的临近，我们希望能尽快收到您进度的最新情况汇报。
[微解]　该句式中，主句谓语动作和非谓语动作是由两个不同的主语发出的。
[例句]　①(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)The sunlight reflecting off the water and flowers blooming near the lake，the extraordinary scenery gave me inspiration for my painting.
阳光反射在水面上，湖边鲜花盛开，这样美的景象给了我画画的灵感。
②All the factors taken into consideration，we are supposed to be cautious about making friends online.
综合考虑所有因素后，我们应该谨慎对待网上交友。
用高级句式升级下面学生习作
(2024·全国甲卷改编)英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
学生习作
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport，Chinese transport has an enormous development.Today，I'd like to discuss the remarkable advancements in transportation technology in China.Three key developments stand out.They are shared bicycles, high speed rail, and new energy vehicles.
Firstly，shared bicycles revolutionize urban mobility，and it encourages green and healthy travel.Secondly，our high speed rail network has transformed intercity travel，and it connects distant regions with unprecedented speed. Lastly，new energy vehicles represent a significant step towards reducing carbon emissions and promoting environmental sustainability.
In conclusion，these innovations not only enhance our daily life but also contribute to a greener and more efficient future. Let's celebrate these achievements and embrace the exciting possibilities ahead.
Thank you for your listening.
升级作文
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport，Chinese transport has an enormous development.Today，I'd like to discuss the remarkable advancements in transportation technology in China.Three key developments stand out，1._______________________________________________________________ (非限制性定语从句).
Firstly，shared bicycles revolutionize urban mobility，2.__________________________________ (动词 ing形式短语作状语).Secondly，our high speed rail network has transformed intercity travel，3.___________________________________________ (动词 ing形式短语作状语).Lastly，new energy vehicles represent a significant step towards reducing carbon emissions and promoting environmental sustainability.
In conclusion，4._________________________________________________________________ _____________________________(倒装句).Let's celebrate these achievements and embrace the exciting possibilities ahead.
Thank you for your listening.
which are shared bicycles，high speed rail，and new energy vehicles
encouraging green and healthy travel
connecting distant regions with unprecedented speed
not only do these innovations enhance our daily life but they also contribute to
a greener and more efficient future
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板块三 写作
专题五 应用文写作
第三讲 文体分类突破
01使用软件
本课件使用Office2016制作，请使用相应软件打开并使用。
课件
使用说明
02便捷操作
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03公式说明
本课件理科公式均采用微软公式制作，如果您是Office2007或WPS 2021年4月份以前的版本，会出现包含公式及数字无法编辑的情况，请您升级软件享受更优质体验。
04解决办法
由于WPS软件原因，少量电脑可能存在理科公式无动画的问题，请您安装Office 2016或以上版本即可解决该问题。
导航
文体一　咨询信/告知信/建议信
文体二　邀请信/求助信/感谢信
文体三　申请信/推荐信/发言稿
文体四　倡议书/通知/宣传稿
文体五　新闻报道/征文投稿/人物介
专题强化练(二十五)　应用文写作
专题强化练(二十六)　应用文写作
文体一　咨询信/
告知信/建议信
【文体特点】
咨询信，又称询问信，是针对某项活动或相关情况，希望了解详细信息的信件，表明写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣。咨询信问句较多，写作时要避免句式单调，语气要委婉礼貌，要充分表达获取信息的急切心情以及相应的感激之情。咨询的问题应简洁、清晰、明确，避免歧义和误解，确保所提问题与题目要求的主题相关。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——提出询问事由
◎开篇表意之初级表达
①I am writing to inquire about the details of the English contest.
我写信是想了解这次英语竞赛的细节。
◎开篇表意之高级表达
②I'm more than delighted to take part in the poetry recitation competition to be held in our school.So I'm writing to consult you about something relevant to it.
我非常高兴能够参加即将在我们学校举行的诗歌朗诵比赛。所以我写信是想咨询您与之相关的一些事情。
③Glad to learn that you will taste the Lantern Festival in our city，please give me some detailed information about your schedule，so I can reserve a hotel for you in advance.
很高兴得知你将在我市过元宵节，请给我一些详细的行程信息，以便我提前为你预订酒店。
2.引人入胜篇中句——阐述咨询事由
◎阐述咨询事由之初级表达
①First，when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week
首先，课程什么时候开始，每周有多少课时？
◎阐述咨询事由之高级表达
②As for the money you charge，I'm wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed.
关于您收取的费用，我想知道它是否包含了参观所列地点的入场费？
③Only if I figure out all of the questions can I make reservations for you.
只有我把所有的问题都弄清楚了，我才能为你预订房间。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——期盼回复
◎期盼回复之初级表达
①I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
如果您能在方便的时候尽早回复，我将不胜感激。
◎期盼回复之高级表达
②If there is anything else that needs special attention，please inform me at your convenience.Looking forward to your early reply.
如果还有其他需要特别注意的事情，请在方便的时候通知我。希望早日得到你的答复。
【典例示范】
(2025·全国二卷)假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章，请给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.询问进度；
2.提醒交稿时间。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①expertise and insights 专业知识和深刻见解
②informative and engaging 信息丰富且引人入胜的
③update n.最新进展
④don't hesitate to do sth 尽管做某事
⑤submission deadline交稿截止日期
⑥feature vt.以……为专题，特载
⑦reach out 与……联系以获得帮助
提分句型：
(1)make＋宾语＋宾语补足语
(2)if引导的条件状语从句
(3)if引导的宾语从句
(2025·广东广州二模)假定你是李华。毕业在即，你班计划向母校赠送一份礼物。请你给英国朋友 David 写一封邮件，分享你们的设想，并咨询他的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear David，
I'm writing to share a plan with you. As graduation approaches，our class intends to give a meaningful gift to our school，and I'd like to get your opinions.
After heated discussions，we've come up with two ideas.One option is to donate a collection of classic literature，aiming to enrich the school library and inspire the younger students' love for reading.Another proposal is to plant a memorial tree on campus，symbolizing our eternal bond with the school.This tree would grow alongside future generations of students，bearing witness to their growth.
I'm eager to hear your thoughts.Which idea do you think is more appealing Or do you have any other creative suggestions Your advice would be invaluable to us.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【文体特点】
1.告知信是指告诉某人某事或回复某人关于某事的询问的信件。
2.常考的话题有告知上课计划、活动安排、比赛信息、讲座信息、招聘信息、报名事宜等。
3.时态为一般现在时或一般将来时。文章通常以第一、第二人称为主。
4.告知信中的活动介绍是写作重点，需要针对活动的时间、地点、目的、过程、影响、感受及意义等多角度展开。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——说明写信目的
◎开篇表意之初级表达
①I'm writing to inform you of some relevant arrangements about the visit this Sunday.
我写信是想告知你关于本周日参观活动的一些相关安排。
◎开篇表意之高级表达
②Knowing you have a great interest in Chinese culture，I am delighted to share with you some information about the Peking Opera Week.
我知道你对中国文化很感兴趣，我很高兴与你分享一些关于京剧周的信息。
③I feel greatly honored to be asked to contact you，informing you of our arrangements.
我很荣幸受委托与您联系，告知您我们的安排。
2.引人入胜篇中句——阐述具体事宜
◎阐述具体事宜之初级表达
①The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of June 8th.
比赛将于6月8日下午在我校体育馆举行。
◎阐述具体事宜之高级表达
②If you feel an interest in it，please sign up at the Students' Union office before 4：00 p.m.next Wednesday so that we will make necessary arrangements.
如果你感兴趣，请于下周三下午4点前到学生会办公室报名，以便我们做必要的安排。
③Aimed at making the most of unused books as well as motivating students' enthusiasm for reading，the activity encourages all students to participate.
该活动旨在充分利用闲置书籍，激发学生的阅读热情，希望所有学生参与。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——表达期望
◎表达期望之初级表达
①I sincerely hope the above information is beneficial to you.
我真诚地希望以上信息会对你有益。
◎表达期望之高级表达
②If you want to know more information，please don't hesitate to contact me.
如果你想了解更多信息，请尽管和我联系。
【典例示范】
假定你是李华，你校即将举办运动会，你的英国朋友Mike很感兴趣，来信询问你的参赛情况，请写一封邮件告知相关信息，内容包括：
1.参加项目；
2.训练安排。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①in response to作为……的回应
②inquiry n.询问
③concerning prep. 关于，涉及
提分句型：
(1)when引导的时间状语从句的省略
(2)强调谓语动词：do/does/did＋谓语动词
(3)省略if的虚拟条件句
假定你是李华，你热衷戏曲的留学生朋友Peter得知你所在的戏曲社团计划招收新成员，向你询问相关信息，请你给他写一封邮件，分享相关安排，内容包括：
1.活动安排；
2.鼓励参加。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Peter，
Knowing you are keen on Chinese opera and music and would like to join our club，I'm writing to share with you some arrangements concerning the matter.
The recruitment is scheduled for next Tuesday afternoon from 2 p.m.to 5 p.m.in the school lecture hall.In terms of preparation，you need to record a video to show you have a basic understanding of Chinese opera.What's more，the interviewer will ask you to perform for a short time to see whether your voice is acceptable.
I sincerely hope you can be admitted to the club! I promise you will have a deeper understanding of traditional Chinese culture and have a great time in it.
Yours，
Li Hua
【文体特点】
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——说明事由及写信目的
◎开篇表意之初级表达
①I'm delighted to hear you will hold an activity on the “Chinese Language Day”.Here are some tips to make it amazing and educational.
我听说你们将在“汉语日”举办活动，我非常高兴。这里是一些让活动既精彩又有教育意义的建议。
◎开篇表意之高级表达
②Knowing that you'll participate in the “Studying in China”Speech Contest，I'm delighted to give you some suggestions.
得知你将参加“留学中国”演讲比赛，我很高兴给你一些建议。
2.引人入胜篇中句——陈述具体建议及理由
◎建议及理由之初级表达
①First of all，by reading Chinese poems or essays，you can improve your knowledge of Chinese culture.
首先，通过阅读中国诗歌或散文，你可以增进对中国文化的了解。
◎建议及理由之高级表达
②What's more，you may as well participate in a summer camp，which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
另外，你不妨参加夏令营，这不仅会开拓你的视野，而且有助于你培养团队精神。
③Last but not least，having a face to face talk with your parents peacefully and listening patiently is a better choice.
最后但同等重要的是，心平气和地与父母面对面交谈并耐心地倾听是一个更好的选择。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——表达愿望
◎表达愿望之初级表达
①I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
我希望你会觉得这些建议有用。
◎表达愿望之高级表达
②I do hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.
我真心希望我的建议对你有所帮助。
③I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。
【典例示范】
(2023·新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.说明问题；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[佳作展示]
Dear Ryan，
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I am writing to express my thoughts on your plan to ① pair up students for oral practice.
Personally，(1)though fair，random pairing may not necessarily serve its intended purposes.In particular，(2)if neither speaks fluently，they might lack the motivation to participate，(3)failing to reach the desired goal.②，I propose an alternative approach：grouping students with varying levels of ③.(4)Pairing more fluent speakers with those (5)who are less fluent could create a better learning environment.④，(6)if practicable，allowing students to choose their own partners would be even better as it can enhance their shared learning experience more efficiently.
I would greatly appreciate your understanding and consideration of my suggestions.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①randomly adv.随机地
②hence adv.因此
③fluency n.流利
④alternatively adv.要不然，或者
提分句型：
(1)though引导的让步状语从句的省略
(2)if引导的条件状语从句
(3)动词 ing形式短语作结果状语
(4)动词 ing形式短语作主语
(5)who引导定语从句
(6)if引导的状语从句的省略
(2025·山东枣庄二模)假定你是李华。在英语课上，外教Mr Smith经常采用“同伴合作”方式改作文。请你给他写一封邮件，建议使用人工智能 (AI) 工具，如DeepSeek批改，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
文体二　邀请信/
求助信/感谢信
【文体特点】
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动时所写的书信。其特点是简短、热情，给人以真诚、亲切的感觉。邀请信写作需要运用与身份相符的语气和得体的语言措辞，拓展具体信息，叙述要清晰明确。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——发出邀请
◎发出邀请之初级表达
①I'm writing to invite you to take part in “Talk and Talk”，an English program on our school's radio station.
我写信想邀请您参加我们学校广播站的《访谈》英语节目。
◎发出邀请之高级表达
②I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union.I am writing to invite you to participate in the upcoming painting contest in our school.
我是学生会主席李华。我写信是想邀请你参加我们学校即将举行的绘画比赛。
2.引人入胜篇中句——邀请的具体原因和内容
◎邀请原因和内容之初级表达
①The activity is to promote the traditional Chinese culture as well as our ability to appreciate art.
这个活动是为了弘扬中国传统文化以及提升我们欣赏艺术的能力。
◎邀请原因和内容之高级表达
②The contest，with the theme of“Life on Campus”，is aimed at enriching us students' after class activities and arousing our affection for our school.
本次比赛以“校园生活”为主题，旨在丰富我们学生的课外活动，唤起我们对学校的热爱。
③You are always interested in painting，so I consider it a good opportunity for you to show your talent.
你一直都对绘画感兴趣，所以我认为这是一次你展示才华的好机会。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——期待接受邀请，并表示感谢
◎表达期待之初级表达
①I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
如果你能接受我们的邀请，我将不胜感激。
◎表达期待之高级表达
②I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration at your early convenience.
如果你能在你方便时尽早考虑我的邀请，我将不胜感激。
【典例示范】
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1.节目介绍；
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①in charge of负责
②on behalf of代表
③sincerely adv.真诚地
④be committed to致力于
⑤enhance vt.增强，提高，改善
⑥available adj.有空的，有闲暇的
⑦anticipate vt.期望，盼望
提分句式：
(1)同位语＋who引导的定语从句
(2)动词 ing形式短语作状语
(3)which引导非限制性定语从句
(4)so that引导目的状语从句
(2025·湖南张家界二模)假定你是李华，你所在的学校将于下月举办“中国文化节”活动。请根据以下提示，写一封信邀请你校英国留学生Jacob届时参加。内容包括：
1.活动的目的；
2.活动的内容；
3.期待参加。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Jacob，
I'm writing to invite you to participate in the Chinese Cultural Festival scheduled to start next month in our school.
The festival，intended to promote cultural communication and enhance mutual understanding，will include a wide variety of activities where participants can experience traditional Chinese culture first hand，such as paper cutting，kung fu and Chinese calligraphy.In addition，participants will be welcome to watch a live performance of Peking Opera and taste authentic Chinese cuisine during the event.I believe this festival will surely enable you to gain a better insight into traditional Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your participation!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【文体特点】
求助信是写信人针对自己遇到的困难向收信人寻求帮助的信件。求助信要用正式的语言提出礼貌的请求，简明扼要地说明自己写这封电子邮件/信件的原因，清楚地提出必要的问题，充分体现写信人诚挚的态度。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——表明求助意图
◎开篇表意之初级表达
①During the summer holiday，I'd like to get a part time job.Would you please do me a favour
在暑假期间，我想找一份兼职工作。您能帮我一个忙吗？
◎开篇表意之高级表达
②An English Poetry Reading Contest will be held next weekend in our school.I am eager to have a try，so I'm writing to turn to you for help.
下周末我们学校将举行一场英语诗歌朗诵比赛。我渴望尝试一下，所以我写信向您寻求帮助。
2.引人入胜篇中句——陈述求助事由
◎陈述求助原因之初级表达
①I have some difficulty in learning English grammar.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在学英语语法方面有困难。所以我别无选择，只能向您求助。
◎陈述求助原因之高级表达
②I find it challenging to be qualified for the job.I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.
我觉得胜任这份工作很有挑战性。 由于词汇量有限，我也很难准确地表达我的想法。
③Hardly do I have any experience in coping with the situation due to the fact that I am a green hand.
由于我是一个新手，我在处理这样的情况方面几乎没有什么经验。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——表达希望并表示感谢
◎表达希望与感谢之初级表达
①I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信我会从你宝贵而及时的建议中受益良多。
◎表达希望与感谢之高级表达
②I'd appreciate it very much if you could give me a hand.Looking forward to your early reply.
如果您能帮我一个忙，我将不胜感激。期待您的早日回复。
③I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour and spare some time to polish my application letter and resume.
如果您能帮我一个忙，抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历，我将不胜感激。
【典例示范】
假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教 Miss Evans写一封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：
1.剧情简介；
2.指导内容；
3.商定时间和地点。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①assistance n.帮助
②embark on 开始，着手
③guidance n.指导
④at one's convenience在某人方便时
⑤eagerly adv.渴望地
提分句式：
(1)限制性定语从句
(2)过去分词短语作后置定语
(3)who引导的定语从句
因全球气候变化，北极地区冰层融化加剧，导致北极熊的生存环境受到了很大的影响。近几年北极温度持续上升，北极熊数量岌岌可危，请你以北极熊的身份向世界动物保护协会写一封求助信。内容包括：
1.表明求助意图；
2.阐述求助事由；
3.表达感谢。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
【文体特点】
感谢信是向帮助、关心或支持过自己的集体或个人表达感谢的信件。撰写时需明确致谢理由，情感真挚、措辞得体，语言应精炼简洁，做到详略适宜、层次清晰。用词应自然恰当，避免过度修饰或浮夸。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——说明写信的目的
◎开篇表意之初级表达
①I would like to take this opportunity to express my thanks for your timely help/assistance.
我想借此机会对您的及时帮助表示感谢。
◎开篇表意之高级表达
②I would like to convey in this letter my heart felt/sincere/earnest thanks/gratitude to you for your helping me improve my spoken English.
在这封信中，我要对你帮助我提升英语口语表示衷心的感谢。
2.引人入胜篇中句——描述感谢缘由
◎感谢缘由之初级表达
①During my stay in China，I had great difficulty in understanding Chinese，but you helped me a lot.
在中国工作期间，我在理解中文方面有很大的困难，但您帮助了我很多。
◎感谢缘由之高级表达
②It goes without saying that I have made great progress in English with your help.
不言而喻，在您的帮助下，我在英语方面取得了很大的进步。
③There is no doubt that it was your support and encouragement that cheered me up when I was confronted with difficulties in English learning.
毫无疑问，当我在英语学习中遇到困难时，是您的支持和鼓励让我振作起来。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——再次表达感谢
◎再次表达感谢之初级表达
①No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
任何言语都不足以表达我的感激之情。
◎再次表达感谢之高级表达
②Thanks to your generous help，without which I wouldn't have made such great progress.
多亏了您的慷慨帮助，没有您的帮助，我不会取得这么大的进步。
③Without your help/assistance，my English couldn't have got better in such a short time.Thanks again for your kind help.
没有您的帮助，我的英语不可能在这么短的时间内进步这么快。再次感谢您的友好帮助。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①gratitude n.感激
②passion n.激情
③extraordinary adj.卓越的，非凡的
④unwavering perseverance坚定不移的毅力
⑤dedication to对……的奉献
提分句式：
(1)as引导原因状语从句
(2)as引导时间状语从句
(3)that引导定语从句
(4)not only...but also...
(5)动词 ing形式短语作状语
(2025·广东惠州联考)假定你是李华，国庆节在北京游玩时结识了当地的青年李雷，在游览故宫的过程中他为你提供了很多帮助。为此，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1.感谢他的帮助；
2.你的收获与祝福。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Li Lei，
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help when I was visiting the Palace Museum.If it had not been for your assistance，I wouldn't have had such a wonderful time.
Thanks to your guidance and clear explanation，I went through an amazing tour.It was my first time to experience the ancient royal life in person and appreciate the artistic paintings and architecture.Also，I am grateful for your patience when I kept asking you questions.
Wish you happy every day! Next time you come to my city，let me be your guide!
Yours，
Li Hua
文体三　申请信/
推荐信/发言稿
【文体特点】
申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。一般常考的内容有申请成为志愿者、申请某个职位、加入俱乐部或参加夏令营、留学项目等。申请信属于正式文体，要求语言规范、简洁准确，并始终保持礼貌得体的语气。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——说明写信的背景及目的
◎开篇表意之初级表达
①My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Olympics.
我叫李华。我想成为奥运会的志愿者。
◎开篇表意之高级表达
②I'm Li Hua，a Senior 3 student.I have learned that volunteers for the foreigners from Britain are needed，so I am writing to apply for this position.
我是李华，一名高三的学生。我了解到来自英国的外国人需要志愿者，因此我写信想申请这个职位。
③Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column“Traditional Chinese Culture”，I'm writing to apply for the position.
得知学校的英文报正在招聘“中国传统文化”栏目的编辑，我写信申请这个职位。
2.引人入胜篇中句——介绍个人优势
◎个人优势之初级表达
①I believe that I am fit for the job.To begin with，I have a good command of English，especially written English.
我相信我能胜任这份工作。首先，我的英语很好，尤其是书面英语。
◎个人优势之高级表达
②Besides，I have taken the part time job as an English editor，from which I have gained relevant experience.
此外，我还做过一份英语编辑的兼职工作，从中我获得了相关经验。
③Last but not least，I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
最后但同样重要的是，我对中国传统文化有着丰富的了解。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——表达期盼
◎表达期盼之初级表达
①I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.
如果您能给我这个机会，我将不胜感激。
◎表达期盼之高级表达
②I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply.
如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。期待着您的早日回复。
【典例示范】
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①in the first place首先
②have a good knowledge of对……有很好的了解
③cope with应对，处理
提分句式：
(1)who引导非限制性定语从句
(2)动词 ing形式短语作状语
(3)动词 ing形式短语作状语
(4)形容词短语作状语
(5)同位语从句
(6)which引导的非限制性定语从句
(7)强调句型
(2025·辽宁锦州一模)假定你是李华，你校英语协会正在筹备中外学生篮球联谊赛，现需要一名精通中英双语且具有一定篮球知识的裁判。请你给负责人写一封邮件申请做裁判，内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.个人优势；
3.表达愿望。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Sir or Madam，
Hearing that you are looking for a bilingual referee of this basketball friendship match，I am writing to apply for the position.I think I am qualified for this position for the following reasons.
Firstly，I have been a volunteer in our school sports meetings and am very familiar with volunteer work.Besides，I am proficient in English and Chinese and have mastered a lot of English expressions about basketball.Lastly，I can solve the conflicts between the two sides well.I will ensure that the match is fair.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【文体特点】
推荐信主要是向组织或机构推荐某人，或向朋友推荐某物，希望对方能接受推荐。推荐信的内容要肯定、乐观，并对被推荐人、事、物给予正面评价。同时，语言要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力且内容要真实可信。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——说明写信的目的
◎开篇表意之初级表达
①Hearing that you are in need of a student assistant，I happily recommend Li Mei to you.
得知您需要一位学生助理，我很乐意向您推荐李梅。
◎开篇表意之高级表达
②Knowing that you are interested in Chinese films，I'm writing to recommend a well known Chinese film titled Ne Zha 2.
知道你对中国电影感兴趣，我写信向你推荐一部著名的中国电影，名叫《哪吒之魔童闹海》。
2.引人入胜篇中句——陈述推荐理由
◎推荐理由之初级表达
①Firstly，Tom not only studies hard but also behaves well.
首先，汤姆不仅学习努力，而且表现良好。
②What's more，the Ocean Park is not far from our snack street，and you can enjoy delicious Chinese snacks there.
更重要的是，海洋公园离我们的小吃街不远，你可以在那里享受美味的中国小吃。
◎推荐理由之高级表达
③Besides，he stands out for his diverse hobbies，including painting and playing the violin.
此外，他以其多样化的爱好而引人注目，包括绘画和拉小提琴。
④Last but not least，he is warm hearted and willing to help others in need，for which I recommend him to you.
最后但同样重要的是，他很热心，愿意帮助有需要的人，因此我把他推荐给你。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——表达希望
◎希望采纳之初级表达
①I hope my recommendations will be of great help to you.Wish you a good time!
希望我的推荐能够对你有很大的帮助。祝你玩得开心！
◎希望采纳之高级表达
②I do hope you can take my recommendation into account/consideration and make a final decision.
我真的希望你能考虑我的推荐并作出最后的决定。
③Hope my recommendation will be of benefit to you and wish you to enjoy the film which won't let you down.
希望我的推荐能对你有所帮助，也希望你能喜欢这部不会让你失望的电影。
【典例示范】
中英双语系列短视频《美丽中国》(Amazing China)展现了中国的风景名胜、人文地理等，自推出以来广受国内外好评。假定你是李华，请你写一封邮件向你的英国摄影师朋友 Alex 推荐该系列短视频。内容包括：
1.阐明写信目的；
2.陈述推荐理由；
3.期待观后交流。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①diverse adj.不同的，各种各样的
②authentic adj.真实的，可靠的
③bet v.敢肯定
提分句式：
(1)since引导原因状语从句
(2)动词 ing形式短语作状语
(2025·河南新乡二模)假定你是李华，你校本期的交换生Paul打算进行“Citywalk (城市漫步)”。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐路线；
2.表达期望。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Paul，
I'm thrilled to hear that you'll take a city walk in China! Chongqing is a fantastic choice，and I can't wait to travel to the city with you.
I highly recommend starting at Jiefangbei，the bustling heart of downtown.Then we can head to Hongyadong，where you can see the unique architecture that resembles something out of a fantasy movie.Next，we can wander through Ciqikou，an ancient town filled with traditional teahouses and delicious local snacks.Finally，let's take a night cruise on the Yangtze River to enjoy the stunning city lights.
I hope this trip will give you a taste of Chongqing's vibrant culture.I believe you'll have an incredible time exploring every corner of this amazing city.Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【文体特点】
发言稿是参加者为了在会议上或重要活动上表达自己的意见、看法等而事先准备好的文稿。发言稿写作要观点鲜明、条理清楚、语言简洁明快。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——问候听众，引出演讲主题
◎问候与引出主题之初级表达
①Good morning，everyone! I feel honored to share my dream university，Beijing Normal University.
大家早上好！我很荣幸能分享我的梦想大学，北京师范大学。
◎问候与引出主题之高级表达
②Good morning，ladies and gentlemen! It's my great honor to share with you my career planning today!
女士们，先生们，大家早上好！很荣幸今天能和大家分享我的职业规划！
③The topic of my speech today is“Family Education Shapes Me”.Family education has always deeply influenced me，which has benefited me a lot.
我今天演讲的题目是“家庭教育塑造我”。家庭教育对我的影响一直很深，让我受益匪浅。
2.引人入胜篇中句——陈述演讲的具体内容
◎具体陈述之初级表达
①Meanwhile，engineering is one of the most popular careers in China.
与此同时，工程师是中国最受欢迎的职业之一。
◎具体陈述之高级表达
②As is known to all，good living habits are important to our physical and mental health.
众所周知，良好的生活习惯对我们的身心健康很重要。
③Since I have planned my career，I would spare no effort to study all the related courses well.
既然我已经规划好了我的职业生涯，我会不遗余力地学好所有的相关课程。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——提出希望或表达感谢
◎提出希望或表达感谢之初级表达
①That's all.Thank you for your listening.
我的演讲到此结束。感谢你们的倾听。
②I hope I have made myself understood.Thank you for your listening.
我希望我已经足够清楚地表达了我的意思。感谢你们的倾听。
◎提出希望或表达感谢之高级表达
③I'm sure I will make it! Thank you!
我相信我会成功的！谢谢！
④I sincerely hope what's mentioned above might be helpful to you.Thanks for your attention!
我真诚地希望以上所述对你们有所帮助。感谢你们的关注！
【典例示范】
(2025·浙江1月卷)你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.陈述看法；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①add spice to 为……增添趣味
②distract attention from sth 分散对某事物的注意力
③seek permission 寻求许可
④prioritize v.优先考虑
⑤make...a tool for...使……成为……的工具
提分句型：
(1)which 引导的非限制性定语从句
(2)not only 置于句首引起的部分倒装
(2025·安徽黄山二模)为践行曾子“吾日三省吾身”的思想，你校将举办以“传统文化与成长”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Self Reflection: A Path to Growth”为题写一篇演讲稿，分享你对自省的看法，内容包括：
1.你的理解；
2.自身经历。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Self Reflection: A Path to Growth
Good morning，dear teachers and fellow students! Today，I'd like to highlight the significance of self reflection，a time honored wisdom from Chinese culture.Zengzi's advice，“I daily examine myself”，emphasizes the importance of daily self reflection.
Self reflection has been a game changer in my learning.I still remember when struggling with math，instead of complaining about external factors，I carefully analyzed my problems and adjusted learning approaches.Eventually，I was rewarded with improved academic performance.Since then，my confidence has been significantly boosted.
I would like you all to make self reflection a daily habit，which can go a long way to our personal growth.
Thank you for your attention.
文体四　倡议书/通知/宣传稿
【文体特点】
倡议书是为倡议或发起某项活动而写的具有号召性的、公开提议性的专用文体。写作时，要做到主题突出，内容清楚。同时，注意倡议书的语言特征，可以使用具有鼓舞性和感召力的语言，以提高表达效果。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——发起倡议的背景和目的
◎背景和目的之初级表达
①With “The World Earth Day” approaching，I advocate everyone to care about the planet we live on.
随着“世界地球日”的临近，我提倡每个人都要关心我们所居住的地球。
◎背景和目的之高级表达
②On behalf of the Students' Union，I am writing to call on all students to participate in the “Read Classics，Learn English”activity，whose theme is to appreciate the charm of English classics and promote English learning.
我谨代表学生会，写信呼吁所有学生参加“读经典，学英语”活动，其主题是领略英语经典的魅力，促进英语学习。
2.引人入胜篇中句——倡议的具体内容及措施
◎具体内容及措施之初级表达
①We are supposed to go to bed early and get up early.
我们应该早睡早起。
◎具体内容及措施之高级表达
②To meet the challenges of the senior year，it's high time that we should take action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
为了迎接高中的挑战，现在是我们采取行动拒绝不健康生活方式的时候了。
③Not only should we choose public transport instead of private vehicles，but we also need to use energy efficient equipment.
我们不仅应该选择公共交通而不是私家车，而且还需要使用节能设备。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——表达决心和期待
◎决心和期待之初级表达
①Let's join our hands and take action immediately.
让我们携起手来，立即采取行动。
◎决心和期待之高级表达
②I am convinced that，with our joint efforts，the happening of wasting food will disappear.
我深信，在我们的共同努力下，浪费食物的现象将会消失。
③It's high time that we should take immediate action to “heal” the world.With our joint efforts，she is bound to regain her vigor!
现在是我们立即采取行动“治愈”世界的时候了。在我们的共同努力下，她一定会恢复活力的！
【典例示范】
(2022·全国甲卷改编)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.海洋的重要性；
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①when it comes to当谈到……的时候
②be aimed at旨在
③sufficient adj.足够的
④all in all总的来说
提分句式：
(1)动词 ing形式短语作定语
(2)部分倒装
(3)it作形式主语
(4)what引导的主语从句
(5)the＋比较级...，the＋比较级...
(6)It is high time that...
(2025·湖南湘潭三模)你的好朋友在澳大利亚开了一家咖啡馆，他准备倡导客人自带杯子，以践行4月22日地球日(Earth Day)的环保理念。请你为其咖啡馆写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1.发出倡议；
2.陈述理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Join Us in Protecting the Earth by
Bringing Your Own Cup
My dear valued customers! In celebration of Earth Day this April 22nd，we're launching an exciting new initiative—Bring Your Own Cup!
Did you know Australia generates over 1 billion disposable coffee cups annually These take 30 years to decompose while polluting our oceans and harming marine life.By using your own cup，you'll help reduce landfill waste，conserve natural resources，and minimize carbon emissions from cup production.It's a simple switch with tremendous impact!
Your small action today creates a greener tomorrow.Next time you visit，remember your reusable cup and be part of this meaningful change.
【文体特点】
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达事情及召集会议等情况时使用的一种应用文体。常考的话题有活动、展览、比赛、讲座等事项通知。通知分为书面通知(Notice)和口头通知(Announcement)。书面通知是正式的布告或公告，要求言简意赅、措辞得当、表达正式。口头通知所使用的语言具有明显的口语特征，通俗易懂。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——提出主题与目的
◎主题与目的之初级表达
①Attention，please.I have something important to announce.
请注意。我有重要的事情要宣布。
②A series of activities based on the theme of“Harmonious Campus”are going to be held.
一系列以“和谐校园”为主题的活动即将举行。
◎主题与目的之高级表达
③Ladies and gentlemen，may I have your attention，please I have an announcement to make.
女士们，先生们，请大家注意一下，好吗？我要宣布一件事。
④To raise people's awareness of saving food and help put the practice in place，an English writing competition with the theme of“Saving food in action”has been launched by the school English newspaper.
为了提高人们节约粮食的意识，并帮助将实践落实到位，学校英文报发起了一场以“节约粮食在行动”为主题的英语写作比赛。
2.引人入胜篇中句——阐述具体内容
◎具体内容之初级表达
①Starting at 10 a.m.，the meeting will be held next Monday in the meeting room of our English literature society.
会议将于下周一上午10点在我们英国文学社的会议室举行。
◎具体内容之高级表达
②As scheduled，the activity will start with the presentation made by our instructor Mr Wang，who will be the judge of the competition.
按照计划，本次活动将从我们的指导老师王老师的演讲开始，王老师将担任本次比赛的评委。
③If interested in the contest，you can send an email to potteryclub @ to register online or ask for detailed information.
如果你对比赛感兴趣，可以发送电子邮件到potteryclub@进行在线报名或询问详细信息。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——表示欢迎和期待
◎欢迎和期待之初级表达
①Everyone is welcome to take part in it.
欢迎所有人参加。
②Your participation will surely make a difference.
你的参与将意义非凡。
◎欢迎和期待之高级表达
③Looking forward to your active participation.There is no doubt that your kindness will be greatly appreciated.
期待你的积极参与。毫无疑问，我将非常感激你的好意。
④Let's join hands and take action together to build a society that values food conservation!
让我们携起手来，共同行动起来，建设一个重视粮食节约的社会！
【典例示范】
(2024·九省联考)你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：
1.介绍活动目的；
2.说明参赛要求。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①raise awareness 增强意识
②entry n.参赛作品
③consist of 由……组成
④focus on 集中(注意力、精力)于
⑤contribute to 促成，导致
⑥submit v.提交
提分句型：
(1)过去分词短语作后置定语
(2)how引导的宾语从句
(2025·福建宁德三模)假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，下周五你校将在校园农场(Campus Farm)开展劳动实践活动，请你用英语写一则通知，邀请全校师生参与这项活动，内容包括：
1.活动内容；
2.注意事项。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
【文体特点】
宣传稿的核心在于用简洁明了的语言，让目标受众快速了解某人、某活动或某件产品。为实现有效宣传，稿件必须清晰传达核心内容，充分凸显其优势与独特之处，并运用富有感染力的语言打动读者，激发其兴趣与参与欲。在高考常见的情境中，宣传稿多针对校园或社会实践活动，通常需包含以下几个要素：准确介绍活动的基本信息(如主题、时间、地点、对象)，着重阐述活动的亮点、价值与意义，并在结尾发出热情而有力的号召，鼓励读者积极加入。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——点明宣传主题及时间、地点
◎宣传主题及时间、地点之初级表达
①As far as I know，this exhibition will last for a month in the school art gallery.
据我所知，这次展览将在学校美术馆持续一个月。
②Yesterday my friends and I visited the students' Chinese painting exhibition held by our school.
昨天我和朋友们参观了我们学校举办的学生国画作品展。
◎宣传主题及时间、地点之高级表达
③To enrich students' school life and build up our body，a sports festival whose theme is“Sports and Health”will be held in our school stadium next weekend.
为了丰富学生的校园生活，强身健体，下周末我们将在学校体育馆举办一场以“运动与健康”为主题的体育节。
2.引人入胜篇中句——叙述宣传的主要信息
◎主要信息之初级表达
①What pleases me most is that their artistic talent is extremely shocking.
最让我高兴的是，他们的艺术天赋是极其惊人的。
◎主要信息之高级表达
②I strongly appeal to all the students to make use of their spare time to appreciate these wonderful works.
我强烈呼吁所有学生利用他们的业余时间欣赏这些美妙的作品。
③Additionally，a lecture about how to take daily exercise properly will be given by health professionals.
此外，还会有健康专家讲授如何正确地进行日常锻炼。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——肯定价值，发出号召
◎发出号召之初级表达
①I hold the firm belief that everyone is bound to receive an unexpected joy.
我坚信每个人都会得到意想不到的快乐。
◎发出号召之高级表达
②Only when joint efforts are made can the “double reduction” policy come into effect.
只有共同努力，才能实现“双减”政策。
③For the sake of our health and safety，I think it is good and necessary to use “public chopsticks”when we dine together with others.So let's start taking action right away!
为了我们的健康和安全，我认为与他人一起用餐时使用“公筷”是好的，也是必要的。 所以让我们马上开始行动吧！
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①stimulate vt.促进，激发
②as scheduled按照预定时间
③frankly speaking坦率地说
④in person亲自
提分句式：
(1)动词 ing形式短语作状语
(2)“介词＋关系代词”引导定语从句
(3)the moment引导时间状语从句
(4)so...that...位于句首引起的倒装句
(5)who引导的定语从句
假定你是李华，你校将举办以“English Literature Reading”为主题的英文原版书阅读活动，请你代表学生会用英语为本次活动写一则宣传稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动安排；
3.发出号召。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear schoolmates，
Our school will hold an activity titled“English Literature Reading” at the end of May.The activity is intended to expose you to a wide range of English literature，thus helping you have a better understanding of English culture，develop reading skills and promote reading ability.
During the activity，you are encouraged to introduce your favorite English literature to us and state the reason why you like it.Then you are expected to share your reflection after you read it.
I'd appreciate it if you could take an active part in this activity.
The Students' Union
文体五　新闻报道/
征文投稿/人物介绍
【文体特点】
新闻报道是活动介绍类文章的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性、准确性，语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂，不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——阐释所报道事件的来龙去脉
◎报道综述之初级表达
①Last Sunday，our school held a theme activity called“Mental Health Education”on the playground.
上周日，我们学校在操场上举办了一场以“心理健康教育”为主题的活动。
◎报道综述之高级表达
②To encourage students to take an interest in space exploration，our school established this year's theme of our annual School Science Festival as “Space”.
为了鼓励学生对太空探索产生兴趣，我校将今年学校科学节的主题定为“太空”。
③An activity，whose theme was protecting the environment/with the theme of protecting the environment，was held by the Students' Union.
学生会举办了一场以保护环境为主题的活动。
2.引人入胜篇中句——详细叙述所报道事件的起因、经过和结果或反响
◎叙述事件之初级表达
①Although we were exhausted，we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
尽管筋疲力尽，我们还是高兴地欢呼雀跃。
◎叙述事件之高级表达
②By sharing some of their most unforgettable volunteering experiences，20 participants deeply impressed the audience with their vivid stories，feelings and insights.
20位参赛者分享了一些他们最难忘的义工经历，他们生动的故事、感受和见解给观众留下了深刻的印象。
③Every athlete made great efforts to win while the students who stood by the runway let out the most encouraging slogan.
每位运动员都为赢得比赛付出了巨大的努力，而站在跑道旁的学生们喊出了最鼓舞人心的口号。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——简要总结或评论
◎总结或评论之初级表达
①Many students wish that they could pay a visit to the space station one day and do the wonderful experiments there in person.
许多学生希望有一天他们能去参观太空站，亲自做奇妙的实验。
◎总结或评论之高级表达
②Not only is this theme activity of great benefit to our mental health but it also enriches our school life.
这个主题活动不仅对我们的心理健康有很大的好处，而且还丰富了我们的校园生活。
③It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised.
正是通过这次活动，我们才充分意识到应该提高尊重老人的意识。
【典例示范】
(2023·浙江1月卷)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动的过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①witness vt.见证
②be fascinated by被……所吸引
③incredible adj.令人难以置信的
④get acquainted with熟悉，了解
提分句式：
(1)无灵主语句
(2)which引导非限制性定语从句
(3)where引导限制性定语从句
(4)动词 ing形式短语作状语
(2025·山东临沂三模)假定你是李华，上周日你校组织了一次“走进乡村，体验生活”的社会实践活动。请你为校英文报写一篇活动报道，内容包括：
1.活动过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
A Meaningful Social Practice:
Stepping into Rural Life
Last Sunday witnessed a meaningful social practice activity organized by our school.All the students in Grade 1 participated in it.After gathering at the school gate at 7：30 a.m.，we headed for the nearby countryside by school bus.Upon arrival，we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.We then were divided into groups to engage in various activities.Some students picked fruits and vegetables，while others learned to cook local dishes.After lunch，we visited a local museum，which showcased the history and development of the village.
Through this activity，we gained valuable insights into rural life.We enjoyed the beauty of nature，appreciated the hard work of farmers，and deepened our understanding of teamwork.
【文体特点】
征文投稿类文章一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写，议论文和记叙文居多。征文投稿内容应紧贴主题、新颖、创新、实用。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——阐释所述问题或现象
◎征文投稿综述之初级表达
①To let us know more about nature and enjoy outdoor time，our class organized a trip to the park last Saturday.
为了让我们更多地了解大自然并享受户外时光，我们班上周六组织了一次去公园的旅行。
◎征文投稿综述之高级表达
②Aiming to relieve study pressure and enhance students' physical and mental health，our school has launched the“Sunshine Sports”campaign over the past term.
为了缓解学习压力，进一步改善学生的身心健康，我们学校在上学期开展了“阳光体育”活动。
③To enrich our lives and deepen our understanding of traditional Chinese culture，our school held a Chinese painting exhibition in the school library last week.
为了丰富我们的生活，加深我们对于中国传统文化的理解，上周我们学校在校图书馆举办了国画展。
④At present our city is carrying out a campaign，the content of which is that anyone riding an electric bike must wear a helmet.
目前我市正在开展一项活动，活动内容是骑电动自行车的人必须戴头盔。
2.引人入胜篇中句——具体论述或描写相关情况
◎具体论述或描写相关情况之初级表达
①All the teachers and students sang songs together and they all had a great time.
全体师生一起唱歌，度过了快乐的时光。
◎具体论述或描写相关情况之高级表达
②It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and reenergize your body and mind.
这是一种快速而简单的方法，可以让你的血液流动，重新激发你的身心活力。
③Whenever feeling depressed，I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories.
每当我感到沮丧时，我经常选择欣赏小说中那些充满想象力的故事部分。
④Additionally，I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday，where I get immersed in the sea of literature，greatly improving my literary competence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——得出结论、体会或呼吁
◎结论、体会或呼吁之初级表达
①I really learned that taking care of plants is important for our world.
我确实明白了照料植物对我们的世界来说非常重要。
◎结论、体会或呼吁之高级表达
②My appeal is that all of us students riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of ourselves and other people.
我的呼吁是，为了自己和他人的安全，我们所有骑电动自行车的学生都应该戴头盔。
③By reading the book，not only do I have a better understanding of the story，but I'm also immersed in the beauty of Chinese culture.
通过阅读这本书，我不仅对这个故事有了更好的理解，而且还沉浸在中国文化的魅力之中。
④This enriching experience left students with a deeper understanding of the importance of preserving cultural heritage.The visit not only broadened students' horizons but also fostered a sense of respect and appreciation for our cultural roots.
这种丰富的经历让学生们更加了解了保护文化遗产的重要性。这次参观不仅拓宽了学生们的视野，还培养了对自身文化根源的尊重和欣赏之情。
⑤It was such a rewarding experience that not only enriched my school life but also taught me the value of community engagement.I am grateful for this opportunity and look forward to more such activities in the future.
这是一次有益的经历，不仅丰富了我的学校生活，而且也教会了我社区参与的价值。我很感激有这个机会，并期待今后有更多这样的活动。
【典例示范】
(2025·湖南邵阳大联考)假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征集关于“健康生活”的文章，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.健康生活的重要性；
2.你保持健康生活的方式；
3.呼吁大家养成健康的生活习惯。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①cornerstone n.基础；奠基石
②challenging adj.有挑战性的
③embrace v.拥抱；接纳
④adhere v.遵守
⑤consistent adj.稳定的；前后一致的
⑥enhance v.提高；增强
⑦cultivate v.培养；养成
⑧lasting adj.持久的；永久的
提分句型：
(1)without的含蓄虚拟条件句
(2)“not only...but also...”连接两个并列成分
(3)“only＋状语”置于句首构成的倒装句
(2025·浙江嘉兴二模)你校英文报“Campus Culture”栏目正在开展关于是否设立涂鸦墙(graffiti wall)的讨论，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.你的见解；
2.你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Should We Establish a Graffiti Wall
Establishing a graffiti wall on campus would be a fantastic idea.A graffiti wall usually contains various styles of paintings and messages.It could serve as a dynamic platform for students to showcase their artistic talents，or an outlet that helps them transform pressures into colorful designs.
To ensure the graffiti wall functions well，I suggest our school lay down some basic guidelines.For instance，we can designate themes for different sections of the wall.Furthermore，positive content，such as motivational quotes and uplifting artworks，should be encouraged to advocate a healthy campus culture.
【文体特点】
人物介绍属于记叙文的写作范畴。人物介绍的内容通常包括人物生平、性格特点、业余爱好及其取得的成绩等。写作时要围绕人物组织材料，要做到主题鲜明，内容清楚，并注意结构的完整性。
【写作框架】
【高分佳句】
1.先声夺人开头句——引入话题
◎介绍背景并点明中心人物之初级表达
①My mother，Liu Shurong，is my greatest inspiration.
我的母亲刘淑荣是我最大的灵感来源。
◎介绍背景并点明中心人物之高级表达
②There are many respectable people around us.And the person I respect most is my English teacher，who is so patient with each student that we all like her.
我们周围有许多可敬的人。我最尊敬的人是我的英语老师，她对每个学生都很有耐心，我们都喜欢她。
③Old as he is，he still makes great contributions in the field of medicine.
尽管他年事已高，但他仍在医学领域作出了巨大贡献。
2.引人入胜篇中句——具体描述人物事迹
◎人物的基本情况、性格及事迹之初级表达
①She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
她不仅教我们如何获得知识，还教我们如何成为一个好人。
②She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
她凭借她的智慧和勇气而备受中国人民的尊敬。
◎人物的基本情况、性格及事迹之高级表达
③She works long hours every day for the sake of our family，and she still finds time to help with household chores and spend time with me.
为了我们的家庭，她每天都工作很长时间，但她仍然抽出时间帮助做家务以及和我在一起。
④Yuan Longping was a Chinese agricultural scientist and educator，known for developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s.
袁隆平是中国农业科学家和教育家，因在20世纪70年代培育出第一批杂交水稻品种而闻名。
3.画龙点睛结尾句——对所介绍人物进行评价
◎整体评价及其影响之初级表达
①Having set a great example to us students，she fully deserves my respect.
她为我们学生树立了一个好榜样，完全值得我尊敬。
◎整体评价及其影响之高级表达
②It goes without saying that he has a great effect on the values of later generations.
不用说，他对后人的价值观有很大的影响。
③Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.
她的精神激励着我和其他千百万女孩过独立的生活，并为我们自己的决定负责。
【典例示范】
(2025·宁夏吴忠模拟)你校《英语报刊》人物专栏正在征稿，请你用英语介绍一位你所敬佩的人物(如志愿者、体育明星、父母等)并投稿。内容包括：
1.对该人物的简单介绍；
2.敬佩该人物的理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[评分亮点]
提分词汇：
①admirable adj.令人钦佩的
②pursue v.追求
③unwavering adj.坚定的；坚决的
④resilience n.恢复力；适应力
⑤obstacle n.障碍；阻碍
⑥perseverance n.毅力；不屈不挠
⑦overall adv.总的来说
⑧incredible adj.难以置信的
提分句型：
(1)when引导的时间状语从句
(2)What引导的主语从句
(3)动词不定式作原因状语
(2025·湖南长沙联考)你校的英语角正在征集“年度最佳人物”稿件，请以“Person of the Year”为标题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.该人物的简介；
2.该人物对你的影响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Person of the Year
As to the “Person of the Year”，I would like to nominate my English teacher for this glorious title.
Ms Zhang is a teacher who boasts a good reputation.With her warm smile and kind nature，she has become a beloved figure among students.Moreover，it is her belief in my abilities that has encouraged me to make progress towards excellence.Motivating me to participate in public speaking，she has helped me build up self confidence and better skills.
There is no doubt that Ms Zhang deserves this title.Truly，not only is she a qualified teacher，but also she is a valuable guide in my life.
专题强化练(二十五)　
应用文写作
A
(2025·深圳调研)假定你是李华，你校正在为英语文学阅读室设计标识，现向学生征集意见。请你给负责此项工作的外教Mr Green写一封邮件，从以下标识中选择你最喜欢的一个，并说明理由。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Mr Green，
I am writing to share my ideas on the logo design for our English literature reading room. Among the three options，I prefer Logo 1，“Open a Book，Open a World.”
This design captures the essence of reading.The image of an open book combined with the globe and an eye symbolizes how reading opens our minds and broadens our horizons.Additionally，the logo is visually appealing and designed to attract students and encourage them to engage with the reading room.
I truly hope my suggestion is of some help as this logo can enhance the charm of the reading room.Thank you，and I look forward to the final decision.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
B
(2025·青岛一模)假定你是李华，外教 Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动(spring outing)，现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)具体活动；
(2)你的理由。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Chris，
I'm glad to offer my suggestions for our spring outing next Saturday.I suggest we go to the local botanical garden.
In the garden，we can enjoy various beautiful flowers and plants，learning about different species.Also，there are large open spaces where we can have a picnic together.
It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other.I'm looking forward to the activity.
Yours，
Li Hua
C
(2025·石家庄二检)假定你是李华，你所在的音乐社团正在筹备“音乐剧赏析”活动。请你给交换生Peter写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)介绍活动；
(2)邀请参加。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Peter，
I'm writing to invite you to join our Music Club's upcoming musical appreciation session at 2 p.m.this Saturday in the Music Hall.
We'll be screening classic selections from The Phantom of the Opera and Les Misérables，followed by a discussion on their cultural significance.Your insights into Western musical traditions would definitely enrich our understanding.Light refreshments will be served.
I'd be grateful if you could confirm your attendance by Friday.Looking forward to sharing this melodic journey with you!
Yours，
Li Hua
D
(2025·武汉四月调研)上周你校开展了主题为“科学管理体重”的系列活动，请你给校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括：
(1)活动的内容；
(2)活动反响。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Last week，our school held a series of activities titled “Scientific Weight Management”.The event included informative lectures by nutritionists，interactive workshops on healthy eating，and fitness classes to teach students how to keep in shape effectively.Students participated actively，learning practical tips for maintaining a healthy weight.
Overall，the activities were a great success.Not only did they raise students' awareness of weight management but they also inspired collective action for lifelong well being.Many participants reported they felt motivated to adopt healthier routines after the activities.
专题强化练(二十六)　
应用文写作
A
(2025·石家庄质检)假定你是李华，寒假期间参加了一个剪纸课程。请给你的外国朋友Alex写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)学习的内容；
(2)收获与感想。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Alex，
How have you been I am bursting to tell you about my incredible journey of learning the ancient art of paper cutting this winter vacation!
In the course，I learned how to cut masterpieces out of the soft paper and discovered how these delicate artworks breathe life into Chinese New Year celebrations and wedding ceremonies.When I held the scissors，my fingers trembled like a baby bird taking its first flight.We started by drawing some simple patterns and by the end of the course，I was able to cut “double happiness” symbols.By attending the course，I felt this was more than a craft lesson，but a demonstration of the ancient Chinese wisdom，decoding messages of blessings from the past.
Can't wait to hear your winter vacation experiences!
Yours，
Li Hua
B
(2025·武汉调研)你班英语课开展“手工制作丰富生活(Handcrafting Enriches Life)”为主题的项目学习活动。请你写一篇发言稿，代表小组介绍你们的作品，内容包括：
(1)作品描述；
(2)创作缘由。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右。
[参考范文]
Good morning，everyone! Today，I'm excited to introduce our group's handcraft—a hand painted lantern.This lantern is made of silk and bamboo，with beautiful patterns of flowers and butterflies.The silk is painted in bright reds and golds，colors that symbolize prosperity and happiness.The bamboo frame makes it strong and elegant.
We chose to create this lantern because it represents the spirit of Chinese festivals and brings warmth to our lives.In a fast paced world，we want to reconnect with our cultural roots and share this festive spirit with everyone.
Thank you!
C
(2025·陕西适应性检测二)你校英文报正在开展以“Sports and Me”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
(1)你参与过的一项体育活动；
(2)你的收获。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Sports and Me
I've always had a passion for sports，especially basketball.Joining our school basketball team has been an exciting and rewarding experience.
Through hard training with my teammates，I've learned the value of perseverance and teamwork.Not only has my physical fitness improved，but I've also become more disciplined and focused.Basketball has taught me how to handle both success and failure with a positive attitude.It's shown me that sports are not just about winning，but also about building character，strengthening friendships，and maintaining a healthy lifestyle.
Sports truly become an essential part of my life.
D
(2025·南京、盐城二模)假定你是李华，外教Mr Chuck发现你的作文完全由AI生成，判为不及格。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)承认错误；
(2)做出许诺；
(3)补救措施。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
[参考范文]
Dear Mr Chuck，
I sincerely apologize for submitting an AI generated essay.I took a shortcut，and it cost me my integrity.
You always said that true learning comes from struggling with ideas，but I failed you.I promise I will spare no effort to cultivate my creativity and work independently.I will learn to treat AI as an assistant，not a replacement.To make up for this，I would like to rewrite the essay and submit it next week.
I dare not seek a new grade.I only wish to regain your trust，hopefully.
Yours，
Li Hua
谢 谢 观 看(共16张PPT)
板块三 写作
专题五 应用文写作
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第二讲 学会润色升级
第一节 学会运用高级词汇
高考评分标准第五档的要求中提到，“词汇方面即使有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”。高级词汇就像一颗颗耀眼的明珠，为作文增光添彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。写作选词时应遵循以下策略：
策略1　巧用具体词，细化描写
笼统词具有较强的概括性，考生相对熟悉，但具体词能形象地描述事物或反映细腻的感彩变化，使表达更出彩。如：“That's a very wonderful movie.”中的wonderful 比较笼统，可以选用instructive (富有教益的)、moving/touching (令人感动的)、enlightening/inspiring (具有启发性的)等更为具体的词。
笼统词 具体词
make create 创造；construct建造；form形成；generate产生，引起
get obtain 获得；acquire获得，得到；receive 接到，收到；fetch 拿来
do perform做，执行；complete 完成；accomplish完成；undertake 承担，从事
very absolutely/extremely 极其；awfully/badly/especially/highly/terribly 非常
difficult challenging有挑战性的；puzzling令人迷惑不解的；complicated/complex复杂的
give award 授予；contribute 贡献；donate 捐赠；offer主动提供；provide 提供；supply 供给
笼统词 具体词
have enjoy享有；hold怀有(信念、意见等)；possess拥有；be in possession of拥有；own 拥有
important crucial/vital/essential至关重要的；fundamental十分重大的；primary首要的；significant有重大意义的
good amazing/breathtaking惊人的；awesome 令人惊叹的；brilliant 绝妙的；fantastic 极好的；impressive 给人深刻印象的；remarkable/extraordinary非凡的；splendid极佳的
see，look examine (仔细地)检查；glance瞥一眼；notice 注意到；observe 观察；stare 凝视；glare怒视；spot发现；surf浏览；witness目击；catch sight of看见；check out察看；look around 环顾；look through 浏览
like， love，enjoy admire 欣赏；appreciate 赏识；cherish珍爱；prefer更喜欢；treasure 珍视，珍爱；be crazy/mad about对……着迷；be enthusiastic about 热衷于；be passionate about 酷爱；have a taste for对……感兴趣；show (a) great interest in对……表现出极大的兴趣
①(2025·全国二卷)I'm really looking forward to your new perspective on Canadian sports culture.
→I'm really looking forward to your insightful perspective on Canadian sports culture.
②(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)It was a great experience，which left a deep impression on me.
→It was an extraordinary/a particular experience，which left a profound impression on me.
③(2024·全国甲卷)One important milestone in China's transportation revolution is the appearance of shared bicycles.
→One significant milestone in China's transportation revolution is the emergence of shared bicycles.
策略2　短语优先，地道高级
恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，而且可以提升句子的档次，使得行文更加流畅。
词/短语 高级表达
actually as a matter of fact
sometimes once in a while
as long as on condition that
should be supposed to
immediately without hesitation/delay
be tired be worn out，feel exhausted
词/短语 高级表达
remember keep/bear in mind that...
have to do have no choice/alternative but to do
face encounter，be faced with，meet with
ignore fail to take...into account，turn a blind eye to
focus on concentrate on，be absorbed in，be immersed in
cause bring about，contribute to，give rise to，lead to，result in
more and more an increasing number of，a growing number of
about concerning，regarding，with regard to，in terms of，as for
value take sth seriously，attach great importance to，give priority to
affect have an effect/influence/impact on，play a role in，make a difference to
词/短语 高级表达
help sb do sb a favor，lend/give sb a hand，come to sb's assistance
be good at excel at/in，have a gift for，have a good command of，be expert at/in
try to do sth attempt/seek to do sth，make an attempt to do sth，spare no effort to do sth，strive/struggle to do sth
a lot of a considerable number of，an overwhelming majority of，large quantities of，scores of，dozens of
①(2025·全国二卷)Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers' understanding of global sports culture，which will be beneficial to us.
→Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers' understanding of global sports culture，which will be of benefit to us.
②(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)Through participating in this activity，I have realized the significance of creating the artwork in person.
→Through participating in this activity，I have become aware of the significance of creating the artwork in person.
③(2025·浙江1月卷)While I appreciate the enthusiasm for sharing creative content，we must also consider the potential drawbacks.
→While I appreciate the enthusiasm for sharing creative content，we must also take the potential drawbacks into consideration/account.
用高级词汇升级下面学生习作
(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历。内容包括：
(1)你完成的作品；
(2)你的感想。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
学生习作
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.Knowing that you are a fellow fan of art，I'm writing to share this attractive experience with you.
Inspired by the Impressionist masters，I decided to draw a watercolor painting featuring the iconic lake，together with the blooming flowers and the towering mountain.Truth to be told，when I saw the final work，I felt an unbelievable sense of joy and achievement.That was truly an inspiring moment that we would never have had in a classroom setting.
How's it going with your coursework Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
升级作文
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.Knowing that you are a fellow fan of art，I'm writing to share this 1.___________ experience with you.
Inspired by the Impressionist masters，I 2.________________ to draw a watercolor painting featuring the iconic lake，3._____________ the blooming flowers and the towering mountain.Truth to be told，when I 4._____________ the final work，I felt an 5.incredible sense of joy and 6.__________ .That was truly an 7.____________ moment that we would never have had in a classroom setting.
How's it going with your coursework Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
fascinating
was determined
coupled with
laid eyes on
fulfillment
enlightening
谢 谢 观 看(共17张PPT)
板块三 写作
专题五 应用文写作
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应用文写作是考查考生语言综合运用能力最直接和最有效的形式。它不仅考查考生词汇和语法的运用能力，也考查考生的总体分析能力、观察能力、逻辑思维能力、篇章结构的组织能力和表达能力等。
1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。
4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5.词数不够，酌情降档；词数无上限，但是不能写出格。
6.如果书写较差，以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
第一讲　精准审题谋篇
【写作步骤】
第一步 审题 确定文章的体裁、主体人称、主体时态和写作要点，人称和时态的确认要尽量具体到某个要点，做到精细化对应
第二步 谋篇 应用文写作一般采用三段式：首段点题，中间段阐述要点，尾段表达祝愿和希望等
第三步 润色 词句升级，打造亮点：低频词汇升级为高频词汇，基本句型升级为高级句型(主从复合句、倒装句、强调句等)
第四步 连贯 使用过渡语巧妙串联，确保语义连贯，逻辑通顺，一气呵成
【典题示例】
(2025·全国一卷)假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)你的选择；
(2)说明理由。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
第一步　审题构思很关键
第二步　核心要点想周全
1.经过慎重考虑，我认为“Fun at my school”会是一个更好的选择。
After _________________，I believe“Fun at my school” would be_____________.
2.这个栏目直接反映了我们日常的校园生活，因而能够引起大家的共鸣。
This column directly _______________________，making it relatable to everyone.
3.我们可以分享有趣的课堂片段、体育活动或者社团活动。
We can __________________________，sports events，or club activities.
4.这有助于让我们大家都能体会到日常生活的乐趣所在。
This helps us all ______________ in ordinary days.
careful consideration
a better choice
reflects our daily school life
share funny classroom moments
appreciate the joy
5.它促进积极的互动。
It encourages ________________.
6.通过阅读彼此的经历，我们能够更好地理解我们的同学，并建立更紧密的联系。
__________________________________，we'll better understand our classmates and build stronger bonds.
7.与“Guess who I am”相比，它更具包容性。
______________________________，it's more inclusive.
8.后者侧重于展现个人的神秘故事。
The latter___________________________.
positive interaction
By reading about each other's experiences
Compared to/with “Guess who I am”
focuses on individual mysteries
9.“Fun at my school”却营造出一种集体归属感。
“Fun at my school”fosters___________________.
10.我相信这个栏目既能给大家带来乐趣，又能增强我们学校大家庭的凝聚力。
I believe this column will both entertain and____________________________.
第三步　润色升级造亮点
1.用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并句3和句4
__________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________
2.用while引导的让步状语从句合并句8和句9
______________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________
a sense of community
strengthen our school community
We can share funny classroom moments，sports events，or club activities，which helps us
all appreciate the joy in ordinary days.
While the latter focuses on individual mysteries，“Fun at my school”fosters a sense of
community.
[参考范文]
Dear Jenny，
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.After careful consideration，I believe “Fun at my school”would be a better choice.Here's why.
First，this column directly reflects our daily school life，making it relatable to everyone.We can share funny classroom moments，sports events，or club activities，which helps us all appreciate the joy in ordinary days.Second，it encourages positive interaction.By reading about each other's experiences，we'll better understand our classmates and build stronger bonds.Lastly，compared to“Guess who I am”，it's more inclusive.While the latter focuses on individual mysteries，“Fun at my school”fosters a sense of community.
I believe this column will both entertain and strengthen our school community.Thanks for considering the idea!
Yours，
Li Hua
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