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Who is she?
What song does she sing?
Lead-in
Huang Xiaoyun
星辰大海(Ocean with stars)
Aerospace
航天
Navigation
航海
Reading for Writing
B3U4
&
B7U3
Lead-in
主题语境：人与自然
子话题：观点性议论文写作
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Learning
Objectives
By the end of this class, you will be able to:
Compare the two texts and find out their common structure.
Master the structure of an argumentative essay.
Write a formal argumentation.
They described the pollution of the environment.
They have found the way to solve the world's problem.
They discovered some new resources.
They are argumentative essays.
Fast-Reading
1. What does the three passages have in common?
Let's study!
Peppa wants to know the pros and cons of space exploration. Please read Text 1 and find the following expression in Text 1.
Advantages
Disadvantages
Detailed-reading
Can you help me?
Fight against world hunger
Promote technological improvements
Help think about and solve the world's problems
Waste time
Waste money
Cannot feed the world's poor
Cannot solve the world's problems
Predict the weather to help farming
Fight against world hunger
Predict the weather to help farming
Promote technological improvements
Help think about and solve the world's problems
Waste time
Waste money
Cannot feed the world's poor
Cannot solve the world's problems
Detailed-Reading
Peppa's family had an argument about sea exploration.
She wants to tell you about it.
Recently, we had a heated discussion on sea exploration.
thesis statement论点
Detailed-Reading
Peppa's family had an argument about sea exploration.
She wants to tell you about it.
Mom and dad think it's worthwhile.
Supporters' opinion正方观点
Detailed-Reading
Peppa's family had an argument about sea exploration.
She wants to tell you about it.
I believe that scientific research ships can help address important issues.
reason原因1
Detailed-Reading
Peppa's family had an argument about sea exploration.
She wants to tell you about it.
reason原因2
I think understanding more about the sea will also help us manage its resources better.
Detailed-Reading
Peppa's family had an argument about sea exploration.
She wants to tell you about it.
Grandma and grandpa are strongly against it.
Opponents' opinion反方观点
Detailed-Reading
Peppa's family had an argument about sea exploration.
She wants to tell you about it.
We are worried about the negative effects it may bring, since more exploration means more pollution .
reason原因
Detailed-Reading
Peppa's family had an argument about sea exploration.
She wants to tell you about it.
In my opinion, the deep ocean should be explored.
One's own opinion自己的观点
Detailed-Reading
Look at Peppa's report. Identify the structure of an argumentative essay.
How do I report our argument to you?
Recently, we had a heated discussion on sea exploration.
Mom and dad think it's worthwhile. They believe that scientific research ships can help address important issues and understanding more about the sea will also help us manage its resources better. Grandma and grandpa are strongly against it. They are worried about the negative effects it may bring, since more exploration means more pollution .
In my opinion, the deep ocean should be explored.
Some
Others
thesis statement
论点
opinions from both sides
正反方观点
One's own opinion自己的观点
+话题
+正方原因
+反方原因
+己方观点
How to write an argumentation?
Model sentences
The structure of an argumentative essay
An argumentative essay
Introduction: topic/thesis statement
Body: opinions from both sides
Ending: one’s own opinion
Group work
Writing
I want to prepare for the test. Can you help me?
Peppa Pig is going to have an exam and she got the following two topics. Please try to help her rewrite the two texts into the proper forms required by the test.
Writing
1.假定你是李华，最近你班就“太空是否值得探索”进行了讨论，请根据讨论结果，给某英文报社的编辑写一篇议论文介绍讨论情况。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。
2.假如你是李华，最近, 你班同学就人类是否应该进行海洋探索这一话题展开了一场讨论。请你用英语写一篇议论文文介绍讨论的情况, 并谈谈自己的看法。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。
Group work
Choose ONE topic, write an essay and make comments
Requirements: 1. Select the topic sentences from the text；
2. Apply them into your composition；
3. Add or change expressions if necessary；
4. Present your work；
5. Make comments.
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Select topic sentences from the text
Write the framework
Present it and make comments
Add linking words
Polish the composition
Standards
1. structure: complete？
2. coherence(连贯性): smooth with transition sentences(过渡句)?
3. opinion: clear enough? support or oppose？
4. language accuracy: any spelling or grammatical mistakes?
5. handwriting：neat enough?
Show time
1. topic: decide your topic.
Summary
How to write an argumentative essay
2. outline: thesis statement, opinions from both sides and one’s own opinion.
3. manuscript: use model sentences to form a whole essay.
4. polish: polish your work.
Assignment
Write an argumentative essay
Assignment
假定你是李华，最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：月球探索的意义。请结合下表内容，用英语给校报写一篇短文，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A}赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
获取更多的资源，如：月壤制水，制建筑材料
劳民伤财，破坏月球原本的生态环境
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Mystery creates wonder and wonder is the basis of man’s desire to understand.
—— Neil Armstrong
Thank you!

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