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Unit 4 Reading for Writing
Write a summary
Reading for Writing
Para.1
less than 少于
Fishermen, tourists, hotels, homes, and cars were swept away by huge waves caused by the strong earthquake (that reached a magnitude of 9.0). The undersea quake struck around 7:00 a.m., Sunday off the west coast of Indonesia's Sumatra Island. In that area alone, at least 1,870 people were killed.
Para.1
(sweep-swept-swept)
大约=about
In Sri Lanka, some 1,600 kilometres west of the quake centre, the number of deaths stood at 2,498, and one million more were affected by the tsunami, government officials said. Indian officials said as many as 1,900 had been killed along the southern coast. Another 254 were found dead in Thailand and 54 in three other countries.
Para.2
die v.死亡 dead adj.死亡的 death n.死亡
In southern Thailand, 1,900 people were hurt and many more were missing, local officials said “I was having breakfast with my three children when water started filling my home. We had to leave everything and run to safety," said Chandra Theeravit, a local Thai woman.
Para.2
be doing sth. when...
正在干某事，突然...
I was watching the football match when he came in.
我正在看球赛的时候，他突然进来了。
Thousands of people are still missing, and the numberof deaths is expected to grow even higher over the next few days. Foreign aid is being organised for the tsunami-hit countries. However, dangerous conditions and damaged roads will make it diffcult to deliver food and supplies.
Para.3
make it diffcult to deliver food and supplies.（形式宾语）
将使运送食物和物资变得困难。
Lead导语
(date, place, event)
Byline署名行 (reporter and date)
Body
End
Headline标题
Structure
Details (Byline + Lead)
WHAT
WHEN
WHY
WHERE
WHO
A tsunami
On 26 December, 2004
The tsunami was caused
by a powerful earthquake.
More than 6,500 people
Coastlines across Asia
In Indonesia, India, Thailand, Malaysia, and at least four other countries.
Southeast Asia
a tsunami
On 26 December, 2004.
What A tsunami
Where In Southeast Asia
When On 26 December, 2004
Who More than 6,500 people
Introduce the event with one sentence.
A tsunami killed more than 6500 people in Southeast Asia on 26 December 2004.
Details (Byline + Lead)
Tip1: Integrate(整合)
Details (Body---the rest of para1 and para2)
Who are the victims(受害者)？
The victims are fishermen, tourists, and other locals.
The victims are
fishermen, tourists,
and other locals.
A tsunami killed more than
6500 people in Southeast Asia on 26 December 2004.
A tsunami killed more than 6500 fishermen, tourists,
and other locals in Southeast Asia on 26 December 2004.
Tip2：Replace (替代)
Thousands of people are still missing, and the number of deaths is expected to grow even higher over the next few days.
Dangerous conditions and damaged roads will make it difficult to deliver food and supplies.
Severity(严重性)
Difficulties
Details (End): What are the effects of the tsunami
IRSP
Shorten(缩短)
Paraphrase(解释)
When it comes to wildlife protection, all species ---the good, the bad, and the ugly---should be treated equally.
All species should be treated equally.
Her parents sent her off and then she took the train to Beijing.
She said goodbye to her parents and went to Beijing by train.
Integrate(整合)
Replace(替代)
A tsunami killed more than 6500 people in Southeast Asia on 26 December 2004.
A tsunami killed more than 6500 fishermen, tourists, and other locals in Southeast Asia on 26 December 2004.
主句
What are the effects of the tsunami
Thousands of people are still missing, and the number of deaths is expected to grow even higher over the next few days.
Dangerous conditions and damaged roads will make
it difficult to deliver food and supplies.
Thousands of people are missing and the number of deaths is expected to grow.
it difficult
Severity(严重性):
Difficulties:
Tip3: Shorten(缩短)
Tip4: Paraphrase(解释)
Discussion
Dangerous conditions and damaged roads
will make
is making
The damage caused by the tsunami
for rescue workers to help the survivors.
Integrate(整合)
Replace (替代)
Shorten (缩短)
Paraphrase (解释)
Knowledge Gift Pack
Thinking
Read the summary and check the main points it includes.
On 26 December 2004, a tsunami killed more than 6,500 tourists, fishermen, and other locals in Southeast Asia. Thousands of people are missing and the number of deaths is expected to grow. The damage caused by the tsunami is making it difficult for rescue workers to help the survivors.
Summary
date
cause
place
event
effect
following event
√
√
√
√
integrate; replace; shorten; paraphrase
A summary is a short statement of main points. It tells the main ideas and the most important information of a longer passage.
Original passage
Summary
one third
the length
02
the key
supporting points
03
unimportant details
or examples
in your own words
linking words
(衔接词)
NO！
Thinking
Application
Read the text on page 50 and find out the key information.
(para1)Before the earthquake:___________________________________.
(para2&3)An earthquake hit Tangshan on 28 July 1976.
(Bad effects) People:_____________________________________________________.
Things: ____________________________________________________.
(para4&5)After the earthquake:
Rescue:____________________________________________________.
Revival: ___________________________________________________.
Many people were killed or badly injured
Nearly everything in the city was destroyed
Soldiers and medical workers came to help the people
who suffered from the big earthquake.
Tangshan started to revive with the government’s support and people’s efforts
Strange things happened in the countryside
Work in groups of six to write a summary of the passage on page 50.
Application
Evaluation(评价)
Does the summary have a clear idea (25 points)
Does the summary include the key information (25 points)
Does the summary have the proper length (25 points)
Are there any spelling or tense errors (25 points)
Use the checklist to evaluate the summary.
Summary
For several days, strange things occurred in the countryside of northeastern Hebei. Then, on 28 July 1976, an earthquake hit Tangshan city. The city was greatly affected and nearly destroyed. Many people were killed or injured. Luckily, the rescue work began soon after the quakes. Soldiers and medical workers arrived to aid the people who had a great loss. Thanks to the support from the government and people’s efforts, a new Tangshan was built.
Homework
Must-do homework:
Write a summary for the passage on page 92. (Workbook)
Optional homework:
Complete the composition

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